'Chori-Chori' (AK,SK,AR,KA,MP)..Pt 29/pg134,Jan13 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
hey, di rem it's me Sana. πŸ˜†..it's been so long how ru i have missed soo many AK fanfics will read and comment on urs as soon as i'm done.
Sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
@naughtyash: Thanks for liking Intro 1, Intro 2 is following now.


@monikaseth: Thanks monu, for ur continued support and encouragment, for ur appreciation and praise. I really appreciate it! 😳


@ ttimpy: Thanks Binny! πŸ˜ƒ
I like to try new stuff and genres. πŸ˜ƒ I hope this time I havent bitten off more than I can chew. πŸ˜† I hope my stars dont throw too many tantrums, then I will be doomed. πŸ˜†
Thanks for ur confidence in me! πŸ˜ƒ
Kripa will be introduced in next part, shes an independant character, completely different from how shes been portrayed so far. πŸ˜‰


@ sanjana25: Thanks Dear! πŸ˜ƒ


@ sasik: Thanks sasik! 😊


@ Kaj: Thanks Kaju! Welcome back! Good to see u after a long time. πŸ˜ƒ
Yeah, I like to try out new things. πŸ˜†

pallavi
Edited by pallavi25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ nehasfan: Thanks u! Kripa and Kashish are coming in next part. So is Anjali.... 😊


@ bradford3: Thanks Dear!


@ akrock: Thanks akrock. I will continue now.


@ spvd: Thanks Deepa! Kashish, Kripa and Anjali intro in next part. Ok, I will pm u. πŸ˜ƒ


@ sun_423: Thanks sun! Im glad u liked it! 😳


@ teri_susan: Thanks susan! Yes, it will be romance multiplied 4 times of more with all these jodis. 😳 Best of luck for ur exams! πŸ˜ƒ


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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

pallu what were u doing awake so late :|<br>yayy u started a new fan fic!!! wooohooo!!!<br>armaan ridz n kavyanjali my fav couples!!!:D<br>awesomeee intro...i loved how it was all in hindi...and the chor police definitions!!! awesome work pallu!<br>damnnn dilip the chor:P i cud imagine tht alredy...will angad and armaan b the same too???<br>she dusnt let kids in her house lol....wat abt her children when they were kids???:P and what abt when she has grandchldren:p<br>aww angad singer...im glad hes not a chor!!!<br>awww armaan sho cuteee:D<br>ohh is teddy a chor too:O<br>i love the title chori chori...reminds me of tht song from EMI hehe<br>sujal a policeman hmmmm will he catch dilip too? and teddy?:P<br>so is milind a criminal too???<br>hmmm so shilpa is playing the role of riddhima...i liekd sukirti lol<br>milind and prachi......hmm i liked neev prachi better lol<br>or is milind a player???:| does he have affairs???:O<br>this ff reminds me of godfather lol!!!<br>i think ridz crush is armaan!!!<br>cont soon!!!<br>i feel this is gonna be a longgggg ff hehe<br>



Thanks Hinna!
I was awake? Probably writing update. πŸ˜†
Yeah I started the multi starrer planned since last year.
Wow, I thought AK was ur fav jodi.
Dilip is big chor. πŸ˜† When A-A were kids, Naina let them play in backyard and on the terrace. πŸ˜†
No, Teddy isnt a chor, hes an accomplished butler.
Which song from EMI? There are many songs starting with chori chori.
I liked suku too, more than shilpa, but shilpa is more popular here.
Neev will also come in the story later. πŸ˜‰
Is Milind a player? We will see.....

pallavi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
Pallavi, add me to your fan list
you have done such a tremendous work........bringing all my fav into one
Thank you
Though here, Rishi is elder to Sujal..........but Rishi is miland and i truly adore the intro of armaan n riddhima.....

Angad n sujal being friends........great

Waiting for Krips, kashish intro....

Cont soon

luv ya

lolz
ana

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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Pallavi di (i hope I can call u that)...I have been following ur FFs for the past year and I absolutely love each and every one of them!

SinceI was more of an AR fan...I used to imagine my AR in ur AK...And I enjoyed each and every story of urs! I used to secretly wish that you would write one on AR and now my wish is fulfilled!


The intro sounds fab...AR story sounds great as well!

Eagerly waiting to see how this all develops...Especially Riddhima's "hero" =)


Do continue soon...And if possible, please PM me when u upd8!


Thanks!


