Tumse Hi (DMG + Mayur FF) (18/9) Part 13 Pg 54 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 part .thanx for the PM . waiting for the next part.wanna read why niki in a bad mood if abhi asked to marry her.plz update the dont tale toooooooooo long to update the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: KSG4lyf

hi, cn u add me 2 ur pm list Sure why not

gr8 ff👏Really glad that you liked it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: komal793

heyy Heyy sweety

great part Thank you
loved it
plz cont soon Try to update today
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey zoya srry fr late commenting jst read it now nd it ws fabulous yaar wo their home nd ar hehehe fir apni water tank khole na haha it ws mindblowing yaar nd nikki outburst on thm nd abhi following armaan vry gud keep it up cnt wait cont soooooon ridz is soo lucky to hv him bth are lucky
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

Ridhima: Phir tune kya kaha?

Nikki: Main uss time itni nervous ho gayi thi ke main Abhi per chillane (shout) lagi aur wo wahan se naraaz ho kar chala gaya

Ridhima: Per tu us per chillai kyun?

Nikki: Mujhe laga ke wo mazaak kar raha hai

Armaan: Tum larkiyon ki yehi problem hai ke tum log kabhi bhi kisi ki sachi feelings samajh nahin sakti.

Nikki: Abhi ne bhi yehi kaha tha. Ridhima bata na mein kya karoon?

Ridhima : Karna kya jaake us se maafi mang le.

Rahul: Kis se maafi mangni hai??

Armaan: Acha hua Rahul jo tu aa gaya main kitna bore ho raha tha

Ridhima: Armaan idher itna bara masla ho gaya hai aur tumhe bore hone ki parri hui hai

Armaan : to main ne kaha tha Nikki se Abhi ko yeh kehne ke liye k Abhi mujhe tum se itne ghatiya mazaak ki umeed nahin thi?

Nikki: Wait a minute. Maine to nahin bataya ke mene Abhi se kya kaha tha to tumhe kisne bataya?

Abhi: Maine bataya tumhe koi problem hai?

Nikki: Abhi tumne humari personal baat Armaan ko bata di?

Abhi: Ab wo baat personal ho gayi? Jab Ridhima ke samne dhindhora peet rahi thin tab wo baat personal nahin thi?

Nikki: To kya? Ridhima meri friend hai main usse jo chahoon bataoon

Abhi: To Armaan bhi mera dost hai main bhi usse jo chahoon bata sakta hoon

Rahul Muskaan Together: Shut Up

Muskaan: Tum log na Armaan Ridhima ki na carbon copy hai wo dono bhi aise hi ladte the

Rahul: Haan mujhe yaad hai inki lariyaan aisi hoti thi jinse lagta tha ke dono janam janam k dushman ho

Armaan: Correct yourself janam janm ke dushman nahin janam janam ke premi(keeping his hand around her waist)

Ridhima(while removing his arm): Ladte waqt to yaad nahin aata ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho

Muskaan: Chud na Ridhima chal ke baith jaate hain yeh larke to hote hi aise hain

Rahul: Tum larkiyan to jaise doodh ki dholi ho nas

Armaan: Guys ab tum dono na shuru kar dena chalo chalke baith te hain

They all go to their seats while Abhi moves towards the stage as he is the senior doctor

Armaan and Ridhima reached first and saw Atul and Anjali

Armaan: Champ mere bhai kaisa hai? Aur mera prince kaisa hai (taking Arun in his hands)

Atul: Main to theek hoon aur tera prince bhi tere haathon mein aa kar dekh kaise muskura raha hai

Anjali(on seeing Ridz hugged her):Kahan the tum log??

Ridhima (blushing): De kahin nahin bas traffic zyada thi

Anjali(Knew she was lying): Traffic jab hum aa rahe tab to nahin thi. Shayad Armaan aur tumhe saath dekh kar aa gaya hoga

Ridhima: Di

Muskaan: Aur Anjali Atul sab changa?

Atul: Changa hi changa hai muskaan tu bata tu kaisi hai?

Muskaan: Main bhi theek hoon.

They all stop talking and settle down as the ceremony begins

Dr Shasank: Good morning everyone. As you all know today the batch of interns who came to sanjeevani 3 years ago are finally gonna be senior doctors. The incharge of the interns Dr.Kirti will give the doctor their certificates for completing their internship.

After receiving the certificates Rahul & Armaan came to the stage and announced that they are going to perform on a song to re-live the past moments

The music starts and the song proceeds

Chalte chalte phir
kahan aagaye

The boys coming on the stage(Armaan, Atul, Rahul)
sapno k badal her soo chaa gaye

Waving their hands in air
Chalte chalte phir
kahan aagaye.............

Now the girls enter and join the boys(Ridhima, Anjali, Muskaan )
sapno k badal her soo chaa gaye.......

