MJHT FF:SARGAM(rhythm of love)part:12 uptd(oct 30) - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
dear juhi ..!!
how many days u want to take???
i can't wait any more...

plz cont soon...
Edited by angel.ridz - 15 years ago
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hey first of all a big sorry for replying so late
was kinda busy
thanks for pm
otherwise i wud have missed this awesome ff of urs
i must say its well written
best of luck for ur exams and looking forward to ur updates soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
looking forward to your update
update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ff........
cont soon...
plzzzzzzzz add me in ur pm list.....
Posted: 15 years ago
hey all... how r u all..

and yess!! im done with all ma exams( the biggest terror u know...😉😉)..and 1 more thing results r
also out...
well back to the update...im really really very sorry for update after a long time after ma xams...

okay no more sorry ...i hav written a long update for u all..hope u all like it..

sargam(rhythm of love)


Recap:DJ's bday.. mayur tom and jerry fight..boy cooking breakfast..

Part 6:

Girls get into kitchen..

Nups:angel..you know mujhe kuch nahi ata...other than boiling egg!!

Gunji:haan pata hai doll egg boil karne main bhi tumhe dj ki help leni padti hai..

Dia:girls stop complaining..ab soncho guys ko kaise harana ahi..

Gunji:mujhe kuch kuch idea hai cooking ka..mom ko call karke hum unki help le saktey hai..

Gunji about to call her mom

Sam from behind

Sam:girls..humey pata tah..tum log aisa kuch karoge..so can we please get ur mobiles'

Girls unwillingly hand it to guys..

Guys leave..

Gunji:ab toh mom ki help bhi nahi le saktey..

Nups:idea!!

She says something which is in mute..

Dia&gunji:wo recipe book kahan hai???

Girls start preparing with the help of recipe book..

After some time..

They set the lunch table..

Guys:lunch tayaar??

Nups:haan..and its yummy!!!

Uday:mujhe kuch bhi dish ki khusboo nahi aarahi hai..

Dia:hum aroma leak nahi karna chah rahey thay..dodo!!

Guys take their seats with dj..

Sam:sis 'ab acchi ladki bano..aur humey serve karo..

Nups:bro!!shut up and self service..

Sam rolls his eyes..

He opens the dishes..

Mayu:whats this???

Girls:lunch!!!

Uday:yeh bas salad hai..

Gunji:wo actually..

Nups:tum sab bahut weight gain kar rahey ho.toh humne soncha

Diya: salads are good for health

Benji:very abd girls humne tumhe itna yummy breakfast diya aur tum log hume pattey (lettuce)de rahey ho??

Nups:ben..ji..healthy food de rahey..

Diya:u should be thank ful to us guys..

Uaday:har jagah pattey hi pattey nazar aa rahey hai..

Gunji:uday yeh 5 type salads hai..

Mayu:hai toh bina pakki hui sabzi..

Sam:dj dekhiye na..they are the loosers..

Dj:koi baat nahi baccho..lunch main bana deti hoon..

Girls:aww..dj..

Guys:nahi dj we are happy with this lunch..

Nup&diya: dekho ise banate hue hamare haath'

Gunjan: Dj humne teeno ne mil k ek aur cheej b banayi hai..

Guys: new type of salad..( and share a laugh)

Nup: dekha gunjan..

Diya: v told u..ye log aise hi hasenge'

Gunajn brings out a cake'

Guys: wowww!!!

Gunjan: ye ap k liye DJ..hum sab ki taraf se'

Guys: haan?

Diya: haan sargam ki taraf se chota..bahut chota sa gift..

Guys smile..

Dj cuts the cake'and they all feed each other..

Sam:mayank tumhe nahi lagta cake bahut meetha hai..

Mayank:haan girls se kuch meetha expect nahi kiya tha ..

Sam and mayu hi5 each other..

Nups:monkeys..

Benji:and u hunterwali..

