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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

hey jia...hey Sunaaaaaa🤗

~reserved~will be back in a moment...
*edited*...okies back now...
ah well...part one...hmmmm...wat can i say abt it...it was awesome, fantastic, fabulous, superb n much more....*i know they hav become standard words of praise now...hehehe...* hehehe babe ur just being sweet, ultra sweet......and always a darling🤗. 🤗
okay...loved the start...riddhima's thoughts were very beautifully described....her frustration was explained really well...and whoa...riddhima---a budding model and armaan the CEO of a mobile company....sounds sooo much like the movie Ghajini but with a difference...the fake identity didnt go too well...and m sooo happy that she knows the real him...hehe yeah...it wasnt supposed to be this way u knw....but i changed it last minute as the fake identity somehow was not so happening.. :D
and then loved the way her thoughts kept drifting to armaan...and also how she used to drive them away quickly as they were, in her words, upsetting her equilibrium...and so, her sole aim is make her mom n herself proud...well guess this explains to a certain extent why she has a permanent frown....Bingo......shes a bit self absorbed or lets say determined to do the best for herself.....um glad u liked that bit!!😳
The flat two-dimensional images had in no way alluded to Armaan Hamilton's sheer animal magnetism or overwhelming masculine presence.
totally agree...pictures can hardly capture the aura in them...hehe😃
and then,armaan....i really like him...*well not that i ever hated him..but guess this character is really getting interesting*...a man with a thirst to prove himself to his father...hmmmm...interesting...very interesting...and thinking abt riddhima already...haha um so happy u liked him and find a little interesting, i was worried he sounded to tried, tested and used formula character!!
"You still need to grow up son." His father would say every time they talked.
and his father...gosh...looks like a self-centered man...even though he thinks that armaan is not ready but still wants an heir...man...dont like him one bit....hehe no one else does eitther.....tho um trying to make him grey, a little more likeable......
feel sooo sorry for armaan...he really is lonely...not sharing a bond with any of his parents...and m happy that he is gonna loosen himself up...and hope he proves that he has grown up to his dad...
and then the convo between armaan n his dad...gosh...how could anyone ask their children to repay for bringing them up...guess theres lot to be unfolded....yup, hopefully i hope to do 10% justice atleast to the track....i hope u wont be disappointed yaar!!
and oh so riddhima has refused for the dinner date...and armaan is not gonna let go that easily...
getting interesting....
and then...well..riddhima's story...
her life revolved just around her mother and her career.Riddhima had decided to leave no stone unturned to make her mother proud of herself.
awww....she really loves her mom...thats sooo good....well...the protagonists hav totally differents parents..one has a mom who is soo supporting and the other has parents who dont even care what their son wants or likes...yup thats the starking diff here
Superman might have X-ray vision, but he was fiction and no real person actually had the ability to touch someone else with a look. Only, she felt touched. Caressed even.
gosh...jia..how do u come up with such lines...and guess that superman is armaan hamilton..lmao...yaar i have to admit...the guy playing Armaan has affected me a tad bit too much, i suffer insufferably rom Karan mania!!❤️😆
She had not even seen his face yet and felt as if they were intimately acquainted.
awww....
like chocolate sauce pouring over French vanilla ice cream.😳😳
how jia...how..how..how do u come with such awesome comparions...love it....and btw this is combination that i love in my ice-creams...hehehethe story behind this smile is that i had been put away from ice creams due to flu and blah blah, the cravings were too much lol..and armaan is foreverthere....occupying my already tiny brain...so there..lmaoooo😆
and u deserve a big hug for such comparions.🤗.🤗
on the whole...awesome part....
and update soon[guess sensuous affair is next...right??? .....]

