~One in a million~Pt3-pg27 NOTE-pg 31 17/07 - Page 14

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

it was amazing.plz post soon.

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey jia
i dunno whether i commented on the intro or not
if i dint them um sorry for coming in late
but i just it the way u wrote this one
i loved the "fall" into the pool n armaan our superman saving ridz lolz
it was amazing the way he flirts with her n wow directly he asks her out hahaha that was sooo coool
i liked ridz's soliloquy in the room
hehehe shes knows armaan too well i guess
but our armaan is smarter
loved it babes
i actually thought of telling u ki u better stick to ur word of this being a "short ff" lolz but i guess u realized it earlier
if possible plz pm me
if not then lite
update soon

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran

di part wz amazing jia!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx for d pm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

w8in 4 d next part...

luv,urvi..:))

Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey jia
nice part loved it..pls update soon..thanks 4 the pm...pls update ur other ff too...

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Flawless Fab Part Jia.. what can I say... her confusion about her own thoughts..his helplessness in dealing his father...father's over concern about his son's life.... the game they both are playing together without themselves knowing...his caring about her during shoot.. all are so perfectly placed and said dear.. liked reading it.. continue soon and thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: mar-

wooow grt part plss continue sooon

tnx for the pm

Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey jia forgot to ask cn u plz PM me wen u update. Thnks

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Wow! Jia that was a fabuklous part. Part 1 of this amazing ff .. Jia's back in the buiolding .. lol .. thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

hey nice part dear,😊 continue soon n thanks for the pm