Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 27

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Posted: 16 years ago
oh neha is too hurt.............hope raj clarifies it soon.................cont soon...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thankx frndz for reading & commenting on this part aur jinhone nahi pada unko congradulation. Tum log bach gaye yaar!! Ok i have to contd with next part now!!
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Part 45: Neha is crying in his room. Ne: tumne aisa q kiya raj, ek pal mein hi muje itna saara dard de diya (she was crying while Kripa enters the room & neha wipes her tears & pretends everything is normal). Are Kripu tu(Kripa face was looking sad) kya yaar q itne sadde se shakal bana rahi hai, main kal jaa rahi hu yaar (Kripa hugs neha & starts crying) kripu, ab tu rona band kar warna main b rona shuru kar dunge. Kr: tu us raj ki wajase muje chod k q jaa rahe maine kya kiya hai, tuje pata haina mera tera allawa aur koi dost nahi hai. Ne: oh ho! To Angad k baare mein kya khayal hai. Kr: naam mat lo uska. Whenever these mens r get involved sab kuch kharab ho jaata hai. Ne: mere saat jo b hua woh raj ne kiya ab isme bichare Angad ki kya galti hai aur waise b mere dil itne bi bure tara se nahe tuta hai aur maine faisla kar liya hai k main bilkul aansu nahi bahaogi aur woh b raj jaise dhokebaaz, nirdai, nirlaj aur.. Aur (she dont know what to say). Kr: 'Kaminey'. Ne: bas yaar Kripu ab tu jalle par Salt mat dallo, waise bohat hi acha word hai Raj ki personality ko bilkul match karta hai (she was trying to make kripa happy but Kripa was still very sad & crying like a kid). Ab yaar tu itne emotional kaise ho sakti hai ab dekho dil mera tuta hai lekin maine ro rahe hu kya (listening this Kripa starts crying even more badly loudly & neha was trying to close her ears). Isse baccho ka teacher banaya kisne, isse to khud bacha hona chahe ye tha, acha thek hai main 2 dino baad Mumbai aaoge waise b mera saaman b to lena hai. Kr: pakka tum aaoge? Kasam khao.(she took neha's dupatta & wipes her nose). Ne: kya yaar Kripu aaj to waise hi maine bohat kha liya hai (kripa gives a angry look) ok baba mere kasam. Kr: tumari nahi meri kasam khao. Ne: ab mai tere jhuti kasam kaise kha sakte hu (kripa again gives neha a angry look) ok fine tere kasam ab thek hai. Kr: ok thankx (she was going out of the room when she remember of giving neha dupatta back which she took to wipe her nose). Kr: arre haa ye le tera dupatta. Ne: tu hi rakh le waise b ab yeh mere kis kaam ka. (Raj was thinking k aakhir Neha k is behaviour ki wajja kya hai tab Angad aata hai). An: whats up dude. Ra: kuch nahi yaar yeh ladki na muje ek din paagal kardenge. An: wow, jitna pareshan tune ladkiyo ko kiya hai na un sab ka badla yeh akkele ladki tujse le rahi hai (raj looks angad with a ? Look). Ra: Angad tu 1 minute apna muh khol. An: q kya hua. Ra: yaad hai tune mujse ek din kaha tha k maine jitne ladiyo ko dhokha diya hai unke dard ka ehsaas muje tab hoga jab main kisse ladki se pyar karuga aur woh muje chod k chale jayege, to main bas chech karna chahta hu k tere zaban kaali to nahi. An: ha ha! Very funny, muje to lagta hai usne teri aur Sunita ki baat sun le hai (raj looks at Angad). Ra: agar aisa hua na to bohat badi problem ho jayege aur jaha tak main usse jaanta hu woh muje apni safai dene ka b mokka nahi denge. An: sab thek ho jayega (Angad keep his hand on Raj shoulder) aur phir yeh b to ho sakta hai k woh apni Mom ki health ko lekar pareshan ho? (saying this Angad goes from there). Raj looks up in the sky. Ra: muje pata hai yeh sab aap muje meri galtiyo ki sazza dene k liya kar rahe hai na lekin neha ko mujse dur karke muje itne b badi sazza mat do. **** MORNING **** (Neha is ready to go & Raj is going to go to drop her to the station. Neha is meeting to every1 while raj is standing near his car & watching her nicely). Ra: aise hi milne mein time waste karo aur tumari chut jaye to kitna acha honga (he says in her mind with a mischevious smile) neha chale, warna tumari train miss ho jayege (neha didnt speak a word & just sits next to her & he starts the car. Raj continuously neha ko dekh raha hai aur neha khidke k bahar dekh rahe hai. Ra: Neha tum mujse naaraz ho kya? . Ne: nahi to, tum itne ache insaan ho k tumse koi naraz ho hi nahi sakta (she said this smilingly & again starts looking out of the window) Neha tum mujse naraz ho kya(neha said this in her heart making faces) how innocent jaise inhe kuch pata hi nahi hai, kal raat se mera roo roo k bura haal ho gaya aur isse kuch pata hi nahi hai great. Ra: tumne kuch kaha kya? (neha got shocked). Ne: tumne kuch suna kya. Ra: nahi muje aisa laga k tumne kuch kaha. Ne: kya zamana aa gaya hai ab ek insaan apne mann mein b kuch nahi bol sakta(she says in her heart). Ra: what?Tumne kuch kaha na. Ne: haan woh actually zarur maine apne pechle janam mein bohat saare paap..mera matlab puniya kiye honge jo muje tum mile isse k liye god ko thankx kar rahe thi.. Maine kabi apni zindagi mein kise se pyaar nahi kiya, qki muje lagta tha k duniya ka har ladka tumari tara Kam..mera matlab kammal ka thodi na hota hai aur phir muje tum mile duniye k sabse bade kaminey, ghatiya, dhokebaaz aur darinde kisam k insaan..(raj stops t he car & was very shock those words were like heart attack to her). ****END****
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Posted: 16 years ago
neha has somewhat blurted out her anger and hope raj gets it and clears all the misunderstandings before its too late...................cont soon............
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh wats happening?? Raj is being misunderstood by Neha still now. And she is not even showing dat she is angry.....how will Raj explain her anything? But I guess he has realised it from heart...hehe. Though felt bad for Raj, but Neha's behaviour was really different. Not typical at all.

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part! Continue soon plz!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part Please raj Ko kaho ki sab theek kare ....Thank You for pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update.. hope Raj sorts out the whole issue n clears the misunderstanding.. do continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
too good part..................neha ne raj ko kia kia kaha maza a gaya.......................kripa itna roo rahi thi muhje tu hasi a rahi thi.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part.....nicely written..........neha raj ke bich zyada koi problem na aaye sab thik hojaye....waitng fr next part....update soon..luv aarti....

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