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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Sorry for late comments.Actually,I'm very busy.Anyways, wonderful update.I loved the three parts.It's awesome.Now, veer and shera both are missing each other .I'm looking forward to their relation ship.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank u sooooo much dear for the wonderful updates
lovely parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 16:
a cute brown haired button nosed lil 8 year old boy.. with chocolate brown sparkling eyes n slim pink cute lips.. veer narrowed his eyes.. the boy was dressed in a royal suit made from cheap cotton.. it was obvious that he wanted to be a prince.. he blinked his eyes n smiled at veer.. veer enlarged his eyes.. seeing him.. and without another glance.. he asked:
"KYA?" (V)
"Haan.. humare jaabaaz no javan kisi khoobsurat afsara ne tera dill chura liya hain" he opened his tiny arms and spread them into the air n pointed to veer.. veer just gazed in complete confusion.. n the boy had an "i can make you unconfused" look on him..
"kya hua veer yudh kya yeh sachai itni khatin hai ke app isse inta door bhagna chahte...pyaar ek aisa safar jiski koi manzil nahi.. par akkir hum bhi uss bala ko dekhna chahte hai jisne tumhare dill apni aise tasveer bana di hai ke apne yadon se app use bhoola nahi pao.." veer gawked stupidly n gaped in wonder and surprise.. though the boy stood still staring and laughing at veer's current state.. afterwards veer finally spoke..
"py..p..p pyaar? voh bhi veer ko.. aisa ho hi nahi sakta veer ek khiladi.. kisi andi ke piche voh nahi bhagta" (v)
"acha sirf isliye ke app ek bade khiladi hai app apne zindagi main pyaar ki kalpana nahi karenge.. app ke liye bhi aise vaise ladki nahi chune gayye hai.. appke liye toh pariyo se bhi sundar.. shakti jisme hai sher ke.. khoon main jiske duarta hia kital aur chehre pe hai jiske la jawab husn aise ladki chooni gayye hai app jaise veer yudha ke liye.."
"PUNdir?..' a femminish voice distracted the proud noble voice in to a shrill cry.
"MAA"
veer turned to find his mother with widened eyes.. pundir began running.. n his mother after him..
"Pundir ajj tu gaya.. yeh kya laga rakha tha"..
"matashri hum toh bas..'
"arre yeh rajkumar ka dhong chod aur gurukul ja.. tujhe pata hai ke tere guru-ji kitne naraaj hai." she ran after him but he was too fast for her and he out-runned her.. she stopped n looked back n joined her hands..
"rajkumar veer app pundir ko shama kar dijye voh toh sirf anaab-shanaab bolta rehta hai.."
"arre yeh app kya kar rahi hai app humari maa ki umar ki hai.. maji humse sarr utha ke baar kijye" the woman smiled and rose her head...
"app ke bare main humne buhut suna hai ke app kisi main bhi bhet-bhav nahi karte.. yakeen toh nahi hua tha par ab ho gaya.." veer smiled as so many people adored him..
"aur haan pundir se kehyega ke voh kal akke mahal se ek asli rajkumar ka wastar le le.. aur yeh humara aadesh hai!".
"jaise app ki marzi.. "
veer waved at her n took off for the boarder while laughing at pundir's shenanigans ..

sunaina:
"par pita-ji!" shera was standing near her window while her father was standin at distence from her.. n he looked very angry..
"par-var kuch nahi.. app ne buhut zimedaari samhaali ab sunaina ke raja hum hai. aur agar app aryanagar jaynge toh charo aur se khatra mandrata rahega.."
"pita-ji hum appki beti hain hum par ek ach bhi nahi aa sakti"
"jo bhi ho..hum appko apne se door nahi kar sakte"
"pita-ji toh apne humien tab kyun nahi bataya jab app humare liye varr dhoondre the?"
"hum thodi na dhoond re the voh toh appki maa thi.. humse door tumhe kahin nahi jaane ki zaroorat hai" He folded his arms he was never going to let go of his darling daughter.. after all she was a part from his heart... the gem he never would let of.. she had handled enough .. he never any type of trouble to come upon her shoulders.. even her shoulders being bold and powerful.. he never wanted her to use that sword in her life... he wanted to protect her with all of his being... she was the only one left for him to love dearly and take full rights of it..
"maharaj sach kahe toh rajkumari ko veer se milna hai" chand stepped in.. n the king turned to her in full surprise.. she just nodded her head... n he was totally shocked.. but then..
"acha jao.. "
"pita ji!" she cried with a voice of surprise n love.. n hugged him a warm hug... he smiled..

veer finally made it to the palace.. he took a deep breath n handed the horse to a soldier n ordered a special care for him.. he walked till he was standing near the palace door.. he took one step in.. and suddenly felt a doze.. he gulped n stepped another.. he suddenly saw women running to him and taking his arti.. but only an illusion he felt so wierd doing what he was going to do.. he took every step with a numb he froze as he reached the royal court arya was talking to jai.. they stopped n stared at veer.. veer froze completely now.. it was like he was in the Arctic wearing a sleeveless shirt.. his mom came in from bag.. he suddenly felt melting.. well the ice melting off him.. n dharam came from the opposite side to nivi.. n all of them stared at him.. he suddenly made steps like a penguin.. n came in the darbaar.. he gulped.. they all gaped at him..
"mujhe.. hume.. (he suddnly started with his stupid veer tune) mujhe maaf kardo mujhse galti ho gayye thi mujhe app logo ke sath aisa bartav nahi karna chahiye tha par.. par choto ki galti bado ko maaf kardini chahie toh itne saalo se jo bartav tha uske liye mujhe maaf kardo.." he took a breath in the end.. glad getting over with that.. n closed his eyes.. as he didn't want anyone to judge him though all he heard was merry laughter.. everyone started laughing.. veer opened his eyes n was like what is so funny?.. dharam came and give him a warm hug.. feeling the warm hug veer was glad he met shera.. after a while veer started feeling uncomfortable .. n tried to free himself.. but dharam wasn't so eager to let go.. so veer had to push him off... dharam backed.. but still wanted to give him a bigger hug
"arre veer hum tumhare parivaar hai.. tumhe humare samne galib banne ke koi zaroorat hai.."
"Haan.. main toh isse hi kush hoon.. ke tum wapas aa ge ho" jay said and gave him a hug.. veer was tired will everyone stop hugging him..
the good news spread through out the palace like rapid fire force.. everyone was glad to here that there once oh so charming prince is back.. except (guess who? the main villain).. after a few hours two charming princes can be seen strolling along as the trees blew in the warm wind of the day.. strolling on the freshly green grass of the royal gardens.. dharam and veer happily chatted with every step.. chanting the golden day of their merry youth.. they remembered how veer used to fool everyone n get dharam in to trouble.. when veer acted so innocent that even the daring devil would how pity on him seeing the sparkle in his lil browny eyes.. sparkling as veer faked innocence.. n the surprising look on dharam's face when veer turned the tables on him.. they laughed n laughed.. finally dharam took a break and smiled saying:
"veer.. tumhari shrarato ke bina yeh mahal kitna soona hai pata hai.." (D) veer stopped n glanced at dharam.. with a naughty smile
"iska matlab main ... shararat kar sakta hoon" (V) in his usual cheerful tone.. dharam smile faded just give veer a compliment he'll take into a whole new level.. dharam started chasing veer n veer ran n ran..
"veer Hum tumhe zinda nahi chodenge!" (d) trying his best to catch up with veer...
"acha toh amar chod dena!" (V)
then after running for almost half an hour... dharam jumped on veer from the back.. making them both fall on the ground.. though dharam was cursing veer.. veer was trying to get the heavy wait of dharam off.. dharam got off him.. n they started laughing.. the elders of the palace were watching them.. smiling at the warm return of laughter in the quite kingdom after a long time.. veer stopped n looked at dharam n said seriously..
"bilkul vaise jiss tara veer dharam ke bina soona hai.." dharam smiled it was a long time since veer praised their friendship with such a deep line.. that made their friendship one of a kind.. they hugged...
"ab humse door matt jana dharamveer ki jodi kabhi nahi toote gi hain na.." (D)
"aur voh upar se yahan ayye aur kahe ke tumse main apna nata tod do.. toh main usse nata tod doonga!" (V)
"arre oye agar tum dono ki prem kahani khatam bhi ho gi toh mujhe bhi ek jhapi milegi?" someone said dharam and veer left each other n turned around.. standing there agni looked at them impatiently.. veer looked at dharam naughtily.. n then jumped on agni.. making agni fall to
the ground.. n veer tried to strangle him.. dharam came in between them..
"veer pagal ho gayye ho kya?" (D)
"agni dekh na main tujhse badla le ke rahoonga.."
"veer tu abhi tak se badla soch raha hai.. koshish matt kar.. sochne ke liye dimaag ki zaroorat hoti hai .. jo tujh main nahi hai.. " veer wided his eyes n started running behind.. agni ran.. laughing though veer was dare keen on getting him.. dharam watched his two sibling with great pleasure and laughter as he watched the immature fiasco..

"arre veer utho na" agni hit him on the head to get up.. but veer was very stubborn it was impossible to wake him up.. this time agni went near his ear and screamed.. but veer was still not responding... having enough he grabbed veer by the collar of his shirt and shook him violently but veer still snored.. he turned to dharam who was sitting relaxed putting his shoes on afterward he placed his hands on his head and leaned back on the wall n gave a quick wink to agni.. agni had enough he let go of veer or say threw veer back in his bed .. n moved to dharam.. dharam was still relaxed unworried ..
"mujhe yakeen nahi hora hai!" agni cried in agony..
"maine kahaa tha ke iss dunya ka sabse mushkil kaam yaheen hai!"
"haan voh toh main bhi manta hoon.. mukje iss baat ka yakeen nahi hai ke tumne iss veer se bachne ke liye mujhe yeh masuliat de di" he grabbed a towel from the same place dharam was sitting on and started drying his hair.. due to waking veer he couldn't dry his hair.. dharam gave an evil smirk.
"akkir hum veer ke bade bhay hai.."
"aur yeh matt bhoolo ke main tumse bada hoon"
"iss liye toh bua ko yeh kaam tujhe dena chahiye tha"
"par veer ka jigri yaar toh tu hai"
"ab voh sab app chodiye ab app veer ko kaise jagaynge?"
