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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Wow, wonderful part.Suspense bahar aahi rahata ke Shera aagayi😊.Pls post next part soon.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
wow
such a gr8 part
it was quite long and i loved it
hope their love story starts soon
it was a fab part
thanx
do cont
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
wonderful part....
hmm.... shera thodi der baad nahi aa sakti thi????
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Part 7?:?
?…?rajkumari ji?.. ?Vaid ji aye hain? (?soldier?)?
Shera turned and glanced at the soldier?..?
?…?teakh hai tum jao yahan se?..?? (?shera?)?
She glanced with rage at chand and veer?.. ?And turned back to the door?.. ?And started to move out?..?

In her fathers room?:?
?…?vaid ji pitaji ke liye koi ilaj mila????? (?shera?) ?with an innocent and sad voice?..?
?…?ji rajkumari?..?? (?vaid?) ?he let go of the kings hand?.. ?Shera smiled with joy
? ?Ek buhut lambe pahade hai ussme ek buhut khaas? (?I mean rare not special? ) ?poda ugta hai?.. ?Voh buhut dheere ugta hai par kisi ki bhi awaz lota sakta hai?.. ?Aur kisi bhi zakam ko bhar sakta hai?..?? (?vaid?)?
?…?yeh kahaan mile ga?? (?shera?)?
?…?voh? [?west?] ?ki aur?.. ?? (?vaid?) {?if I didnt know the word in Urdu Ill putted between brackets this one? [ ] }?
?…?hum abhi jaane ki taiyaari karte hai?.. ?Apka buhut shukriya? (?shera?)?
He bowed his head and went out of the room?.. ?Shera sat next to her father?..?
?…?pitaji?!! ?App phir se chalne lagenge?.. ?Humare liye isse ayada kushi ki baat nahi hp sakti?.. ?? (?shera?)?
She exclaimed with joy?.. ?She ordered everything to be set?.. ?And her soldiers to get ready?.. ?Veer was in his room?.. ?Thinking of what could happen next in the story which changed sunainas happy bubbly princess into a dull angry princess?.. ?Shera came in his room?..?
?…?sunu tum humare kuch sipahiyon ke saath aryangar lout jao?..?? (?shera?)?
Veer nodded his head?.. ?Then she left?..?
After everyone was ready shera?.. ?Climbed on her horse and chand on his?.. ?And they marched to west? .. ?After they left veer said to the soldiers?:?
?…?chalo rajkumari ka peecha karo?..?? (?veer?)?
?…?par?..?? (?soldier?)?
?…?humne jo keh diya so keh diya CHALO(veer?)?
They followed him in to the wood?.. ?Behind shera

In Aryanagar?..?
?…?agni?!!?? (?jai?) ?he hugged his son?.. ?He? ?yearned for his sons arms?.. ?He always loved agni?..?
?…?kaise ho beta?? (?jai?) ?
?…?apke Tara buhut he Kush app ke bahon main akke? (?agni?) ?
?…?tumhare shraratokin humain buhut yaad atte thi? (?arya?)?
?…?voh humare shrartien nahi thi voh veer?..?? (?agni?)?
?…?bas tum dono bhay humesha veer pe ilzaam kyun laga te ho veer agar shrarat karta hai toh sab ke samne karta hai? (?niv?)?
?…?acha?! ?Usse se phooch lete hain veer kahan hain?? (?agni?)?
?…?patani?.. ?Par surakshit hai? (?niv)
?…?kya?(agni?) ?
?…?voh ek sandeash aya tha usmain nahi koi naam tha ya kahaan se aya tha vo bhi nahi lika tha? (?niv?)?
?…?voh sandeash humain dikhaye? (?agni?)?
A soldier brought it to him?.. ?Agni felt the cloth it was soft as silk?.. ?And the writing was in one of the best handwritings?..?
It was clear that the sandeash was royal?.. ?But even though it was much better then the other sandeash they got or send?..?
?…?Sunaina? (?agni?) ?he muttered out loudly
?…?kya?? (?niv?)?
?…?bua aisa sandeash aur yeh likhaye toh sirf sunaina se ho sakte hai? (?agni?)?
?…?toh veer sunaina main hain?? (?niv?)?
