AR *Unexpressed Desires* one shot

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cutie_shalzy

@cutie_shalzy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

aw dear dnt worry aise hi shots deti raho hehehe it ws beautifully writtn it made me cry nd still i jst lvd it beautifully u hvdescribd their emotions lvd tht an unexpressd desire luvly title u hv givn to the story totaly perfct wth it beautifull.......
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

well honey,

talk of a *cheerful* story...you're really bent on spreading the sunshine aren't you? lol. but anyway it was really good from a plot point of view and the way you brought about Armaan's reactions was lovely but yeah, not helping the mood gurl!!!

but then everything can't be cheerful and light na and sometimes you just feel like wallowing in the gloom. so cheer up sweetheart and as soon as you do write us a nice sweet one shot *wink* just kidding!

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ritu

@janu1610

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Rav AWESOME👏👏👏
I had tears in my eyes nd sadness in heart.
I never think about death of Armaan Not in my dreams

And i pray to GOD plz don't do this in my life time .Amen

thanks for pm dear
love
ritu

Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago

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Sanaya/Madhurima

@disisSanaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

nooooooooooooooooooooo😲😲😲..........................u cud not make da ending so sad😭😭😭................u made me cry..........😭.....................but da story was very well written😊😊..............it was beautiful😆😆....................loved it totally..........u described evrything so well!......😆😆.......u have great writing skill di.......😆😆😆............u cud continue further but those f**king xams yaar!..........

love ya loads.....😃😃 continue ur ffs plzzzzzzzzzzzz........😆😆 ur peaches!....😳😳...