"uske liye mere paas ek hall hai.. " agni gave a smirl looking at something.. in a brief moment veer was shivering with cold water.. n agni laughing despicably.. veer glared at him.. a cold glare.. agni thought he was a goner for sure.. but as his savior a boy stepped in not much older then them...
app ko guru-ji bula re hai!"..
dharam was laughing like crazy.. that's why veer wanted to get revenge.. becuase if veer didn't wake up agni used to pour cold water on him.. what a day was this.. new laughter and merriment everywhere.. everyone's having a great time.. it's just impossible to explain the majestic feeling of the castle to see their happy prince back to his normal self again..

evening begins..
though merriment and laughter filled the aryvrats over here chandni was getting confused how is it possible?.. this place is making no sense... she started to feel the hot air become from hot to worm.. cool.. cold.. freezing.. it suddenly felt really cold .. it didn't make any sense.;. she suddenly saw the tress dying into nothing but old hard wood just like yesterday.. the sun's rays were starting to disappear.. she held her head and shook it thinking it was only an illusion but it was happening.. she looked around and widened her eyes as she saw some people appearing from nowhere?.. wearing black robes hiding their faces heading this way.. she ran to a safe place but they seem to come after her. she cared less now.. she took out her shining sword and began finishing them one by one.. after a few seconds all of them laid down on the muddy floor.. she smiled with satisfaction but that wasn't the end yet many more started appearing.. but alas they were left laid mercilessly on the ground too.. she shook her negatively when are these people going to learn there's no stopping her.. she's simply the best worrier ever to be born.. she turned around only to make her smile fade away or turn into a frown.. she gawked at the disgusting trolls.. short fat and ugly.. and quite dangerous... she tried to fight them but it was no use there were to many of them and one of her..
she just turned away.. the problem was that they were coming non-stop appearing from nowhere... she she backed up a few step but they just followed her stomping their feet.. she closed her eyes..they all jumped for a sudden attack but something happened.. she opened her eyes to see the trolls shrinking and shrinking they weren't the only ones she saw a lot of things getting small she figured that she was swept off on a vine this was getting awkward she looked up to see...

over here geet is totally tired she's been running around the whole day.. she was really tired now... she'd love music at this time.. by default agni was taking a stroll through the jungle where she lived.. asni looked at a wide branch of dark wood.. n he noticed the beautiful cool winds today.. ahh a perfect place to relax... he climbed up and sat down.. he enjoyed the wind blowing his hair for a moment.. then he relaxed his back with the trunk.. and took out a flute in that brief moment the winds carried it's melody widening it everywhere leaving every inch of the jungle with the melody's full bloom... it carried it to geet's ear.. as well as being beautiful the melody was very soothing.. it moved inside her.. n something just carried her to the source.. she saw agni with the flute.. n smiled not only does he sing good he also plays good... she couldn't resist herself from stepping out of the darkness right in front of him.. he opened his eyes just to catch a glimpse of her and close them right back again... but he then he stopped playing n looked at her with surprise.. she looked at him still smiling.
"kya hua ? bajao na " (G)
"mujhe basoori bajani nahi aati voh main bas aise hi.." (A)
"kiss pagal ne kaha mujhe yeh dhun buhut pasand ayye.."
"sach.."
"much.. ab mujhe ek achi si dhun sunao.. " she went close to him and sat next to him.. he looked at her gazing her cute lil face.. he didn't even thought of moving his eyes until she waved her hand near his eye level..
"kya hua?"
"kuch nahi"
"dhun sunao"
"haan" and with that he continued playing a happy theme as he was blessed with happiness when he saw her.. he just played and played lost in his own world.. the world wherever he looked he saw her with that cute smile on her face... he played until he felt a lil wait on his shoulder he stopped to find her holding his arms and placing her head on his shoulder.. in a deep slumber.. his heart jumped when he saw her like that.. he didn't knew it but he started blush.. her eyes closed.. she looked so cute at that moment.. that he went head over heels for her.. but even though he stood up after somehow adjusting her head elsewhere.. he lifted her in his arms and placed her on the branch.. what else could he do he didn't knew where she lived.. all he could do was wish for the best and anyway his father must be concerned... he didn't have much time what he noticed that everything was dark now it was night.. and he still had no idea of what to make of her... he prayed to god for her to be ok.. and his prayers were answers.. by god's desire janki was passing from the same route... n she saw geet like that.. she slapped her forehead ..
"geet utho.. " she screamed as she made her way.. after trying several times she discovered...
"yeh nahi uthne vaali (she turned to agni) abhi soi hai na?"
"ji appko kaise pata?"
"isski badi bahen hoon main.. ab isse kaise ghar le jao.."
"agar app bura na maane toh main app ki madat kar do.."
"nahi main kyun bura manongi?"
agni carried her to her room... though jai must've sent a search party.. he didn't care he just cared about her safty.. after a thank you and goodbye from janki he was off to the palace running..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Wonderful update.I just loved the update.Pls post next part soon dear.
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part 17?:?
