iS tHiS lOvE? (Mayur Based Part9 updated Aug. 23)

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: myownarea
twas really sweet 😃

and so sweet of u, thank u!

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Nishithini
hey!
very nice update. so mayur are falling in love.......

awesome. plz continue soon.

i know rite. I hope the pace is not boring.

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Swati

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Posted: 16 years ago

#183

wow....luv ur ff yaar...m new 2 ur ff....if u can den pm me wenever u update...kp writing n rocking!!! 👏
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: hgrhr
oh god...finally you updated!! lol 😆
it'd been so long...I was waiting to read the next part...sorry kept u waiting 4 long time, i know its been a while.

and you write both their characters perfectly...never for once could i point out that a scene was out of character!!Oh wow! for real thanx! actually to be honest this is how I wanted to see mayur before they started their love story--- just writing what I would have liked to have seen. But still love mjht til date and mayur!

soo mayu's falling on love!! hehe...mom ko toh ekdum pata chal jata hai!! LOL

the cornering scene was awesome...LOL..CJ ne pakad liya..!

That dialogue " mayank tum relationship mein ho...kabse...mujhe bataya bhi nahi!"...great!

and nupur's also started to understand him....

Lovely update....please update soon this time!

thanks for the PM! Glad that u liked all that and mom is afcourse omniscient 😆

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: nikki028
vryyy nice update dear........lovd it vryyyyyyyy much........plzz add me to pm list also....plzz....😃

Awwwwhhh!! thanx!

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: yourtwinkletoes
sania,make the next part soon.the best part with your ff is that mayur is still in the verge of their realization of their real feelings towards each other & you have ample scope to dramatize all the events ahead.pls do so.i especially liked these lines:She lightens the atmosphere so much that all the tension, practicality, dryness, dullness, reasonableness ---- just anything that is too serious or anything that makes life boring just vanishes. She fills the deepest cavity with joy. She makes me want to enjoy.too good in describing nups👍🏼

Dramatize .... nice idea. The line that u mentioned is one of my favs too, I loved it too when I read it over --- nupur "she fills the deepest cavity with joy"😊 Thank U!!!! Loved reading ur take.

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan
thank god u r back yaar......i was missing ur ff sooooooo much........ kya dhamakedar re entry mari yaar........totally mindblowing part.......luved it..... plzzz continue soon...... thanks 4 d pm dear.......i hope u will pm me next time also......

😆 srry 4 the wait yaar. This time me rite? not Mr. Roach 😉😆 with the entry😆. Thank u! U'll get a pm 4 the next one too.

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: angelz
wow sania tht was such a cute update i relli lovd it <3

Thanx! I so glad to know that u liked it.

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: Inshira
vey loving n cute story man plz cont soon

Thank u! I am very happy to know that u found it cute and lovely.

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Sania

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Posted: 16 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Senny
hey sania i was sooo mad that you have updated sooo late but now i am sooooooooo happy that you have atleast updated man and what an update😃, i totally lovedddddddd it😃 . each and every part was darn adorable and sooo cute and romantic, i loved mayur parts the most and mayank-mum parts😃 always rocked😆, you have kept the standard of your ff really high and you have never disappointed me not even a bit😃😳, just the part that you keep uis waiting 😳but i know i have been really busy too man, keep it up sania😊, lovedddddd your update totally man.

okay senny just replied to ur message with smileys 😆. Sorry man 4 updating so late, but can't help it so much going on. So glad that I did not disappoint u. Nups dialogue man "Zor ka jhatka agar dheere se lage toh aur bhi mazza aa ta hai"😆. Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai mere dost 😆. Okay too much hindi, in the end nothing can be said more than thank u!!!!!!!!