Pablo's Muse [I] -AR- Pt. 25/Pg 143 May 9, 11 - Page 101

My Dearest esquisse (had to copy paste this name 😛) Read the part, enjoyed it too. Just want to say mera Loooooong comment will be here a little later.

A very merry christmas and a happy new year!

this update was sooo adorableee <3 I love the AR in your ff. Sorry i cannot give a much better comment on such a magnificent update; busy.


aliya

Awesome updates

Loved them both

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

hiiii

She came; she stayed; she conquered. - I love how, even when there are AR scenes, NJ continues to be the star of the show. The nurses are intruiged by her, she's a point of conversation for Rahul, Muskaan and Sumit, and of course a huge source of jealousy for a certain someone...

Rahul and Muskaan'aw, it's all out in the open! Absolutely loved this bit - "we agreed that the idea needed further consideration" and he kissed the back of her hands softly. It was as simple as that! ' it was tres cute! And it made me smile how no one had anything to add to that or made any sort of comment. It really was as simple as that.

And the AR scenes? Well, what can I say? I just hadn't realised how much I'd been missing them, but it was well worth the wait. Despite the fact that they're on a break, you could still see sparks flying. And truth be told, that's all because of your amazing writing style! I can't quite put my finger on exactly what it is, but you manage it perfectly! Don't ever change that!

Where you flirting with a seventy year old uncle?" he didn't even care to consider what NJ would make of his words. Ahahahaha! 😆 Had me literally 'LOL'ing in my seat! I loved how Armaan was actually jealous of the 'Uncle.' In fact that whole scene was humour personified.

Basically, an awesome update by an awesome writer, as per usual! I really can't wait to see some more NJ-Riddhima interactions; it sounds like it'll be a lot of fun!

I have few exams this month or so, so I'm going to be slightly less active. And my comments to any future updates will be delayed, but rest assured, they will turn up...eventually. (Just like this one is delayed, but did turn up...eventually.) 😛

And Happy New Year! I hope you've had a smashing start to 2011!

Ok i have decided i must give a much better comment on this update

NJ reminds me of the character Nikki from DMG. I like NJ in ya ff..and (if NJ is reading this comment since she has gained her own set of fans and has been busy reading their comments on her so im guessing she will find this comment about her and read it)..so i must mention that i do like NJ in real life as well as in fan fiction ;p

Muskaan was left speechless for once hah. I loved Muskaan's thought about how she was surprised that she herself didn't think of matching A with R. Ah everyone is catching on quickly. RM are certainly cute, seems Muskaan has found the man who can tame her as well as rile her up hah.

Hah i can imagine the "poor lone man, armaan" stuck between his friend and girlfriend who will be sharing their opinions on Armaan. But it was so cute when Ridhima had thought "she wouldn't leave her man behind" and invited him geniunely to coffee. Such a adorable moment.

😆 Jealous of Ridhima mildly flirting with a man twice her age who was her patient. And she knew it and kept at it just to fool around with him. Armaan may not like that Ridhima but i did.

Brilliant update once again Aria

Originally posted by: spln

reserved here - will be reading on the morning train tomorrow - for sure! (yeh, yeh, and commenting to - obviously!)

ps: merry christmas, and yayyy you to be santa with an update! =)))

*Edit*

I felt incredibly full of myself in significant bits out here - tis like I need some anti-pump-up-ego measures soon, or i'm going to be so bloated up that you'll only ever find me high up in sky alongside them shooting stars 😆

aite, that said, let's start of with my favorite lines and verbose feedback:

First thing- my apologies for replying so late!!! Had been travelling a bit and even though I had planned to respond before the trip, things just got a lil crazy. Anyhow, back now..feel like I need to re-read the part once to remember where I was to make sense of everything... and to your much appreciated verbose comment (despite what this unfortunate delay in response may suggest!) I'm really glad that NJ's got her own fan club here on Pablo, and trust me, its been real fun writing on you!!

and very much red coffee mug feminizing an otherwise very much masculine picture ... there was so much said about this mug, and i kept wondering if you were drinking coffee out of a red mug while having written those bits, cause it was like the little red thing had you possessed... and me too - i went right down into the kitchen and fished out my nescafe mug (from god knows what dumps mum was none too pleased to find her cabinets so rampaged) and had my tea in just that! (sigh, coffee is my BFF of a past I can only fondly reminisce about.. double sigh)

! This may not make much sense so don't roll your eyes at me (everyone else not just NJ), after reading this bit, I paused momentarilty to figure out if I was posessed with the red mug!! Nope no such thing, I knew I didn't hv a red mug!! I was kinda smug for thinking I had thought of it all on my own!! till I saw my coffee holder which was but-obviously big and unmistakably red and must have been the source of everything...besides which the whole idea of Armaan driking out of a red mug belonging to Riddhima seemed kinda cute!! And it had to be something like tit-for-tat for her refusal to give him back his sketchbook. ...You can't have given up coffee??

"If you are done with it, I'd like my mug back!" Riddhima was intent on giving him nothing.