The aryanagar palace was shining with decorations?.. ?arya arranged a party for dharm veer?.. ?agni came through the gates looking everywhere it's not daily to see the palace in such colors?.. ?he somehow found is father?. ?who again was treating him like a lil new born baby?.. ?he sighed as he listened to his father's jabber? ..?chat last he reached the royal court?.. ?where everyone was waiting for dharam veer?.. ?he went and sat down on his special chair so did jai?.. ?after a while dharam veer came?.. ?aryawardhan smiled broadly?.. ?after saying a few words of honor?.... ?everyone started dancing but the trio were lost in their own little world?.. ?wherever veer looked he just saw shera's face somehow appearing?.. ?agni didn't even pay attention he just remembered geet?.. ?n dharam no matter what he tried he couldn't get that real smile?.. ?he was missing sia badly?... ?huh??.. ?so the princes finally? ?grew the princes grew up enough to find love?..?

chandni was sitting angrily crushing some twigs?.. ?as she glared at what's in front of her?.. ?after breaking the twigs?.. ?she threw them in the fire?.. ?a hand with half an apple stretched in front of her?.. ?she turned her face ignoring it?.. ?Sharman shrugged?.. ?and sat back opposite to her?.. ?she closed her eyes to mend her anger?.. ?n then open them?.. ?and asked?:?
?"?tum?.. ?aap yahan kya kar rahe hai??"?
?"?agar hum yehee sawal app se phooche toh??"?
?"?mujhe nahi pata?.."?
?"?dheere dheere pata chal jaye ga?" ?he stood up and started narrarting? "?yeh ek jaadove jagah hai?. ?yahan ek rajkumar rehta jisse savere se buhut darr lagta hai uska kaam sirf raat ko ho tha hai?.. "?
?"?aur yeh sab appko kaise pata??"?
?"?ek kitab main padha tha?.. ?aur hum yahan uss ka raj humesha ke liye khatam karne ayye hai?"?
?"?main yahan galti se ayye hoon?.. ?par ab main usse mil ke jaon gi?"?
?"?nahi tum abhi jaogi?"?
?"?chandni apne kadam kabhi peeche nahi lete?"?
?"?tumhare jaan ko yahan buhut khatra hai?!" ?he rose his voice?.. ?
?"?aur app ko mere jaan ki chinta hai??" ?he stood quietly he didn't have an answer to that?.. ?he thought of what to say but chandni was enjoying the moment?..?
?"?jitna khatra mere jaan ko hai utna app par khatra hai rajkumar?" .. ?she stood up and stood next to him
?"?nahi usse zada?.. ?voh ladkio ko nahi maarta?."?
?"?oh tab usse harane bada maza ayye ga?.."?
?"?tumhe maza ki padi hai?.."?
?"?haan ab agar mujhse lade ga nahi toh main uss jeetongi toh na?..."?
?"?chandni tum kyun nahi samjh rahi?"?
? "?kyan nahi samjh rahi jo tum keh rahe ho voh mujhse saaf samjh aara hai?!"?
?"?haan shayed voh shaitani rajkumar nahi par yahan pe shaitani jananvar bhi? "?
?"?mere jungle main itne saare shaitan ji rahe the aur mujhe pata nahi?"?
?"?chandni laut jao?"?
?"?kabhi nahi?"?
?"?yeh humara aadesh hai?"?
?"?tum yahan ke rajkumar nahi?!" ?they glared at each other angrily and turned their faces in the opposite direction in fury?.. ?
?"?zaddi?" ?he murmured? ?
?"?khadoos?" ?she murmured?.. ?he looked at her wide eyed?.. ?she just rolled her eyes?..?

in aryanagar agni's chamber?.. ?he's standin next to the window feeling the breeze hitting his face looking down at the peaceful night?.. ?the stars were shining?.. ?so were agni's eyes remembering geet that is?.. ?he remembered geet's smile?.. ?she looked so cute with that thin smile on her face closed her eyes?.. ?he loved her smile she looked so cute in it?.. ?he saw her stole hitting his face he turned to fine the closed door open?.. ?he caught it and looked at it for some time?.. ?he sighed?.. ?
?"?geet?.. ?buhut pyaara naam hai?" ?
?"?so toh hai?" ?a feminine? ?voice? ?agni turned to find nivi standin?.. ?his face expression changed and he looked at her?.?
?"?vaise yeh geet hai kaun??"?
?"?voh bua?.. ?main?.. ?kele vaali??"?
?"?uska naam geet? ?hai? "?
?"?haan?"?
?"?buhut pyaara naam hai?.. ?voh bhi pyaari ho gi?" ?agni slightly blushed nivi had no idea how lovable
?"?ohho lakta hai geet ne tera dill le liya hai?"?
?"?aur jaldi vapas bhi kardegi?.. ?bua??"?
?"?tune kahan ke buhut pyaari hai toh tu usse pyaar kyun nahi kar sakta??"?
?"?bua main pita-ji ke asherwaad ke ilava pyaar nahi karonga?"?
?"?pyaar koi karta nahi hai pyaar ho jata apne app?.. ?mano ya na mano tu aur geet ke saath kuch toh zaroor ho ga?" ?agni rolled his eyes this was his aunt?.. ?always making a lil issue into a love story?.. ?but that's just how he loved her?..?

veer?' ?chamber?.. ?veer too was enjoying the outside view not as much how he enjoyed sunaiana's view?.. ?he turned to find shera in front of him?.. ?he smiled and said?:?
