mayur sajan ff-cupids play part 13 pg 33 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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good one yaar
but update soon...i'll be waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sindhyaaaaaaaaa i wanna kill u it was a fab update mere pass words ki nahi hai yaar but u can understand na????????? thanks for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnk u sooooo much hema
muahhzzzz
sindhya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its ok ! I understand becuz even I was ill from 3 days after I got back from my trip...........hope ur mom gets well really soon...........d prt was short but its ok...update soon.
love Adya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hota hai... i knw...
nxt tym ill try my bst to make d upd8 loong!
luvv ya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i thot she was going to shout at dem....r d cloves n brats going to apologize?....it was wonderful....pls continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey part 3&4 are amazin..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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guys ive made some ff updating schedules..
alongside links of what ive updated..
so u can chek out my updates there-
the link to this topic is-
hope u guyzz can chek it out
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5-

They all stood there outside, some ashamed of what they had done, and some subsequently disinterested in it, too busy to care. All the brats and cloves stood in a row of-

(left to right)

samrat,gunjan,sheena,dia,laksh,rv,mayank,nupur,twisha,bhenji,jaco,anvita,uday, anne

all of them too ashamed to even look at each other. Suddenly mayank looked at nupur-

m- its all your fault. Acha khaasa closet mein chupe hue the. All thanks to you now I am stuck here, maam pe mera impression kharab ho gaya and I might even lose the headboy badge for this.

n- excuseme mr mayank sharma. Who do you think you are hun? Jab se mile ho tab se aise act kar rahe ho jaise ur some mughal king! I mean just your so stupid. You have no brains. And your showing me attitude…

m- pehli galati karti ho-

n- im sorry. Maine iss duniya ki sabse badi galti ki that is I met you sir.

m-apology accepted. Now listen- you are the most bone headed girl ive ever seen. Tumhaare dimaag meio kuch toh jata nahi hai. Tum ek kaan se sunti ho aur doosre kaan se nikaal deti ho. I mean your soo damn stupid. Maine jab tumse kahaa ki madm ji please stay in the closet to tum apn e sapno ke duniya mein ud rahi thi kya?

n- just shut up mr know-it-all. Ok fine mana ki maine tumhaari baat nahi suni, but sir tumhe kya zaroorat thi bahar aane ki hun?

m- ek to tumhaari madad karta hoon. Aur tum sorry bolne ke jagah mujhe suna rahi ho. Bloody ehsaan faramosh woman.

At this comment gunjan and samrat started laughing.

g- yeh dono kitne funny hai na.

s- haan, dono jaise ek doosre ke jaan ke peche pade hue hai.

g-par jodi interesting hai nai?

s-you know I was thinking the same thing.

They both look at each other and smile.

Hearing what mayank and nupur were talking bhenji and rv started off.

b-yaar kaunsa closet yaar.

r- exactly guys, kya kar rahe the closet mein sath mein??

n-guys shut up will you!

b- arre nupur tu blush kar rahi hai! Omg!

r- oh teri bhains ki aankh! Mayank tu bhi. Shit yaar.

m- guyz just shut up ok. already im havin a bad headache standing here next to this downright weirdo n now u guyz!

n- kyu kabhi mr king aise kade nahi hue hun?

m- listen mera dimaag mat khao ok

n- not interested

m- not likely

n- urghhh,,!!!

And they all look away.

After about 2 hours—

Gunjan was resting her head on samrats shoulder and samrat was resting his head on gunjans head. she had been crying and so he held her hand and kept telling her that its ok.

s- gunjan koi baat nahi yaar. Bas thodi der aur.

Gunjan was burning with fever. she couldn't stand, she could feel her head going buzzy.

s- gunjan kept tripping as samrat kept his hold on her helping her keep her balance.

s- gunjan, yaar try. Thoda sa balance rak yaar. Just 5 more mins yaar.

g- mujhse nahi hoga.

After a few minutes when gunjan was still struggling to keep up with them, she fell unconscious. Samrat caught hold of her and started tapping her face. Desperately praying for her to be fine.

Hope u lyk it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! yaar it was awesome.......I'll comment bigger tom....abhi busy hoon........

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