The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12 - Page 63

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

yaar even im having same thoughts like adi

hmmm....but u'll have to wait for some parts to knw the truth 😉

Originally posted by: yoshita.mayufan

yaar pinky...kamal kar diya..!!
gr8 update..!!
it was soo damn good..!!!
it all felt so real 2 me..!!
thnks 4 d PM..will b waitin 4 d nxt one..!!!

thankssssss a lot yoshita.....i'm glad u liked it.....will surely update soon......😊

hey pinky!!! sorry for the late comment!!.......this part was really awesome.....what a bonding man!!......mayank ne kya speech mari!!......but most importantly if those lines were ur own thoughts then hats off to u!!......damn excited for the next part......what wil the serial killer do this time!!!.........omg......plzzz update soon!!!

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

hey pinky!!! sorry for the late comment!!.......this part was really awesome.....what a bonding man!!......mayank ne kya speech mari!!......but most importantly if those lines were ur own thoughts then hats off to u!!......damn excited for the next part......what wil the serial killer do this time!!!.........omg......plzzz update soon!!!

thanksss a lot prerna....i'm glad u liked it....yes the dialogues were mine own.....updating next part pretty soon.....😊

RECAP:

Everyone comes to know the truth of serial killer troubling nupur & RV-dia's relation.Dia is welcomed in the group.They go for shopping.The serial killer comes in the trial room where nups went to change.

PART-13:

Nu: kaun??

Mu: dubaara milkar khushi hui Ms.Nupur….

Nupur got scared as she realized it was the serial killer.

Nu: tum…ab kyu aaye ho???

She could see just the outline of his face.

Mu: arrey tum itni jaldi bhul gayi???tum hi ne toh subah kaha tha ki tumhe mera chehra dekhna hai….dekho maine mask nahi pehna…socha tumhaari khwahish puri kar doo…par tumhaare naseeb hi kharaab hai…kyunki light chali gayi….

Nu: chale jao…warna main shor karoogi…

Mu: hahahahaha….tumhe kya lagta hai baahar koi tumhaari awaaz sun sakta hai???shayad tum jaanti nahi maine yahaan par bomb rakhne ki dhamki di hai isliye poora mall khaali karwa diya gaya hai…ab iss mall mein hum dono ke ilaawa koi nahi hai…

Nupur shuddered at the thought of being alone with the killer in the mall.

Mu: bewakoof log….bas mera ek call aur unhe lagaa yahaan par sach mein bomb hai..

Nu: mayank mujhe chod ke kahin nahi jaa sakta….

Mu: shayad tumne suna nahi…yahaan koi nahi hai….tumhaara mayank bhi chala gaya….woh actually usse hero banne ka bada shauk hai…isliye maine usse hero banaane ke liye kuch ladko ko sonia ko chedne ke liye kahaan hai….aur mayank sonia ko bachaane mein busy hoga…tut tut…apne dost ko bachaane gaya apne pyaar ko chod kar…ab tumhein kaun bachaayega??

Nu: aakhir tum mujhse chahte kya ho??kyu mere peeche padhe ho??

Mu: main tumse kya chahta hoon yeh toh tum jaanti ho(touching her face)…par aaj nahi…aaj toh main sirf tumhe warn karne aaya hu…dur raho mayank se….tumhe kya lagta hai apne doston ko sach bataakar tumhe aur protection mil jaayegi??tumne ab un sabki zindagi bhi khatre mein daal di…agar woh mere raaste mein aaye toh unme se koi nahi bachega…mayank ko toh waise bhi tumhaare paas aane ki sazaa milne waali hai…

Nu: tum mera aur mayank ka aur na hi mere doston ka kuch bigaad sakte ho….hum sab milkar tumhaara saamna karege…

Mu(seriously): yeh toh waqt hi bataayega…ab se tum sab ka bura waqt shuru hota hai…tum apne doston ke liye pachtaugi…bahut pachtaugi…tumhaari iss galti ke liye tum sab khoon ke aansu rone wale ho…

He suddenly came very close to her.