?…?pata nahi par yeh sandeash sunaina he ka hain? (?agni?)?

Dharam and sia?:?
Dharam was standing and pointing to sia the views?.. ?Sia was sitting and excitedly watched the things surrounding her?..?
?…?app voh bakicha dekh rahi hai?? (?dharam?) ?he pointed to a beautiful gigantic garden?..?
?…?haan? (?sia?) ?she leaped to see it straight?..?
?…?usse bua aur maa ne ogaaya hain?.. ?Maa aur bua uss bakiche main har subah jati hai?..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?hum wahaan uttre? ??? (?sia?)?
?…?zaroor?..?? (?dharam?)?
They stopped the carriage and dharam jumped off he reached his hand to sia?.. ?She held it and jumped from the carriage?..?
They started to explore the garden from right to left sia was found of it?.. ?And was found of dharam as well?.. ?She went to smell some pink roses dharam stood and stared at her beauty that kept enchanting him?.. ?Her extraordinary face was printed in his mind forever he would never forget her there was a bound between them?.. ?That kept dharam close to her heart?.. ?Her mind?.. ?They loved each other more then could be imagined?.. ?But love is filled with up and downs?.. ?This was the up part?.. ?The down part will be coming soon changing there life?.. ?Separating them?.. ?Making them desperate making them realize the true meaning of freedom making them understand how the low cast felt?.. ?Teaching them rules of life?.. ?Meaning of freedom?.. ?The feel of love and care?.. ?How desperate can person get? .. ?Making them understand how veer felt?.. ?Imprisoning them?.. ?Leaving them no choice?.. ?The dark night will begin in their lives?.. ?Making them suffer?.. ?Yearn?.. ?Moan and groan beg mercy from god? .. ?Tears will fall from their eyes?.. ?The signs of the dark day will begin making them take hard choices?.. ?Making them apart friends from foes?.. ?A fire will burn? .. ?Between them?. ?Soon the dark stormy night will start?.. ?Soon?..?
?…?yuvraaj yeh gulab kitne khoobsurat hai na? (?sia?) ?she was bending? ?with great grace and caressing the pink roses with gentle care and touch?.. ?That dharam stood there staring at her without a single blink?.. ?Nor a motion?.. ?Nor a single word?..?
?…?yuvraaj?? (?sia?) ?she turned back at him confused that he didnt answer?.. ?She looked at him?.. ?He stood there staring right in her eye?.. ?She stood up?.. ?And stared him back after a few moments they came to reality?..?
?…?ji appne kuch kaha?? (?dharam?)?
?…?ha?.. ?haan yeh gulab khoobsurat hai?.. ?? (?sia?)?
?…?haanpar humain toh laal rang ke gulab pasand hai?..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?toh app kisi se pyaar kakrte hai?? (?sia?)?
?…?shayed ? (?dharam? ) ?he blushed there was no maybe though it was a sure yes?..?
?…?kisse?? (?sia?) ?she was in a very sweet tone but she still waited eagerly for the answer?.. ?She bit her lips?..?
?…?app ko hum kaise bataiye?.. ?Par voh yahin hai humara matlab Aryanagar main? (?dharam?)?
?…?ohh toh kya voh aryavrat hai?? (?sia?)?
?…?nahi?.. ?Voh sirf yahaan par thodi derr ke liye ayee hai? (?dharam?)?
?…?kya pata shayed voh humesha ke liye rehjaye? (?sia?)?
?…?kaash?.. ?? (?dharam?)?
?…?par uske mata pita usse yaad karre toh?? (?dharam?)?
?…?bida toh har ladki ko hona hota hai ajj nahi toh kal? (?sia?)?
?…?app bilkul galat hai?.. ?Hum usse uske mata pita se har din mila ne legaynge?.. ?Aur waise bhi dill se beti kabhi nahi bida hoti hai? (?dharam?)?
?…?app par toh poore dunya ki ladkia fida hojaynge?..?? (?sia?)?
?…?hone do hum toh sirf uss pe fida rehnge vaise appko itne saare pyaar ki batein aati jai?? (?dharam?) ?sia blushed?..?
?…?hume bhi pyaar ho gaya hai? (?sia?)?
