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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

The night made the part so special.. it shows so many things in a quiter way, its so subtle but so beautiful... looking forward for the next part honey..

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Riddhi

@Riddss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

heyy dear,
nice part
thanks for PM.
continue soon.

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kickass_diva

@kickass_diva

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

OMG

like oh my god.... ur the most fantastic writer ever.. like EVER! ur story is too amazing to be true...i'm in love with it and i'm going to tell all my friends to read it!

i cant get over the fact that it's writen so beautifully!

SUPERB!

continue soon

waiting for it ...DESPERATELY!

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simran1285

@simran1285

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Thank you sookie, I owe you reviews for a total of 4 parts now. I hope to have them posted by late Sunday.

Hope you have a good weekend and I hope you post more parts; Greed does not have to be solely for money :-)

Edited by simran1285 - 16 years ago

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ashu

@ashluvdmg

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

um speechless..tats it i cn say...!!

luvd it 2 de core

thx a lot 4 de pm

luvya

crazya shu

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

That was again an awesome part.. loved the way they both accept and acknowledge the facts in a silent way.. great going dear...

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bloodline

@bloodline

Navigator

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

C-4
I seriously have no idea about what to write
I would not say it was an amazing part because I always say that
and anyways, it would be an understatement for sure so for a change, I am not going to say that
I seriously do not know what I feel after reading ur story so forget about pen down my feelings
I guess I can relate myself to Riddhima for one thing....reading in silence
I never read ur update while I am catching up with other FFs or when I am in school or library
I just cant read them in crowd....I always read them when I am alone by myself....its really feels nice
Just like Riddhima read Armaahn's journal when she is alone, i do the same thing with ur story

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Broken hearts and growing life; two pacing snails
One takes a while to gather and heal
The other takes time to expand and mature
One becomes a shape, a path for a new familiar start
The other meets its crest, a way to an old unknown end.
Both are actual...both are real...both are true
Both are an unavoidable must for everyone's existence.

Looking out the window, suffering a satisfaction
Flipping a page in the journal, tossing an undying memory
Apprehending the possibility of the stating bright color
Tomorrow will carve a fresh history in the phase of
thumping beats and moving cycles.
Knotted hands..Protective arms are promising early signs.

Nice update sookie! :)

....ziz!

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago