Tumse Hi (DMG + Mayur FF) (18/9) Part 13 Pg 54 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey zoya plz dnt say this plz we lv ur ff yaar it ws vry cute prt funloving toooooooo masti wala specially whn muski ws running behind ar wth her chappals heheh i ws laughing it ws damm gud abhi nikki fighting hehehe lvd it nd precap more intresting cnt wait to read more cont soooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSG4lyf

gr8 part zoya👏👏👏Thanks and sorry for not sendin you pm actually when I was sending the pms the light went and I am now online as I was in the school

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks For appreciating
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part
AN are so cute
thanks for the pm
sorry for the late replay had my exam
cont soon
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Part 4

Nikki:I am sorry and yes

Abhi:I am Sorry

Nikki and abhi both together

Abhi: Yes matlab????

Nikki:Sorry kis liye????then Nikki indicates abhi that he should say first

Abhi:Sorry is liye kyunki mujhe us waqt tumhare ghar nahin aana chahiye tha.Waise tumne yes kis liye bola???

Nikki(Shying):Wo tumne raat ko jo sawaal kiya tha us ka answer Yes

Abhi: Acha (then understanding her meaning) Yes means Yes U mean to say for marrying me yes

Nikki nodded

Abhi in excitement picks her up in his arms

Abhi: Nikki u made my day Are you sure na??

Nikki:Ofcourse abhi ab mujhe niche utaaro

Abhi:Oh Sorry Saying this he put her down

Abhi(hugging her):Thanks nIkki(was about to kiss her on her forehead)

Armaan: Ab aage kuch mat karna hum sab yahin hain

Abhi:Abe yaar Armaan tera problem kya hai?

Armaan: Mera problem nahin ye pooch k meri kya problems hai.Acha choro mat pooch main hi bata deta hoon.

No 1 Meri abhi tak shaadi nahin hui hai

No 2 Mere sasur jee bahut gusse waale hain samajh nahin aa raha hai ke kaise unn ke pass ja kar unki beti ka haath mango(Ridhima stars blushing on seeing her blush ARmaan says)

No 3 Aur sab se bari problem ki meri hone wali wife bahut sharmaati hai

Anjali: Papa se sagai tak ki to baat karne ki himmat to hai nahin aur keh rahe ho hone waali biwi .

Armaan: Kya karoon saali sahiba tumhare papa ke saamne jate hi meri haawaiyaan ur jaati hain aur unhe mujhe dekhte hi gussa aa jata hai(keeping his head on nikki's shoulder making his bechaara face)

Rahul: Ab agar teri nutanki khatam ho gayye hai tou sab chalein.

Armaan: Haan to maine kahaan roka hai?

All were about to go when Abhi Said

Abhi: guys aaj ki treat meri taraf se

Armaan: Wo to tu na bhi kehta to hum ne tujh se hi leni thi

RahuL;Aur nahin to kya but i feel really bad for you

Abhi:Why?

Rahul:Beta shaadi karle phir pata chale ga ke kaise ameer se ameer tareen aadmi bhi kaise ghulam ban jata hai

Muskaan:Kuch kaha tume Rahul(Showing fake anger)

Rahul(In a scared voice):Nahin aur waise bhi main apni raye(view)Thori de raha tha ye to ye to haan Armaan ne mujh se kaha tha

Armaan:maine kab kaha

Ridhima:Tumne kaha tha ye Rahul ko??

Armaan:NAhin jaanu baby main aisa keh sakta hoon kya ye to ye to Atul ne kaha tha dekho main hori aisa kahoon ga meri shaadi thori hui hai Ye atul ne hi kaha tha

Atul was playing And talking with ARun suddenly stopped

ATul:MAine aisa kuch nahin kaha tha ANjali

Anjali:I know Atul aur guys stop It aur chalo

Rahul Haan Haan Chalo Muskaan

Muskaan:Huh(and goes towards the car angrily)

Armaan(Laughing):mujhe tune Phasaya(trap) Tha na ab maza(Then turns toward ridhima)Chalo Ridhima

Ridhima:Huh and goe towards armaan's car while Rahul start laughin seeing Armaan's face

All proceed towards the parking place with Raul and Armaan try to manaofy their ladies

RM go to their home

AA along with arun make their way towards their house

Abhimanyu had some work in hospital so nikki goes with AR as her car was in work shop

AT RAHUL MUSKAAN'S HOUSE 6:30 PM

Rahul(shouting):Muskaan meri socks kahan rakhi hain??

