The story goes on II - FF *Last Part* Pg 60

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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 16 years ago

#431

hey dear your ending was wonderful.. will miss your FF dear...

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#432

Thanks so much Preethi..!! 😊

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#433

awww tum ne kahtam kar diii awesome ending yaar......

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#434

oh, it ended already, i will miss this ff so much, it was my favourite👏

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#435

@Lekha
Thanks sweetie... glad u liked it. :)

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#436

nice ending will miss it

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#437

Mind? Debs, you wrote me so sweet, and so entertaining! Why would I mind at all? And RadzAdi ki kahaani? What's their story? Debs!

I shall be back to edit this. Remind me? Send me a PM or something. Lol. It's 1am, and I need to sleep!

*edited*

You know me too well. I had to come back and edit this immediately after switching the laptop on. 😆

What a last part, no airs or frills about it, just the couples going on with their lives. I loved the realism of it, it gives the air that, this story is over, but their story, their lives, will still carry one. And it's the mark of a good writer I think. 😉 Kudos to you Debs!

The SaJan bit was so realistic, because Gunjan is reserved, and she would not want the more vibrant and loud Sammy proclaiming to the world how he feels about her, because she still does not like so much attention, and the friendship between Gunjan and Benji was nicely portrayed her, very subtly. You handled the entire scene very well.

Dia has done a lot of growing up in your fic, which is nice to see. I loved the underplay, the hint of a possible AbhayDia somewhere in the future, now that both have seen that there is more to the other than they initially thought.

MayUr was perfectly done, as always. You have a way with them, keeping the playfulness of the relationship and the argumentative streak in the two, and the romantic aspect of it all balanced. Loved the appearance of Mayank ki Mummy.

One thing I'm about to cry about is, what's RadzAdi's full story? How'd they reach that point? Debby! Tell me!

I'm going to miss this FF. I do hope you start something new soon, and whenever you do, don't wait for me to find it, you add me to the PM list immediately!

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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Sejuty

@sejusej

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#438

your ff was kind of habit to me, i will miss it, really..... it was wonderful... but feeling sad, as it was your last update... please start a new one, with a new story of sajan and mayur...

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Sejuty

@sejusej

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#439

your ff was kind of habit to me, i will miss it, really..... it was wonderful... but feeling sad, as it was your last update... please start a new one, with a new story of sajan and mayur...