yup sensuous next....thank Sun...u knw u make my day, i guess i cannot thankuu enuf for such a priceless comment u shower me with. Just thanks a zillion. Love u tons, loads and heaps!!
p.s. u removed the word short from ur fic!!! m not complaining, infact m really happy that i would be getting to read this story for quite a longer time now...anyhow, i was wondering abt that while reading the part, there is so much to be unfolded and jia says just three or four parts, how is that possible???? anyways...awesome part...Hehehe yeah i was the only one fooling myself herewhile everyone was quitely chuckling away awaiting for me to admit my blooper.....😆 love u tons.🤗
waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

can any one knows where jia is



hum yaha, tum waha hum yaha tum waha....😆 lame i knw...um here hun, updating abhi....😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: suvi_rox1

hello jaan.........i was srsly waiting fr ur updates ....i never minded which one u will update though i was honestly waiting fr desire...bt this was also long due...never mind i can understand when u r handling 4 at a time...gosh how u managed ha...cause reading 25 ff at a ttime is nt that hard a task to do..bt to write a single appreciative prt is altogether different..hehe ask me.....the only fool here...lol. Um srsly doubting mself to be some big nut for running 4 at a time....tho u understanding it is so touching!!desire will be hopefully monday.....😃

ok coming back....riddhima knows abt armaan.....n here he was trying to fool her...a model n a rich millionare...sounds too much interesting n 1st prt u did enough justice cause it was a long prt i agree...revealed much abt the nature of the character..loved armaans dads control freak nature n attitude n armaan bouncing back with same force.poor armaan...thanku so very much again Suv....ahh u loved his dad freaky nature...first one out here......i love his character too hehe!! Um glad u liked the characterization tho!!
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.bt wondering armaan is taking interest in riddhima at just the sight of her ..ufcourse he had held her n felt her body too...bt now i am srsly wondering if ridz will fall back fr him so easily or armaan had to manofy his employee cum model...cum career oriented womenl..to agree to date with him..Ahhh this one u hav to wait n watch, whetherif Armaan is actually so taken by her and whether the woman in question will fall for him easily.....😉

i dont know what it is in u..ur writing that just makes me love ur prts more n more altogether...srsly u r 1 of the best writers on IF..i m nt kidding..i mean that...hugs fr that.....n i am as usual desperately waiting to read more of this n tje other too Thanku babe, u have me grinning wideeee....love u so much!! Its an honour to have readers like u honestly.

bye tc
n ya u didnt pm me...i def ill pm.
so better do it nxt time or i will lag behind
hugs....




Awwww Suvi......thankuuu so very very very much!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jia..



hum yaha, tum waha hum yaha tum waha....😆 lame i knw...um here hun, updating abhi....😆

Hi Jia thanks for updateing i tink u forget or angry with me or may be don't want to talk with me
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Haww...😍...wt a part..! ❤️

So Ridz works as a model 4 Armaan's company's ad..kool..😉...well she's clever enuff 2 catch his white lie..😉...n she also adores him..so der r chances of her fallin 4 him..!
Armaan is aldready lyk in love wid her..n he thot he can fool her..😛...lol..but his Dad is mean..i mean he definately deserves some fatherly love..😊...but he cant get it! 😳...i hope his father realises wt a wunnerful family he has..soon..😊....Armaan has done a lot 4 his company n his dad still thinks he's immature n needs 2 grow up! 😲...
Armaan finds Ridz intresting 😉..gud 2 noe...i guess she did a gud thng by not acceptin his offer den..😛
Ridz had a dream 2 bcum a model..n m happy she got 2 fulfill it..n very mch wid her mom's support..! 😊...d way Armaan whistled wen she smiled was like 😉....too gud!....she must hv felt quite cautious bt it was Armaan afterall!...n she tuk time 2 realize tat too 😛..lukn fwd 4 more AR moments..😉
so it's not gonna b a short fic afta all..😛...well never mind..bt still it's gud..😉
Update soon
-Aish



Hey Aish thanks a bunch babes, so great to see u here......hope i dun disappoint u hun!! Lets see who falls first....Armaan is just merely attracted yet...love is long way to go....thanks a zillion once again and ys ur demand AR moments....ur in for quite a few now!!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
*~PART 2~*


RECAP:

That strange urge to clench her thigh muscles hit her again and she had to force herself to step out from under the hands now resting on her shoulders. When had she ever wanted to prolong a man's touch? She could not remember a single instance. Men were business associates or props for photo shoots, nothing more. Ad the way this man was affecting her seemed a bit off balance.....and scary.....dangerous.

She turned to face the man upsetting her equilibrium and got her second glimpse of Armaan Hamilton standing right behind her………


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Gray eyes watched her with heated interest tempered by a humor that surprised her. The man made her go weak in the knees and considering she spent her time with some of the most beautiful males the earth had to offer on a regular basis, that realization was not an altogether welcome one.