Mu: aur ab yahaan tak aaya hu toh subah ka kaam thoda aur pura kar deta hu taaki tumhe shikaayat na rahe ki maine tumhe good bye kiss nahi di hai…

He was about to kiss her.But she was prepared this time.Before he could kiss her she gave him a nice kick in his stomach.He clenched his stomach cursing her & she pushed him back & opened the door & came out running.When she came out she was shocked to see everything in mall was normal.It was not evacuated as the serial killer had told her.She looked here & there at people laughing & enjoying having nobody to trouble them.She quickly went back to the trial room but the killer was gone from there.She cursed herself for being stupid.Had she shouted & not believed him that the mall was empty he would be with the cops today.He was indeed very smart.She received a message from private number:"girls are so easy to be fooled".She got annoyed after reading this message.Just then gunjan came to her.

Gu: kya hua tumne dress try kiya?

She realized nupur was in some other world.

Gu: kya hua nupur???

Nupur told her all that happened.

Nu(crying): sab meri galti hai…kaash main ek baar awaaz ki hoti….mujhe lagaa usne sach mein mall ko khali karwa diya…

Gu: its ok nupur….dekhte hai woh kab tak bhaagta hai….tum uski dhamki seriously mat lena…

Nupur nodded.

Nu: tum mayank ko kuch mat bataana…

Gu: kyu??

Nu: kya faayda hai usko bataakar??woh sirf pareshaan hoga….waise bhi woh darinda mujhe yahaan sirf dhamki dene aaya tha ki main tum log ka saath chod du….mayank pareshaan ho jaayega ki main dubara tum sab se dur chali jaogi…woh dubara insecure feel karega….

Gunjan nodded understandingly.

Nu: mayank hai kahaan?

Gu: woh washroom gaya tha….lo aa gaya…

Nupur turned to see mayank walking towards them.She smiled at him while he smiled back.

Ma: dekho main tumhaare liye kya laaya…

He removed a pair of bracelets.One had a beautiful heart shape & letter M carved in between the heart.He made nupur wear it.The other was also the same except that it had letter N carved in the heart.He himself wore it.

Nu(smiling): bahut sunder hai…thanksss.

Ma: sirf thanks?

Nu was smiling more.She took his hand in his & kissed his bracelet.He smiled at this.He looked at her & thought something was disturbing her.

Ma: nupur tum theek ho???

Nupur nodded.

Nu: mayank main kuch kehna chahti hoon…

Ma: kya baat hai???

Nu: yaad hai maine subah tumse kahaan tha ki aaj museum wale favour ke badle mujhe kuch chahiye…

Mayank (nodded): kya chahiye??

Nu: kya tum mujhse shaadi karoge??

Mayank was shocked.

Ma: nupur achanak kya hua?

Nu: achanak nahi mayank….main kaafi dino se soch rahi thi….main jaanti hu tum mujhe tab tak propose nahi karoge jab tak main modeling kar rahi hu kyunki iss duniya mein shaadi-shuda ladkiyon ki koi jaga nahi par ab main aur intzaar nahi kar sakti….main thak gayi hu mayank…mujhe iss industry mein jitna rehna tha main reh chuki….ab main sirf humaare baare mein sochna chahti hu….main nahi jaanti aage kya hone wala hai….nahi jaanti pandraa din baad main zinda rahugi ki nahi….bas itna jaanti hu main aaj mein jeena chahti hu….main apna aaj tumhaare saath khushi-khushi rehna chahti….please mujhse shaadi kar lo…main tumhaari bankar is duniya se jaana pasand karogi….

