Naina (A story-Unseen) {RA} PART 2 PG2 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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no one liked the story so far????😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A very nice start..
But Aman is going to undergo a major operation..i hope that everything goes well
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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faizu that was a very interesting part.. our hero's operation.. why does he use a cane, this question came to my mind & then suddenly it stuck me that may be he can't see... so dear i'am i right.. i hope the operation is successful... anyway it was a nice start to the story.. keep it up... 👏 please do continue soon.. waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ommggg..........PLZ ....I beg u.........dont make him blind.......make him alright...!
Already they have made him blind in one fic and m not able to read it....I cant see any of rajeev's characters this way ! DONT !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2

It's been nearly 3 hours since Aman has been taken inside the OT and by this the entire Kapoor family has gathered. Ever moment of their wait is spent on praying, praying for the health of their treasured one.

After what seems hours to the people waiting the doctor steps out of the OT indicating the operation is over.

Aman's father has his hands around his wife's shoulder preventing her from crying any further.

" How's my son?" asks Aman's father as his wife is too weak to speak.

" The operation has been successful." Replies the doctor.

This brings a huge amount of relief to the family. But the expression worn by the doctor indicates them there is more to what he has said, and moreover helps them prepare for the worst.

"But" continues the doctor as they expected, " Aman is unconscious right now, and if he does not regain consciousness in the next 24 hours, there will be nothing we can do to save him."

The entire world collapses on the Kapoors. It seems as though it is the end of the world but they see a small ray of hope and decide that it is better to cling on to that hope than give up their son without a fight.

The doctor walks off leaving Aman's parents and his brother in a state that words cannot describe.

12 have passed and still no good news.

20 hours – no luck.

Aman's mother could not take it any more. She walks right in where they have laid her son and sits right next to him.

She takes one of Aman's hands and strokes Aman's hair and she sits like this for the next 2 hours.

It nearly time and no sign of Aman's recovery and then she decides that she has to do something. At that moment Aman's father enters the room and takes Aman's other hand and sits opposite to his wife.

Aman's mother moves closer to Aman's ears and whispers something in it. She repeats it but slowly so that no one, not even her husband right opposite to her can hear it.

She then rises and begins to walk to the door and it is then that she hears what she has been dieing to hear.

" Mom." And its Aman's voice, much feeble than before but to a mother is a huge relief.

3 days have passed.

From the moment Aman regained consciousness series of tests were conducted, and Aman could now see what he could not for nearly two years.

Aman had lost his eyesight in an accident and was slowly but steadily regaining his confidence along with his eyesight.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Ommggg..........PLZ ....I beg u.........dont make him blind.......make him alright...!

Already they have made him blind in one fic and m not able to read it....I cant see any of rajeev's characters this way ! DONT !
Luv,
Vandu

u don't have to beg at all di, and i can't write a story where our hero is blind so don't worry he'll be back to normal in no time.

Originally posted by: sun_423

faizu that was a very interesting part.. our hero's operation.. why does he use a cane, this question came to my mind & then suddenly it stuck me that may be he can't see... so dear i'am i right.. i hope the operation is successful... anyway it was a nice start to the story.. keep it up... 👏 please do continue soon.. waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😊

i'm very very and lots of verys happy that u liked the story so far and di don't worry Aman will be fine😉

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

A very nice start..

But Aman is going to undergo a major operation..i hope that everything goes well
please continue soon

i'm glad that u liked it so far and don't worry our hero will be fine.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG part 1 waz awesome. Pllzzzz continue soon. Cn u PM me plzz wen u update. Thnks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessica18

OMG part 1 waz awesome. Pllzzzz continue soon. Cn u PM me plzz wen u update. Thnks

thank u soo much and sure i'll let u know when i update it next.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yay lovely !!!
He is fine !!
Yipppeee!
Oye add me on your PM list !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the pm..............and nice part......thank god he can see now........am relieved now....cont soon and pm me............

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