The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#411

@sumi, sowmya: thank you! 😊

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#412

@monu: hey Monu! I'm alryt... how abt you? *hugs back* I am happy you liked the update... thanks so much dear.

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#413

hey debby what an update man, it was superb man ,your writing style

is very unique which has its own diversity and its soo brillinatly pulled off, its not easy to give importance to all the characters and not effect the momentum of the story but you not only given equal importance to all the characters but use this as a strenght to take the story forward, the update was adorable, my favourite bit was the mayur bit again, excellent workkkkkkkkk debs, keep it up.

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

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@Senny
Hey Senny.. how r ya doing? Thanks a lot yar.... I am glad you liked the momentum of the story considering it isnt exclusive for one couple. Mayur were my favourite too... ;) Thanks so much sweetheart... love you.

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416391

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hiiiiiiiii debby!!!

hows u??? hope ur doing well!

ahh.....this update.....what can i say? i was fantabulous, outstanding, amazing, brilliant, excellent, marvelous!!!

the small sajan scene at the beginning was so cute!! luved sam yaar....his dialouges were so in character!

awww.....sam finally realized that he behaved really badly wid benji and asked for forgiveness!! i love there frndship yaar!!

the gunur convo was heavenly!! i luved that teer wala dialouge...and gunji blushing....ahh!!

mayur.....finally....did i ever tell u how much i luv the mayur in ur FF? they r awesome!!! i've gotta say this that i luv the mayur in ur FF more than in any other one!!

LOL.....nups was just toooooo gud!! luved how she was teasing mayu abt the ranbir in morena and poor him yaar.....i cud literally imagine his thoughts and feelings....

Awwww….uday is such a caring bro….even though dia treats him quite badly he still loves her and was really worried abt her!!

the abhay dia scene was also damn gud!!! Enjoyed it a lot!!

Radz-rahul convo was hilarious!! both rahul and radz wud hav got so irritated..radz wid rahul calling he so many times and rahul for her going on abt how she didn't want to get married to him….LOL…..OMG adi…radz must hav scared him like anything with her shouting so much!! there story is moving quite fast!! can't wait to see how they realize its love!

LOVED the update!!

continue soon.....

Edited by drishti_sajan - 16 years ago

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sheena

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Posted: 16 years ago

#416

wow!awesome sweetz!! loved the update!!MayUr scenes were very cute!!

Keep rocking!!

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Rukhsar Ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#417

that was awesome aww mayank and nupur are adorable and amazing i cannot wait for the next part

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#418

@sheena: thanks so much sweetie! *hugs* 🤗

@anjalika: thank you.. 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

#419

hiii debby!!

updated my comments on pg 58!

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debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

hiiiiiiiii debby!!!

hows u??? hope ur doing well!
Hey Drishti! Yeah, I'm fine.. hope u r good too. 😊

ahh.....this update.....what can i say? i was fantabulous, outstanding, amazing, brilliant, excellent, marvelous!!! Thanks so much sweetie!

the small sajan scene at the beginning was so cute!! luved sam yaar....his dialouges were so in character!

awww.....sam finally realized that he behaved really badly wid benji and asked for forgiveness!! i love there frndship yaar!!

Sam is adorable in his own unique way; I wish d one on the show would realize he loves her soon. Yeah me too, Sam-Benji rock! Glad u liked them here too. 😊

the gunur convo was heavenly!! i luved that teer wala dialouge...and gunji blushing....ahh!!

mayur.....finally....did i ever tell u how much i luv the mayur in ur FF? they r awesome!!! i've gotta say this that i luv the mayur in ur FF more than in any other one!!

🤗 Thanks a ton! That is a terrific compliment... 😃

LOL.....nups was just toooooo gud!! luved how she was teasing mayu abt the ranbir in morena and poor him yaar.....i cud literally imagine his thoughts and feelings....
LOL, a jealous Mayu makes for good viewing na? 😆

Awwww-.uday is such a caring bro-.even though dia treats him quite badly he still loves her and was really worried abt her!!
I know, Uday is so sweet... no matter how pea brained, he has his heart in the right place.

the abhay dia scene was also damn gud!!! Enjoyed it a lot!!

Radz-rahul convo was hilarious!! both rahul and radz wud hav got so irritated..radz wid rahul calling he so many times and rahul for her going on abt how she didn't want to get married to him.LOL..OMG adi radz must hav scared him like anything with her shouting so much!! there story is moving quite fast!! can't wait to see how they realize its love!
Thanks Drishti! Yeah, their story is moving fast... love will come soon 😊 I am really happy you enjoyed all the characters and their tracks... It means a lot to me.

LOVED the update!!

continue soon.....