?"?tum yahan? ?" ?
?"?haan kyun nahi aa sakti??"?
?"?haan bilkul ao?.. ?vaise tum mahal main kab ayye?"?
?"?main mahal main nahi?.?
?"?toh abhi tum mere samne nahi kadi ho?" ?she shook her head? (?N?) ?Veer saddened?.. ?and went near her?..?
?"?toh phir??" ?his voice got soft and sad?.. ?she brought her face close to his and whispered?.. ?
?"?tum mere bare main soch rahe ho?.." ?n then she blew on his eyes?.. ?he closed them? .. ?then he opened them to find her disappearing in thin air?.. ?he smiled?..?
?"?agar main sapna bhi dekho toh voh tabhi chalak hai?" ..?
?"?kaun veer??" ?veer turned to see dharam over there standin by the door?.. ?
?"?koi nahi?.."?
?"?veer tum humse koi baat nahi chupa sakte koi toh hai? .. ?jiske baare main tu sapna dekh raha tha?.."?
?"?dharam tum maa se door raho uske saath rahte rahte tu har cheez ko pyaar se milane laga?" ?dharam moved and stood near veer and said?:?
?"?veer humne pyaar ka naam bhi nahi liya?" ?veer turned to dharsm in surprise and thought of something?.. ?not so awkward to say but dharam smiled broadly?.. ?
?"?aa?.. ?maa kahan hai??" ?
?"?unhe haan agni kamre main jaate hue dekha tha?" ?veer got angry?..?
?"?apne laadle ke paas?!" ?dharam rolled his eyes?.. ?why was veer always comparing agni?..?
?"?pehle mere neend churai ab mere maa bhi?" ?dharam got the answer he laughed veer and his childish acts?.. ?it feels all too good now?.. ?suddenly veer's angry voice was replaced by a shrill cry? ... ?dharam widened his eyes as he saw nivi holding one of veer's ears?.. ?it's so awkward how she does that? ?whenever somthing wrong was happening?.. ?
?"?agni mera laadla nahi hai?..??" ?
?"?hai iss liye toh app humesha uss par dyhaan de ti hai?" ?veer wasn't willing to give up?.. ?something he learned from pari ma?..?
?"?veer tum toh jai bhaya ko jante ho?.."?
?"?agni ko say saza mili hai mujh par humesha pani phek tha ab uske pita uss pe? [?concern?] ?phek rahe hai?"?
?"?chup badmaash?" ?she let go of his ear as no matter what he'll never become an angel?..?
?"?ab furun so ja?.. ?subah jaldi uth na hai?.." ?she told dharam to come out with her and also go to bed as it was very late?.. ?walking through the dark corridor only being lighted by some minor candles?.. ?nivriti turned to dharam in confusion?.. ?
?"?dharam?.. ?tum teakh ho na??" ?dhaam stopped and looked at his bua?.. ?
?"?haan hum bilkul teakh hai?.. ?kyun??"?
?"?nahi kuch nahi?" ?they continued until they reached his room?... ?after a good night kiss?.. ?she left for her room?.. ?all the way she wondered about one thing dharam?.. ?how sad he must be after loosing sia it must've been a hard experience?.. ?the worst of all she knew her nephew will never fight for himself?.. ?he always looked at the boundaries and rules of aryanagar he will never cross or even think about crossing them? .. ?she was worried that he might end up sad?.. ?very sad?.. ?he couldn't deal with the fact himself this was the king's matter and whatnot?.. ?but he was depressed?.. ?very depressed?.. ?as he loved sia deeply? .. ?but here was the question will he cross his limits and find his love?.. ?or will he stand and watch injustice with them happen in front of his eyes

In the morning?.. ?
the sunlight hit sharman's face? .. ?with annoyance he opened his eyes?.. ?to see chandni sleeping there?.. ?she looked quite pretty at that moment?.. ?he smiled?.. ?
?"?toh yeh jab apna moo nahi kholti toh khoobsurat hoti hai?" ?
?"?Kya?? ?kya kahan tumne??" ?chandni got up with a heavy voice?..?
?"?ah?.. ?k?..?kuch nahi?.." ?chandni rose her eye brows? .. ?but she had much other thing to think of?.. ?sharman got up and started walking?.. ?
?"?arre tum kahan ja rahe ho??" ?Chandni got up annoyed she followed him
?"?main apna raasta dhoond ra hoon?..'?
?"?kaisa raasta?"?
?"?uss rajkumar tak pohechne ka raasta?. ?aur ab tumhe apne ghar ka rasta dhoond na chahiye?"?
?"?aye chandni apne kadam pheeche nahi lete?.. ?aur vaise tumhe kaunse mushkil hai?"?
?"?mere yeh mushkil hai ke main ek safar pe ja raha hoon voh bhi ek ladki ke saath?" ?chandni stopped and hit his back he was in front of her?,. ?he turned and asked what??..?
?"?kya kya?? ?main tumhare saath nahi aa rahi? " ?
?"?toh kya tum akele jao gi?" ?
?"?haan?"?
?"?nahi? "?
?"?haan? "?
?"?nahi?"?
