'Chori-Chori' (AK,SK,AR,KA,MP)..Pt 29/pg134,Jan13

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Mittal Patel

@sweet_mittal

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#21

hey di welcome with the new ff

the intro is simply great and wonderful and i love all the couples but most AR and AK hehe

anyways pleaseeeeeeeeee continue soon with the next intro

continue soon

love ya

mittal

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Jannat

@NYPunjabii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

I'm already in love with this FF.
Especially the opening...Btw..did you write it? Its goes with the story.
Every character is intriguing
But I can't wait for Kripa's entry and the rest
I must confess though that I've never watched any of these shows or characters except AK. But I'll meet them in this FF.
Can't wait for your second intro.

Api you better make this FF reallly long...lol

Jannat

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zainab.A

@zainab.A

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

hey i really like ur FF.. all the characters are really nice... i thought arman and angad would have a sis too.. but its ok... :)
liked ur character sketch.. continue soon

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ashwini_k

@ashwini_k

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Hi pallavi,
nice intro aswell descreption on types of chor is good, though its a multistarrer fanfic, i guess its more focused on AK,
waiting for part 1
pl cont soon

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Shelina

@ShelDev

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Hey Pallavi:

Ah finally the intro to your new FF...and wow what a great intro too!! Wow that's alot of couple to work with but I am sure you will do wonders as always

I am so looking forward to this FF now....Everyone's intro was great...Hmm...I guess in this FF Angad is not the playboy, flirtatious, passionate Angad we are all used to? Arman has taken that seat...I will have to get used to it but I am sure it will be mindblowing...

I am eagely awaiting our Kripa's intro now....

Pls continue soon & pls PM me too...

Thanks....

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

great intro di

waitin for u to start

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Kiran

@Smilesx3

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

great intro dii--u already have me hooked
continue sooonnnn
xo*Kiran*xo

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Minita

@xxxxminixxxx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

yay yay

i ve seen a multi starrer ff after such a long time

i am already loving it

plz continue

soon

and i wonder whens kripa gonna come

and u were sooo right about dedicating this ff to all the dead jodis fans

thnx sooo much

ummm... do you mind if i call u Di

could u also pm me when u continue

thnx

~minita

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Sheetal

@sheetal00

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

yayy a new ff.
soooo many coupless
i find it hard to even pen 1 couple n ur writing 5 but i kno u wil do justice
when r u posting the intro 2

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Kavi1982

@Kavi1982

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

A great start as always Pallavi. The description of a 'chor' was beautiful. With that you have started the story with a blast. The characters are well etched. In one go you have shown two families different from each other in every way as possible as neighbours. Dilip and Arman as 'chors' , if one steals money the other steals girl's heart. The other son an idealist and mother a snobish socilite. Can see the Khannas are not a close knit family.

The other family Gupta's a close knit family with Shashank and Padma heading it. Love both of them for being a responsible brother and bhabhie for the MIlind and Sujal. Wonder what's up with Milind that he doesnot like his wife. Is it his parent's death or something else added with it that has turned Milind to what he is? Some girl broke Sujal's heart!!! waiting for Kashish to come and mend his heart. And Ridhimma the laadli of the house.

Wainting for Kripa, Kavya, Anjali and Kashish's intro.

Continue soon.

Take Care
Vijaya

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