Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

nihu meri jaan wat an update masakalli 👏 ''taj mahal toh mera hai..'' haila this line killed me..

mayank-nupur scnes were out-of-the-world yaar...tooo good

mayank getting jealous and nupur trying to express her love awesumly done😳

coochikoo...😉..i love dng this..

pratham line maar raha hai nupur par...heheheee..mayank wuld be like ''tujhe cheer dunga'' [remember chiru ke liye dialogue]

aww...pratham has brains yaar...ACTUALLY YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER WITH INNOVATIVE IDEAS ⭐️

the idea was flawless...i loved it jaani

and rimjhim , gunjan keeping fast for benji was really ssweet ...loved that part

mayank ko toh bahana chaheye nupur ko uthane ka...sam ne gunjan ko uthaya toh mayank ne nupur ko utha liya....by god !!!!!!...

over-all awesum job...fantabulous

and i got my treat ...''YAYYYYYYYYYYYY''

luv u masakalli

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GamesOfLife

@GamesOfLife

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

N:nahi..i didn't knw tht..mujhe sirf itna pata hia..ki ..U LUV ME..more than I do'...👏( so so sweet yaar ...)👏

@ and nup dialogues about Taj Mahal that she only belongs to Mayu .... Kya Baat hai nihu ..😛😛👏

@ P:nahi yaar..itne cute ladki kare toh kisi ladke koi probs nahi hoga!!... this guy have some nerves Mayu will kill him

@ nupur mera pyaar' nihu .... Just imagine Mayu saying this to some one at excel may be Rv ... or someone ... that will be r day 😉

@nihu great mystery writer ...👏.. so they will give ad she is alive ... nice idea...

@ gunajn fasting for frnd was sweet of her 😛

@ yaar i hope Rhimjhim doesn't' end up in jail 😭😭😭... she was truly worried sick for benji and after the court scene ......when he vist her at hospital was very very touching 👏

👏👏👏 nihu this chapter was like some film part .... very well portrayed my feelings and tears r with Rhimi darling

Edited by SanaSarwar - 16 years ago

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Nihu yaar....what an update!!

🤗

Ohoo.....Mayu to bohut hi possessive ho raha tha!! 😉😉

Aur phir Nupur ne jo pyar ka izhar kiya....kya baat hai!👏

Arre yaar...that dialogue

N:hmm..par tum aise dekhte ho..na toh..toh..toh..

M[getting close to her ears]toh…

N:[shying]..mera band baj jata hai..[giggling]

LOL!🤣🤣

Great dialogues, seriously!!🤣

"Mayank bete to coochikoo pasand hai..." OMG!

Oh Gunjan is so sweet....usne benji ke liya fast rakha!

And she fainted...chalo, Sam was there to catch her! Its so cute how she says "Godji"....and Sam's like "Main hoon na..." Awww.....

And Nupur couldn't help cracking that SRK joke na....! 😆😆

Mayank to bada romantic ho haya hai!

"Yeh taj mahal to mera hai..." 😳 What a line yaar nihu, how do you come up with these!

loved it!

And y'know I'd just read Ruchi's fic update and there was a scene where Mayu said "main utha ke le jaa sakta hoon" but then finally he didn't end up lifting her....so I said to Ruchi ki I wish yeh scene dekhne ko milta...

Par tune to meri yeh wish bhi poori kar di!!

yahaan to without reason Mayu ne baahon mein utha liya! Wah kya baat hai!!

Nihu, tu sahi keh rahi thi humaari saari wishes poori ho rahi hain!

And OMG rimjhim is in the hospital and she was praying for Benji these three days!

Poor girl! oh I'm feeling so bad for Benji-Rimjhim...

Chalo, at least woh loose screw lawyer ne Benji ko innocent to prove kiya...

And that last scene was amazing!

The song was perfect choice! benji said I Love You! Oh....i could actually imagine that scene happening in my mind.

But but but....who's the killer...???

Will it be revealed in the next part...? Anyway, how long will the mystery continue...., I mean how many parts...?

But Nihu yaar awesome writing!!

I reallly wanted to read more!

Update soon and thanks for still PMing me....😊

And update the topic with the pg no. too...I'd thought you hadn't updated until you PMed me...

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

N;hiayeeeeeeee!!kash main bhi faint hoti..aur tum mujhe uta the mayu!!

M:hmmmm..[getting close to her..looking inher eys].meri bahon main ane ke liye..u dn't need to hv reasons..[and he picks her up tooo] loved these dialouges😆

NIHU ⭐️ MERI PYAARI SUPERSTAR pehle to sorry for commenting very late q k i was verry busy updating my fan fic and reading and replying to the comments there . us k lie 1000 utthak baithak😆 😆 LOVELY PART JAANU LOVED IT

TUM JAISI ACCHI AUR PYAARI AUR SACCHI DOST KE LI E JITNA KAHOON KUM HAI

TAKE CARE

LUV YA LLLLOOOOOAAAAADDDDDSSSSS

LeKh@

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nupur786

@nupur786

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

nice update...finally benji is out...and i love the way mayu reacts when pratham and nupur interact...and gunjan is fasting for benji how sweet....do update soon and plz pm me thanx

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Knowalot2

@Knowalot2

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Gunjan's fasting!! aww so sweet of her....

and lol the Mayur scene😳....i wish this was 4 real, and the Taj Mahal dialogue-loved it😃

thanks 4 pming me Nihu- ur update ROCKS👏👏👏

👏

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Meela

@amsjms

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

gr8 work nihu! ofcourse there wud be dedicated works for u! koi puchhne ki baat hain kya?

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vidisha

@sweetvidisha

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

WOw that was great!!!! cant wait to read more

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komal793

@komal793

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hey nihu,

awesome part.

was waiting for benji's bail and it happened in this part.

pls continue soon and pm me then.

thnx for the pm.

luv

komal.

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Tanya

@TINAMALHONTRA

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

HEY NIHU!!!
AB KYA MUJHE YEH KEHNA PADEGA KI HOW WAS UR UPDATE
MERE PAAS DICTIONARY MAIN AUR KOI WORDS BACHE HI NAHI HAI!!!
OK SUMMARIZE KAROON TOH
AWESOME, MINDBLOWING, GR8, SUPERB....ETC ETC SEE NO WORDS LEFT
BUT I MUST SAY SORRY MAYUR AND SAJAN FANS
AAJ TOH MUJHE BENJI AUR RIMJHIM
HI SABSE ZYAADA PASAND AAYA.....
BUT AS I AM A LITTLE BIASED TO BOTH THE
COUPLES MAYUR ROCKED YAAR..MAYANK KA PROTECTIVENESS,
USKA "CUCHIKOO", AND HUMAARI NUPUR TOH FOREVER QUEEN HAI!!
AND SAMRAT HUMARA NAYA SRK
APNI CHASHMISH KE LIYE VVAKT BADAL SAKTA HAI
BUT AB SUSPENSE KHOL HI DO
I WANT TO KNOW KI YEH MURDERER HAI KAUN!!
JIS NE HUMARE BECHAARE COUPLES KO PARESHAANI MAIN DAAL DIYA
WAITING FOR UR UPDATE....PM ZAROOR KARNA LIKE U DID FOR THIS ONE
LOTS AND LOTS AND EVEN MORE
LOVE
TINA😊

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