Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~

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samrah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

wonderful part.................buhat he emotional tha......................neha kitna ro rahi thi raj ki baat sun kar...................aur woh call kis ki thi...................plz con't soon

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Juthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

Heyyy....

Nice ff......

n thankxxx 4 the pm....

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Afreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

Part 44: Recap: Neha had listen all the conversation between Raj & Sunita & as a result a huge misunderstanding & the mystery call which kept neha i a big shock (Kripa is knowking the door). Kr: kya hua neha tu ro q rahe thi koi problem hai kya. Ne: nahi aise koi baat nahi hai (she wipes the tears from her eyes). Kr: o to tu kya yaha par acting acting khel rahe hai jisme tu ro rahi, muje sedhe sedhe bata k baat kya hai. Ne: nahi woh abi abi ghar se phone aaya tha k ma ki tabiyat thek nahi hai (she sits on the bed & trying to control her tears). Kr: call to tuje abi aaya tha na to phir tu bahar q ro rahi thi.... Kahi Raj ne to (at this time Neha cant control her feeling & huged Kripa & was crying) i knew, muje pata tha k yeh Raj acha ladka nahi hai aur us jaise log kabi sudar nahi sakte lekin plz yaar tu rona band kar. Ne: maine faisla kar liya mai kal hi in sabse bohat dur chale jaogi (aur woh kamre se bahar jaate hai aur Angad bahar hota hai). An: hey neha tumne Kripa ko..(neha was just gone from there without listening to anything) ab isse kya ho gaya (Angad went inside the room holding a bunch of flowers for Kripa). Hi kripa (kripa gave her a very angry) yeh fool tumhare gusse ko kam karne ke liye. Kr: tum ladke apne aapko samajte kya ho, pehle dil todo aur phir maafi manglo jaise hum ladkeya k paas dil hi nahi jisme bohat sara pyar hai. An: Kripa yeh tum. Kr: dekho Angad mera dimaag bohat kharab hai tum yaha se chale jao please. An: lekin Kripa maine... Kr: nahi tum yaha se q jaoge tum to mard, hamesha galtiya to hum ladkiya karte hai, main hi yaha se chale jaate hu (she went out of the room). An: ab isse kya hua. (Neha comes out of the cottage & raj was there, raj saw neha & he was coming slowly towards her, when Kripa comes from behind & he stops). Ra: o god yeh vamp kaha se tapak padi (Angad also comes out of the cottage) yeh Vilan b aa gaya agar iski tara dost rahe to dushman ki b zarurat nahi,isse to main choduga nahi. (whenever Raj tries to meet neha, Kripa comes there & Neha herself was also trying to avoid Raj & he noticed that. Now it's night & every1 was outside the cottage surrounding the fire just like camp fire playing laughing but Neha smile was just vanished from her face & Raj can't see her like that. Now Raj N Angad is talking). Ra: pata nahi yaar kya ho gaya hai neha ko kuch bol hi nahi rahi hai aur jab b main usse baat karne ki koshish karta hu ya to woh muje avoid kar dete hai ya to phir woh vamp kripa aa jaate hai (angad gives raj a angry look) wah kamal hai gussa muje hona chaheye aur tu muje gussa dikha raha hai. Kamal ki jodi hai tum dono ki ek Vamp to dusra Vilan. An: sorry yaar lekin mere paas ek raasta hai . Ra: kya?? (Angad apne gitar uttata hai aur Raj ko deta hai) chal ab apni dil ki baat neha k dil tak pohcha de. Ra: great idea man (raj starts playing gitar & every1 look at him, while raj eyes were just on neha who was trying to avoid him). Song Sunn Leyna title track. Sun leya, sun lena woo.. Sun leyna sun leyna. Ra: usse ghar kahe jaha dil ho, dil ho waha jaha pyar, is pyar mein mushkil hai, mushkil to hai, mere yaar, phir b karege karte rahe pyar tuje mere jaa..(looking towards neha) Sun leyna dil janiya ral mil ral mil kal hun pyar kiya (going towards neha & bends on he knees & gave her hand as he was asking for dance). Ra: jo mila nahi woh mera nahi (neha got up from there & stood far away from there as she did accept her dancing proposal) koi b gilla nahi (he closes his hand & took it back) koi chod de dil tod de (he again walks towards neha) usse kho diya nahi (he puts her hand on neha's shoulder who was facing opposite direction & as he holds her she closes his eyes). Ra: rehne do chodo kuch b na shocho pyar to hai inteha (neha ko raj aur sunita ki baat yaad aati hai aur woh raj ka haat hatta dete hai aur cottage mein chale jaati hai) Sun Leyna dil jaaniya ral mile ral mile dil hun pyar diya (neha wents inside her room & starts packing her clothes). Sun leyna dil janiya ral mile ral mile dil hun pyar diya (he said loudly) Sun leyna dil janiya ral mile ral mile kal hun pyar diya (this was even more louder with the hope k uske dil ki aawaz neha k dil tak pohac jayege aur woh bahar aayege aur uski nazar darwaze par tiki hote hai uske last gitar ki dhun khatam hone tak aur woh tune khatam hote hai & a tear comes from Raj N Neha's eyes) END Song download: http://f1.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/cMxpShC2DcJeLvqv3txWtclLl-CYtx1tyrhbvSiPs5D_naQBnGhp2NQ_AL8d-L1rqUI9br6e8AoZXfUzmK253A/KTH%20and%20SLN%20Mp3/Sun%20Layna%20-%20ARY%20Digital%20Drama%20OST%20%5BGLOOMX.com%5D..mp3

Edited by afreenaamna - 16 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Ohh Raj was playing guitar for her but she was reminded of the stupid convo. I just hope everything gets well soon. Anyways, u said its not going to be as usual, so w8ing to knw how the story is gonna proceed.

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Afreen

@afreenaamna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Ohh Raj was playing guitar for her but she was reminded of the stupid convo. I just hope everything gets well soon. Anyways, u said its not going to be as usual, so w8ing to knw how the story is gonna proceed.<br>

thankx Sumaiya for reading & commenting. He was playing gitar for her but still she was angry qki uska haq banta hai gussa hone ka ab hume pata hai that raj is good but she don't know that yaar. I have made the full story in short & i decide what to write in the part while writing the part. Bye . Take care.

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Juthi

@Lilmizz_Rahela

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

OMG its sooo gud

i lyk it...!

de parts r great

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unknowndesires.

@unknowndesires.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#257

Awesome part Afreen!!! Continue soon!! Thnks for the PM!

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 16 years ago

#258

Lovely part Afreen.. enjoyed it.. do continue soon..

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aarti

@-Aarti-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#259

it was awesome part very nicely written ......bas neha raj ke bich koi duriyan nahi honi chahiye unke bich sab theek hojaye galatfami dur hojaye........