?…?app ko kaise pata?..??? (?dharam?)?
?…?laal rang pasand anne laga hai?.. ?Apna khayal zada rakti hoon?.. ?Akele main muskurate hoon? (?sia?)?
?…?acha?.. ?Toh humain bhi pyaar ho gaya hai ? (?dharam?)?
?…?hum usse milne ke liye betab hai? (?sia?)?
?…?ayne main uska chehra saaf dikhe ga?..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?kaash yahan? ?koi ayna hota ? (?sia?)?
?…?ayna mili ga tab dekh lena?..?? (?dharam?) ?he moved closer to her
?…?shayed hum tab tak sabar nahi kar payenge? (?sia?) ?she also moved towards him?.. ?
They came to a stop?.. ?And were an inch far from each other?.. ?They held each others hand and raised them to their shoulder
?…?toh phi seedhe humare akhon main dekho?..?? (?dharam?)?
Sia stared right into his eyes?.. ?She clearly saw her face?..?she moved closer and hugged him by wrapping her arms around him?.. ?He did the same for her?.. ?They admitted there love in a non direct way lost in love?.. ?The two love birds had no idea of the upcoming sadness?.. ?Tears?.. ?The upcoming truth?.. ?Which will leave them?. ?Disturbed?.. ?Speechless disappointed?.. ?Which will kill their smiles?. ?Laughs?.. ?Making them find out?.. ?Their life is meaningless without each other?.. ?Making them suffer?.. ?Cry tears of blood?.. ?Making them understand the importance of a moment?.. ?Realize the wounds which kept haunting shera?.. ?Making them yearn for the golden old days making them beg cry?.. ?Torture them? .. ?Leaving them craving?.. ?anguishing their mental minds?.. ?Breaking their loving hearts?.. ?Wounding them?.. ?Caging them?.. ?Depriving them from each other?.. ?Forbidding their love?.. ?Their purposes?.. ?Depriving them from freedom?.. ?Love?.. ?Happiness?. ?Leaving them Mirthless?.. ?Making them plead?.. ?A fire .a thunderous night the betraying truth will come to their lives?.. ?After ruining many? ?happiness breaking many hearts?.. ?The betraying truth is still hungry?.. ?Its bitter?.. ?And sour?.. ?But it is the truth?.. ?No matter how will they try it wouldnt make any difference?.. ?Until it the truth destroyed from the core?.. ?Until they realize that the truth was a lie?.. ?A so so lie ? ?

Shera and veer?:?
Veer kept wondering why was shera so angry when chand was telling him the story?.. ?What happened to her??.. ?What happened on the day of her engagement?.. ?What was so bad??.. ?How come the ever smiling bubbly princess frown?.. ?What happened to her family??.. ?Who was behind her tears??.. ?And why did veer care?.. ?She had an attitude towards him all the time?.. ?But he could see a bounding between them that kept them close?.. ?No harsh word?.. ?No sword could stop him from loving her?.. ?He couldnt bear her tears?.. ?He couldnt see her frown?.. ?Thus he always had a connection towards her?.. ?His arms were always opened to her?.. ?He was ruled by her?.. ?Forever hers and forever hers?.. ?He remembered the night they met?.. ?His heart just lured to her?.. ?Her eyes kept enchanting him?.. ?He knew one thing that who she was going to be engaged to was the cause of her tears but why??.. ?Why does anyone want to see her in this state?. ?She was so cute and fun before?.. ?Why would anyone want to destroy her like that??.. ?Making her smile vanish?. ?Her knees down?.. ?Making her so weak that a slight breath could knock her out?.. ?Her tears fall with no end veer was annoyed disturbed?.. ?And sad about her now state?.. ?He could see she wanted to smile but where to begin with?.. ?She was seeking for a light in that dark world of her?.. ?A candle burning somewhere?.. ?Making her yearn for it?.. ?A little light?.. ?And a dark dark world?.. ?She cant even see the her?.. ?Her true self he wondered was he any responsible for her tears remember what she said the night?.. ?Not to write a name nor the city in the scroll?.?? ?He wondered deep and deep
