AR *Unexpressed Desires* one shot - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
Heyyy Sweetu di!!!

OMG!! I haven't talked to u since sooooooooooooooooooooooooo longg!!!
lol...i'll answer ur question of where the hell i've been in a pm!...hehe

now...coming to the one shot..

OMG dii!! it was soooo good!! but soooo sad!! u literally made me cry! he died!! awwww! =(...but it was reallllyy well penned down!!!
why were u so glum though? =/...

kk...ttyl!!
<3333
ur Sweetu! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: cutie_mahima

Heyyy Sweetu di!!!

OMG!! I haven't talked to u since sooooooooooooooooooooooooo longg!!!
lol...i'll answer ur question of where the hell i've been in a pm!...hehe

now...coming to the one shot..

OMG dii!! it was soooo good!! but soooo sad!! u literally made me cry! he died!! awwww! =(...but it was reallllyy well penned down!!!
why were u so glum though? =/...

kk...ttyl!!
<3333
ur Sweetu! =)



*faints*
nooooooooooooo it can't be..... sweetu is back..... 😲.....

hahahaha...... arre yaar rona band kar....😉.. hmm reason of glumness will be explained i a pm... bdw u owe me comments... ok comment... but yh still owe me one!!!!😆😆😆

love ya bunny!!!!!!!

di...
xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

dat was soo emotional n heart wrenchn 😭 loved readin it

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav



*faints*
nooooooooooooo it can't be..... sweetu is back..... 😲.....ha-ha-ha...veryy funny!!....😉😉...lolz...jkjk!!...yes!! I am bakk!! Lol....

hahahaha...... arre yaar rona band kar....😉..fine!! sheeshh!! lol😆😉.. hmm reason of glumness will be explained i a pm...ok...jaldi se pm behjo!!...lol😛.. bdw u owe me comments... ok comment... but yh still owe me one!!!!😆😆😆hehe..yaa..don't wry!! i remember! i just read the part...i have to comment now..but i'm too lazy! lol..can i do it a little later?? heheh😆😛😳

😛love ya bunny!!!!!!! luv ya too!! =)

di...sweetu😳
xxx

Edited by cutie_mahima - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey

WOW rav you can write sooo well
That was sooooo good it made me cry
it was just AMAZING!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
OMG...that is so sad...awwwwwwww... OMG.. am crying... wow..loved the story..very intensse! hope u write more
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
oomg rav
this one shot really made me cry
it was written very beautifully n the love between AR cud b seen clearly
just luved it tooooooooooooo much
thanx 4 d pm

luv,
soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
omg!!
i dpnt belive dis..how can good create such an amain writter!!
rav..u were awesome :):)
as always i was lost in d story again :):)
i love dis :):)
plss update really soon ..nd plss pm ok??
love u :):)
muahh:D
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
Omg...I almost cried in the end...I have like tears in my eyes...seriously....the ending was so unexpected...You did a brilliant job, man I really wish this never happens to Armaan and Ridhima...lol, I am wishing now that by some stroke of luck, Armaan comes back..and ...I don't know.......you write beautifully!...I loved this one-shot....superb work!
Edited by sweetdamage - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
sad story but so beautifullly written................but it made me cry!!!!!!

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