IZHAAR-ek haseen shuruat-{RN-ff}imp note on pg 19.

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Cool part. Gr8 that it was Raj. I luved each n every dialog of Raj n Naina. Their convo was throughout fantastic. And I agree that Naina sawal bahut poochti hai.THANKY SO MUCH SUMAIYA THAT U LIKED ALL THE SCENES BETWEEN RAJ AND NAINA, SAHI KAHA TUMNE NAINA SAWAAL BAHUT POOCHTI HAI........

I luved Raj's pure Hindi. Totally cool. Its so not Raj kind but luved it.THANX........MUJHE BHI YEH PORTION LIKHNE MEIN BAHUT MAZAA AAYA THA.......

In the canteen Aalekh's dialogues wer fab specially when he told Yudi if he thinks of saving Aalekh. And Suriji was also very funny. MUJHE BHI KAAFI MAZAA AAYA THA YEH SAARE PARTS LIKHNE MEIN........

Now I'm very curious 2 knw whom Raj wants to introduce to the cadets. YA SURE BUT FOR THAT U WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND WATCH FOR THE NEXT PART.............

Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM. U R MOST WELCOME DEAR............

HII SUMAIYA THANX A LOT FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS,

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was really good
but who is this new person

plz continue soon

THANX A LOT PRERNA FOR YOUR COMMENTS...........FOR THAT U WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND WATCH FOR THE NEXT PART........AND I WILL TRY TO UD ASAP...........

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#43

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
totally amazing n rocking...now whos dat person???

lets see n wait for ur new updt YA ABSOLUTELY RIGHT..........

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take care U TOO..............

HII LIPI THANKY SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS..........

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#44

Originally posted by: danish1
hey nice update. thank u.

THANKY VERY MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS...........

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#45

Originally posted by: vvdn
Nice Update dear.....RN r BEST.....

THANX NAMITA FOR YOUR COMMENTS............

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#46

Originally posted by: Lilmizz_Rahela
dis part is sweet
continueeeeeeeee soooooooooooooooon lol

THANX A LOT FOR YOUR COMMENTS..........I WILL TRY TO UD ASAP..........

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#47

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Hello Preeti. Kaise ho? 😊 😊 😊
Nice update really.😃 😃 😃 Raj Naina ki bak bak bund karne ki koshish kar raha hai aur yahan Naina hai ki bolti jaati hai bolti jaati hai bus. 😆 😆 😆 Surng vaala idea acha tha aur Naina bhi kaafi innocently pooch rahi thi sab sawaal. 😉 😉 😉 Alekh n Huda as usual ek doosre k jaani dushman bane rehte hain.😕 😕 😕

Par vo kaun hai jo aane vaala jis se Raj sab ko introduce karne jaa raha hai?😕 😕 😕

ud soon.

HII VERTIKA IAM ABSOLUTELY FINE SWEETY..........AND HOPE THE SAME FOR U TOO, FIRST OF ALL THANX A LOT FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS DEAR.........TUMHE RAJ AUR NAINA KA PORTION ACHCHA LAGA.......AUR SURANG WAALA IDEA BHI PASAND AAYA.........THAT'S GR8........EVEN I WAS ALSO QUITE EXCITED WHILE WRITING IT............NAINA TOH KABHIE BHI NAHIN BADLEGI, SAWAAL POOCHNA TOH USKI AADAT BAN CHUKI HAI...........AUR RAJ HI HAI JO KI USKE SAARE SAWAALON KO JHEL SAKTA HAI.......AUR HAAN SAHI KAHA TUMNE AALEKH AUR HUDA BHI KABHIE NAHIN SUDHRENGE, WELL WOH KAUN HAI JISSE RAJ SABKO MILWAANA CHAHTA HAI USKE LIYE U WILL HAVE TO WAIT AND WATCH FOR THE NEXT PART DEAR...........AND I WILL TRY TO US ASAP...........TAKE CARE..........

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#48

Originally posted by: Deepanwita
sorry for late reply😕it's ok dear, tumne time nikaal kar comment kiya hai, mere liye itna hi bahut hai.............
actually main bahar gayi thi tumhe pata hain nahaan muje pata tha dear............
now abht the ud
was superb👏thanky.......
fantastic👏thanky..........
too good👏thanky............
mindblowing👏thanky.........
funny😆thanky.............
rocking👏thanky.............
i love each and every scene👏that's gr8........
specilly raj and naina portion👏same here dear........i too really enjoyed it while writing..........
and canteen one was too funny😆absolutely right.......it was really very funny indeed.......
aur ye aalekh aur huda kabhi nahi badlege
hamesha aise hi rahege😡haan sahi kaha tumne...........
anyways ye batao ki ye kaun hain isse raj milwana chahata hain haan jo bhi ho bas raj naina ke beech mein na aaye lets see kya hota hain............😡
anyways ud jaldi karna bahut der lagati ho main wait karti hoon😡well uske liye tumhe next part tak wait karna padega sweety, i will try to us asap........take care.............

love u🤗
deepa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Hi Priti

I really liked dis update..It was so sweet..

Raj n Naina r the cutest couple. 1 thing I'd like to tell u Priti....Your hindi is perfect..👏👏👏n I really think of taking tutions from u..😊😊😊

Yeh Raj ka surang wala idea accha hai..He was indeed a very naughty cadet..

This para was so funny

"mujhe pata hai balike ki tumhaare aage ke prashna yahi hone waale hain, isiliye ab tum shant dimaag se inke utaar suno humse….{in a smooth flow}-toh balike yah ek surang hai, jise mere khayaal se humaare poorvajo ne khudwaayi thi, kyunki umhe bhi aane waale bhavishaya ke baare mein gyaat ho gaya tha ki, ek din ekseevin shatabdii mein ek rajveer naamak purush aur ek naina naamak yuvti is surang ke pravesh dwaar se bheetar tak pahunchenge aur antataha apne manzil ki taraf prasthaan karenge, toh isiliye………….."

God!!! Itni acchi hindi Raj ki nahin tumhari hai,...Woh Saree utahne wala part bhi kaafi funny tha..

Raj ko kiska message milta hai????

Raj is so happy aakhir ho bhi kyun na..Uska pyaar jo uske samne hai..😉..Yeh Raj cadets se kisko milwana chahta hai????

Do update soon

Bye