Kya hua hai (Aamna Rajeev) ~new part pg 66~ - Page 29

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Posted: 16 years ago
part 45: oohh god neha ja rahi hai kash ke na jaye aur sari misunderstanding door ho jaye plz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Thankx for ur comment Neha.....
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Part 46: recap: pechle part mein humne dekha k neha apna dil khol k raj k taarifo k pool bandhti hai & raj stops the car. TODAY: Ra: what? . Ne: mera matlab tum is duniya k sabse bade kaminey, ghatiya, dhokebaaz aur darinde kisam k insaan ho aisa main pehle samajte thi tumare baare mein. Ra: oh! Aur ab kya sochti ho mere bare mein (raj understands k woh uski taarif kar rahe hai aur nahi b kar rahe hai) karo karo jitne taarif karne hai karo hak banta hai tumhara aur atleast isse bahane woh apna gussa toh jatta rahe hai warna khamoshi ki saddi hui silent flim bankar behte thi kalse, o god yeh toh mujhe kaccha chabba jayege (raj thinks in her mind) kaho na ab kya sochti ho tum mere baare mein (apne burai sunte hue b raj ko bohat acha lag raha tha qki neha ne usse baat ki). Ne: ab, tum bohat bade jhute bewafa aur aur.... (she thinks) aage jo b ho agar muje yeh sab khud bhagvan b aakar kahege na tab bhi main nahi manugi. Ra: Neha tum mujhse gussa ho kya?. Ne: gussa, tumse mujhe dekho mere chehre se lagta hai k main gusse mein hu nahi na. Ra: itne time mein maine tumare baare itna to jaan chuka hu k tum kab gussa mein ho aur kab nahi ho muje pata hai k tumne meri aur Sunita ki baat sun li hai but beleive me humare bech aisa kuch nahi, tumne to mujse pyaar kiya tha na to kya tume mujpar itna b bharosa nahi hai?. Ne: bharosa maine tumpe bohat kiya tha shayad issiliye yeh jaante hue b k tum mujse badla lene k liye mere saat pyaar ka natak kar rahe ho maine tumse pyar karne lagi thi. Ra: what? tum sab pehlese jaanti ho?. Ne: haan, us raat jab tumne nashe mein Angad ko apna plan bataya tha ussi raat Angad ne mujhe yeh sab bata diya tha. Ra: muje pata tha uske pait mein ek baat nahi rehte hai (he thinks in her mind) but woh sab pehle tha ab main sirf tumse pyar karta hu. Ne: main jaanti hu raj. Ra: great to ab problem kya hai (he says very happily) waise Sunita aur mujhe ek saat dekhke tumari bohat jalle hogi na (raj beates her from her elbow). Ne: haan raj main to tut hi gayi thi, tumare alawa is abla nari se aur kon pyar karta (she says in a melodramatic way) waise maine bohat baar notis kiya hai main zyada der tak dukhi nahi reh sakti. Ra: aur main tumhe dukhi hone b nahi dunga. So cottage wapas chale. Ne: Raj!!!!!. Ra: oh haan excitement mein to main bhul hi gaya tha saasuma k baare mein. Ne: ab tak humari shaadi hui nahi hai. Ra: tum to aise keh rahe ho k tum waha kisise shaadi karne jaa rahe ho (neha become very sab after listening this & was going to go out of the car). Ra: acha sorry Neha. Ne: tumne aisa soch b kaise liya k main kissi aur k saat (a tear sheads from her eyes). Ra: i am sorry neha, mujhe yeh nahi kehna chaheye tha lekin main tumhe khona nahi chahta aur agar maine tumhe kho diya to main... (neha stops her saying anything else). Ne: aisa kehna b mat. Maut ko tum tak pohac ne ki liye pehle mujse guzarna hoga..(neha has got very emotional & raj has saw 1st time this side of Neha). Ra: waise maine kabhi socha nahi tha k tumhe manna itna aasan hoga (a smile comes on Neha face & that's what Raj wanted to do). Ne: waise maine b kabhi nahi socha tha k tumhe dhoka dena itna aasaan hoga. Ra: dhoka! Kya matlab hai tumhara?. Ne: yeh tumhe waqt aane par pata chal jayega (neha gives a normal look but raj is confused). Ra: so na tum mujse alag hona chahte ho aur naahi main tumse judda hona chahta hu to q na kuch aisa kare gisse baad koi b hume juda na kar sakke. Ne: what do u mean?. Ra: yeh tumhe waqt aane par pata chal jayega. Ne: hey, cheater tumne meri line copy ki (she said in a kiddish way). Ra: Madam uspar copyright nahi tha (raj starts the car) . END .
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Posted: 16 years ago
have they really cleared the misunderstanding or not? reading the last few lines looks like neha still thinks raj is cheating and lying................but very nice part......cont soon dear................
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Posted: 16 years ago

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have they really cleared the misunderstanding or not? reading the last few lines looks like neha still thinks raj is cheating and lying................but very nice part......cont soon dear................<br>

hey Deepa u know nah i love to create suspence. If u will read this ff from starting then u will came to know maine kitne saare suspence daale hai jo maine story k 2nd half mein kholugi becoz i love suspence movie well thankx for reading and commenting.....
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

hey Deepa u know nah i love to create suspence. If u will read this ff from starting then u will came to know maine kitne saare suspence daale hai jo maine story k 2nd half mein kholugi becoz i love suspence movie well thankx for reading and commenting.....



great.................cont soon dear and pm me i didnt get urs this time...............
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Posted: 16 years ago

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<br><br>great.................cont soon dear and pm me i didnt get urs this time...............<br>

thats becoz i gave pm after quoting on ur comment dear.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part!!! Continue soon plz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8 part cont soon jaan abhi tak ye clear nahi howa ke neha ki misunderstanding door howi ya nahi very well writen
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update.. hope the misunderstanding clears out soon.. do continue soon..

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