Yes, his patrician features and dark, hair were to-die-for gorgeous, but it was more than that. And it was the more that had her taking another step backward in the awkward silence that had fallen after his last statement.

"It is not myself I am concerned about." She felt a shiver run down as she recalled his words. She had refused his dinner invitation. Oh dear could she ever forget that? And here she was analyzing her feelings…no her attraction towards him? She was actually checking out Armaan Hamilton??

He smiled, even white teeth flashing briefly. "My concern is for this most lovely young woman whose beauty will not be enhanced by sunburn I think."

"We've got Riddhima slathered in fifty factor sunscreen," the photographer said dismissively.

Armaan's eyes narrowed. "I see that you are in long sleeves and wearing a hat. Very sensible…while she pretends to talk on the phone wearing a little more than what do you call this….a swimsuit??"

"She's a model."

Which said it all. Her body was a tool. To sell products for them and to achieve her dreams for Riddhima. It was the way it was and she didn't even mind.

But apparently Armaan did. She could only be grateful she was not the recipient of that particular look. The photographer tugged at his collar and looked beseechingly at the ad campaign manager who in turn was looking at his boss as if the tycoon had sprouted a couple of horns.

"She is a beautiful woman whom you would do better to care for than to mistreat in such a manner if indeed it is her image we wish to use to encourage customers to use our products." He turned to her, the chilled visage warming.

"Though I am still unsure of what a half clad woman and better cell phone coverage have in common. Who designed this ad for the company?? Its ridiculous."

"You yourself had approved of the idea Sir." The manager came forward bravely giving Riddhima curious look. Riddhima felt a little more then embarrassed. Why in the world was Armaan arguing on her behalf? And that too when she had no qualms shooting the ad? What would people think of her? It would immediately lead to speculations between her and Armaan Hamilton. Something she did not want should happen. Not in this life definitely. She could almost see herself on the entertainment page of tomorrow's news daily.

"Armaan Hamilton's new interest…upcoming model."

Feeling a little more then disgusted she returned her attention to the ongoing rift. It was time she intervened and saved her ad manager.

"But its ridiculous." She heard Armaan say.

"I approved of this idea? Model barely clad selling our cell phones with a beach background?" she saw Armaan frown and cleared her throat consciously.

"Sir your father had given us a green signal." The manager added.

Immediately Riddhima noticed the frown turn into something more. Fascinated she saw his features turn taut and somehow abstractly stubborn.

"No wonder then…" he nodded as if suddenly understanding more then what he seemed to grasp.

"but still…" he gazed at her again….giving her an appraising look from head to toe and spoke.

"It seems so lame. Advertising a swimsuit by showing of her body…"

She laughed, charmed by his blatant bemusement. "My body has been used to sell car batteries. I'm not really sure what the connection is, but I'm personally grateful advertisers seem to think there's a correlation. And honestly…I've done photo shoots in the desert during the summer. This isn't any worse. Believe me."

Armaan cocked his head. "You said your body? "

She shrugged.

"Surely you sell the products."

"My image, which is essentially my body."

He shook his head decisively. "No. There are thousands of truly beautiful women who could be standing where you are right now; it is the spirit inside you that shines through when you smile as you were doing when I arrived. It is you that my advertising executives hired…not a mere body."

He was right. Modeling was so much more than displaying body parts to their best advantage, but few people saw it that way. And regardless, her body was still the main tool for her trade .Which sounded kind of bad when she thought of it and didn't open her mouth to say so.

She simply smiled and said, "Thank you."

"The smile…it is real? Or can you turn it on for others as well as the camera?"

The question was like a smack between the eyes. It was too much like the question that had been plaguing her lately. Was she a plastic person, or real? Sometimes she felt like a wind-up toy that operated only for the photographer's pull on her string. She'd always worked hard to be in charge of her career, but was it really controlling her?

"When was the last time you did something for the sake of enjoyment alone?" he asked although she had not answered his first question yet.

"I…" She didn't remember. Maybe if her mom were here, she could ask her.

While she was Riddhima's biggest supporter for her career, her mom still pushed Riddhima to relax occasionally, reminding her that life wasn't all about modeling. But she still couldn't think of a recent time when it hadn't been.