Doing the same step as the boy did

Waving their hands in the air
Aagey hee aagey her pal bhage

The Boys hold hand of their partners and come a little forward
Chor aaye hain duniya peechey

The boys with their other hand doing the step matching the words
dil mera jhoomye Aasman ko choome ab hosh hai na kuch pata

All six them first take a turn and then raise their hands up

hoo hooo piya piyaaaa.... laagey na jiyaa jiyaaa..

the boys start dancing with the girls holding them in their arms
hoo hooo piya piyaaaa.... laagey na jiyaa jiyaaa..

Kuch khuwab hainnnnnnn, Kuch manzilein

AR come in front hand in hand
Beete lamhon ki zanjeerein

At a little distance RM are shown fighting with each other as they were showing AR's past picture
Yadein hain aissi ye bhula na sakey.....

AR look in each otherseyes getting lost AA come and shake them
Bebas hain.... Peechey jaa na sakeyyyy......

AR go back to their place and the other four come ahead
Aagey hee aagye....... jhoomein ....sun le.... sadaa...

Atul and rahul holding muski and anjy hands respectively
tor liye taarey saaare aarey ham karein ye khataaa

Then took turn around the girls and sitting on their knees

give girls their hands
Aagey hee aagye....... jhoomein ....sun le too dil ki sada sadaa...

AR also join them
Dil mera jhoomein..... choomey hosh hai na kuch hai pata
moving with the words
Aagey hee aagye her dor bhaagey...
chor aaye hain duniya peecheyyy..
Dil mera jhoomey aasmaan ko choomey..ab hosh hai na kuch pata
Hoo oo piyaa piyaaa, laaagye na jiyaa jiyaa
hoo hooo piya piyaaaa.... laagey na jiyaa jiyaaa..
Ho oooooooo Piyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Ho oooooooo Piyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Laagye na Jiyaaaaaaaaa
Laaagye na jiyaaaaaaa

The hall gets filled with claps and appreciation

Rahul after the performance announced that he and his dosts his bhais his yaars have organized a small party at the blue lounge(I don't know the place exists or not) for the gang and everyone should be at the venue at 8

Ridhima: Baqi sab to theek hai per main kaise aaon gi? Rahul aisa karna tum mujhe pick kar lena

Rahul: Sure why not

Armaan: Abe kya sure why not? Rahul shayad tu bhool raha hai ke teri muskaan se shaadi ho chuki hai. Ab tou Ridhima ko line marna bandh kar. Aur tum(turning towards ridhima) main mar gaya hoon kya jot um is kankhajoore ko keh rahi ho tumhe pick karne ko??

Muskaan: Oye armaan ke bache kya kahan tune?? Mere pati ko kankhajoora sirf main keh sakti hoon aur koi nahin.

Armaan: Kya karle gi tu main kahoon ga usse kankhajoora

Muskaan(taking of her sandle starts running after Armaan and others start laughing)Ab pata chala kya karoon gi

Armaan(while running): Acha baba ghalti ho gayee maaf kar dejiye is gustakh ko

Muskaan(wearing her sandles):Ja ja maharani muskaan devi ne tujh dusht ko maaf kiya

Abhi taking advantage of the situation held nikki's hand and took her to a side

Abhi: Nikki I want to say something

Nikki:Mujhe bhi tumse baat karni hai

Abhi:Lekin meri baat zyada zaroori hai

Nikki:Abhi tum meri baat sunr bina kaise keh sakte ho ke wo zaroori nahin hai

Abhi:Acha bab hum aisa kaarte hain dono saath saath mein apni baat kehte hai

Nikki:Okay

Abhi:I'll Count upto 3 Okay 1 2 3

Precap:

Armaan(ringing the bell continuosly with his back towards the door):Kahan reh gayye yeh basket ki bachchi

A voice came:Kuch kaha aapne Dr.Armaan

Armaan (on hearing the voice freezed at the point and started cursing Himself in his mind):Baj gayye band Dude tujhe aqal nahin hai kya??

Shashank:Kahan kho gayye hain aap Dr.

Armaan(Controlling his fear):kahin nahin sir

Please guys comment on it
If I don't get enough comments I think i should not write any furthur
Please silent readers(If any) do comment as it encourages a lot
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Edited by Zoya_01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey zoya plz dnt say this plz we lv ur ff yaar it ws vry cute prt funloving toooooooo masti wala specially whn muski ws running behind ar wth her chappals heheh i ws laughing it ws damm gud abhi nikki fighting hehehe lvd it nd precap more intresting cnt wait to read more cont soooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was really gud plz contd soon n add me in the pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part precap is funny and waitin to see shashank's reaction and pls pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice part.AN fights were cute.thx for the PM.cont soon and dont think abt winding up the ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..... i finished readin ur ff. n its awesum. luv da part.
aftr readin da precap cant wa8 4 da next part.
plz continue soooooooooooooooon.

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