?"?acha bacho main tumhare saath aati hoon?.. (?sharman nodded his head? (?P?) ?and smiled with satisfaction?).. ?akele jaane main tumhe darr lagta hoy ga na??.." ?his smile turned to a frown an angry frown?.. ?
?"?dekho mujhe darr nahi lagta?"?
?"?lagta hai?"?
?"?haan lagta hai?... ?tumse?!" ?chandni's eyes started filling with fury?.. ?and they argued and argued?.. ?the same old argument?.. ?or let's say the start of something new?.. ?

in the palace?..?
agni's stadnin next to his window? ... ?watching the soft snow-white clouds roam the blue sky?.. ?looks like a rainy day?.. ?oh well?... ?he just watched in silent as the wind hit his face?... ?the cool dust-free breeze?.. ?it's going to be a beautiful day?.. ?as for the weather?.. ?let's say is going to be pretty romantic?.. ?agni enjoyed watching the sky in solitude? .. ?though his enjoyment wouldn't last long?.. ?for?.. ?SPLASH?!... ?agni found himself drenched in water?.. ?he looked back?.. ?saw veer holding a bucket and laughing his head out?.. ?
?"?VEER?!.. ?hum tumhe?" ?and he began chasing veer?.. ?while veer was laughing and running at the same time?.. ?but because of the slippery tiles?.. ?agni fell with his back facing the ground?.. ?he sat up and OWed in pain?.. ?well for veer we all know how tense he gets if anyone else got hurt?.. ?he ran back to him?.. ?but agni took advantage of his generosity?.. ?and started hitting him?.. ?veer started hitting him too?.. ?in all the fiasco nivriti watched laughing they'll never change?.. ?
?"?yeh dono kab sudhrenge??" ?nivi murmured?.?
?"?kabhi nahi?!" ?dharam made his entry also enjoying the wrestling match?.. ?after laughing for sometime?.. ?they thought it had to stop?... ?dharam went between them?.. ?
?"?arre ab tum dono bas bhi karo?" ?dharam caught them by the collar of their jackets and commanded to stop
?"?kabhi nahi dharam issne mujh pe pani pheka hai?" ?agni stretched his hands trying to strangle veer
?"?aur tum jab gurukul main phek the the ab bol?"?
?"?arre shukur kar tum toh itni derr tak so te the ke nahane ke liye waqt bhi nahi rehta?" ?dharam began to loose piecentce there's no pleasing these two?.. ?
?"?BAS?!" ?they both stopped and dharam left their collars?.. ?
?"?agni tum mujhse do mahine bade ho aur tu bhi?" ?agni rolled his eyes?.. ?he hated to be reminded that he was the oldest?.. ?it made him feel he has to be old and boring?.. ?veer was just waiting for dharam to leave?.. ?as being the youngest he thought he had nothing on his back?.. ?surely one of his brothers will be the heir to the throne?.. ?after the entire fiasco the princes sat down at the breakfast table?.. ?after finishing their royal food?.. ?the waited for the king's announcement?.. ?aryvardhan stood up and said?:?
?"?rajya ke liye rajkumar dharam yuvraaj chune gaye thee?, ?par ab rajya sabah ne apni ray badle hai?. ?unka kehna hai ke singhaasan ke liye teeno rajkumar buhut layak hai?.. ?iss liye hum ek muqabla rakhenge jisne aryanagar ka acha faida kiya usse hum maharaj ghoshit karden ge?".. ?after the announcement the three princes were wondering through the large enlighten corridors of the palace?.. ?each thinking about their futures?.. ?and who'll be the future king?.. ?dharam stopped?.. ?a smile spread over his face and said?:?
?"?humien poora yakeen hai ke app main se koi maharaj bane ga?"?
?"?arre bilkul bhi nahi?. ?singhasan pe sirf tum bheto ge kyun agni??"?
?"?haan akkir pehle bhi tum yuvraaj hone ke layak the aur ab bhi tum
?…?nahi hum nahi app dono
?…?nahi tum
?…?haan veer saye keh raha hai tum?..?
?…?app
?…?TUM agni n veer said 2gther?.. ?Dharam widened his eyes?..?it gave him an uncomfortable feeling seeing them in union?. ?They always fought and never got along but alone they missed each other?.. ?They always strangled each other but even though they loved each other they felt a little awkward when they admitted in front of each other n they never did?.. ?Only dharam knew of this weird love which was always there in their hearts?.. ?Truly they had a beautiful relationship they only hated each other because they loved each other?.. ?Now what kind of love is that?? ?Only dharam understood?.. ?

Chandni was walking folding her arms?.. ?Sharman somehow got her 2? ?come with him?.. ?She hated being bossed around?.. ?She had a wish 2? ?kill sharman right now?.. ?Though sharman was enjoying Chandnis anger she suddenly felt a buzzing sound zap around she found mosquitoes?.. ?She started waving her hands intending 2? ?get rid of the foul creatures?.. ?In the process an idea lighted her mind?.. ?She hit sharman?.. ?When he turned for an answer she shrugged? ..?made an innocent and said?:?
