The Unsolved Mystery(MN) PART-18 PG-141 31/12

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nupurvj23

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Posted: 15 years ago

#641

on no no nooo....plz dnt make mayank the killer...plz plz... 😭
i really really hope hes nt the killer...
newys..awesome update as usual! 😃
keep it up! 👍🏼
n continue soon!!!!! dyin to knw wht happens next...😊 😊
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Preethi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#642

wowwwwwww this is an dansooooo update... wonderful... loved it dear.. keep writing more..

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#643

noooooo,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, not mayyu yaar....................... any ways will wait for yur next updte...............

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jeni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#644

me too hope for best yet keep my hands crossed....reason ...i guess u know i dont want mayu to be the serial killer....mmmh....plzzzzzzzz noooooo.....u no what to proceed further....as far as you had done a great job...yet ur doing.... so i like all twists u give us....mmmh i think i should prepare mind for some shock too...small wish somewhere that serial killer should not be mayu...this comment would definitely say u how am involved with ur ff right...yet will wait patiently to read further....yet it moves as unsolved mystery...puzzled story yaar....i think u think a lot for ur updates....brainy...want fast update....plzzzzzz...love ur upd however i got a bit more shock at end lolz....ha ha ha i guess am getting more emothional yaar....wt do you think...i noo ur thinking to update now...right then please without changing ur mind upd immidiately lolz....will wait dear...

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#645

pinkey
i want to tell you when i start reading your ff's first part ......... i was shocked after reading this becoz this ff was awesome and different , actually i like suspences and your every part contain mixture of every thing ......so i love this..the kisses the date plan ........ every thing friend conversation i love it .
if you feel sad i also feel the same ,i know what you want to say but dont feel sad ok.....
starting from this part

first im very very happy that they all accpet diya and shopping i feel too going for shopping .
so the suspense the killer he is such genius yaar kya kya ideas he have in his mind .........shocked me yaar
very very clever agar who killer na hota to i bet koi scientist hota ya phir cook.
kitni easily nupur ko convence ker liya apne talk se ...very smart and intelligent .......
or kick wow happy feeling i can do bangra,nupur kick the ....... awesome yaar
i enjoyed the kick by hiting my bro.... pinkey next
time plz one kick frm me too.
or phir nupur or maynk ke baato ne mera dil choo liya yaar maynk is so sweet ......how he understand everything so easily and describe very good
or the gift wow yaar
they are such true lovers.
now im sure maynk's not the killer
one more guess may be the killer look alike maynk
but maynk is not the killer
..............
now im waiting for ur next part pinkey
i love commenting after jenni

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luv-myur

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Posted: 15 years ago

#646

hey Pinky,

now i really cant wait.

Very excited.-am totally out of patience.

waiting for more-and u remember right b4 when theis came up others had quesitons and i stated a few reasons that show that it can't b mayank. If u r making it mayank, put those into perspective and try to answer them, just for satisfaction.

And am extreamly curious.

LOVE U-BEST WRITER.

ALWAYS ENJOY IT, EVERY PART.

Eagerly waiting, plz post soon.

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Yoshita0411

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Posted: 15 years ago

#647

Killer Mr Mayank Sharma hai..?????????
yeh kya hai pinky..??!!!!!!
m vry curious..!!
this is gettin so better ....!!
awesomely awesum updte..!!!
jaldi updta kro yaar..!!

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thenarcissist

@thenarcissist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#648

Hi!
I love your FF!
Great part!Plz dont Mayank the killer!Plz Plz Plz!
Plz Pm me ur next update!

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
what
how can mayank be the killer

no noi way waiting for next update

cant breath

thankssssss for your comment...please breath easy coz this shock is nothing to what u'll get in coming parts 😉......will try updating soon.....😊

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pinky gandhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: hazel94
wooooow that was AMAZING!!
sooo cannot w8

now she suspects mayanks

but its true he is never there when she is attacked!!!

hmmm sooo cannnot w88

plz make 13 days goo by quicker!!!!

dont worry 13 days will go soon coz even i need to end this ff as soon as possible 😆......thankssss a lot for your comment....glad u liked it.....😊