Nups:tum..

Gunji:guys party preparations..remember?

And they all start decorating

Benji keep on tesing nups..

Nups being nups tease him even more

Sam :ye sis bhi na..

Gunji:ab doll ki galati nahi hai..

Sam:tumhe badi fikr hai meri sis ki..

Gunji:wo meri frnd bhi hai..

Sam:aur main??

Gunji:tum bhi frnd ho mere..

Sam:sirf frnd???

Gunji doesn't reply'.and smiles..gunji move out of that place..

Sam holds her wrist..

Sam:galath baat chashmish..

Gunji blushing..

Gunji:samrat..mera haath chodo'

sam:nahi choda toh complaint karogi???

Gunji:shayad..

Sam:main kisi se nahi darta..

Gunji:hmm..sach??kisi se nahi??

Sam:haan'

Gunji:kisi se bhi nahi..

Sam nods in negative'.

Gunji:aur doll aur dj???

Sam:darta nahi bas..unka hurt nahi karna chahta isi wajah se bas natak karta hoon'.samrat shergill kisi se nahi darta..

Gunji:agar main kahoon ki dj aur doll peeche hai toh??

Sam leaves his hand and turns

Sam:wo dj main bas..

And there is no one..

Sam:chashmish cheating..

Gunji:everything is fair in love and war'

Sam:okay ..yeh toh bata do..yeh love hai ki war??

Gunji:tumhe jo samjah na hai samjh lo..

Sam:thik hai main toh issey love''..nahi war samjhonga..

Gunji:samrat..

And leaves..

Samrat:chashmish..

Voice:ahem ahem..

Sam turns and its mayu..

Mayu:yahn kya ho raha tha??

Sam:mayank yahn'.war ho raha tha..

Mayu:war is tarah ka??

Sam:haan samrat aur chashmish ka war..mayank aur nupur ka nahi..

Mayu:very funny!!

Sam:kaun sis??haan wo thodi funny hai..

Nups hears this

Nup:bro!!! tum bhi is monkey ke saath mill gaye..

Sam:sis tum ho funny..

Nup:tum na dumbo ho..

Sam:tum 'stupid ho..

Nup:tum idiot ho..

Mayu:tum dono ko pata hai..tum dono pagal ho .aur yeh confirm hai..

And mayu leaves..

Sam&nup:aur tum book worm!!

And hi 5 each other..

Gunji ,diya,benji helping each other in decorations..

Nups go to dj

Nup:dj I love you!!!

Dj:yeh toh mujhe pata hai..

Nups:main aapko duniya main sabse zyada pasand karti hoon..

Dj:hm..mujhe toh yeh bhi pata hai..

Nup:dj aapko meri kaunsi baat nahi pata hai??

Dj:wohi jo tu mujse chupati ahi..

Nup:ha..um..dj main aap se kuch nahi chupati..

Dj:galath'.meri nupur jhoot bhi kehti hai..

Nup:ha..haan yaad aaya..maine aapko ab tak nahi bataya..aapko pat ahai bro na angel ko pasand karta hai..aur wo ussey kehta bhi nahi hai..

Just then diya calls nups

nups:dj main abhi aayi..D bula rahi ahi..

nups leaves..

dj:meri bacchi main sab janti hoon kaun kise pasand karta hai..

sam and mayu

mayu:me book worm???

Sam:itna toh chalta hai na..tumhe toh pata hai meri sis thodi..mad hai..

Mayu:wo bilkul thik hai tum hi mentally unstable ho..

Sam:oho..hamesha ki tarah sis ki side..

Mayu:what do u mean by hamesha ki tarah??

Sam:tum waise toh ussey jhagda kartey ho ..phir bi usi ki side letey ho

Mayu:aisa kuch nahi wo acchi ladki hai'.aur tumhe jo kaam diya gaya tah wo to tumne poora hi nahi kiya ..mujhe kaam karne do aur tum apna kaam karo..