Shera she remembered what happened to her city and family remembered him?.. ?Who she loved and cared for?.. ?But when his true face his betrayal and sins appeared?.. ?Her mirth?.. ?Joy?.. ?Happinesspleasantness?.. ?Abandoned her?. ?Leaving her standing alone?.. ?Leading her toward her own dark world?.. ?Alone?.. ?He leaved her speechless but why did he did such thing?.. ?He never answered that question for what reason?.. ?Why??.. ?Why did he stole her smiles??.. ?She loved him so much?.. ?That on that thunderous night?.. ?She didnt stop that fire from burning?.. ?She just couldnt believe that the one she loved more then herself?.. ?Her people her family?.. ?The one who was right after god?.. ?Betrayed her in such a way?.. ?In such a way?.. ?But why??.. ?Was he just playing with her torturing her emotions?.. ?She always got weak when she saw him?.. ?When any of his signs came to her?.. ?He was living in her?.. ?Torturing her?.. ?Making her dark world grow and grow?.. ?Making that candle?.. ?That light slowly vanish making her agony grow and grow destroying her mentally?.. ?It wasnt only effecting her?.. ?But the people surrounding her?.. ?Chand? .. ?her father?.. ?And her people?.. ?They enjoyed the old princess?.. ?Running around in the free garden?.. ?A souring birdloving them?.. ?Fighting for there rights?.. ?She broke most of the rules?.. ?But for a fair share?.. ?She accomplished their dreams?.. ?But when she wanted to finish her dream?.. ?He just ruined everything?.. ?He was her dream?.. ?But he turned out to be a bloody nightmare rather then a souring dream?.. ?He was her everything?.. ?But she was his nothing she never meant anything to him?.. ?Nothing at all?..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Brilliant update.keep it up.Wait for ur next update.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Part 8?:?
?…?rajkumari ji?.. ?Hum yahan pe rukh ke aram kar le?? (?chand?)?
?…?ha?.. ?haan? (?shera?.)?
After a while they settled aside the sea?.. ?Shera? ?was sitting facing the sea?.. ?She was throwing some pebbles in it?.. ?While some voices were spinning in her head?..?
?(?Shera?!! ?Beti
?(?didi mujhe bachaye ahhh?)?
?(?didi?)?
?(?rajkumari ji? ..)?
And somebodys diabolical laugh
?(?yeh aag tumhe jaala ke rak de ge?.. ?Mera maksad puraa kar dege?..)?
?(?didiiiaaaaa?) ?
As sheras tears steamed down her cheeks?.. ?Her breath becoming short and shallow?.. ?Her past wounds would never leave her?.. ?She couldnt forget that night a damn stormy night?. ?A black fire those blood curdling cries?.. ?That one biter truth which ruined her life that one faithful night?.. ?His true face?. ?His passion?. ?His goal?.. ?His real self?.. ?Him???? who she adored?.. ?Never minded about him being a low cast?.. ?A practically no one in a princesss life?.. ?He was everything to her?.. ?Her life?.. ?Her soul?.. ?Her brain and heart?.. ?She took the first look of the day at him?.. ?She always prized that payal he gave her?.. ?And she still does?.. ?Yearning for him to comeback?.. ?shell forgive him for everything he did?.. ?Just for his love?.. ?She had no one now?.. ?Her father was half dead?.. ?Chand had his own problems?.. ?Who could she speak to??.. ?Her other princess friends always told her to forget him?.. ?They never understood that it was impossible?.. ?She loved him so much?.. ?She never thought any one could take his place in her heart She loved him?.. ?Even though every prince in the wide world would do anything to just catch a glimpse of her cherry lips ebony eyes?.. ?Wavy hair?.. ?A glimpse of her swiveling around in her Eden garden? .. ?She was quite popular between the princes?.. ?They all heard about her naughtiness?.. ?Her beauty? .. ?Her bubbliness?.. ?And all of them secretly or openly adored her?.. ?Though she never found them at her fullest tastes? ..?when her mother and father searched for a son in law?.. ?Every prince kneeled to her to agree?.. ?She found many characters?.. ?Some were calm and polite?..?
Flashback?:?
She was in her pink Sayongita lehnga? (?not the plain one the princess one?).. ?She was walking with prince vikram through her heavenly garden?:?
