iS tHiS lOvE? (Mayur Based Part9 updated Aug. 23)

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meepha

@Meeph

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Posted: 16 years ago

#161

ohh

it was a beautiful update

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#162

hey!

very nice update. so mayur are falling in love.......

awesome. plz continue soon.

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#163

oh god...finally you updated!! it'd been so long...I was waiting to read the next part...

and you write both their characters perfectly...never for once could i point out that a scene was out of character!!

soo mayu's falling on love!! hehe...mom ko toh ekdum pata chal jata hai!! LOL

the cornering scene was awesome...LOL..CJ ne pakad liya..!

That dialogue " mayank tum relationship mein ho...kabse...mujhe bataya bhi nahi!"...great!

and nupur's also started to understand him....

Lovely update....please update soon this time!

thanks for the PM!

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#164

vryyy nice update dear........lovd it vryyyyyyyy much........plzz add me to pm list also....plzz....😃

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twiinkletoes

@twiinkletoes

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#165

sania,make the next part soon.the best part with your ff is that mayur is still in the verge of their realization of their real feelings towards each other & you have ample scope to dramatize all the events ahead.pls do so.i especially liked these lines:She lightens the atmosphere so much that all the tension, practicality, dryness, dullness, reasonableness ---- just anything that is too serious or anything that makes life boring just vanishes. She fills the deepest cavity with joy. She makes me want to enjoy.too good in describing nups👍🏼

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heena

@heena.damor

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#166

thank god u r back yaar......i was missing ur ff sooooooo much........ kya dhamakedar re entry mari yaar........totally mindblowing part.......luved it..... plzzz continue soon...... thanks 4 d pm dear.......i hope u will pm me next time also......

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Diana Lydia

@angelz

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#167

wow sania tht was such a cute update i relli lovd it <3

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Shahida

@Inshira

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#168

vey loving n cute story man plz cont soon

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#169

hey sania i was sooo mad that you have updated sooo late but now i am sooooooooo happy that you have atleast updated man and what an update, i totally lovedddddddd it . each and every part was darn adorable and sooo cute and romantic, i loved mayur parts the most and mayank-mum parts always rocked, you have kept the standard of your ff really high and you have never disappointed me not even a bit, just the part that you keep uis waiting but i know i have been really busy too man, keep it up sania, lovedddddd your update totally man.

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#170

awesome update yaar........yeh!!!! mayu and nupz are falling for each other...........i loved mom mayu convo.........it was sooo sweet.....update soon......pm me😳