She stood there, feeling exposed and vulnerable. There was only one safe place of retreat. Behind the plastic smile.

She flashed it. "My career is all the fun I need, Mr Hamilton. Now, if you gentlemen don't mind, I'd like a chance to get a drink before we resume shooting."

He reached out and caught her arm before she walked away. "Let me buy you a fruit juice. And my name is Armaan. Use it."

He dismissed the other two men with a jerk of his head and the ad campaign manager and photographer melted away.

"You didn't ask me to address you as Armaan yesterday. It was something else. Aditya or something like that." She retorted as he turned to face him. She was determined not to allow this man to interfere with her internal state of mind.

"It was merely to protect my identity. I would have given you my real name if you had joined me for dinner tonight." He countered grinning.

"But I guess you were a step ahead of me." he added taking a step forward.

Riddhima tried to have him step backwards by glaring at him.

"Once I recognized you…there was no reason for me to trust you Mr Hamilton. Certainly no need to join you for dinner either. I am sure you have many more interesting people whom you can share your table with." She retorted icily.

"Firstly call me Armaan." He cut in between with a lazy drawl. And then as Riddhima had expected him to back off seeing she was not interested he smiled. Oh that full smile…..it certainly did something to her insides.

"Is that an order?" she asked, her internal hackles rising as she once again faced him.

While her body might be her tool for her trade, it was not a plaything and if he thought she'd fit the role of a playboy's plaything in her off-hours, he was very much mistaken.

"Does it need to be?" he countered, ignoring the frost in her voice.

"That depends. Do your other employees call you by your first name?"

"Some do. Some don't. I prefer that you do. And technically, you are not my employee, but a private contractor hired for a specific purpose. Quite outside my jurisdiction."

"So outside of your jurisdiction that you called a break in the middle of a successful shoot and have dismissed the two men I have to do answer to in order to be alone with me?"

He shrugged.

"I don't think anything in any of your companies is truly outside your jurisdiction, Armaan…except me." There was no warmth in the smile that curved her lips then. "I'm a model, not an escort."

Undaunted, he gave her a genuine grin, his gray eyes filled with amusement and unalloyed approval. "You are a beautiful woman I wish to get to know. What is the harm in that?"

"You tell me."

"You are very prickly, are you not?"

"I've learned to be."

"Have a glass of fruit juice with me. Decide if you like my company enough to share dinner tonight."

She opened her mouth to deny him, but he put a finger to her lips.

"A moment of your time only. Please."

This was not a man who said that particular word very often. She was certain of it.

She shut her mouth.

He left his hand where it was. "Your decision will in no way impact your role as cover model for this campaign."

She stared at him, trying to read his sincerity. All the articles she'd read about him touted him as an honest man. And fair. She chose to believe.

She couldn't talk with his finger pressed against her lips, however. She swallowed and nodded with a short jerk of her head.

He smiled and let his hand drop. "Good."

The photo shoot was being done on a roped off area of the beach and he led her to a small caf less than twenty yards from it. They took a table for two outside and he called the waiter with an arrogant flick of his hand.

The young man came over, his eyes widened as if in recognition. She supposed the billionaire was something of a celebrity in his home country…like Hollywood actors back home. But Armaan Hamilton was a lot better looking. Armaan ordered them both a glass of fruit juice before she could think better of it and request water. The extra electrolytes wouldn't hurt and she could make up for it by eating less at dinner, she thought with a mental shrug, unconsciously counting the calories.

"Have you always wanted to be a model?" he asked after the waiter left.

"Yes. How about you? Have you always wanted to be a business tycoon?"

He laughed, the sound running along her nerve endings like a hyper charged current.

"I was born to it, more or less. My father was a businessman and his father before him. You know the story."

"But you've taken the family holdings to unprecedented heights."

It was his turn to look wary. "Reading the gossip rags or business dailies?"

"Business weeklies actually. My mother's a financial consultant and she raised me on bedtime stories where the Big Bad Wolf was a guy selling junk bonds and Prince Charming was a good investment partner."

Now, his gaze turned speculative. "I am surprised you chose the career you did then."

"Why? I invested in a personal asset I could enhance at will…my looks. I have worked my tail off to make them pay dividends and they have. That's a better investment than many business ventures over which I would have less control regarding the principle component my success would depend on."

