Pablo's Muse [I] -AR- Pt. 25/Pg 143 May 9, 11 - Page 103

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

Ok i have decided i must give a much better comment on this update

NJ reminds me of the character Nikki from DMG. I like NJ in ya ff..and (if NJ is reading this comment since she has gained her own set of fans and has been busy reading their comments on her so im guessing she will find this comment about her and read it)..so i must mention that i do like NJ in real life as well as in fan fiction ;p

Hi Aliya, thanks for droping in this comments, its always a pleasure to read what you guys have to say. I bet she(we-all-know-who!) must be reading this(wipe that smugness off your face!! and get back to the 18th page of the update you are so dilligently working on!!😆)okay getting back to you Aliya, I never watched DMG with Nikki and Abhi...so kind of clueless about how their characters were shaped...but going by your words, I can assume, Nikki and Armaan were friends too...

Muskaan was left speechless for once hah. I loved Muskaan's thought about how she was surprised that she herself didn't think of matching A with R. Ah everyone is catching on quickly. RM are certainly cute, seems Muskaan has found the man who can tame her as well as rile her up hah.

I love how you've described it....

Hah i can imagine the "poor lone man, armaan" stuck between his friend and girlfriend who will be sharing their opinions on Armaan. But it was so cute when Ridhima had thought "she wouldn't leave her man behind" and invited him geniunely to coffee. Such a adorable moment.

Come to think of it, this will be fun to work on but that means more footage to a certain someone!! I'm deliberating...😆 jokes aside, glad you enjoyed that moment which was just that...a genuine step by Riddhima to start mending whatever needs fixing between them...and it has to start from her.

😆 Jealous of Ridhima mildly flirting with a man twice her age who was her patient. And she knew it and kept at it just to fool around with him. Armaan may not like that Ridhima but i did.

Glad you enjoyed that bit, I concur, I like that Riddhima too ;)

Brilliant update once again Aria

Good to see you back Aliya..Thank you for your lovely comments.!

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Yes, I am here and you also better be back here. Read the part long back and cannot remember my exact thoughts so can't un-reserve my previous post to comment... but all I can say is, I want to read the next part soon. No, it not a request, IT IS A ORDER.

(phew!!!... it feels awesome to be back being myself. 😆)

Originally posted by: pickytg

Caught up with all the updates, think i re-read some 6-7 parts, trying to figure out where i'd left off. Interesting...its going. NJ was a pleasant touch to the story...soooo funky..could totally imagine her..well the fictitious one, not NJ for real..cuz i know the real one too much...and yours did do a good job imitating the real one but..not quite...! regardless....i like how the story is forming...and you've left things hanging, yet again...but for the best, i assume!

Keep it going...i won't be regular..cuz i can't read updates in gaps..so ill wait till you do a few :D but i'll be around, for sure!

PS: hope things are fine at your end, its been a long, long time. :)

cheers,

nij 👍🏼

Originally posted by: khahani

Aloha

Heylooo to you too!!

Long time! So I've finally read all the latest update of Pablo's and oh my, you've made NJ quite the celebrity here, she is certainly stealing all the limelight from the dimple Dr (Ridz is always secondary 😆) even with her small guest appearances! All her lines were carefully executed and I can almost imagine NJ and her wit hehee..

shhh!! hvn't you seen how smug the celebrity is already. don't let her read this...ever since that appearance, she hasn't update AoL....lol😆 alright...jokes aside, one more who joins the Nj phan-club. I think Ridz will start to complain soon ...

The rivalry between the Malliks and the Gupta's is still a mystery and so is the Dia factor in Armaans life. Intrigue to find out more about these two issue as well as Anjali's adoption fiasco. So much confusion!

i totally take the blame for that...i can't belive i've kept this running for almost two years now :S..its time to unravel all that and get things moving along. Next updates shall be all about what's relevant..no more fillers!!

I loved part 24, partly because of NJ's unique sense of humour and partly because of general AR banter of the break-up / make-up drama'"Where you flirting with a seventy year old uncle?" 😆 I could picture Armaan's expression of disbelief and it made me laugh so much 😆

:D absolutely,,..NJ added a certain spunk to these parts which were missing since AR were on that break up thingy...you know that line, i just felt it was perfect for Armaan, I could totally picture Dr. A in that..with his cute exasperated expressions, glad it worked for you too.😳

I've decided to read IOL once it is completed because every time I attempt to read a new part I have to go back and refresh my memory of the previous happening which often become a nuisance so I shall read it when the finale is uploaded (there is one more part left right?) Alritgh time go back to work and say aldiva to I-F.

Yes, there is one more part left to it. I will finish off that one before I update here. Just hope its sooner than later. Thank your super comment Nahida :)

You tc too

A~

TC :)

PS: bohot chota comment hai :( next time I'll give a detail analysis!

looking forward to that as well.. ;)

Originally posted by: DMG fan

making appearance here?