MJHT FF:SARGAM(rhythm of love)part:12 uptd(oct 30)

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SoniRita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

finally read all da parts m a new reader of dis ff n i started today only n finish in 15 min. only lol anyways loveee da trailer n character sketch cool loveeeeeeeeeed sammy-nups bonding loveeeeeee da way sammy teases nups hunter wali lol hahaha n den in mayu house awesome mayur nock jhock n sanu loveeed it n den lol nups she is gr8 wake everyone up in middle of night saying sammy got accident jst for icecream n den dj-sammy convo awww loved it n den boys cook n mayur fight awesome n wow sammy likes gunji wow wow bt only nups knw abt dis so loveeeeeeeee all da parts anyways cant wait for next update girls cook it will be fun n plz add me in ur pm list

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Tannu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#152

hey hieee juhi meri:)
woooooooww awesum part have to say yaa..
do cont soon
iss baar late math karna..waise already late hogaya hai..
abhi kab karogi next part update????
jald hi karna
mee waitin:)
luv u
mmmuuuaaahhh:)

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

thanks alot every one for ur wonderful comments

love u all..
sorry but it might take time to update my nxt part...
muuah!! all!

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gurpreet

@preety88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

such a cute and awesome ff..........plsssssss add me to ur pm list and cont soon

Edited by preety88 - 15 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

not fair.....i want an update!

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

hey frnds!!

i know i know that tum log mujhey kitnaaa marna chahte ho...wo sarey mesges!!

uhh!! but really big big big big big & the biggest sorry of the world!!

actually was busy nd tensed with my seminars..hope u all understand!

but i promise with 3 or 4 days( or may can b before that tooo) i'll update my update with lots of hungama's & dhamaka..of SARGAM:)

& @ mahima: this spl update is gonna b for u....
muuuah!!

till then keep waiting
love u loads!

Edited by thejazzgal.s - 15 years ago

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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Hey every one'.sorry sorry a biggg sorry ..for delaying the update' and this update is for mahima(MjhtFan_Mahima) [>:d<]'

And here come the update'plz do read nd comment..it means a lot :)muuah!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~Sargam(rhythm of love)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

short Recap: girls cooked lunch(salads)

Sajan cute scene..

MayUrAt nok jhok..

The party'

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Part 7~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~'

Party continues..

Gunji and nup in the lawn

Gunji: doll kya baat hai??

Nup: nothing angel..chalo ander warna bro phir se ajaega

Gunji: r u sure everthing is fine..

Nup: yes angel

Gunji: then chaley ander??

Nup: hmm..chalo..

In the mean time nup's phone rings..

Nup: ah..! angel tum chalo main abhi ayi..ye call attend kar k..

Gunji: okay...but make it soon..

Gunji goes in...

After some time nupur too joins in..

Nupur going towards her room...

Gunji : doll...abhi party khatam nai hui...

Nup: haan..angel..but mujhey thodi der rest chahiye...im tired..

Gunji: par tumhara to stress party njoy karna se chat se bhaagjayega..come lets go..

Nup: angel..plzzz...hope u understand..

Gunji: hmm..okay...but 1 shart pe...tum adhe ghante main wapis ajaogi...

Nup: hm..okay..thanks..

Nup hugs gunji

Gunji to herself: zaroor wohi baat hai..muhjey samrat ko batana hoga...

Nup goes to her room...

Gunji joins the party...

Samrat: hey chasmish!..sis ko kya hua..wo room me kyun chali gayi..

Gunji asks samrat to come aside..

Sam: haan bolo..

Gunju: samrat ...I think ..

Sam: haan..chashmish..koi khaas baat?jaise k????

Gunji: nahi samrat wo bat nahi hai..i think after a call doll is upset...tumhe usey samjhana hoga...

Sam: call?

Gunji: han..hum jab lawn se aa rahe the tab usey ek call aya'she excused her self..phir main andar aagayi..phir kuch der baad wo apne room me jaa rahi thi..she said that she is tired..

Sam: okay main jata hoon'.and thanks..

Gunji: thanks??

Sam: hmm'bas yun hi'(smiles and hits gunjan's nose playfully)

Gunjan smiles..: samraat'

Sam leaves..

Sam knocking at nup door..

Nup: bro..i knor its u..darwaza khula hai ajao'darwaza mat todoo'

Sam comes in..

Nup is lying on her bed..

Sam looks at the room'

Sam: wo!! Wow!!kitna acha hai tumhara room..sis mera room b bilkul aise hi karna'main aise karne k liye tumhe tumhari fees b doonga..but mujhey b inta pyra sa hi interior chahiye!!..bas!

