Tumse Hi (DMG + Mayur FF) (18/9) Part 13 Pg 54 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys
Sorry for not updatind
Actually my stupid computer has got some major problem and cannot be repaired
I am sending this note from my uncle's house
Pray that i'll be able to continue soon
I think it will take 2 to 3 months to get a new system
sorry once again
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just read ur ff its awesome.how were ur exams??its so sad ur comp konked of. i hope u are able to post the next part really soon.could u plss add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi..
can you add me to your pm list plzzz???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2
ON THE ROAD

Ridhima: Batao na armaan hum kahan jaa rahe hain

Armaan:shaadi karne

Ridhima:Shut up Armaan

Armaan: Bas Basket dekho pohanch gaye(he stopped the car in front of a huge mansion)

Ridhima: Armaan ye kiska ghar hai?

Armaan: Ye mera sorry(while hugging her from back)Humara ghar hai Chalein

As ridhima was really surprised she just nodded

Armaan opened the door of the house and held Ridhima's hand and both entered the same time. As they entered Ridhima was again taken by a surprise as thousand of rose petals start falling on both of them then she saw a path made up of the red rose petals Ridhima had tears in hereyes

Armaan kya yaar Basket tumne rona shuru kardia abhi to pura ghar dekhna hai phir baad mein apna water tank khol lene ab chalo

Ridhima hit armann on his hand and clearing her tears said chalo

ON THE DINING TABLE AT GAREWAL MANSION

Rahul: Muskaan paratha

Muskaan: (coming out of the kitchen)Laa rahi hoon rahul

Rahul: Jaldi kar na

Muskaan (while sitting and giving her the paratha) Pakar besabra(impatient) kahin ka

Rahul: Main besabra? Abhi khud hi to keh rahi thin k der ho rahi

Muskaan: Haan to wo to main tujhe jagaane k liye keh rahi thi tu sota hi aise ghore bech kar hai.Ghore bech kar nahin balke tu to poora astabal(place where horses are kept) bech kar sota hai

Rahul:Main astabal bech k sota hoon to tu konsa bahut sharafat ke saath soti hai poori raat apne besure kharate(snor) sunaati hai

Muskaan: Rahul I Don't snore ok (getting of her chair with the plate in her hand as if she was about to throw it towards rahul)

Rahul(In a scared voice):Acha baba tu thori kharate leti hai balki wo to main leta hoon

Muskaan( sitting back): Ab aaya na oonth(camel) pahar ke neeche

After finishing their breakfast both cleared the table, cleaned the dishes and headed towards sanjeevani.

IN THE CAR

Rahul: Muskaan today I am so exited today aaj humari internship khatam ho rahi

Muskaan:Oye haan Rahul kitna maza aaye ga na hum senior doctors honge aur dr. Kirti bhi ab hume kuch nahin kahein gi

Rahul: Lekin ik baat ka dukh hai ab hum sab par zimidaari bhi barh jayein gi aur humein apni shararatein bhi kam karni hogi

Muskaan: Haan yaar ab hume dr. Kirti ki tarhan ik intern ki tolli ko sambhalna pare ga

Rahul: Lekin maza bhi to aaye ga un interns per apna rob jamakar

Muskaan: Oye kankhajoore ye to tune bilkul theek kaha maza to bahut aaye ga(laughing the world's weirdest laugh)

JOSHI'S

Anjali: Atul main ne Arun to tayar kar dia hai tum usse pakro main change karke aati hoon

Atul(taking Arun in his hands): Theek hai Anjali tum jao main hoon na mere gulab ke phool ke paas

Anjali: Whatever

After 15 minutes Anjali came out of the washroom wearing a yellow saree. Atul starts looking at her actually was staring her

Anjali: Atul aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Atul: Anjali aaj tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Anjali: Atul tell me something new

Atul: Nahin waqai aaj tum bilkul gende ka phool lag rahi ho

Anjali: Thanks Atul ab chalien late ho raha hai

Atul: Tum chalo mein Arun aur us ka bottle le ke atta hoon

INSIDE MALIK MANSION

After showing the house to ridhima

Armaan: Chalo tumhe tumhara kitchen dikhaoon

Ridhima: Okay

As they entered the kitchen Ridhima was astonished to see the sight before her

The whole kitchen floor was filled petals of rose and candles were kept at the corners near the walls in between was a dining table for two on which breakfast was set

Ridhima was now having tears in her eyes While seeing the whole house she somehow controlled them but the scene which was infront of her made them to come out of her eyes

Armaan: Abe yeh kya basket tumne phir rona shuru kar diya. Tum please rona band karo