-Marisha



Thanks Marisha! 😳 Im glad u enjoyed all my fan-fics.
Yes, many AR fans asked me to write abt them, so this has all of them.
Ok I will pm u, dear!

pallavi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
@ wintersunshine: Thanks, Heena!
Missing me? But I am still writing Haunting. Did u read it?
Let me know how u like the intros! All ur feedbacks are valuable to me.


@ sumaiyawahid: Thanks Dear! I see u are a Rajeev fan. Hes one of my favs I loved him in Amir too.


@ sujalangad_rock: Thanks, Hun! Im afraid some of the dialogs will be in Hindi as well as English since Delhi is the setting. If u dont understand some lines, just pm me and I will translate it for u.
πŸ˜ƒ


@ xx-ReenO-xx: Thanks Reen! Alright, Ive included u in pm list.


@ abhilashasharma: Thanks abhilasha! Ur somewhat right, magic happens first time but can be repeated with the right setting and script. These jodis share such awesome chemistry that no matter what they will sizzle together in new shows. Im sure of that. PG were hits when they came back as KN. In old days, Bollywood couples were repeated over and over, like RK-Nargis, RK-Sharmila, Amitabh-Rekha, etc, nobody got bored of them. 😳
How abt SRK-Kajol? We are still hankering to see them tog onscreen again.

pallavi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
@ simi: Thanks simi! πŸ˜ƒ
Ur faith in me gives me more confidence to write this multi-starrer. πŸ˜ƒ
Producers ke akal gaye ghaas charney. πŸ˜†
But in IN case, its Iqbal who refused, in Kash case, its Shilpa who quit so producers are not to blame I guess. πŸ˜†


@ sweetmittal: Thanks sweetie! I appreciate ur continued support and encouragement. AK are my most fav jodi, followed by SK and AR. πŸ˜ƒ


@ NYPunjabii: Thanks Jannat!
Yes, I wrote the opening. Ive been planning this FF since last year and planned that whole "chor" intro a long time ago. πŸ˜†
Awww u called me Api, thats so sweet! 😳
Hahaha it will probably be my longest FF since it has so many couples. πŸ˜†

@ zainabA: Thanks zainab! No, A-A dont have a sister. πŸ˜† But both treat Ridz as a little sis. 😳


@ ashwini_k: Thanks ashwini!
I will try to focus equally on the 5 main couples although AK is my fav.

@ pinky901: Thanks pinky! 😊


pallavi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
@ ShelDev: Thanks Shel! I will try my best to give equal screen time to all the jodis. πŸ˜†
Angad is not a total flirt like Armaan, but hes no saint either. hes a well-known singer in nightclub/party scene and girls adore him. He does have GFs and flings but not like Armaan or Kavya. πŸ˜†
Kripa's entry will be dhamakedaar. πŸ˜†


@ deeya123: Thanks deeya. I will continue now.


@ Smilesx3: Thanks Kiran! 😳


@ xxxxminixxxx: Thanks minita! Its great to see u feel the same way abt these couples. Of course u can call me Di, Im Di to most of IF. πŸ˜ƒ
Ive added u to my pm list.


@ sheetal00: Thanks sheetal! Yes, lots of jodis and lots of characters. Hopefully I will be able to juggle them successfully!


pallavi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: reddydvl

A great start as always Pallavi. The description of a 'chor' was beautiful. With that you have started the story with a blast. The characters are well etched. In one go you have shown two families different from each other in every way as possible as neighbours. Dilip and Arman as 'chors' , if one steals money the other steals girl's heart. The other son an idealist and mother a snobish socilite. Can see the Khannas are not a close knit family. <br><br>The other family Gupta's a close knit family with Shashank and Padma heading it. Love both of them for being a responsible brother and bhabhie for the MIlind and Sujal. Wonder what's up with Milind that he doesnot like his wife. Is it his parent's death or something else added with it that has turned Milind to what he is? Some girl broke Sujal's heart!!! waiting for Kashish to come and mend his heart. And Ridhimma the laadli of the house.<br><br>Wainting for Kripa, Kavya, Anjali and Kashish's intro.<br><br>Continue soon.<br><br>Take Care<br>Vijaya<br><br><br><br>



Thanks, vijaya!
Excellent analysis! πŸ‘ That is exactly what I meant. πŸ˜ƒ
Milind married Prachi out of duty. Lets find out who broke Sujal's heart.
The remaining characters will be introduced in next part.

pallavi

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