?…?apne baare main app humain kuch bataye na?? (?vikram?)?
?…?hum kya kahin hum toh app sab ke beech buhut mashhoor hai? (?shera?)?
?…?haan haan par kuch aise baatien hoti hai ke hum sirf app ke moo se sunna chahte hai?..?? (?vikram?)?
?…?teakh hai?. ?Humain barish main ghoomna pasand hai nachna pasand hain?.. ?Aur phir uss miti ki khooshboo?.. ?Humin laal rang pasand hai?.. ?Sharartein pasand hai?.. ?Humain meethaya pasand hai?.. ?Phool gulab pasand hai?.. ?Geet aur sur?.. ?Chand aur suraj?.. ?Humare rab?.. ?Aur unn sab se zada humin apne mata pita pasand hai ? (?shera?) ?she was trying her best to make him disagree?..?
?…?sirf itnahi cheezen?.. ?App ko agar chahiye toh hum app ko uss falak ke sear kara de!? (?vikram?) ?and she was miserably failing at it?..?
She had to think fast?.. ?She found some powdered color on the floor?.. ?She picked it up and started to throw it on him?..?she was sure no man can go through that and still agree to marry her?.. ?Afterwards?:?
?…?hum toh sirf shararat karre thee.? (?shera?)?
?…?koi baat nahi?.. ?Hum abhi apne wastar badal ke atte hai?..?? (?vikram?)?
Vikram was about to leave when shera said?:?
?…?rukhye app humse naraaz nahi hai? (?shera?)?
?…?nahi?.. ?Balke app ki yahin shraratien sun kar toh hum yahan ayye the!? (?vikram?)?
?…?Vikram? (?shera?) ?she said slowly and moved to him?.. ??…?shayed app humin pasand karte ho par hum app ko?.. ?? ?she stopped and thought of the right word?.. ??…?bhay?.. ?Bhay maante hain?..????? (?shera?) ?she knew this was stupid she crossed her fingers?.. ?Vikram narrowed his eyes? ??…?bhay??.. ?Hmm shayed app sahi keh rahi hai?.. ?Hum app ke tara bilkul nahi hai?.. ?? (?vikram)?..?

Some were macho-men?.. ?
This love story ended even before it started
Flashback?: ?
Shera and karan were in sheras room?.. ?While she was sitting on the bed thinking a way out of this?.. ?He was resting his back on the dresser examining her body?. (?you know typical men?).. ?
?…?toh kya app humesha aise chup chap apnhi apne main kuch sochte rahti hai?? (?karan?)?
?…?kyun tumhe koi etaraaz hai kya?? (?shera?) ?she wasnt used to rude but still she just hated people staring not at her at her body?..?
?…?kya hum jaan sakte hai ke rajkumari ko kuansi baat sata rahi hai?? (?karan?)?
?…?voh kya hai na?.. ?hum ajj pooja ke waqt hum toh rab se kehna bhool gayye ke humme boore nazar se voh humin bachay?.. ?Issi liye hume app ki iss nazar se buhut ghin aa rahe hain (shera?)?
?…?oh? (?karan?). ?He moved towards her and sat on the bed?.. ??…?hum toh sirf yeh dekh rahe thee ke kya app k humare layek hai?.. ?? (?karan? ) ?he wrapped his arms around her? .. ?While shera just glance at him in disgust trying to keep her anger in control for a princess is the respect of her father?.. ?She used to hate that?.. ?She just wanted to kick his butt?.. ?But she chose a more non dishonor bringing way? .. ?Well not bringing for her?.. ?
?…?matlab?.. ?App main itna khaas kya hain?? (?shera?) ?
?…?hum main kya hai?? (?karan?) ?he said using full sarcasm? .. ?He took off his shirt?.. (?though it was sleeveless?.. ) ?he started showing off his muscles and shera sat there and watched in a so called full? ??…?amazement? (?boredom is more like it? ) ?she stood up?.. ?And putted her hand on his shoulder?.. ?She moved perfectly acting to examine his muscles?.. ?She moved from right to left? .. ?Acting to examine his back she took off her hand?.. ?She moved to face him?.. ?
?…?acha hain?.. ?Aur app ko hum kaise lage?? (?shera?)?