He rose, and walked towards her, to her credit, Riddhima stood her ground, "what?...no good morning!" he yawned lazily as he stopped in front of her. ...

"Ufff" she let out a frustrated glare at Armaan.

"You have no idea how you look when you say that!"

these were SIGNATURE AR bits! like those scenes/lines that just flow out of the pen when one writes about AR, yeh?! =)

Absolutely spot on! Some things are just signature AR and this was one of them...

Hell no, there was no firm footing, with him around, it was only quick sand! Very well said!!! 👏😆

Riddhima can pretend all she want, no one gets to her like Doctor 😆

She is shadowing me today" Bring it on Armaan, Riddhima was determined to give it back. All of a sudden, that break had transformed into something else. i loved the way he termed it 'shadowing' it was so apt, in being downright honest, and downright a tease! 😆

Hehe...I see someone's enjoying their presence '😆

i additionally liked (a lot) how Armaan kept checking his list of which Ridhima versions he liked, and which he did not (the latter being only the ones where he ceased, or appeared to cease being the center of her world - such a guy! 😆)

someone mentioned!! Armaan's list of Riddhima versions - and really no surprises why he didn't like that Riddhima...

"I think she just realized how much she missed out on last night", (how darned mean was that! Mr. Armaan Prick Malik!)

Armaan and NJ are a riot (despite how slow you made NJ at catching up on his cue - it was RIGHT there, and i wanted to barge into the screen and glare her down to let me down 😆... and so was her understanding of a man and a woman can't be friends (she was right when she felt sadistically satisfied about Armaan metting his match...

I thought he was being fair with that one actually since she had been rather unfair to him the past few days, and he was bound to savour that little moment...he he...actually, NJ surprised me too,😆 I thought she would have figured out earlier, 😆 actually I was having a lot of fun while writing out these parts, it just seemed like perfecto!😛 Except ofcourse NJ being so slow in realisation, I can see why you'd want to barge in and make her see the obvious. But but..all said and done, she did surprise Armaan immediately afterwards. I'm still for NJ and Armaan, I feel like Riddhima may have her own reasons to befriend NJ... the idea is pretty tempting though, ladies teaming up on a lone guy, let's see how much scope there is for that here...😊

which brings us to Ridhima and NJ who might outdo the riot-ous records of Armaan and NJ eventually, given chance and space.. ladies teaming up on a lone guy is that cliche scenario, which never runs out of its scope for providing fun! =)

"He was on the healthy side, freshmen year" NJ finally spoke up. (This, the chubby cheeks moniker, was positively ROFL-worthy! excessively so cause... erm, well that's a secret I'd tell u on chat! :D remind me for sure! .. anyways, i know where the sweetcheeks comes from, so hail sookie san for the immortal tags that haunt me even in fictional appearances... oh well! )

and yeh, i missed nothing, i repeat nothing of all those excellent (And not so excellent) traits being attributed to *ahem* the mysterious stranger!

Which brings me to this part, I can't even begin to tell you how I got to the whole cheeks monikers, someone didn't call me a little delirious for nothing! I thought I was improvising when I was using the first name🤔,...and had been proudly showing it off...sigh! It's a bit of a story, will tell you someday when we meet on chat. We need to catch up sometime!! Before we forget!! speaking of sookiesan, who obviously cannot be left out of any of this *shakes head*😆

The mysterious stranger! I have no clue what you are tawking about *innocent muh*

Which after days of utter silence, had been the first genuine thing she had said to him,and instantly a strange relief washed over him...

The morning had started with a splash and no surprises why there was a spring in her steps. these were so awww! i literally said it out loud while reading them...

Awww...I think there have been moments like this on the show too...hard to miss, with AR.

the overall travails and enigma continues to prevail, but AR moments (and Muskaan moments while I'm a that, cause she was another SIGNATURE herself character in this part) provide happy, and angsty respite... and fill in very well to round up the story ... since the updates are actually not obnoxiously absurdly spaced (averts eyes) the flow is actually pretty neat! =) ridhima's brother's death is going to create some havoc, but hopefully its only a major misunderstanding that shanks harbors in his more than often prejudiced mind... if t isn't, god save the couple! obviously, despite what R hopes for, AR are never going t be half as easy as AA... oh well!

Yea, I've been going around the messy bits for a while now and the entry of NJ has really added a zing to the story..and kept me away for all those messy bits..just having too much fun to go into sad things. I just want to keep this story light and comical...and a lil cheesy! As some would say...but yeah, Riddhima is being wishful when she thinks, things may not be as bad as she things!

pablos is an excellent start to the day (even when co passengers on your morning train resort to giving you 'the looks')

so anyways, that's with my detailed comment, not so delayed , yet again, you have to agree - I'm being so good about all my stardom, you should be absolutely smug about your genius creation A 😆

cheers, and merry christmas!

nj

I can empathise, having been caught off guard reading comments and stories on IF with huge grins! I can totally empathise!! Thank you though for a lovely and much appreciated 'verbose' comment. And once again, thank you for a lovely comment and for being a real sport!!

Hope you've had a great start to the new year!