MJHT FF:SARGAM(rhythm of love)part:12 uptd(oct 30)

Sargam (rhythm of love):

There a girl writing some thing.. just then her phone rings..it flashes 'D'..she answers the call..

Nd she is very excited and runs to some other room..

There a guy playing his guitar..

The girl:bhai..

The guy doesn't response..:bhaiii..

The guy stops playing guitar nd turns..

Guy:hey what happen sis??

Girl:guess what????

guy:u sound happy..toh something good??

girl:right...abhi "D" ka call aaya tha nd..

guy:and???

Girl:take a wild guess..

Guy:dodo ne ladkiyon ko chedna band kar diya??

Girl:nope...next..

Guy:Benji book worm ban gaya aur padayi ko serious lene laga..

Girl:nope...what bhai...u r taking all wrong guesses..

She turns to go..

Guy:we...

The girl turns..

Girl:ur absolutely right..par pehle kyun nahi kaha??

Guy:agar pehle bata deta toh meri sis ke chehre par itni khushi kaise dekh pata..??

Girl goes nd hugs that guy..

Girl:ur the best bro in the world?.

Guy:so I am?

Girl:hmm...

Girl:okay okay..mujhe bahut kaam hai..

She runs..

Guy:sis kahan jaa rahi ho??

Girl:inform karne..

Guy:kissey??'

Girl:mere lyrics ke aawaz ko..

She runs..

Girl:baakhiyon ko tum inform kar dena?

Guy:kissey..??

Girl:bhai tumhe aaj kya hogaya ahi?/tumharey music composer ko (makes a face)

Guy:okay oaky.

The girl goes back to her room..

Takes her cell ..and dials..

Another place..

A girl singing?

Her sweet voice..she a very simple girl..just then her cell rings..

She takes the call..

Girl2:hello??

Girl1:hey angel..

Girl2:hey doll..how'z you???

Girl1:well me good..nd happy..guess what humey concert ke passes mill gaye..

Girl2:really??

Girl1:yess babes..

Girl2: babes????????

Girl1: okay sorry..chal tayaar bhi hoja..i cant at all wait?se I'm too excited..

Girl2: yah.. I can make u by ur voice..

Girl1:okay chal catch u later! Bye cya!

Girl2:bye!(hangs the phone)

Guy1 tying to call somebody..

Another place..

A guy standing in window..

Guy2: mom!! Where's my file??

Mom: I donno beta! Where did u have kept? leave that see ur cell is ringing for 5 mints?

The guy picks up his cell!

Guys: hello.?

Guy1: hey dude..

Guys2: hey buddy! What happen???

Guy1: guess what..we got concert passes..

Guy2: what?? Really???

Guy1: yah!! Okay sharp at 5:30 we'll be meeting!

Guy2: okay bye!

They hangs the phone?

Girl2 comes running to guy2..

Guy2: hey y r u in so hurry..?

Girl2: cuz I wanna say u some thing..which'll make u happy!

Guy2: well if like that even I wanna say u 1 thing which makes u go on cloud 9?

Girl2: no first me..

Guy2: me first!!

Guy2: okay..you say?

girl2: tanxx! N guess what..we got concert passes!!

Guy2: hey even I wanna say u the same!!

Girl2:okay! Mujehy aabhi aabhi doll ne bataya!!

Guy2 :doll ne..(makes face)

Girl2: tum ussey har waqt jhagadtey kyun rehtey ho??

Guy2: angel look?lets talk something else..

Girl2: okay!!hmmm?hey I even wanna say u 1 more thing!!

Guy2: wat??

Girl2 ask him to come close..

Girl2: u know what someone loves doll maadddly..

Guy2: whose that maddd guy???

Girl2: its about doll ..i think ur not at all interested in it!!

Girl 2 starts running!

Guy2 smiles..

Nd girl 2 stops at the door!

Hope u guys liked it!!

Hey Juveria...
I'm the first one to comment on the first chapter of ur fic
LOVED IT...loved ur fic sweety
Ok i can take some wild guesses on the whose who of this
fic but i would like to wait for ur future updates to confirm my guesses
So do Continue soon and pm me ok....
And once again it was Gr8
Love
Tina

Great ff! Continue asap! Plz pm me when u update!

I think I can take a guess too at who's who....hehe...

let me guess.. guy1 is sam, guy2 is mayu, girl1 is nupz n girl2 is gunji.. rite? continue soon..

wow nyc promo..........

hey juishy
nice start!!!😊😊😊
okay chalo ek aur nayaa ff!!
let me guess guy 1 sammy,guy 2mayyu,girl1 nupszz,girl 2 gunji!!!!
kyun sahi kaha naa????😉😉😉
so sammy n nupur are siblings... gunji n mayank siblings....wow that's sound great!!!😛😛😛
sammy ne toh kya soncha hai...
benji bookworm???????uar dodo ne ladkiyon ko chedna band????
aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta...i guess😆😆😆

cont soon..
me waiting!!!😛😛😛
😛

Great start yaar........

its gud yaar

heyy wonderful start!!!