Naina (A story-Unseen) {RA} PART 2 PG2 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Nice part!!
Mystery of the "speaking" eyes!! LOL !
Continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part!!

Mystery of the "speaking" eyes!! LOL !
Continue soon!

thanks di, yeah ur right a very bg mystery at that.😆

Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey awesome part. nd amman attracted to those eyess. Continue soon dear. Thnks for the PM!!!

thanks yaar... its the eyes and the volumes they talk that aman is attracted to.😉

Originally posted by: spvd

hi faiza........nice part............karan always blackmails to make aman to do something but atleast in that way aman does it and goes out with him..........hmmmmmmmmmmm aman is attracted to those eyes...............really eyes express a lot that too aman wil be more able to understand them..........interesting.......wonder whose eyes they r.....cont soon...........

i'm happy u liked my idea of the talking eyes spvd ( sorry don't know ur name) and karan and aman are very thick as brothers and friends.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Arshie

hi diii, long long long time since i have seen you. how are u,,, i am very happy that u have liked the storyso far, its ok if u did not read my past storyies but be sure to read this one,, i am sure u will like it..😉

hey faizu sweetheart!!! i knw its been soo long since we talked....i'm fine jaan hpe u r 2......and dear its an awesome beginning..i really loved it....i will surely read this one sweetheart!!! do pm me wen u update jaan!!!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
hey faizu awesome part jaan...loved it completely....loved the bonding between Aman and Karan....thankgod he took him to the wedding..usko bhi changing milgaya...aur wah kya baat hai...Aman ko kissi ki aankhein bhaa gayi hain...lolzzz ab zarra jaldi update karke us chehre pe parre huay parde ko hata do...hehehe gr88 part...do cont soon...luv summi xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
The update was very nice....
Sorry could not reply for the last update..Did not realise that you had updated the FF.
I am glad that the operation was successful and Aman has got his eye sight back.But you had mentioned something about Aman not being able to see for the past two years. So i am gussing that he was not alwyas blind. Would like to know what has happened then.
Karan is a sweet bro..he knows that Aman will never refuse him as he loves his little brother.
So Aman has fallen in love with a pair of eyes of this girl. And if her eyes are so beautiful she will be stunning.
Please continue soon/
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

The update was very nice....

Sorry could not reply for the last update..Did not realise that you had updated the FF.
I am glad that the operation was successful and Aman has got his eye sight back.But you had mentioned something about Aman not being able to see for the past two years. So i am gussing that he was not alwyas blind. Would like to know what has happened then.
Karan is a sweet bro..he knows that Aman will never refuse him as he loves his little brother.
So Aman has fallen in love with a pair of eyes of this girl. And if her eyes are so beautiful she will be stunning.
Please continue soon/

don't say sorry, i am happy that u have left ur comments on the this part and i am sure u will continue to do so, and i'm even more happy that u liked the story.
i'll continue very soon.

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey faizu awesome part jaan...loved it completely....loved the bonding between Aman and Karan....thankgod he took him to the wedding..usko bhi changing milgaya...aur wah kya baat hai...Aman ko kissi ki aankhein bhaa gayi hain...lolzzz ab zarra jaldi update karke us chehre pe parre huay parde ko hata do...hehehe gr88 part...do cont soon...luv summi xxx

hi di, i am seriously very happy that u liked the story so far, its funny and interesting that aman is falling for a pair of eyes, and uss chehre se parda utne mein abhi der hai di...lol
i'll cont soon don't worry,
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

PART 4

A few weeks had passed, and nothing great happened, but the encounter with the girl during the wedding had left quite an impact on Aman.

After a few days of research Aman discovered that the girl's name was Ainun Hasna, and surprisingly Ainun meant eyes and Hasna meant beauty.

" It matches her flawlessly." Thought Aman the moment he discovered her name.

ONE FINE DAY:

"Mom I'm not taking the car to work today. I feel like talking a little walk."

" Alright Aman but be careful. Bye"

" Bye mom."

Saying this Aman left for work.

Aman had a motive for not taking his car, when he was 'investigating' about Ainun he had also come across her address.

" No harm in trying to see her again." Aman had said to himself to convince himself the night before.

Finally he came towards Ainun's house. His footsteps slowed down. He saw no one outside the house and decided to walk as slow as possible to spare some time for someone hopefully Ainun to come out.

He spent nearly 10 minutes walking past her house and when no one came out he walked all the way to his office, rapidly this time.

After a day filled with meetings and a whole lot of work Aman left for his house at around 5. He was taking his time walking home. Why he walked that slow he did not know but his sixth sense told him to slow down and he obeyed.

He came across a girl, dressed in a salwar, surrounded by a group of guys whose intentions did not seem divine.

The girl tried to escape but no luck; it was after all a lost battle, for it was 1 versus 5. She had no hope not unless someone came to her aid.

That's precisely what Aman did, or wanted to do atleast, but time overtook him.

Before he had the time to do anything he saw another girl, in a salwar, face covered walk or rather run right into the circle, which the goons formed, and drag the girl right out and within no time both the girls started to run.

Before anyone of the goons, or even Aman, for that matter had realized what was going on both the girls were far away.

Aman's feet waited for no longer than they already had for Aman's brain had recognized Ainun as the lifesaver.

He ran behind them following the goons but Aman kept his position hidden to that he could see the goons and the girls but they could not see him.

After a long chase the girls stood victorious.

Both the girl's face to face, with Ainun's back towards Aman; he noticed that the other girl was crying profusely.

Aman well hidden, then expected a normal scene where Ainun would convince the girl, but Aman was brought out of his expectations when he heard a loud thud.

Ainun's hand raised and the girl's hand on her cheek , clearly gave away the source of the sound.

Aman then heard Ainun's voice for the first time, but Aman's state of mind prevented from understanding her words clearly.

" You are responsible…. Why blame them…. You chose to dress…. tight…stop crying…"

These were the bits Aman heard.

When Ainun was done, she turned back only to run into Aman. Their eyes met but only for a fraction of a second and Ainun walked swiftly away.

Aman was surprised to find himself away for his hiding spot, when he moved he was not sure, but he was sure of the reason, AINUN.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey faizu sweetheart!!! i knw its been soo long since we talked....i'm fine jaan hpe u r 2......and dear its an awesome beginning..i really loved it....i will surely read this one sweetheart!!! do pm me wen u update jaan!!!😳

hi diii 🤗 its been a very long time di,, i'm fine di and glad to hear that ur doing great as well, i am very very very happy that u liked naina and i am sure u will not stop reading naina till i'm done with it.😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Hey awesome part!!! Intresting to find about Ainun. Continue soon!! Thnks for the PM!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey awesome part!!! Intresting to find about Ainun. Continue soon!! Thnks for the PM!!

thank u very much😃, and no probs about the pm

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