Nup dosnt answer..and sits up..

Sam goes and sit beside nup'

Sam: kya kaha unhone??

Nup: day after tomorrow..

Sam: wat?

Nup nods in positive..

Sam: but 6 months honey purey 19 days baqi hai '

Nup: I don't know..

Nup hugs samrat..

Sam:its okay hum outing ke liye chale jayenge

Nup:par kab tak??kabhi na kabhi hume unhe face toh karna hi hoga na..

Sam:wo baad main sonchenge pehle party attend karenge DJ hume miss kar rahi hogi na..

Nups:bro

Sam:come on sis aaj nahi..

They both go down and enjoy the party

Gunjilooks at sam questioningly..sam just assures her with a smile..

Mayank:kya hua angel??

Gunji:kuch khaas baat nahi..wo a..

Mayank:rehne do un dono ko waise bhi dekhkar samajh ne aata hai..problem kya hogi'

Gunji:mayank tum na itna samajh te ho par phir bhi.

Mayank:angel party enjoy kare??

Gunji:baat hamesha adhoori chodtey ho..

Mayank:jo baat nahi ho sakti uske baarey main sonchna bhi nahi chahiye'.ab chaley..

After enjoying party all the frnds leave..

Mayanki:angel ab humey bhi chalna chahiye bahut dair ho gayi hai..

Gunji:haan..

Sargam also leaves..

Outside

Mayank:angel tum yahin ruko main dj ko gift dena bhool gaya..

Gunji:jao..jaldi aana par..

Sam: nahi'.late b aye to mushkil nahi'kuch der chashmish se baat hojayi hai na chashmish'

Mayank smiles..: haan haan kar lo baat'

Mayank leaves

Nups in the lawn..

Mayank:devil dj kahan hai??

Nup:monkey ..wo rest kar rahi hai..

Mayank:oaky tum yeh gift unhe dedena..yaad se..

Nupur:nahi dungi..kya karogey??

Mayank:mian kya kar sakta hoon ??bhala pagal se koi jeeta hai??

Nup:u..donkey ..monkey!!

Mayank:aagayi na wapis devil doll ke role main..

Nups smiles at this comment..

Maaynk:devil doll hi acchi lagti hai'sad doll nahi..

Nups just smiles.

Mayu:oaky bye good night..haan kal subah jaldi aana warna humari practice nahi ho payegi tumhari wajah se..

Nup:monkey ab tum jao..warna main kal bahut late karungi..

Mayu:waise b tum roz kam late karti ho kya?

Nup: monkey!!!

Mayank leaves from there..

Gunji:dediya??

Mayank:haan ..

Gunji:main dol ki smile ki baat kar rahi hoon..

Mayank:angel chale..

Gunji: okay bye samrat

Sam: ek shart par..

Gunji:shart? Kis baat ki?

Sam: hmm..( goes close to gunji'near her ear..:

Mayank: ahem! Ahem!

Sam thn shouts loudly':kal tumhe main pick karne aunga'aur mayank sis ko..done?

Gunji confused to tell yes or no..lookig at mayank..

Mayank smiles in response..

Gunjan: theek hai'

Gunjan then starts walking..towards the door..

Suddenly samrat holds her..goes close to her..

Sam: good night'kal subah ka intezaar..

Mayank: chaley angel?

Mayank and gunjan leaves..

Sam smiles

Suddenly there's a pat on his shoulders'

Voice: ye kya tha?

Sam: sis'kuch nahi..bas kal main chashmish k saath bike pe jaunga coll aur tum buddy..i mean monkey k saath..

Nup: bro! u don't have right o call him monkey.. wo sirf mera copyright hai mayank k liye..

Sam: kyun

Nup: okay'usey bula lo tum b monkey.. main b angel ko chash-mish bulaungi kal se

Sam: okay okay oaky! I was just kidding..tumhara copy right monkey'okay??

Nup: thts better'

Sam thinking what to do within two days'.'

Nup: kya hua bro..kya sonch rahe ho?

Sam: uh kuch nahi..bas soch raha tha aj hi DJ ki bday hui..aur aj hi unhe kaam me laga diye tum me..apne room ki safai me..

Nup: kya DJ mera room clean kar rahi hai?pra unhe kis ne kaha..BRO'..

Sam: no sis maine nahi bola..

Nup: don't u lie bro'

Sam :im not lying sis.. (and runs upstairs) balkey main sach keh raha hoon k DJ ko '''''main ne bataya..but I swear sis maine jaan much k nahi bola'u know na DJ jhat se pakad leti hai ki hum kya chupa rahe hai..

