AR *Unexpressed Desires* one shot - Page 8

you write really well
i know its a one-shot but i would have loved to read more of this story...
the way the scene carried forward was really captivating.........
hope you did well in your exams!
loads of love
and thanks for this little treat!
sumedha

hey rav...

Originally posted by: ttimpy

a painful one shot rav...but a real beauty...............initially i really really thot that armaan was waiting outside ridz's house..............u have shown a lot od sensitivity..........gr8

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear🤗its really rocking one⭐️nice one Armaan is dead sad🥺 thanks for the pm😉

"Zindagi nahin humein doston se pyaari,
Doston pe haazir hai jaan hamaari,
Aankhon mein hamaari aansoon hai toh kya,
Jaan se bhi pyaari hai muskaan tumhaari !"

From Armaan " Because of you my world is now whole,
Because of you love lives in my soul.
My love for you is pure, boundless through space and time,
It grows stronger everyday knowing you'll always be mine.

I have it all now and it's all because of you." To Ridhima

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

you write really well
i know its a one-shot but i would have loved to read more of this story...
the way the scene carried forward was really captivating.........
hope you did well in your exams!
loads of love
and thanks for this little treat!
sumedha

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

hey rav...

awesome piece of writing...

loved it..made me cry as i reached the ending...its sooo sad...

In the never fading memory of my only love? Armaan? you will always be my only armaan? only desire... just unexpressed?. Love you more than you ever realized? Riddhima?

gosh..just love this line...and once again fantastic piece of writing...

beautiful! so touching and emotional! im feeling so sad now :(
well done!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

beautiful! so touching and emotional! im feeling so sad now :(
well done!

cheers robin...😳