He dropped of the pose?.. ?He stood still for her to? ??…?examine? ?
?…?bura nahi balke shayed sirf app hi hai humare layak?.. ?? (?karan?)?
?…?app ko aisa kyun lakta hai?? (?shera?) ?she acted perfectly to be interested in him?.. ?
?…?voh apka yeh patla jism?..?? (?karan?) ?he wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her to him?.. ??…?yeh khoobsurat chehra?..?? ?he moved one of his hands to her face touching and feeling her soft smooth skin?.. ?Her hands were turning into fists?.. ?She was trying her best to blush and smile?.. ?She heard foot steps?. ?Surely of her parents and chand?.. ?She putted her hand on his arms which were wrapped around the waist?.. ?She started to scream?.. ?Her parents and chand came in the room?.. ?Shera started shedding tears?..?
?…?MAA?. ?? (?shera?) ?she ran to her?.. ??…?dekho yeh kya karne ki koshish karra hai?.. ? she said in a hurt and honest voice she hugged her mom?.. ?As if so hurt and innocent on the other hand karan had no idea of what she was doing?.. ?Her father kicked him out of the room and beaten him to death until he was thrown out of the palace?..?
Some were just too plain shy?.. ?
Flashback?:?
She and a prince were in the palace?.. ?She was just taking him around and around?.. ?To make him go crazy?.. ?She asked?:?
?…?arre humare awaz toh tak gayye ab app bolye app ko kya pasand hai?? (?shera?)?
He blushed?..?
?…?voh?.. ?Voh?. ? hume toh bas unhe talwaar baazi pasand hai? (?prince?)?
?…?aur?.. ?? (?shera?)?
?…?aur?.. ?Aur?.. ?Aur?.. ?Hume? .. ?Hume?. ?Hume.? (?prince?)?
Shera kept staring at him?.. ?
?…?app hume iss tara matt ghoor ye?.. ?Humin sharam atti hai??!?? (?prince?)?
Shera narrowed her eyes?.. ?And raised her eye borrows?.. ..?
Her parents and his came in the room?.. ?They asked for their opinions?.. ?The prince agreed but shera?:?
?…?inn main koi buray toh nahi hai?.. ?Par log?.. ?Voh kya kahenge?? ?Ke dulhan se zada dulha sharma raha hai??! ?Humph?!!!!!?(shera?)?

Overall? ?they all could be come her friends? (?no macho men allowed?....).. ?But as a life partner??.. ?No?.. ?she always thought of being with someone like her?.. ?And then she met him?.. ?He was always positive? (?or to say he acted as he was positive?..).. ?Always had a reason to laugh for?.. ?He loved being free?.. ?He had charming features?.. ?But the most thing she ever prized was his so called? ??…?heart? .. ?shera loved him she thought she was made for him and only him?.. ?There was no possibility that he wasnt her one true love?.. ?She adored him at the fullest?.. ?He was perfect in every way though he wasnt a prince?.. ?But her family never did mind at her choice?.. ?She always chose the best?.. ?And never does now anyone curses her choices?.. ?It was practically impossible to figure out he was acting?.. ?Just for his amusement? ?no one blamed her?.. ?She blamed herself?.. ?She always thought she was responsible for her familys death?.. ?She was behind her injured father?.. ?So she punished herself locking herself in that dark dark world?.. ?Make it grow?.. ?Making her tears fall and fall?.. ?she now never let anyone close to her?.. ?No one at all?.. ?As shera was by the sea?.. ?Her tears were falling continuously?.. ?No matter how she tried to hide them?.. ?All the soldiers had already knew?.. ?Chand went to her and sat next to her?.. ?She looked at him for a moment?.. ?She tried to be as firm as possible?.. ?
?…?kya hua?? (?shera?) ?
?…?humko toh kuch nahi hua?.. ?Par app ke ansu?? (?chand?)?
?…?tum jaante ho?.. ?Toh kyun poochre ho?? (?shera?) ?she turned her head back facing the sea?..?
?…?ab jo hua usko yaad karke?.. ?Kyun apne ansu bhaari hain?.. ?Bhool jayye usse? (?chand?)?
?…?tumhe kya lagta hai?.. ?Ke usse bholana asaan hai?? (?shera?)?