Nup: I know..

Both nup & sam goes to nup's room:

Sam is standing dj is cleaning the room'

Nup goes and hugs DJ from behind'

Nup: dj'

Dj: haan bolo..

Nup: dj ye room maine nahi kharab kiya hai..

Dj: acha'phir ye halat kis ne ki hai?

Nup: hm..BRO ne..

Sam: maine? Dj..ye

Dj:: haan mujhey pata hai..ab tum dono b so jao..bahut raat ho gayi..kal college b to jaana hai na'

Nup:okay DJ good night sweet dreams'

Sam and DJ walking out of nups room..

Sam:haan haan dreams main hum tumhe nhai dekhenge..toh dreams to sweet hi honge na..

Nups:tum toh waise bhi mere dreams main nahi aatey ho..

Sam:to kaun aatey hai?monkeys..??

Nups:bro..

Dj:chalo bandh karo tum dono ka yeh jhagda..

Next morning..

Sam:dj yeh meri sweet si sis kahan hai??

Dj:bahar..car ke paas..

Sam:already??

Dj:haan wo savere jaldi jag gayi thi..aur keh rahi thi rehearsal karna hai..

Sam:ohh freak!! Main toh bhool hi gaya..

Dj:tum dono bhi na..

Sam:dj aapne meri bike ke keys dekhe hai??

Dj hands sam his keys..

Sam:aapko kaise pata??

Dj:main tum baccho ko tum se behtar janti hoon..

Sam:love u dj

Dj:abhi jaao warna late ho jayegi..

Sam runs out and stars bike..

Nup:bro..bike kyun??

Sam:bhool gayi..mujhe aaj chashmish ko pick karna tha..

Nup:aur main kaise jaungi??dj toh mujhe drive karne dengi nahi..

Sam:maine uska bhi intezaam kar rakha hai..

Nup:aur wo kya hai??

Sam:buddy tumhe pick karega..

Sam leaves and mayank arrives

Nup:good morning monkey..

Mayank:good morning devil..'

Nup:ab chalo bhi..

Mayank:hawa par chalo gi?? Baitho toh sahi..

On the way..

Nup:uff monkey..tum thoda speed nahi chala sakte..hum late hojayenge..

Mayank:devil..hum normal speed par hi hai..aur late honey ki baat tum kar rahi ho..strange..

Nup:kyon??yeh tumhari normal speed haio?

Mayu:haan..

Nup:humse speed to bail gaadi bhi nikal jayegi..

Mayu race his speed..

Nup:offo!! Monkey..jaan logey kya??itna speed??kam karo speed..

Mayu:tumhari problem kya..kabhi speed nahi chahiye..kabhi speed chahiye..tum pehle decide karo tumhe aakhir chahiye kya??

Nup:thoda slow..pakka..

Maynk drives slow..

Nup:dumbo thoda speed..

Maynak stops the bike..

Mayank:utaro meri bike se..

Nup?:what??

Mayank:maine kaha utro..

Nup:nahi utarungi.

Mayank shakes his bike..

Nups gets down..

Nup:how rude!! Ladki ko raaste main utar rahey ho..

Mayank starts his bike..

Nup:monkey tum muhe chod ke ja rahey ho??

Mayank:yes devil!!(with a smirk)

Nup:mujhe bhi tumhari koi zaroorat nahi..main bus se aaongi..

Mayank:bus ki kabhi surat bhi dekhi hai??

Nup:haan dekhi hai..bahut acha ahi tumhare chehre se..

Mayank:lets see..bye..devil..

Nup:monkey,donkey,fool..tumhe kya lagta hai main tumhe jane doongi..

Nups take away his bike keys..

Nup:aab jao baccho..

Mayank:nupur mujhe keys do..

Nup playing with keys..:chahiye?pehle sorry bolo..

Maynk:sorry??

Nups feels happy..

Mayank:my foot'.tumhe lagta hai main tumhe sorry kahunga..??

Nup:okay..then forget about keys..

Mayank:nupur..muhe keys do..

Nup:nahi doongi toh kya karoge??

Just a car stops by them..

The person pulls down the car mirror..

Nup: tum??????

Mayu nd nup both shocked'

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- PREV:Part 6 NEXT :Part 8 -

Thanks for the lovely comments and likes.. :)
Love
Juveria..

Edited by thejazzgal - 13 years ago

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

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mindblowing update dear
but there were so less sajan scenes
im upset
plz try to continue it soon
n i loved the updateto the core
everything was perfect
n good
n thanx for the pm
do continue it soon

sanu

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago