Infinity in the palm of your hands: C9 Pg2 24 Aug - Page 5

3rd part
love the way how u portray characters through their emotions rather than their act.
yours is kind of story which I can not read in 5 or 10 minutes....i can only read them when I am alone, without any disturbance....feels nice
even though this part was amazing as usual, I'd consider second part as the best part till now

That was very nice..sookie...:)

...ziz!

Chapter 2 was very nice Sookie.. loved their silence.. its always that silence speaks volumes... haina.. felt very nice reading this one too...:)

Awesome part Sookie!! i am writing this line after deleting about 5-6 unfinished lines...somehow none of them was good enough to be written as a reply. The night Armaan spent at Riddhimas was so natural, that not once did i question why he had turned up so suddenly at her doorstep! at times when we are actually broken, only the people whom we love the most can provide some solace. Armaan coming to Riddhima was like coming home for him...proved beyond doubt how important the unspoken relationship was to them. eventhough you have told us that there are 10 parts and Armaan and Riddhima won't be together for the next 10 yrs, when Armaan talks about the uncertainities of life, somewhere deep in my heart i was hoping that they would be together, but i guess we have 7 yrs/ 7 parts to go!!

hey ....great work ......i really enjoyed reading this part aswell.....like i mentioned before very different ....enjoy it alot....thanks for pm

I have only read the prologue and I am rendered speechless! I have 10 minutes before I head home and read the next part but I wanted to drop in and say something before my daily life takes a toll and I forget to comment.

wow dis is jus amazing......ive jus came across ur ff n read it in one go n all i can say is wow........its beautifully written

I think i liked this one the best so far....only for that night...!! It reminded me of my close friend....who was in terms similar to AR...!
Hes a friend from school, 11th grade. It was the year we changed sections and i knew him by his name but never met, not once. We were going to goa, on our school educational trip. I was so low that day, was missing this other friend and i had noone to talk to about it. I stepped down from the upper most train sleeper and saw him standing in the corridor. I don't know till date why he was there, but he was. No greetings from either of us, i asked him.."Can i get a hug?" and obediently he put up his arms for me. And since then we have been very close, great friends. Its such a strange incident and one so clear in my mind..will stay so for life i guess.
Lol anways...that was a grt update...specially for that night...yes!

cheers,

....ziz :P

hey sookie

hey amezing chapter...really enjoyed myself reading it..thankc 4 the pm..