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wowww... gr88 update....
waiting for the next part...
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Part 9?:?
They got going again?.. ?After traveling a bunch of miles?.. ?Night was starting?.. ?The sunset was a few minuets away?.. ?Shera was still lost in her own world?.. ?Remembering that day when she first met him?.. ?Remembering their first fight?.. ?Chand noticed that?.. ?He looked at her?.. ?Though shera didnt notice him?.. ?After walking a few more hours?.. ?Shera noticed everything dark it was already night???
?…?arre raat ho gayye aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi!? (?shera?) ?she was totally confused she stopped her stallion
?…?batane ki toh kitni koshish ki par app toh sunne ne ke liye raazi nahi thi? (?chand?) ?
?…?oh?.. ?? (?shera?)?
She was out of it a bit?.. ?She couldnt hear anything around her?.. ?She? ?was just lost in her own world she got off her stallion?.. ?And went by the lake? (?which was pretty far from the tents?). ?She splashed some water on her face?.. ?She wiped her face?.. ?She saw someones reflection in it?.. ?It was him? (?sorry I keep using? ??…?him?.. ?his its just that I like to create suspicions?) ?she turned back no one was there? ?
She turned and splashed some water on her face?.. ?She smiled at the thought that her father will be walking and talking again?.. ?She could see a little light from the candle now?.. ?But she cursed herself immensely for being the reason which caused this mishap? .. ?She bent her head no matter how everyone told her it wasnt her fault she never listened she blamed herself?.. ?She bent her head down and let a tear escape her eye?.. ?She saw a hand on her shoulder she turned to find chand standing frowning down upon her? .. ?She turned back to the lake
?…?mujhe uss pe bharosa nahi karna chahiye tha ? (?shera?) ?she murmured under her breath?.. ?Chand lived with her so long he could hear her thoughts
?…?pyaar main agar bharosa nahi toh voh pyaar nahi kehlaya jata hai(chand?) ?he conveniently sat next to her?.. ?
?…?toh phir mujhe pyaar nahi karna chahiye tha ? (?shera?) ?she cried out loudly?.. ?It made such a lost to her?.. ?Her family?.. ?Her happiness?.. ?Her people?.. ?She cried moaned and groaned but it never did help?.?
?…?pyaar nahi karingi toh kaise jiyenge?.. ?App ke pyaar main koi galati nahi thi? .. ?? (?chand?)?
?…?chand?.. ?? (?shera?) ?she just sobbed?.. ?Her eyes were aching she was really sleepy but she just wanted to calm down to go to sleep?.. ?She was mentally destroyed her brain just couldnt rest she didnt had a peaceful night sleep for? ?6? ?months? ?her life was nothing but a burden?.. ?It would have been if chand wasnt with her?.. ?He always made her feel young?.. ?Because chand usually acted mature?, ?noble?.. ?And independent? .. ?He always hid the world from her?.. ?And made her think she ruled?.. ?He let her fly out fly in the vast blue sky as a freely soaring bird?.. ?He always answered her every please?, ?he filled out as her big brother he was three years older then her?.. ?Even when she was just a little cute kid she actually thought that he was her big brother?.. ?She even called him bhayya but when she grew up she just came to her senses though the day she found out that he wasnt her blood brother?. ?She cried itna roi itna roi ke uski akhe laal ho gaye L?.. ?he was her right hand man?.. ?The first when she went for advice?.. ?Her father always complained but chand used to say? ??…?arre maharaj kya hua agar rajkumari ji humse madat leti hai hum toh appse lete hai aur maharaj maan bhi jaate the?.. ?
she putted her head on his shoulder and went to sleep in a glance?.. ?Chand looked at her and murmured under his breath? (?pagli?) ? the soldiers were happy to see this chand and shera were best friends?.. ?Never used to let go?.. ?Shera always relied on him to do everything for her?.. ?Even if it appears that shera is taking care of sunaina its really chand hes the real brains behind her?.. ?Behind them veer watched this his lips formed a smile? .. ?He turned facing his back at them? .. ?Still smiling?.. ?Thought for a moment and went back to his tent?.. ?

