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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShubS

The rest in my imagination goes this way- Milind keeps on trying trying and trying to talk to her, but the dude is so nervous that he can't take one word out of his mouth. The whole night is spent with some eye locks between those four eyes that have forgotten to sleep. Prachi is expecting the guy will make the first move, but disappointed by the morning.

The next morning, the train reaches Mumbai suburbs and Prachi is getting ready to get off (Prachi's place is in a suburb station, before Victoria Terminal). Milind is standing up and looking fatally confused. Before getting off, she stands in front of him and says- Mr. Milind Mishra, don't make fun of me. I want to tell you that I am totally in love with you. If you love me too, let me know, or else, forget that I ever these words to you.

Prachi gets off and walks away. Milind is transported into another world and almost giddy. The train starts moving and that brings him to reality. He remembers Prachi's words and gets off of the moving train to run behind her.😊
haayi haayi... thats really nice... both stealing glances and smiling shyly☺️... u know, sum told me tht she won't comment till i continue this fic... i will tell her to read this, and say this is the continuation😳😆
Nice fic Kuku thanx Shubs😃😃😃.. Thank you so much for the dedication finally I did! i was thinkin whether i shud dedicate this or H to u.. and decided to dedicate this, as i am not sure when i will write H. I will be waiting for K... and H..... K today or tomorrow... H not sure😕


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

I 'hate' you Kuku!! why?😲😭 :DD sobs.., leaving it to our imagination.. 😡🤣. hehehehe actually, I had decided to end this with M finding P sitting there, but then while talking to Shubs, she said there shud be more.. so P also likes him😃 the title is so apt for the story..! Luck indeed. yeah! every point he was getting lucky in the fic😆 Neevu is such a good friend, I hope Milind doesn't forget the prawn pickles for his mate,..lol! Itna toh bunta hain. HAHAHAHA... Neev will be calling him and reminding him everyday😉😃 Well written, I could just picture the mad rush in which Milind and his buddies were trying to find P. thank you😃 Ultimately Milind got the girl in the end and P fida over him too:) yeah! luck by chance😉
Thanks.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
rest to our imagination eh?! wel u knw m one track minded soooo.....
ahem.☺️..anyways...this is really very beautiful the way how milind waits for her every day outside her comp classes and duffer not being able to say even a small HI to her...idiot!!😡 and wat kind of idiot is he?! he didnt knw that she lives like 2 blocks away , lives in the same college...sheesh is he really in this world or not?!😕
ok the train station..wonderful! i really feel sorry for the gang for havin a frend like milind hehe🤣...ahem actually poor them had to run here and there to find his dream girl...but milind is soo greatful to have frends like them😎...superb ya! awsome!!
and OMG!!! never expected that prachi too would be equally crazy about him...and UUU ms.no-rehem-at-all finished off from there.😡😡😡...bery bery bad!!😭
but yaa..this was a total dreammyyy fic...loved this to the core! milind's restlessness of meeting prachi was just awsome!!
if u can puh-leez do write an epilouge for this...please please pretty please *batting eyelids*😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Kuku...nice one shot FF there...really kept me glued to this...lovd how youve brout out the story with all his friends helping him...esp it was fun to read the part where Ali asks the TTR about prachi's seat ...and he says sarcastically ''then call her and ask''...poor Ali..🤣

and ''by the time he reached his seat, he and Prachi were married in his daydream''.....😆 ..lol.. that was so cute..
i just lovd the ending...the way youve left us to imagine...haayi mein marjawa..😍..very different from wat i thout will happen in the end..nice.😉..
thanks for a lovly one shot FF..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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KuKu lovely SS..........So MM is in love with Ps........And PS also in love MM...........great.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 one shot Kuku, michi both secretly love one another awwww... i love shubs conclusion to the part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Kuku dear Were r the old one's 😉.👏👏Well this one is so cuteeeeeeeee,milind and prachi ki prem kahani suru hogi ek train ke safar se good good👏,I was just imagining them both in this story it felt so sweeeeet.kash asihe unke asal jindagi be hojay😉.waiting for other one to update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooooooooow kuku, ur ff is really super,
poor milind such duffer can't even tell hi to her,
thnks to neev and alaap to help him,
really destiny had played well in michi
nice to see prachi too is fida over him
wonder who is going to confess first,but u finished with our imagination not fair hun,
but loved u ff to the core, well written
hope many have experienced like this in their life

keep on rocking

waiting for kiss darlng

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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Thanx for such a sweet one shot ff
Aww Milsi absolutely crazy about Prachi but not having the guts to go and talk to her not how he is usually portrayed
Milind is so lucky to have friends like Neev, Ali and Alaap
Michi like each other equally
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
hey kuku
gr8 one shot ff..

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