"Have the dividends been worth the hard work?" he asked, his tone laced with reluctant respect.

"You tell me. Have your sacrifices been worth the business success?"

"Yes. What is a twenty-hour workday compared to my family's security?"

She liked that he thought in terms of family commitment. She only had her mom, but they were devoted to each other. Family came first. She sipped at her juice. "Thankfully, since graduating from university two years ago, I don't have to work twenty-hour days any longer."

"You went to university?"

"That surprises you?"

"Considering your dedication to your career, yes. The time and cost of your education would have taken a toll on what is clearly your main goal in life."

"I saw it that way, but Mom didn't. She has always supported my desire to be a model, but no model's career lasts forever and she maintained the better education I had, the better I would be at managing my career."

"Is that not what an agent is for?"

"A model who leaves her career to others is just looking for a trap door in the floor to fall through to obscurity."

"That sounds like a well-rehearsed rule."

"It is."

The warmth and approval were there again in his gaze. "I like you, Riddhima."

"I think I could like you, too, Armaan."

He threw his head back and laughed.

And something inside, suspiciously near her heart, melted.

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He was there when the shoot finished two hours later.

He'd been there the whole time, watching, asking questions of the ad campaign manager, of the photographer and even one or two questions of her. Was the ground too hot for her bare feet? He hadn't believed her when she said no and his displeasure at her supposed discomfort had been obvious. So much so that they'd quickly moved to a different shot. Then he'd asked what she'd thought of the ad campaign.

She'd requested a water break to tell him. She was impressed with the ad designer's vision and thought the campaign would be effective and didn't mind saying so.

"I think this ad would capture attention looking at the current trends." She remarked as the make up artist dabbed her face with a wet cloth.

"You've studied the market and its current trends?" Armaan asked looking curiously at her taking a step forward.

"If your job was to represent it, wouldn't you?"

"Yes, I suppose I would." He picked up the spray-on sunscreen and started to mist her with it. "You continually surprise me, Riddhima. It is a new experience for me with a woman."

"You must be spending time with the wrong ones."

"I think that is a given." He winked.

Her heart stopped. Literally. And then started pounding so hard and fast, she felt light-headed. This man was so bad for her equilibrium.

"I need to get back to work," she said, only sounding a tiny bit breathless.

"Have dinner with me tonight."

She'd been surprised he hadn't pushed the issue earlier, but the man knew his way around women. He'd given her time to think, time to decide if she wanted to see him some more. He'd dialed in right away that control was important to her and having time to make a decision would make her feel like she wasn't losing it. His perception should worry her, but she was too busy experiencing new feelings.

"Will you??" he asked again.

Riddhima felt herself being pulled deeper into the turmoil. Have dinner with him??? The ad manager was again giving her a knowing look. If she refused she would risk insulting him in front of all the crew members.

"Okay" she said a bit reluctantly.

"Great…I have to wrap a meeting in my office. I'll pick you up from the reception at 7pm. Be ready on time." He added winking mischievously.

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Armaan flexed his neck and got up stretching his arms. The meeting had been one hell of a gruesome one. He had to single handedly convince the investors that their new product was worth investing for. It was the first ever time the new brand was going to be launched under his name. So far it had been his father and grandfather. And despite proving himself successful and tactful for over so many years…..his dad's investors still did not trust him.

And that irritated him. His dad did not trust him, these people he did business with did not give his words the due respect it deserved…why the hell was he even trying to work so hard??

Armaan felt like just running off somewhere…..leaving all this behind. Sometimes he wished he could just start all over again…independently….rather then trying to live up to his father's name and expectations.

Glancing at his watch he noted it was almost 6…..he smiled .Time to wrap up and get ready for his dinner date tonight. He really looked forward to it. Unlike what the world and probably Riddhima thought he hadn't dated much past two years atleast. His tight schedule made sure he was ready to drop dead on the bed as soon as he would reach home. And the women he met never really interested him. They seemed too eager or too interested in the name Hamilton or too self absorbed.

And much as he disliked his father's interference in his life….he knew his dad was right about one issue. The Hamilton bride. She had to be elegant, sophisticated, warm, kind….and most importantly meek and laid back. She had to be ready to be play the role of a perfect hostess, the perfect wife and bear his children. She couldn't be fierce headed and independent. No her independence would definitely lead to problems in future.