In the morning?.. ?Agni went on a stroll through Aryanagar?.. ?Pleasantly enjoying the peaceful breeze of that day?.. ?Our agni loved the morning breeze?.. ?He loved gazing at the vast sky he loved it more when it was full with clouds the white soft clouds?.. ?The gentle breeze hitting his? ?charming face?.. ?Agni had a problem he usually got lost in nature? .. ?You can imagine he was very adventurous? ?he had his own way to look?.. ?Explore?.. ?Seek?.. ?And find?.. ?He loved to explore? .. ?His problem was that he never notice time go by

Far beyond a jungle stood an old wood cottage?.. ?There were some soils around it with the finest fruits growing? .. ?The door opened out came a slim girl figure wearing a red ghagra and blouse? .. ?On her lips a beautiful humming song?. ?She held up a watering can she watered? ?all the plants she turned her dazzling blue eyes were furies her pink lips had an angry frown? .. ?She looked around? .. ?Nodded her head negatively?.. ?
?…?ajj toh yeh dono gayee buhur ho chuki aur yeh dono?.. ?Main nahi hoti toh kya hota inka? ?she murmured under her breath she had a sweet voice?.. ?Which didnt suit her angriness right now?..?
?…?GEET?.. ?CHANDI she yelled all the way to the cottage?..?
The cottage had 4? ?rooms each girl had one room?.. ?And a living room right when you enter the cottage?.. ?It Didnt had many furniture the living room was just a small table with a bowl of fruits on it?.. ?And just a sofa type seat?.. ?She made her way to the 2nd door?.. ?She opened it?.. ?And smiled at the apperence it wasnt exactly clean?.. ?Just yesterdays clothes on the floor?.. ?And sword carelessly thrown down though the crossbow was kept clean?.. ?In its place?.. ?And with delicacy?.. ?The curtains were open but the white chiffon were closed?.. ?She went and open them?.. ?And made her way to the single bed?.. ?And caringly putted her hand on the girls head?.. ?And started to caress her hair?.. ?
?…?geet?.. ?Geet?.. ?Arre ab toh uth jao she whispered?.. ?
?…?arre jaanki didi app pehle dakoo rani ko uthaiye na ? (?geet?) ?she said in her deep and heavy voice?..?
?…?dekho pehle yeh bachpaan chodo aur chandni ko uss ke naam se bulao aur vaise bhi voh tumse choti hai?.. ?Aur ab jaldi utho?.. ?Naha dholo?.. ?Kapde pehno kamra saaf karo?.. ?Aur nashta lene aa jaana ? (?janki?).. ?She hit her once on the head and made her way out?.. ?
Geet afterward threw the blanket off stretched her arms?.. ?And moved her hair from her face?.. ?Reviling her cute little face?.. ?She had big naughty eyes?.. ?Slim curled up lips?.. ?Puffy cheeks?.. ?And a cute? ?nose?.. ?She looked like she was a ten year old though she was actually 15? ?she had a cute innocent face?.. ?She started blowing her hair from her face?.. ?She was really annoyed how her hair used to fall on her face?.. ?She went off the bed?.. ?Looked out the window took a deep breath she stood there for a few moments? .. ?And then let out a sigh?.. ?And went to begin a new day?.. ?
Our janki didi made her way to chandnis room?.. ?Which was messy and dark?.. ?She sighed?.. ?She took a good look around the floor?.. ?It was filled with black leather garments and weapons?.. ?She placed her arms around her waist?..?
?…?dhiri dhiri mujhe bhi samajh main aaa raha hai ke isse geet dakoo rani kyun bulate hai?..?? (?janki?) ?she moved very carefully to the curtains afraid she might wound her feet?.. ?This girl had no idea how dangerous her room was?.. ?She narrowly escaped when of the blades?.. ?She opened the curtains?.. ?Letting the morning sunshine in this dark dangerous room?.. ?She went to the bed and sat on it?.. ?Seeing a girl facing her back to the window and her big sis?.. ?Janki did the same with her hair like she did with geet?.. ?
?…?chandni arre kaise ho ajj tum?.. ?Arre ajj bhool gaye kya hai ajj tumhara janam din hain?!! (?janki?) ?she said the last brithday part with glee and a cheer? .. ?Chandni opened one of her eyes?.. ?A green large and real sparkly?.. ?
