iS tHiS lOvE? (Mayur Based Part9 updated Aug. 23) - Page 15

Originally posted by: Nishithini

hey!

very nice part. loved it.

continue soon.

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeet update yaar........ i enjoyed each n every line of it dear.....👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 it was just toooooooooo awsum.......fantastic......fabulous......gr8.....excellent.........👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 totally luved it......😳 😛 yaar really d way u write...d feelings n emotions of mayur......ufffffff.... totally fantastic......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 plzzzzzz continue soon....😊 thanks 4 d pm dear.......😛 😊

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

😉😳 Zabardast the way Mayu said i didnt change clothes and Nups arrived early .... so sweet when he didnt enter the room and waited to just watch his 2 fav. ladies together ... so so sweet yaar 👏 he...hee.. 😆 yeah i thought i should add something like this, i didn't see it in mjht so added it in my ff 😉

Until then mom toh meri life history khol kar baith jayengi nupur ke saath. @......yes and dont v enjoy that 😉 glad that you did.


@teri nupur" " whistles!!!!" 👏 mom's on the row, she'll be the cupid here (*winks*).

@Morena express not only on time but also on right station 👏 hain uske pass koi aur station toh mumbai me ab bacha hi nahin 😆

@ their eye lock was Ufffffffff👏 true one is doll and other is hot 😆😆.... we poor girls who can blame us if r mouth waters ??? like i always say even on paper these two the same affect

@ yaar this cockroach idea is gr8 ...it can be incorporated in the original Mjht ... why not send ur idea to pd ...???? infact this whole scene can go yaar.... Why not ?? REALLY???? Does she even read her pms???

@ Mayu By god was Gr8 and so was the phone conversation 👏 Thank you!

Sania change some part bec in real Mjht they both have confessed as on today ...but i think many of ur ide from this chapter like study date , mom and Nups bonding while Mayu stare at her and that cockroach thing can be incorporated in MJht ... change the scene to fit orginal Mjht and just send .... I truly enjoyed ur chapter ..👏 I am going that way, i think after one more update these two will go into a relationship in this ff it'll be a surprise for the readers. THANK YOU!!! SANA!! you have just resolved how i am going to take this story forward. THANK you!!!

Originally posted by: Senny

hey sania thanks alot for the pm, wah mast update, maaza hi aagaya, wow really awesome man, i don't use hindi much but your update was so impactful, i just blurted out the words, just like the real nupur man, it was reallyyyyyyyyyy nice, i loved it amn, please do update soon man.

Originally posted by: _Monu_

AWESOME PART!!

MAYUR WERE TOO CUTE!!

VERY WELL WRITTEN!!

LOVED IT!!

CONTINUE SOON PLS!!

TAKE UR TIME!!

KEEP IT UP!!

SEE YAAA

LOVE UUUU

Originally posted by: Taniya09

CHO CHWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!😊