?…?machar as if she was very innocent it didnt fool him he narrowed his gaze on her?.. ?N then turned back facin the route? .. ?She laughed in silence?.. ?But he just waited 2? ?make her realize that theres always a tit for tat?.. ?He knew he would have the last laugh?.. ?This battle of wits was indeed also a challenge 2? ?Chandni?.. ?She couldnt wait 2? ?see his face?.. ?They glared at each other with a good luck expression? ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

Wow, dear, superb update.I loved it.Sach mein three rajkumar aab bara hogaya😆.Anyway good update.Keep it up.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Post the next part dear.Cannot wait more.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Part 18
Aryanagar evening?:?
After havin a long fight with agni veer stood next 2? ?his window?.. ?Smiling?.. ?He loved annoying everyone?.. ?Just a talent n big hobby?.. ?No one could stay mad at him?.. ?He always charmed every1? ?with his charisma n goodness?.. ?He yearned 4? ?these days when
? ?Ever he looked over his brain he saw those days running from agni n dharam?.. ?Fooling the elders?. .. ?N filling the palace with n era of laughter?.. ?how he missed these days?. ?everyday he brought laughter?.. ?he looked up at the vast blue sky?.. ?gazing with such a beauty with his sparkly eyes?.. ?he wanted to fly freely dancing through the skies of freedom?.. ?he felt he got everything back again?... ?his life?. ?his love?.. ?his family?.. ?but even so he'll never break the relationship with the shramiks?. ?in fact he's planning on meeting them today?.. ?the shramiks always gave him a feeling of warmth when he needed it?... ?why he still remembers the night he ran out of the palace crying?.. ?holding his sword with a vise grip?.. ?with flame burning eyes?.. ?ready to tear and rip his first victim?.. ?he never felt like that before?... ?but after finding the rules of aryanagar?.. ?the secrets behind them?... ?just gave him such a rage which he can't handle?... ?veer fell on the ground?.. ?He wasnt physically injured but mentally disturbed?.. ?n then she came?.. ?she spoke in a cute voice?: ?
?"?rajkumar??" ?veer turned to see a beautiful young shramik girl standing there?. ?worried?.. ?he sat up and stared at her for some moment but then moved his gaze to the ground and spoke in a sad tone?..?
?"?ji?" ?his voice echoed in the silent night?.. ?she sensed his sadness and pain? ?
?"?app teakh toh hai?"?
?"?shayed?. ?par kuch nahi teakh hai?.."?
?"?toh app teakh kar dejiye?!"?
?"?main kaise teakh kardo main kaun hoon?"?
?…?rajkumar veer iss dunya ke sabse bahadur insaan?"?
?"…?kash?.. ?Acha tum kaun ho??"?
?"?hum saakshi?.."?
?"?bara piyaara naam hai?"?
?"?shukriya?.. " ?she smiled?.. ?she moved her gaze to his hand which was bleeding?.. ?
?"?rajkumar?!.. ?appko chott ayye hai?" ?veer looked at his hand and said?:?
?"?koi baat nahi?"?
?"?aise kaise koi appko buhut chott ayye kitna khoon bah raha hai?"?
?"?chodo?."?
?"?bilkul nahi ay yeh maa teakh kar dege?.. " ?she forcfully made him get up and follow her?.. ?he struggled but she won in the end?.. ?after walking for some minuets a hay house started to fade in the darkness?.. ?veer could assume that an elderly woman was standing near the crudely built door?.. ?after reaching the house?.. ?the woman looked to saakshi in a glare?..?
?"?saakshi itni raat ho chuki hai agar bahar tumhe kuch ho ja ta toh?"?
?"?app bhi na maa?.. ?isse kuch nahi ho sakta hai?.. ?saare ma apne bacho ko ghara main chupaie honge dekho dekho chipkali aa gaye? " ?a boy said jokingly? .. ?
?"?KARANTI?!" ?saaksh jerked veer's n started to run chasing him?.. ?while he ran a laughed like a maniac at his joke?.. ?veer lost balance n fell on the ground?.. ?parima hurried in helping him?... ?she brought him in the house?.. ?and made him sit down?.. ?
?"?rajkumar app yahan itni raat gaye??"?
?"?kuch nahi?.. ?bas neend nahi aa rahi thi?"?
?"?acha?.. ?arre rajkumar apke haath main yeh chott?.. " ?with that she nursed his injury?.. ?n veer felt her real motherly towards him?.. ?
?"?kya hua??"?
?"?kya kya hua??"?
?"?app toh mera iss tareh khayal rakh rahi hai jaise ke main appka beta hoon?"?
?"?rajkumar app ke chehre se saaf dekhai dera hai ke app buhut dukhi hai?.. ?toh humne socha ke appko thora sa kush kardoo?'?
?"?shukriya?"?
?"?shukriya ki koi zaroorat nahi hai app humare bete nahi par app humare bete? ?jaise hai?" ?veer felt her good vibes from all over?.. ?he felt it cheering his mood?.. ?his mouth curved into a smile?.. ?
?"?buhut raat ho chuki hai app vapas mahal chale jayye rajkumar?.."?
?"?rajkumar nahi veer?.." ?pari smiled?.. ?she caressed his hair?.. ?n then he went on his way?..?
that night was one of his best nights?.. ?he felt so good that night?.. ?veer looked at the sky gazing at it gaping at the wounderful cream like clouds?.. ?snow white heavy clouds?.. ?