That what the hell was he doing with a woman like Riddhima??

The question caught him by surprise as he paused to analyze his thoughts. He frowned. Did he really want a meek docile mouse as his life partner?? Or was it because it had been drilled in him for so long that he now sang the same song his dad wrote for him?? Did he really want a marriage like the one between his parents?? Did he really want a wife like his mother?? Much as he loved his mum he wished sometimes that she were more outgoing and stood up against his dad. She was too docile, too submissive and turned a blind eye to his father's sometimes outrageous exploits. Did he really want a wife like that??

Deep down he knew he did not. He knew he wanted the woman he chose to be equal. To be as determined as he was. But being a Hamilton he had to think about the family name too.

Then why was he playing with Riddhima? She was just the type of woman that would be instantly rejected by his father. That would never fit the role of a Hamilton bride. Then why was he pursuing her??

Because Armaan wanted to rebel. For once he wanted to do what he wanted rather then follow his father's set up rules. He wanted to explore, to live his life his way, by his own rules rather then those set by his dad. And heck he wasn't proposing Riddhima…just a date wont harm…..he thought pushing these away from his mind.

He didn't know where his chances would lead him as far as Riddhima was concerned. But heck for once he wanted to break the rules. He marched out determined to go for the dinner and paused to listen to messages his secretary had recorded.

"Ralph Murphy called. I asked him the purpose for his call and he wanted to know if Megalos-De Luca was still acquiring any additional luxury properties.''

Armaan's interest inched upward. If Ralph, a minor competitor, was calling him, then maybe he wanted to sell. Armaan smelled a bargain.

"I'll call him before I take lunch tomorrow. Anything else?''

Emma flipped through the message slips.

"Rita Kendall wants you to attend a benefit with her, and Tabitha Bennet wants to meet you for drinks on Thursday. Chad in marketing wants five minutes with you to get an opinion on a new idea.''

She paused.

"Oh, and Riddhima Gupta called because she can't make to dinner today. She sends her apologies.''

Armaan stared at Emma in disbelief.

"Riddhima ditched our dinner date?'' He had women practically crawling over broken glass to be with him and Riddhima had blown him off.

His temper prickled. "Did she leave an alternate day? Did she offer an excuse?'"


Emma gave him a blank look and glanced at the message again, shaking her head.

"I'm sorry, sir. She was only on the line for a moment and was very polite, but--''

He waved his hand.

"Never mind.'' He took the messages and turned toward his office then stopped abruptly.

"On second thought, get Riddhima's cell number and find out what her schedule is for the next few days, day and night." No woman messed it with him and got off just like that. The sooner this Riddhima Gupta learned this…the better he thought grimly.



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Okie update up atleast!! Just 25 hrs late.....😆 But here never the less!! Nothing much to say this time....pls do leave ur views...u knw i love them and they r my only inspiration!! Pls do leave ur views!! Will be looking forward to them!! Love u all!


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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved jia! only cause i was up so late for it!

will read it with an awake mind though!! :D

*edit*

oki much soner than i anticipated to be here, neither would you have guessed i reckon... apparently whatever chemicals go into creating a sleep mode in humans have long been sabotaged in me by whatever critically followed insomniac routines ive had 😆

so... erm jia, there's one thing i usually notice here and there into your parts, but somehow im fairly certain ive never explicitly mentioned the fact before... the fact that i notice how much research must go in from your end into very intricate yet easily ignored details... unless of course that you're MUCH more street smart about every damn field in the world 😆 the mention of a sunscreen, and her calculation of calories made me smile very wide... like i said, intricate, yet ignorable... i've noticed in other fics and updates before too, you do deal with the real side of chars not simply in terms of the emotions, and i appreciate that... alot of times, much more than appears to the eye goes into that seemingly perfect sketch :) in fact, if i daresay, i almost credit you a tad bit more for that stuff, emotions and chats you've been long capable of :D

oki, that said, i hate you to have asked me that question before i read the part, cause obviously i knew much before i read that she turned him down :( but i'll let you off, completely... cause i adored the part!

another not expected in general armaan we get and still as charming, you cant make him any less! as for ridhima, every time i read of her disturbed equilibrium, and you do use that with persistence, im laughing :D

yes for now, im really enjoying the whole track... also your self built assumptions of a crap part hence trashed!!! hoping you update this soon, its such a fresh track, enjoying it very much!

