~One in a million~Pt3-pg27 NOTE-pg 31 17/07 - Page 12

Originally posted by: missypatel

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fab update JJ..chumaaz for yah! Thanku Nij....chumahz to u too :D⭐️ tis a short one yeh? i would like to see it just that..its interestin and strong to its own benefits...!the chars are so determined in their shoes yet sliding to the slightests nerves...!! Ahh i cant just seem to pen a short one yeah!! Its just isnt my cuppa of tea...my characters take 5 chapters to evovle out and introduce themslves..cant finish the tale then :D.contradiction....i like! :P Ahhhh u like it...then i have to put up my collars!!😆 ....ter was tis one line....i luved...."...prominent business journals hadn't begun to catch the essence of the man" ..not the line by itsels bt luved how u mde use of it...wit an impact yet ground level! :D ....mast hai babes!! Ahhh thankoo thankoo....hehe half of the time even um wondering if my lines make sense...if any at all..thanks darling!!😉

jaldi se sensuous update kar....welll bfr 10 atleast :) yeah before not 10 but 27th for suree :D

muuahh luvya..love u too morethen Nsm does :D

nij ☺️ Oh i forget to ask always...wats the blush or nowadays? Nsm effects??😆

Originally posted by: kashishk

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Hey Jia,
I am sorry for being late, I was just sick and still am. Aww babes hope ur better now!!😃
Anyways I don't know but I expected that this FF will extend😆 well we are talking about Jia right. Woah so everyone knew it and only i was fooling myself??🤣
Actually I never saw u complete ur short FF but I am so glad to see u continuing this one.Hehehe that short one will tae time...this toh def um continung :)
Back to the part, as usual It was fantastic, awesome, I loved it. thanks a zillion hun
U r one of the best writers here and you get hooked people with ur FFs. Awwww thanks coming from a fab writer like urself, um honoured!! Thankuuuu⭐️
So Ridhima already knew who he is😆.
I am really looking forward to see them falling in love.
Pls continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Luv u<333 Love u toobabes, thanks a ton for commenting!! Muah!!
Kashish

Originally posted by: spln

alright... yes i read the hot choc sauce over french vanilla ice cream n see it happen here jia!!!!...Haha the line stemmed over my continuos isce cream cravings...since the flu i was banned from touching them...poor me!! 😒 it felt like not just a description of what you said, but of the ciouple themselves... loved them.... him as much.... vijay malik was that 'hmph whatever' guy i dusted my hands over...Hehe trust me i can actually visualize u dusting ur hands over him and tappping ur heels if u wear them...looking disdianfully...wat imagination :D. such a weird git... so i mean, yes you pulled him well.... but armidz.... loved them!!! i like her not playing games with him but just keeping out of trouble....EJACTLY...um so glad i managed to getit right....she just wants to stay outta trouble which u very well knw isnt possible haha!!n i like his thick headed ego assuming its her way to get him n playing all by himself... her unbalanced equib.. cant wait to see where the tilt will take the two of them :D Thanks a ton, u liking them....boy ur feeding my ego here*kidding* its an honour on a serious note...but din mention it lest u roll ur eyes sighing exasperately at me :D

cheers hun!

nj

ps: @not being short.... you couldnt think anyone here groaned at that :D Oh yeah....no one gonna groan in my face..:D

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

So see you got anither one up ur sleeve jia, and yes I'll admit i laughed when you said short 😳, which i totally found adorable! <3 hehehe seems like i was the only big fool here :D. Great to see u here babes!! Hope ur good!

Yes Yes. I just the intro n part 1 and yes ...errr..i .... just fell inlove with it! I think this is goin to be the best thing next to Come back to me Baby 😉 Aww thankooooo muah!!

Flawwles as always! Love u loads hun,thanks a trillion!!

Natasha

P.S. man why we not catchin each other :( I knw, um wonderingthe same, blame it on time diff!! *Hmph*

Originally posted by: Jodubai

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Originally posted by: Robin_M

"like chocolate sauce pouring over French vanilla ice cream"
ahhh what a yummy metaphor! Hahaha blame it on my cravings for the very same..which i have been banned from eating nowadays......i seem to have lost it completely to describe him and mix it with my cravings...talk abt obseessions!!
jia im slightly drooling, ok maybe a lot drooling...not sure if it is because of this mouth watering description, or because of armaan hamilton...most probably a combination of both!!! hehe
armaan+french vanilla ice cream+chocolate sauce=robin wants! Haaa!!! Babes thats wat me to wants! So back out..me FIRST :D😆 Ok u cud make that Armaan=Karan there and now dun roll ur eyes thinking here she goes again..i cant help it ya!!😆

awesome begnning girl! you know when i saw u had updated, the first thing i noticed was that "short" was missing from the title...i cant say im surprised! lol but im proud of you for accepting facts ;) Yeah repeat session for the 5th time....(replied to 4 before u and all bringing up the same topic😆😆) Poor me...so yeah seems like i was the BIG FOOL out here.....😎 So ya accepted my folly..and made u all groan thinking one more never ending tale JIAA spare us :D


i LOVE the characters! u already know what im going to say about riddhima...do i really need to repeat myself?! Oh noo babe...its all recorded...infact i knw ur lines by heart!!😆

lol but yes, she is awesome! caree oriented and dont give a damn about men :D Yup totally Robin type :D. All m women r ur type...look at how much u influence me girl *sigh*🤓

armaan is a sweetheart! being rich and famous u would expect him to be arogant and cocky, but im so glad to see you doing something different with him in this ff. its so refreshing to see him so down to earth! so thanks for the pleasant change :) Haha um trying never to take the troden and worn path...lets see how far i go!! Thanks again...u knw ur a boon to us writers??🤗


i already dislike his father, hes just blahhh. im actually reading this novel right now and the relationship between armaan and his father really reminds me of the father-son relationship in the book! why is it that rich successfull fathers are so arrogant and treat their sons like the are never good enough? and whats with them having to have the 'suitable' daughter-in-law...its the son who has to marry and live his life with the bride, not the father! shesh
so very well done in portraying this typical rich father-son relationship jia! Hehe yeah i knw thats typical....but um plnning to bring it out more and explore them...dunno i seem to have developed some fascination for exploring two strongheaded jerks...lets see.


k enough of me...looking forward to the development, continue soon! Thanku a zillion babe....no need to mention...that love u loads...made y day as always!!⭐️

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Originally posted by: mahalakshmi.P.

hey jia just now read the part it was too good........... 👏
so armi a rich guy but ridz rejects his offer of dinner after knowing him tats just like her............ 😆
so wat r ur plans next i hope u have definitely sumthng different in the bag............. 😉 😉 😉
so will wait for it............. 😃