speaking about clouds?.. ?agni was also enjoying the scenario today?.. ?the first rain of the season is about to begin? .. ?as he strolled alon he kept gaping at the magnifacint clouds?... ?that he had no idea of where he was going?.. ?he suddenly bumped into somebody?.. ?well he was sure it was a girl so said her shrill cry?.. ?agni turned to?..?
?"?tum?! ?main jahan bhi ja rahi hoon tum kaha se mill rahe ho bandar?.."?
?"?main bandar nahi hoon?"?
?"?ho?"?
?"?nahi hoon?".?
?"?bandar?.. ?bandar?.. ?bandar?.." ?she started jumping up and down agni turned tomato red?.. ?though geet was laughing her heart out?.. ?though her merry voice was filled with a cry?.. ?agni pulled her by her arm?..?
?"?main bandar nahi hoon?." ?agni spoke geet was less concerned about what was he?... ?she just struggled to loosen her arm from his grip?... ?
?"?tum jo bhi ho mujhe chodo? "?
?"?nahi?"?
?"?kyun?"?
he thought about it and let go of her arm?.. ?the glared at each other ready to pounce?.. ?but rain heavily started pouring down from the heavenly skies?... ?the both looked up?.. ?agni grabbed geet's hand and dragged her to a tree?.. ?after settleing geet pulled her hand back?.?
?"?kya hua??'?
?"?arre agar barish main bheege toh humien sarde ho jayge?.."?
?"?mujhe nahi pata?.. ?mujhe nachna hai?" ?she started walking but agni stopped her saying?;?
?"?pagal ho kya??"?
?"?haan main pagal hoon?"?
?"?main bhi na itna asaan sawal poocha?"?
?"?dekh mujhe barish pasand aur mujhe usmien nachna toh buhut pasand hai?"?
?"?tumhe barish main jana ya jahanum main jana hai toh jao mujhe koi parvah nahi?.."?
? ?that didn't bother geet she just ran into the rain?.. ?and started twirling around?.. ?completely drenching herself in the heavy rain?.. ?it was obvious she enjoyed this?.. ?she jumped and danced all along?... ?her emarald green dress was completely drenched in rain water?.. ?she opened up her arms and looked up at the sky?.. ?while all this agni watched from a distance?.. ?with a smile on?.... ?she looked so cute at that moment?.. ?he was facinated by her sooo sweet?.. ?maybe not to him?.. ?but her personality was glowing in front of him?.. ?geet looked at agni?.. ?n said?:?
?"?tumbhe aa jao?.. "?
?"?mere paas buhut kaam hai?.. ?mujhe bimaar nahi hona hai?.."?
?"?kaam toh hota rahega?.. ?par itni achi barish nahi hoti rahege?..."?
she smelled the sweet smell of wet soil?... ?the first rain of the season is always the most beautiful?... ?
?"?tum bheeg ne se darr the ho??"?
?"?main darta nahi?"?
?"?aisa lagta toh nahi hai?.. ?tumme todi mardangini nahi hai?"?
?"?mujh main buhut mardangini hai?"?
?"?acha yahan aa ke dekhao?"?
agni stomped furiously?.. ?to her?.. ?with a burning face?.. ?
?"?dekha?!!"?
?"?haan dekha?.. ?tumme mardangini hai par akal nahi hai?!"?

?"?Uffo?!!" ?chandni struggled in the rain?.. ?she didn't hate it but like agni she didn't want to become ill?..?
?"?kya hua??"?
?"?itni derr se kahan the tum?.. ?barish hue?..!"?
?"?acha?! ?darro matt mere paas akhe hai?"?
?"?EE rajkumar?.. ?mujhse zbaan ladai toh zbaan kheech doongi?.. "?
?"?tu kya khichegi is pehle toh main tumhara haath tod dunga?"?
?"?acha toh tum yeh karoge?.." ?and she started to pounce at him?.. ?well he didn't stay their and look at his demise?.. ?he started fighting too?.. ?but after a while he was surely going to loose?..?
?"?ARre hum rajkumar tumhare itni himmat ke hum par haath uthao?"?
?"?toh ladkiya par haath uthana tumhare shaan ke khilaaf nahi hai?" ?she stopped and folded her arms?.. ?and narrowed her gaze at him?..?
?"?par apne desh ke liye? "?jaan dena toh ek har rajkumar ki tapsya hai?"?
?"?iss main tumhara desh kaha se aaya??"?
?"?ab deakho hum pita-ji ke ek akili santaaan? .. ?toh pita-ji ke baad humien poora ajmer samhalna padega?.. ?aur agar main ek ladki ko apne app ko marne deta toh humara rajya kaun samhalta??" ?he explained?.. ?she just rolled her eyes she had much more worries then his city?.?
?"?dekho tumhe apne rajya ke liye zindigi dene ya joh bhi karna hai karo?.. ?par main tumse door ja rahien hoo?.. ?alvida?" ?and she ran away?.?
?"?par?.. ?chodo voh apni raksha khud kar sakte?"?
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Sorry! I am so lazy i should start writing Well i am really sorry
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hiii
i m new here.i read this ff of urs its just 2 amazing.......i really liked it ................
can i know ur name please............
Edited by nitali - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Wow,Wonderful update.It's superb update.Post next part soon dear.Sorry for late comments.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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