?…?hmmm?. ?Mushkill hoyga?.. ?Par humare shera kuch bhi kar sakti hai?.. ?? (?chand?)?
?…?haan?.. ?Kamzoor bui pad sakti hai?..?? (?shera?)?
?…?arre mere shera uss kamzoori ko kabhi bhi haraa sakti hai?..?? (?chand?)?
?…?toh tumhare shera nahi hoon ? (?shera?)?
?…?main apni shera ko jaanta hoon?.. ?App usse humesha kyun yaad karti hai?.. ?App ab yeh yaad rakhye ke Maharaj todi din main teekh ho jaenge?..? (chand?)?
?…?haan?.. ?? (?shera?) ?she smiled?.. ?The thought of her father getting out of bed?.. ?Kept a peace in her mind?.. ?And a smile on her beautiful face?.. ?Though he would never let her have a smile?.. ?A peace of mind?.. ?Thus he kept haunting and haunting her mind?.. ?Making her heart ache?.. ?Never letting her past wounds to be forgotten?.. ?Of course her remembers her?.. ?But with smile?.. ?What he had done to her was a win for him?.. ?Laughing at her?.. ?Her wounds?.. ?Her love for him?.. ?Whenever he remembered her?.. ?He just let out a laugh?.. ?A smile the same smile he stole away from someone just for his peace?.. ?His please?.. ?That smile which was her life?.. ?Her pride?.. ?Her precious smile?.. ?Leaving her tears?.. ?Pain?.. ?Wounds?.. ?And old bitter sweet memories though a lot a of people tried returning it back to her?.. ?She didnt budge?.. ?They tried giving her peace?.. ?But whenever they did he just came back to her mind?.. ?

In Aryanagar?:?
In the same garden where DS are? ?
?…?dhara?,..?? (?agni?) ?he stopped seeing what was in front of him?.. ?
Dharam snapped out of it after hearing his voice?..?
?…?voh mujhe laga ke?.. ?Arre voh chodo mujhe abhi lag raha hain ke mujhe jaana chahiye?! ?? (?agni?)?
?…?arre nahi?.. ?App boliye?..?? (?dharam?) ?
?…?haan?.. ?Voh kya hai?.. ?Todi din baad ek buhut badi pooja hai aur mujhe lagta hai ke usski tayaariyan ke baare main hume ab baat karni chahiye? (?agni?)?
?…?app jayye hum rajkumari sia ke saath atte hai? (?dharam?)?
Agni raised his eye borrows And nodded his head?.. ?And went on his way?.. ?Though dharam had a look?.. ?A worried look?.. ?He knew agni was too evil to be quiet about well them?.. ?He had a bad feeling about this?.. ?He crossed his fingers?.. ?And moved to the castle?..?

Veer?:?
Veer was watching sheras every move?.. ?He was just too interested in that story?.. ?Well it was pretty weird how someone so happy could turn so sad? .. ?It was just plain illogical?.. ?Even though he was going probably through the same?.. ?But he could handle it?.. ?our veer would handle anything but never see another person go through the same?..?That was one of the most valuable and prized thing about him? .. ?His caring heart and generous deeds?.. ?his name showed power and will?.. ?Though he never took a control over anyone?.. ?He was a real king?.. ?The king who cares about his people he never cared about himself?.. ?He sometimes didnt eat food?.. ?Or hurt himself badly?.. ?He could not see anyone doing the same?.. ?He solved everyone elses problems?.. ?But never his own?.. ?He loved all?.. ?He just hated any rules?.. ?Which stated some are bigger then some?.. ?Will rules?.. ?He hated the aryavrats because they took their rules to seriously?.. ?And the shramiks nodded their head in agreement?.. ?They never gave let them selves fight?.. ?They were afraid?.. ?Afraid?.. ?A fright that aryavrats had planted in their hearts?.. ?A fright Their strong hearts?.. ?How they always used to work as an one hand?..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
lovely part dear
its mindblowing
im loving ur ff
do cont soon dear
very well written
thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
thanx for updating it as u said on monday
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Wow, wonderful update.Thank u dear for brilliant update.Keep it up dear.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
I'm waiting for ur next update.

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