Ma: kya tumhe apne mayank par bilkul bharosa nahi???kya tumhe lagta hai main tumhe kuch hone dunga???nahi nupur……jis takleef se tum guzar rahi ho woh main samajhta hoon par kya tumhe lagta hai agar tumhe kuch ho jaayega toh main jee paoga???shaadi karna galat nahi hai par jis wajah se tum mujhse shaadi karna chahti ho kya woh sahi hai?kya tumhe lagta hai humaara pariwaar humaare iss faisle se khush hoga? Har maa-baap ka sapna hota hai beti ki shaadi mein kanyadaan karne ka…kya tum unse yeh haq cheen-na chahti ho?tumhaara bhi toh sapna hai ki tumhaari shaadi bade dhoom-dhaam se ho…tumhaare haath mein mehndi ho…sab log tumhaari shaadi mein naache….kya tum yeh sapna tod paogi??sirf yeh soch kar ki kal kya hoga iske darr se hum apne aur apno ke armaano ko maar de??Sach bataoo toh main bhi nahi jaanta kal humaare saath kya hoga par iska matlab yeh nahi hum aaj koi aisa faisla le jisse humme kal pachtaana padhe…aur kaun kehta hai aaj hum khush nahi??jab jab mayank aur nupur saath honge tab tab khushi apna raasta dhoondh legi….mayank kabhi nupur par aanch nahi aane dega…tum dekhna hum dono yahaan se khushi-khushi saath jaayege….aur India mein apno ke beech dhoom-dhaam se shaadi karenge…

Nupur smiled through her tears & hugged him.

2 DAYS LATER:

Nupur's friends wouldn't leave her alone anywhere.After the mall incidence gunjan,sonia & dia would even enter the washroom with her & make sure she is not alone anywhere.The rooms were small for 2 people to live otherwise they wouldn't leave her alone even at night.She had still been getting messages & there seemed to be no progress in investigation.She had brief meetings these 2 days with the inspector & she told him all that had happened on the trip.The inspector took in all the details.Mayank was questioned about where he was when nupur was troubled in museum & he told someone had hit him hard at the back of head due to which he was unconscious for those minutes.When he got up he found himself in a nearby cupboard.He was very confused to what had happened but before he could analyze anything dia had spotted him in the crowd & taken him to nupur.He hadn't shared this info with anyone coz he didn't want nupur to come to know of this attack.

Nupur entered her room after dinner.She saw a gift lying on the table.She picked it up & opened it & saw a beautiful colourful night gown.It was nice & silky.There was a letter attached to it.

It read: "For our special night.Since you look different in different colours I thought of seeing you in all colours at once.I want you to glow in all colours.Just 13 days left…cant wait for the night."

Nupur recalled how he sent her 3 photos in night gown in red,black & pink & realized he mixed all the colours to clear his confusion.She threw the gown in anger & tried to sleep but her mind was playing havoc as '13 days left' kept ringing in her ears.Just than she received a sms from private number saying "hope you liked the gift…..& I don't care if u liked or not but I loved it ;)".Nupur was just pissed off & tried to gain some nice peaceful sleep.

NEXT DAY:

Nupur was called by the inspector.He wanted to talk to her alone.

Nu: any progress.

In: abhi toh nahi…par mujhe thodi information chahiye.Mujhe jaan na hai woh kaisa dikhta hai?

N: maine aap ko bataaya na uska chehra dhakaa hua tha….usne mask pehna tha.

In: mera matlab hai uski height kaisi thi?Uske haath ka rang kaisa tha?Kya woh patla tha ya mota?kya uski koi nishaani thi jo usko dusron se alag karti hai…

Nupur told him all the details she knew about him.Then she remembered the eyes.

N: uski aankhen dekhkar mujhe ek pal ke liye lagaa ki main usse jaan ti hoon.Mujhe lagaa woh koi mere bahut kareeb se hai…pata nahi yeh sach hai ya phir mera waihem…

In: shayad yeh sach hai…

N: kya matlab??

In: matlab yeh ki mujhe lagta hai ki woh serial killer koi aur nahi balki Mr.Mayank Sharma hai.

Nupur was shocked.

Finally done…Hopefully you'll enjoy….

Didn't get a good response for last part so I'm sad….hope you'll understand the pain taken behind writing this ff & will comment.

what

wow i am the first one to read and comment

wooooow that was AMAZING!!

awesome part dear
simply mindblowing
ur ends oh god😡
i just don't know wat to say?
becoz i dontknow wat u r going to do with mayank😭
anyhow part was fabulous
i loved it
do cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
can't just bear this suspence

Oh my God
Piya whats this?????
I know mayank cant b a killer.
no no way.
he loved nups so much.
how he could do this.
i m 100% confident he is not a killer.
i guess Samrat may b the killer
any way its my opinion.
And now waiting 4 ur update.
Plz update soon. Now cant wait more