?…?ab chalo utho?.. ?? (?janki?).. ?Chandni got up from her bed revealing her extraordinary face?.. ?She had that evil face look?.. ?Green eyes?.. ?Red lips long small nose? .. ?She had that vamp look?. ?She was really beautiful?.. ?Though she never did care much about her looks?.. ?She was more of a tomboy janki gave her a hug
?…?haan kaise hain mere dakoo rani? (?geet?) ?she leaned naughtily on the door?.. ?Smiling wickedly?.. ?
?…?ajj nahi geet arre bechare ka janam din aur tum ? (?janki?) ?
?…?teekh hai janam din Mubarak ho?.. ?Tum jiyo hazaron saal?, ?saal ke din ho pachaas hazar? (?geet?) ?she said in a complaining voice?.. ?She folded her arms?..?
?…?didi app toh chandni se zaada pyaar karti hai? (?geet?)?
?…?nahi yahan baat mere pyaar ke nahi balke tumhare shrarat ki hai?. ?Poore pandara saal ke ho gaye ho tabhi humesha shrarat?.. ?Yeh toh sirf baara? ?? (?janki?) ?she was cut by chandni?..?
?…?teara ? (?chandni?) ?she reminded them?.. ?
?…?haan haan teara sirf aur shrarat toh bilkul nahi karti? (?janki?) ?
Geet just made an innocent face?.. ?
?…?didi arre mujhe toh sirf thoda maja karna pasand aur aur?.. ?Agar isse nahi pasand hai toh? ?MAIN KYA KAROON she ran out of the room? ..?
?…?arre tu toh jaake nashta tayaar kar?..?? (?janki?) ?she smiled at her shenanigans?, ?she turned to the birthday girl? .. ?Who was looking quite disappointed? ..?
?…?kya hua?? (?janki?)?
?…?didi voh ajj bhi mujhe maharaj ke paas jana padega? (?chandni?).. ?
Jankis smile faded and turned into a frown?.. ?
?…?oh?.. ?Toh kya hua shayed tumhe tumhara tohfa vahi miljaye ga? (?janki?) ?this was a sad news to her too?.. ?But she being the big sister?.. ?So she always tried to make things happy and cheerful?.?
?…?arre didi rajmahal main mujhe kya mile ga? (?chandni?)?
?…?ermmmmmrajkumar ? (?janki?)?
?…?sheh didi mujhe koi rajkumar nahi chahiye? (?chandni?)?
?…?teakh hai jao aur jaake tayaar toh ho jao? (?janki?)?
After saying that she went out to the living room still? ?trying to avoid the blades?. ?Hey?!! ?Careful?..?
After getting ready chandni was wearing one of the close-fitting black leather garments it was a one piece covering her whole body except her arms it was sleeveless? (?kinda like the spacesuits? ) ?with some cool add-ons like the silver chain tied around her waist? ?the silver bangle type on the beginning of her arm? .?the black gloves and her hair in a ponytail she had long soft black hair which suited her face but not her tomboy attitude
And geet was wearing a blue churidar and kameez? .. ?A long scarf?.. ?And some blue bangles and opened her hair? .. ?She had shoulder Length hair? .. ?And janki was wearing the same red ghargra?.. ?Red Chudis?.. ?a red pendent?.. ?Some red earring?.. ?And her hair in a braid? .. ?With one of her hair strand leaning on the edge of her forehead?.. ?The girls sat around the table janki? ?served breakfast to the girls? .. ?After eating both went out to start the day?.. ?Now your probably wondering where are they going well chandni works a stuntwoman well not exactly in the movies?.. ?She does some stunts for a kings entertainment? (?no hes not arya or jai?.).. ?And? ?geet sold the fruits janki grew?.. ?They had a normal peaceful life?.?

Shera was sitting besides the lake?.. ?With her sword next to her?.. ?The day was pretty fresh and a little windy she just looked around for an amount of time?.. ?chand came and stood by her side?.. ?She smiled at him? ?The place was looking really beautiful this day?.. ?She got up and went to touch one of the red roses?.. ?chand followed? ?Red roses were her favorite?.. ?She leaped her hand from behind the rose?.. ?It was really one of the best?.. ?She slowly touched its cushiony soft fiber petals and slowly moved her hand to the leaves?.. ?The rose was really beautiful she leaned down and Gentelly kissed its petals?.. ?And smiled?.. ?Unknown to her she was being watched chand saw eyes sticking out through the plants?.. ?He went and came behind the guy?..?