Mayu leaves frm there..

Sam:mera kaam toh chal raha hai'..and smiles widely..

Late in the evening..

Everyone's (sargam some frnds and dj)enjoying the party..

Uday capturing the sweet moments

Dj cutting cake..

And all doing masti..

Dj:mujhe bahut khushi hui aaj ka din bhaut hi accha tha..

Sam:accha toh hoga na dj aapka b'day jo hai..

Nups:sorry dj kyunki hum aapke guest ko nahi bula paye..

Dj:koi baat nahi beta..kyunki tum bacche hi meri duniya ho..tum sab ho toh mujhe aur kya chahiye??

Sargam hugs dj

Sargam:love u dj..

Cj taking pics..

Nups goes out in the lawn..sam behind nups..

Sam:kya hua sis??

Nups:bro kuch nahi bas mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha tah..nd u know agar dj ko pata chala to wo bekaar main pareshaan ho jayegi..

Sam:aur party main tumhe na paakar bhi pareshaan ho jayegi..

Nup:tum hona..

Sam:haan sis agar main wahan rahunga toh mujhe bhi tumhare bina party kuch phiki phiki lagegi na..

Nup:stupid tum yeh seedha seedha kyun ne kehtey ki mere begair tumhe accha nahi lagta..

Sam:kya karrey twins hai problem to hogi na..

Nup:haan..

They share a laugh..

Just then gunji comes..

Gunji:look the hosts are here..

Nup:angel'

Gunji:tum dono yahan kya kar rahey ho??

Sam:kuch nahi bas sis ki tabiyat kuch thik nahi thi toh..

Gunji:doll kya hua??

Nup:kuch nahi angel..yeh toh yunhi pareshaan hota hai..

Gunji:iska ek ilaaj hai..

Nups:kya??

Gunji:samrat'

Sam:hmmm(with a smile)

Gunji:wo..main ..tumhe

Sam:hmmm

Nups smiling and watching this

Gunji:yeh kehne aayi thi '

Sam:hmm

Gunji: dj tumhe bula rahi hai..

Sam:offo chashmish..

Gunji:kya offo..jao dj bula rahi hai..

Sam:par sis..??

Gunji:main hoon na..

Sam:r u sure??

Gunji:haan'.now u go..

Sam again looks at gunji..and gunji gives him assued smile..

Sam goes in..

Gunji:kya hua doll??

Nup:kuch nahi angel..

Gunji:sacch??

Nup:much..

Gunji:toh chale andar???

Nup:hmmm'chalo..

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- PREV:Part 5 NEXT :Part 7 -

Thanks for the lovely comments and likes.. :)
Love
Juveria..

Edited by thejazzgal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
*res*

juhi meri jaani..🤗
thnaks for updating..
hmm..so from where i should start..
loved the whole part..
loved sajan scene ,
mayur &sam scene,
sam-nups&sajan scene..in lawn..
hmm..so dj knows every thing..
mayu in nups side..

loved it..
please continue soon..
me waiting..



Edited by angel.ridz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

second to comment......... wow

the update was simply wow
though very late but it was worth the wait
every scene was beautifully described
girls making salad and cake was so cute
then the sajan scene was awesome
mayur nok-jhok was so sweet
nupur and dj scene was rocking
mayank siding nupur behind her back in front was samrat was so cute.......
chakkar kya hai
then sanu garden scene was awesome
plzzzzzzzz update soon
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

OMG!!

I just LOVED this update ESP the cute sajan moments!!!! Plz update sooner this time!!! thank u sooooooooooooooo much for the PM Mira
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserve
*edited*
awesome mindblowing update
loved ajan scene
n as well as sajan nupsi scene
awesome gal
u wrote it really fantastic
gr8 update
plz try to continue soon
n thank u so much for the pm
lots of love
sanu😃
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice but next time more of mayur plzzz

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