*DMG-Ahabharat* FF by Seeta Part 4/Page 9 - 15/09

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Welcome to DMG-ahabharat! This story is written by Neeta and Simi. 😃

As the title suggests, this story is inspired from Mahabharat, one of the epics of ancient India! Here, you can refresh your memories of many things you might have heard or seen in Mahabharat!!

We do realize our story isnt good as Mahabharat, because its BETTER! Mahabharat doesnt hold a candle to our story!! And we are sure that this story would be popular in many generations to come!

This story is written by 'Seeta' (Simi+Neeta). C'mon dude, Seeta goes with Mahabharat.. but if you are Ekta's fan, you can also refer to us as Sekta and Nekta because she is also one of our inspirations to write this story!

This story is based in two Kingdoms. Kasulistan and Sanjeevgad! This story deals with how love turns into war, and ends up at a battlefield!

Lets start with Kasulistan:

Raja BillEH Mallik and Rani Padma Mallik.
They are very kind people who are worshipped by everyone in their kingdom! They have two sons, who unfortunately dont have ANY good vibes between them.

Rajkumar Armaan

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He is older of the two sons. He is adopted by Billeh and Padma, and despite this fact, they have given him as much love as they would to their real son. He is a kindhearted prince who doesnt judge anyone based on their status.

Rajkumar Rahul

He is a biological son of Billeh and Padma, and is younger than Armaan.He is more agressive and several times, abuses his power. He does not like Armaan because after his father, the throne would be given to the older Rajkumar, and Rahul thinks Armaan doesnt deserve the throne as he's only adopted.

Daasi Muskaan:

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She is a maiden in Kasaulistan, and is secretly in love with Rajkumar Rahul.

Maali Atul:

He is a gardener in Kasaulistan, and has a crush on Rajkumari Anjali.

Lets look at who is in Sanjeevgad.

Raja Shashank Gupta
is the king of Sanjeevgad and is a very dear friend of Raja Billeh Mallik. His wife passed away a few years ago, and he has two daughters.

Naani Devi

she has been Shashank's caretaker since he was young, and has taken care of Ridhima and Anjali all their lives too. Everyone respects her a lot and treats as if she is Shashank's mother. However, she has some evil plans going on in her mind that no one is aware of.

Rajkumari Ridhima Gupta

She is the younger daughter. She is very pretty and is the sweetheart of the kingdom. With a beautiful face, she also has an equally beautiful heart and everyone in the kingdom adores her!

Rajkumari Anjali Gupta

She is the older daughter of Shashank. She is highly admired for her flawless beauty but not many people are fond of her rude and blunt behaviour. She is proud of her status and treats all the lower class people without respect. The only people she is nice to is Shashank. She has been jealous of her younger sister all her life because of the love her sister gets from everyone. This has made her very distant from Ridhima.
Naani is very close to Anjali, and at the same time, is not very fond of Ridhima, and has expressed her dislike towards her on many occassions.
*~* INTRO *~*
[Act 1 - Rajkumar Armaan and Rajkumar Rahul in the main hall of the Mahal, Rajkumar Rahul seems extremely furious about something ]

Rajkumar Armaan - Rahul, Tum aisi shabd apne moonh se kyun nikalte ho ?

Rajkumar Rahul - Kyun na bolun bhaiya ? Aisa bhi koi karta hai bhala ? Is Mahal ki raksha karna humara farz, dharm aur kartavya hai. Ispe agar koi ungli bhi uthaye, toh uski ungli kaat deni chaiye !

Rajkumar Armaan - Rahul, yeh toh galat hai. Ek chhoti si galti ke liye, kisi ko itna bada dand diya jaye ? Yeh toh saraasar na-insaafi hui.

Rajkumar Rahul - Dekhiye Bhaiya, Hum jaante hain ke aap bade hai, isliye aapki izzat karna humara farz hai. Lekin is maamle ko hume suljhane dijiye.

Rajkumar Armaan - Lekin Rahul...

Rajkumar Rahul ne unki baat nahi suni aur beech mein hi kaat diya.

Rajkumar Rahul - ATUL ! Bheetar aaiye.

Atul Mahal ke Maali the.

Atul - Ji..Ji, Rajkumar, Aapne hume bulaya ?

Rajkumar Rahul - Jee Haan. Kya aap hume bata sakte hain ki aapke dwara itna sangeen jurm kyun hua ?

Atul - Rajkumar, Humne socha ki..ki shayad weh shobha badaane ke kaam aaye..

Rajkumar Rahul - SHOBHA ?

Rajkumar Armaan - Rahul, shaant hoja. Itne krodh se kaam lena theek baat nahi.

Rajkumar Rahul - Toh Main Kya karu ? Ab aap hi bataiye bhaiya, shauchalya (washroom) mein bhi koi itna bada guldasta rakhta hai kya bhala ? Is maali ka dimaag kharab ho gaya hai....

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For More Updates, Stay tuned in to 'DMG-AHABHARAT' - Purani Dastaan ka Version 10.0 !
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Waise toh humare liye aapka shesh 'Dhanyavaad' ki khaafi hai, parantu agar aap ek-do amulya shabd bhi likh denge, toh hum aapke abhari rahenge. Namaste.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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u guys never told me about this!! o.O....lol...anyways..

hehehe....this seems very interesting!!!!
the language its written in is funny-cool to read!! lolz..
cont soon!!! =P
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reserved =)
liz im reserving this just in case =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sims - No problem =) We did need one more spot :)
Mahi - LOL...Sorry :) Hope you enjoy reading this !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOL! I normaly don't read FF's, but consider me subscribed!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Interesting intro!!!!!!
please PM me when you continue!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome! This is BETTER than the original!
I am in for this.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Interesting intro!!!!!!

please PM me when you continue!

thanks radhika! we'll surely pm u when we update! 😊
zeebo roxy and momo you guys best stay here and read our updates since no one else seems interested 😆 haye, humari phooti kismat!! 🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Count me in from now for reading this.. this is too good Lizi and Simi... for me u both are sizi... u know short name for Seeta..hehehe 😛
coming to the intro.. its so so so good and funny ;)...
a small confusion.. any relation btw Kasulistan and Sanjeevgad?... how did maali atul fall for rajkumari anjali.. thats lil confusing...
anyways a very fabulous start.. keep going...
the best is this
Waise toh humare liye aapka shesh 'Dhanyavaad' ki khaafi hai, parantu agar aap ek-do amulya shabd bhi likh denge, toh hum aapke abhari rahenge. Namaste.
Didn't understand ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the comments guys =)
Sims - We'll pick up soon lol =)
Prasanthi Di - That will unfold as the story progresses ! Thanks for the comment =)

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