*DMG-Ahabharat* FF by Seeta Part 4/Page 9 - 15/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
hey neetz & simz this FF sounds interesting !!!
nice intro ,count me hun!!!!
Pm me when u updat
e!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
Haha moi aussi!
Loved the intro u guys! Had me laffing *wink wink*
And i see fellow IC members here =D
Im subscribing to this fo sho!
-Marisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lupin_roza

hey neetz & simz this FF sounds interesting !!!
nice intro ,count me hun!!!!
Pm me when u updat
e!!!

Thanks Lupu ! Will deffo PM you ! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Haha moi aussi!

Loved the intro u guys! Had me laffing *wink wink*
And i see fellow IC members here =D
Im subscribing to this fo sho!
-Marisha

LOL oui oui! merci beaucoup! 😆
hi marisha! we hope to make u laugh even more in the coming parts 😳
yea we dragged our friends here 😆 no we actually threatened them 😈
Edited by -simi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Waiting for your comment Rio =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Alright folks, so here we are with our very first part ! I hope it's not crappy because it has literally been done on a whim, but we hope you all like it nonetheless :)
[ Threat - It takes alot of time to cook up funny dialogues in HINDI, so you all BETTER comment or else...... 😡 🤢 ] HAHA Joke !
Without further crappy delay, here is part 1 ! :D
PART 1
[ Act 2 - Rajkumar Armaan sitting in his bedroom, dreaming about a certain someone ]
Kabhie Kabhie..Mere dil mein,
khayal aata hai..
Ke jaise tujhko, banaya gaya hai mere liye..
tu abse pehele, sitaron mein bas rahi thi kahin..

[ As Rajkumar Armaan is singing to himself whilst plucking out petals from a rose, with a dazed expression on his face, Muskaan ( daasi ) enters the room ]
Muskaan (to herself) - Yeh Rajkumar Armaan ko kya ho gaya ? Yeh talli Aashiq ke jaise kyun baithe hue hain ?
Muskaan (To Armaan) - Err...Rajkumar...Rajkumar !
Armaan - Huh ?..haan..err..Haan ! Kya hai ? Nazar nahi aata ki Hum bahut hi zaroori Karya-soch mein magn hain ? Tumhari himmat kaise hue humari soch-dhara ko bhang karne ki !
Muskaan (in a scared voice) - Woh Rajkumar...Hum..Hum..
Armaan - Kya hua ? Bolti kyun nahi !
Muskaan - Rajkumar, Agar aap apne sthan se nahi hatenge, to main jhadoo kaise marungi ?
[Rajkumar Armaan cools down a bit and a stupid expression takes over his face ]
Armaan - Umm...*Ahem*..toh...THEEK HAI NA ! isnme itni badi kya baat hai ?! Lo hum abhi apne sthan se chale jaate hain ! Maarlo apni Jhaadoo-Vaadoo.
[Armaan walks away leaving muskaan behind]
[As Armaan walks away, Muskaan breaks into fits of laughter ( like the normal Muskaan laugh lol ) and suddenly she sees the rose petals lying on the floor ]
Muskaan (to herself) - Kash Rajkumar Rahul bhi mere liye isi tarah kisi Gulaab se patte todte, Main to khushi se Baag baag ho jati !
[She bends down to touch the petals and starts singing]

Aaja, Aayi Bahaar...Dil hai..bekaraar..
O mere rajkumar..tere bina raha na jaaye..

[Rahul enters. He is shocked to see Daasi Muskaan singing to herself whilst staring at rose petals]
Rahul - MUSKAAN ! Yeh tum kya kar rahi ho ?!
Muskaan (Jerks back to reality and stands up) - Woh..Rajkumar...Main..yahaan jhaadoo marne aayi thi...
Rahul - Aur use karne ke alawa tum gaane gunguna rahi thi !
Muskaan - Nahi..Woh to bas..aise hi..
Rahul - Accha theek hai theek hai..jao abhi yahaan se. Hume yahaan kucch zaroori karya karna hai.
[Muskaan exits]
[Rahul glares at her as she walks away and suddenly his gaze falls on the rose petals. He slips into a trance ]
Rahul (to himself) - Kash Rajkumari Ridhima bhi mere baare mein usi tarah vichhaar karti ho, jis tarah main unka vichhaar karta hoon.

[He starts singing]

Aapki aankhon mein kuchh, mehke hue se..raaz hain..
Aapse bhi khoobsurat, aapke andaaz hain..
[Suddenly Armaan re-enters and sees the hyptonic state Rahul was in]
Armaan - Rahul, Tum theek to ho ?
Rahul - huh ?...eh..haan woh..Hum...erm..dekh rahe the ki gulaab ke patte kareeb se kaise dikhayi dete hain..Atisundar..atisundar..
[Armaan nods in a sheepish way]
Rahul - Um..waise hume woh soochna-patra chahiye tha jo pitashri ko kal doot (messenger) ne diya tha, parantu hum wo kabhi aur le lenge..hum..chalte hain.
[Rahul exits hurriedly, Armaan stares at the retreating figure of a flushed looking Rahul]
Armaan (to himself) - Yeh rahul ko kya ho gaya ? Bada ajeeb vyavhaar kar raha hai..
[He sees the petals on the floor and sighs ]
Armaan - Rajkumari Ridhima..Aap kab samjhengi ki hum aapse mohabbat karte hain ?
[He goes and sits down on his bed, and takes out another rose from his 'Rajkumar' outfit]
Armaan -
Kabhie Kabhie..Mere dil mein,
khayal aata hai..
Ke jaise tujhko, banaya gaya hai mere liye..
tu abse pehele, sitaron mein bas rahi thi kahin..
~*~
Do comment, even if you think it was not worth a darn ! Pleaseeee ! it means alot 😃
Krapya apne vichar avashya hume batayen, hum un par shesh dhyaan dekar apne aap ko behta banane ka prayatna karenge.
Dhanyavaad,
Seeta (Simi+Neeta)
Edited by -Neetz- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Nice but Could you make it longer perhaps ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!

🤣
Oh my Lord. This is like Golmaal, except better! You both have done us proud, and I am sure the DMG writers are like "aye Bhagwaan humne kyun nahin yeh socha tha! 😡"
Oh and by the way, all of the raajas and maharaajas better be bare-chested in DMG-Ahabharat!
🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Hey Great part But please make it longer and Continue soon.
and don't forget to PM me this time....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
thanks neha and radhika! we thought to keep it short cuz we didnt want people getting bored trying to read the hindi 😆 but we'll try to make it longer next time cuz u guys seem to be fine with it 😊
zeeboo-- thankooooo! LOL i bet the creatives are 🤣 arent i so modest *innocent eyes* 😆
u can imagine the rajkumars in whatever attire as u wish 😉
Edited by -simi- - 16 years ago

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