hugs (for this, and for appearing so aptly last night, the whole chat was long missed 😃]

nj :)
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*edited*
read ur reply jia...awww...ur are a true darling jia..love you.🤗.
and one very important thing..i can never be disappointed of ur updates coz u always exceed the expectations and surprise me...and well i can understand abt cravings of ice-creams, coz i recently faced that wen i was down with fever and cold...
coming back...
yayyyyy...an update atlast...but better late than never...
okay...well you really do suffer from Karan Mania...and it was very very clear from this update of urs jia.😉..
the way u described armaan and his aura...could imagine karan all the way thro it...
riddhima's state of mind at armaan's presence was well-worded..and she has already accepted of her attraction towards him...good...its better to face the truth that shutting it out..
and armaan's displeasure at the whole add sequence was really good..they way he was voicing it out was fab...and reading it, my respect for him has risen tremendously and there might be a good possibility that i hav started to adore this armaan much more than the others...he is a bit similar to ur other armaans but with difference...
loved riddhima's thoughts when armaan argued with the manager...anybody would hav felt that way..and especially riddhima...
his questions of enjoyment and work..her frosty replies....awesome girl...loved their convo...liked the way he kept insisting her for using his first name and for having juice...
She supposed the billionaire was something of a celebrity in his home country…like Hollywood actors back home. But Armaan Hamilton was a lot better looking. 😳😳
hmmmm...better looking....jia, i guess more than the character this referrence was with Karan...i totally agree with u yaar...and he is more better with ur descriptions...
the chat between them was really good...loved it totally....i was all smiles throughout it...
He threw his head back and laughed.And something inside, suspiciously near her heart, melted.
awwww....cho cute...
and then again their chat abt business was really good...
then..the way u described armaan's thoughts...his frustation and irritation was well-worded...and his thoughts abt riddhima was really superb..and the way he thought abt the type of wife was really cute...
ooooh...armaan being a rebel and all...interesting...
riddhima ditched the dinner..i did a double take reading it.😲.😲.but i somehow had a gut feeling that the date will not happen that very soon...and i was right...
and the angry-young-man armaan...well now m really excited abt the next part...
waiting for riddhima's reason of refusal and armaan's move...
awesome part jia....
love you loads!!!!!!*hugs*🤗
Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

reserved....yeah will read it after i COMPLETE my sleep :D

*why the hell would you post it now....its not your past midnite :( *

*edit* still upset about your early update...your sad attempt for an excuse didnt go so well with me and i was going to boycott commenting here...but alas..hubbz said i should...:D and hence!

okay...honestly...i don't have much to say...coz i liked the part tons...though i was kinda bored with their convo and i think i was up for reading sensuous instead...and got this one...which falls on the same lines but is still different...hmm!! i loved the last bit....where it hits him bad at the rejection...oh yeh..now we talking :P..
I missed ridz as a char..she was lost sumwer..even wit her thoughts i couldnt sense her real self..
Luved your liners...your are getting sooooo much better with tem :D

goodie..though i am craving more...affair..it is i badly want!

MUAH* tons of luv! :P

🤪 nij

ps...the blush was just a passing smilie.....see now i have a new one for ya :D



Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah Jia🤗 its really awesome one⭐️ superb😍so he is confused person 😕😕😕 want a wife who is self-confident😉 but not go against his family😛 plz continue it soon😛& thanks for the pm😉

"To you I give the whole me,
For I believe that you're my destiny,
To you I offer every best of my heart,
For I believe that you will value it......

One-day love is everything,
You ever dreamed would be,
Then suddenly it leaves you,
Saying 'I' instead of 'We'..

I want to share my whole life with you,
I want to hold you in my arms,
Loving you is whole life what I want to do."


"Milte Hai Acche Dost Sirf Khusnasibo Ko,
Isliye Humari Kismat Se Jalna Chod Dijiye,
Tamanna Ho Agar Humare Dost Se Mil Ne Ki,
To Jakar Aaina Dekh Lijiye."

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Kabhi sagar banke in aankho se behna,
Agar dost na huye to ajnabi hi rahena,
Par yaar kabhi alvida na kehna!"


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With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗
Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago

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