Ridhima: I love you armaan

These three words which she just said had a lot of depth in them.Her tone reflected her feelings which were of the happiness and joy that she got a person in her life who loved her a lot even more than his life and can do anything to make her happy

ARman: I love you too basket ab chalien mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai

Ridhima:chalo

After having breakfasat they headed towards sanjeevani as they were getting late

IN THE CAR


Armaan: To basket tumhe tumhara hone waala ghar kaisa laga? Dekho agar koi problem hai to mujhe abhi bata do main wo tumhare mutabiq(according) theek kara doon ga

Ridhima: No Armaan its perfect. Tumhe pata hai main ne apne sapne main aisa ghar dekha tha. Thanks for making my dream come true

Armaan: Ridhima mujhe thanks keh kar paraya na karo

Ridhima: Sorry Armaan

Armaan: Phir sorry ab kya tumhe written note dena pare ga k humare relation mein thanks aur sorry ki koi jagaah nahin hai Ridhima you know k main ne jo bhi kia hai tumhari khushi ke liye kia hai aur tum khush hogi to mujhe khushi mile gi.Kya koi apni khushi ke liye kiye hue kaam per apne aap ko thanks bolta hai????

Ridhima: Acha baba aaj se no sorry no thank you ok

Armaan:Ok

By the time both of them have reached sanjeevani

INSIDE THE HALL OF SANJEEVANI

Nikita: Kahan reh gayye yeh sab ab tak to aa jana chahiye thaa (just then armaan and ridhima entered the hall laughing on something) There you are I have been waiting for both of you since half hour kahan the tum dono pata tha na k aaj humari internship khatam ho rahi hai aur tum dono ab aa rahe ho Rahul Muskaan bhi nahin aaye abhi tak tumhe kuch pata hai unke bare mein abhi thori der mein program start hone wala hai aur tum log ho ke apne romance mein lage hue ho

Armaan:kya hua nikki itne gusse mein kyun ha??

Nikita: Yeh pooch kya nahin hua?

Armaan: Chal nikki yehoi bata de k kya nahin hua

Nikita: Armaan dekho mere pehle hi dimgha phera (turnover) Hua hai mujhe aur tangmat karo

Armaan: Lo Ridhima dekho jo baat hume derh(1 and a half) saal se pata hai wo isko aaj pata chala hai

Ridhima: Armaan zip it up

Armaan: Lekin Ridhima tumhare dress ki zip to pehle se hi band hai

Ridhima gave him an angry look and ARmaan stop talking

Ridhima:Haan nikki bata kya hua?

Nikki: Tujhe Pata nahin hai aaj subah kya hua??

FLASHBACK

Nikki was in her bed when she heard a big bang

Nikki(scared): Kaun hai??

Voice: Abe adhi raat ko mere ilaava aur kaun ho sakta hai?

Nikki: Abhi tum yahan itni subah subah kya kar rahe ho?

Abhi: Jogging kar raha. Obviously tum se milne aaya hoon

NikKi: Ye time hai kisi ke ghar aane ka??

Abhi: Ik to itni mushkilon se main pipe charh kar tumhare room mein aaya hoon aur tum mujhe appreciate karne ke bajae daant rahi ho?

Nikki: Haan ho rahi hoon gussa, Waise tum pipe se kyun aaye ho?

Abhi: Kyun Armaan bhi to Ridhima se pipeline ke zariye milne jaata hai

Nikki: Wo is liye kyun ki Ridhima apni family ke saath rehti hai akele nahin

Abhi: To tum kyon akeli rehti ho?

Nikki: To phir kahan jaoon?

Abhi: Uska bhi solution hai.

Nikki: Kya????

Abhi(On his knees): Nikki will you marry me?

Precap:

The music starts and the song proceeds

Chalte chalte phir
kahan aagaye

sapno k badal her soo chaa gaye Chalte chalte phir
kahan aagaye.............
Finally I updated my ff
please do read and send a reply atleast of a word only beacause it really encourages me
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
great part
love AN
Abhi propsed to her
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Javeria
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey nice prt. Continue soon!!

Thanks for commenting
Will update soon mat e on sunday
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: 26javey26

great part

love AN
Abhi propsed to her
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Javeria

Thanks for replying
Will continue on sunday
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
hi zoya...thx for the pm....
beautiful update...love all the couples..atul-anjali, abhi-nikki, rahul-muskaan and of course armaan-riddhima...they are so cute...
hope you continue soon
take care
emma
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi, cn u add me 2 ur pm list
gr8 ff👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy
great part
loved it
plz cont soon
luv
komal
Edited by komal793 - 16 years ago

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