Muskaan(from kitchen): Abe wahin to pari hain teri cupboard mein

Rahul: Mujhe to nahin mil rahin

Muskaan(now coming to the room):Andhe ankhon se dekha kar(now opening the cupboard)yahin to rakhi thi kahan chali gayyen???

Rahul(imitating her): Ankhon se dekha kar. Mil gayye tujhe ankhon se dekhne par??

Muskaan: Oye Rahul tu na meri nakal utarna bandh kar

Rahul: Mujhe bhi koi shauk nahin hai tujh bandariya ki nakal utaarne ka

Muskaan: Kya kaha tune bandariya tujhe to main batati hoon(saying this she jumped on Rahul.As he was standing near the bed both fell on the bed with Muskaan on her)

Rahul: To muskaan tu kuch bata rahi thi(now rahul was on her)

Muskaan(blushing badly): Uth na Rahul late ho raha ha

Rahul: Sochta hoon Armaan ko mana kar doon ke hum nahin aa rahe

Muskaan(now pushing him): Kya Rahul uth na

Rahul: Acha uth raha hoon

Muskaan(while getting up):Chal main tere socks dhoond doon(her eyes fall on Rahul's foot)Rahul tune to socks pehne hue hain.

Rahul: Haan to maine to aise hi tujhe bulane ke liye kaha tha

Muskaan(saw the clock):7 baj gayye Rahul main chali tayyar hone

After getting ready both headed towards blue lounge

AT THE DOOR OF GUPTA MANSION

Armaan(ringing the bell continuosly with his back towards the door):Kahan reh gayye yeh basket ki bachchi

A voice came:Kuch kaha aapne Dr.Armaan

Armaan (on hearing the voice freezed at the point and started cursing Himself in his mind):Baj gayye band Dude tujhe aqal nahin hai kya??

Shashank:Kahan kho gayye hain aap Dr.

Armaan(Controlling his fear):kahin nahin sir

Shashank: Ridhima abhi tayyar nahin hui to aap andar aa jayein

Armaan(nervously):Yes Sir

Shashank and Armaan in the living room

Shashank:Acha hua Dr.Armaan jo aap ridhima ko lene aaye mujhe aapse koi baat karni thi

ARmaan:App ko mujhse kya baat karni hai sasu I mean sir

Shashank:Well Dr.Armaan aap mujhe jis naam se pukaarte hain us ke liye aap ko meri beti se shaadi bhi to karni pare gi na to

Armaan(cutting him):Sir shaadi itni jaldi?(lekin dil mein laddu phoot rahe hote hain)

Shashank:Dr. ARmaan main shaadi ki nahin sagai ki baat kar raha hoon

Thank you all for your comments Do comment on this part also Sorry I can't send pms as I am going out of town Will update The next part after 8 or 9 days
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really gud plz contd soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey zoya woho yaar armaan ki to bachti bachti rehgayi band hehehe he ws so scard frm him heheh lvd tht yaar nd kya wah wah maza aa gaya bomb phod dala seriously maza aa gaya yaar nd rahul hehe he ws scard frm muski bechara shadi karke phas gaya acha khasa tha kuwara hehe song tha........he mde ar in trouble or bechara atul ko phasa diya hehe lvd tht so much now cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey awesome part. Continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really gud plz contd soon

Thanks for commenting
It means a lot
As i have said I'll continue after 8-9 days
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey zoya Hey sweetu......woho yaar armaan ki to bachti bachti rehgayi band hehehe he ws so scard frm him heheh lvd tht yaar Thanks for liking it..........nd kya wah wah maza aa gaya bomb phod dala seriously maza aa gaya yaar nd rahul hehe he ws scard frm muski bechara shadi karke phas gaya acha khasa tha kuwara hehe song tha........he mde ar in trouble or bechara atul ko phasa diya hehe lvd tht so much now cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooon Will try to
luv yachna Luv u 2 for your comments

Take Care
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