*DMG-Ahabharat* FF by Seeta Part 4/Page 9 - 15/09

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

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OMG!! I couldn't stop laughing after reading the part.. u guys are too good in using Shudh Hindi.. hehehe..liked reading it... keep going...thanks alot for the PM and continue soon...

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
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OMG!! I couldn't stop laughing after reading the part.. u guys are too good in using Shudh Hindi.. hehehe..liked reading it... keep going...thanks alot for the PM and continue soon...

Thanks Di 😃

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@lupin_roza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
🤣u cracked me up neetz & simz omg!!!! u r killing me with laughter...gr8 FF & awesome part🤣

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: lupin_roza
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
🤣u cracked me up neetz & simz omg!!!! u r killing me with laughter...gr8 FF & awesome part🤣

thanks lupeeeen!!! 😃 thanks so much!

keep reading and commenting, otherwise im going to call u poopin and loophole again 🤣

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Part 2

Sanjeevgad

A
round the same time, in another kingdom, there was a big Mahal, where a beautiful girl slept in a lavish bed with beautiful net curtains around it. The golden yellow morning sun peeped through the window curtains and fell on her long lashes. She frowned in sleep as if she was disturbed from a sweet dream.

"RAJKUMARI RIDHIMA!! UTHIEYEEEE".... a short and chirpy maiden, Nikita walked into her room and opened the curtains letting the sun fill the beautiful room.

Ridhima, still in a slumberous state, trying to adjust her sight to the bright room, she heard the voice again.

Nikita: Woh Aa gaye hain ! [ She said while giggling ]

Ridhima: [sitting up with a jerk] Kaun.. Kaun aya hai?

Nikita:[ in a teasing voice] Rajkumar Abhimanyu Modi... yaad hai? aapke liye rishta lekar aye hain

Ridhima [Looking annoyed] UHH humne pitashree se kitni baar kaha hai ki abhi humein vivah nahi karna, Lekin woh humari ek nahi sunte..

[She dragged herself from her bed and got ready by wearing the beautiful mideval gold jewellery and wearing a beautiful blue legenga with golden work on it]

Garden:

[ Ridhima covered her head with her dupatta and put on her extra fake and coy smile and walked to the garden, followed by Nikita, where Rajkumar Abhimanyu was present with his mother, both talking to Raja Shashank. She smiled and folded her hands to greet them with a "Pranam"]

She realized Abhimanyu was sitting really close to his mother, almost hiding behind her, and his mother was doing most of the talking, Abhimanyu gave her an extremely shy smile which made Ridhima cringe from inside.

Ridhima [To herself] - Yeh Ladkiyon ki tarah kyon sharma raha hai ? Woh to kabhi is tarah nahi sharmate..

[She sat down beside her father]

Shashank- In dono ko ekaant mein kuch vartalaap karne dete hain, Kyun Maharani ?

[He started walking away, Abhimanyu pleaded with his mom to stay there with him. Ridhima grimaced but started talking to him, still with the smile plastered to her face.]

Ridhima - Waise aapke baare mein bahut suna hai humne.. aapka rajya bahut vikas kar raha hai

Abhi [shyly] - Ji dhanyawaad, Yeh sab meri maatashri ke aashirwaad ke kaaran hai

[He turned to his mother, his mother started talking about how he is such a smart person who knows a lot about right and wrong]

Ridhima [coyly] - Aap aur kin cheezon mein ruchi rakhte hain?

Abhimanyu [turned red] - Ji kuch khaas nahi, jo man kiya kar leta hoon [and looked down]

Ridhima turned red in anger and frustration and turned to Nikki who was trying hard to stop her laughter and wispered in her ears "Yeh jaanta hai na ki yeh dulha hai, dulhan nahi?"

[Suddenly, Abhimanyu felt too shy and asked his mother to take him home soon.. he had talked enough for the day]

[As they left, Shashank came back and started laughing at his little rajkumari's angry face... he knew what she was thinking as he had noticed Abhi's shy behaviour earlier!]

Ridhima saw Sahashank and Nikita laughing, couldnt stop herself and burst out laughing.. "Pitashree, uski naak bhi thodi tedi thi na?...aur uski aakhien kitni bhengi thi.." ... and neither of them could control their laughters...

[Behind the wall]

Anjali and Naani had seen the whole interaction.. Naani provoked her anger and said "Dekh, raja sirf Ridhima ke vivah ke baare mein sochte hain.."

Anjali just smirked and said: "Ridhima ek din aise hi kisi airey-gaire rajkumar ke saath byah karke chali jayegi.. Mere liye sirf ek hi Rajkumar bana hai... Armaan... main jaanti hoon pitashree meri baat kabhi nahi taalenge...Armaan bahut jaldi Kasaulistan ka raaja banega, aur wahan jaakar mein RAJ karoongi, RAJ!"

Nani nodded and returned an equally evil smile.

Back in Ridhima's room:

Nikita teased her all the way back to her room: "Raajkumar Abhimanyu kitne dinon se aapke deewane hai lekin aap hai ki unki taraf dekhti hi nahi hain? kyun? aur koi hai kya dil mein?"

Ridhima threw a pillow at her face and pretended to be annoyed... "CHUP.... mera sirf ek raajkumar hai..." she blushed...

Nikita was still laughing.. "Pata hai.. pata hai.. tumhare dil mein sirf WOH hi hai... aur jab tak WOH nahi ayega, tum kahin nahi jaogi." Saying this, she left the room..

Ridhima sobered up... "haan lekin, kya unke dil mein bhi mere dil mein wahi bhaavnayein hain?" she went towards the window and looked at the horizon.. far far away, she saw another big mahal and sighed.. "Armaan, meri aakhon ke saamne hokar bhi mere paas nahi ho... bachpan se jaanti hoon tumhe, lekin tumhare dil ki baat abhi tak nahi jaan payi"

she started humming

"Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein

khayaal aata hai

ki jaise tujhko banaya

gaya hai mere liye'

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Edited by -simi- - 16 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

😆

God only knows how much Raja Shashank n Rajkumari Riddhima laughed.. but I had a very good time and laughing all the way.. was imagining Abhi in a shy mode 😆😆😆.. OMG!! No way.. he looks good only when he is serious I think..

that was another great attempt to entertain us with the ever-funny parts... thanks a lot for the PM and waitiing eagerly to laugh more by reading the further parts at the earliest.

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umm haww i forgot my name.

@lupin_roza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: -simi-

thanks lupeeeen!!! 😃 thanks so much!

keep reading and commenting, otherwise im going to call u poopin and loophole again 🤣

plzzz no don't do this with me mei lut jaungiii barbad ho jaungi🤣

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@lupin_roza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

omg!!! i m dying of laughter hum prasannna huai...really enjoyed the part simz..thanks a lot 4 d pm .😃btw ridz was humming a good song!!!Lata ji would be very happy!!🤣🤣🤣

Edited by lupin_roza - 16 years ago

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

😆

God only knows how much Raja Shashank n Rajkumari Riddhima laughed.. but I had a very good time and laughing all the way.. was imagining Abhi in a shy mode 😆😆😆.. OMG!! No way.. he looks good only when he is serious I think..

that was another great attempt to entertain us with the ever-funny parts... thanks a lot for the PM and waitiing eagerly to laugh more by reading the further parts at the earliest.

Hehe Thanks Prasanthi Di ! 😆 Glad you liked it :)

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: lupin_roza
omg!!! i m dying of laughter hum prasannna huai...really enjoyed the part simz..thanks a lot 4 d pm .😃btw ridz was humming a good song!!!Lata ji would be very happy!!🤣🤣🤣

Thanks Lupz ! 😃