?…?kuan ho tum?..??? (?chand?)?
The guy quickly reacted and turned?.. ?And it? .. ?Was veer
?…?VEER?? ?Humara matlab rajkumar?!!?? (?chand?)?
Veer quickly putted his hand on chands mouth? ..?
?…?Shhhh?.. ?Agar shera mujhe yahan dekh lege toh?..?? (?veer?) ?he turned back to reassure shera didnt heard her loudmouth friend? ..?
Shera was still caressing the rose?.. ?Veer turned back to chand? ..?
?…?kya hai?? (?veer?) ?he whispered? ?
?…?arre jawab kyun nahi dere ho?? (?veer?) ?
Chand pointed to his hand which was still on chands mouth veer took it off?..?
?…?mujhe?..?? (?chand?) ?but he was cut of by veer?..?
?…?arre itni zor se nahi(veer?)?
?…?mujhe kuch nahi tumhe kya hai?? (?chand?)?
?…?voh main?.. ?Tum log ka peaacha?.. ?Taki shera ko?.. ?Zadaa jaan sako? (?veer?)?
?…?acha?? (?chand?)?
?…?haan mujhe pata hai main acha hoon.? (?veer?)?
?…?main rajkumari ko abhi batata hoon? (?chand?)?
?…?pagal ho gaya hai kya?(veer?) ?he said it loud?.. ?So chand putted a finger on his lips?.. ?Trying to warn veer not so loud?, ?and trying hard not to laugh?..?
?…?mera matlab pagal hai kya agar mujhe sooli pe chadna hota toh main usse khud ja ke bata de at?.. ?Par mujhe todi sooli pe chadna hai? (?veer?)?
?…?galat agar tumhe sooli pe nahi chadna hota toh tum yahan aate nahi?.. ?Main tumhare liye rajkumari se jhoot nahi bolonga? (?chand?) ?chand started going to shera veer thought for a moment and the grabbed chands hand preventing from walking more chand turned
?…?tumhe mere kasam? (?veer?) ?chand took his hand back and forwarded to shera?.. ?Leaving an open-mouth veer
?…?acha tumhe shera ke kasam? (?veer?) ?chand stop and glanced back?.. ?Veer folded his arms and his formed a smile?.. ?Chand sighed and went right to the tents?.. ?Veer continued spying
Back to agni who again lost in nature?.. ?Strolled down with no stopping?.. ?He came to heard a? ?tiered old voice begging mercy?.. ?He ran to the source of the voice?.. ?He hid behind the plants?.. ?He expected to see another shramik but this time it was a villager?.. ?a lot of villagers were surrounding two people?.. ?One was a poor villager laying on the muddy floor?.. ?The other was a dakoo dressed in animal fur and some skulls?.. (?Raaka?) ? the poor villager begged mercy but the dakoo just kept whipping him?.. ?
?…?arre sarkar main ajj vasuli nahi de sakta mere beti ki shaadi?.. ?agh? (?villager?)?
?…?tumhare beti ki shaadi hai toh main kya karoon?.. ?Phool barsao?.. ?Aur uski aarti utaroo?.. ?Mujhe ab toh vasuli ka dogna chahiye? (?rakaa?) ?and with thaat he whipped him again?.. ?Unmercifully beating the poor man?.. ?
Agni reached out for his sword but before he could attack a little arrow flew through the air?.. ?Striking right on raakas neck?.. .. ?Raaka yelped in pain? .. ?fell on his knees and died? .. ?Leaving agni and the villagers yearning to know about their new messiah?.. ?After raaka fell down on the ground?.. ?Behind him?.. ?Behind the plants a slim figure with a blue dress on and a crossbow in front of her face?.. ?She smiled for a second and ran away?.. ?But too late agni already saw her?.. ?He ran after her?.. ?But he was stopped by two soldiers? ..?
?…?rajkumar sarkar ne app ko bulaya hai? (?soldier?)?
?…?tum dono yahan do pal ruku hum abhi aye? (?agni?) ?
He ran after the girl and saw her?.. ?She was facing him with her back and running? ..?
?…?RUKU?.. ?? (?agni? ) ?the girl stopped?. ?And her scarf flew from the wind?.. ?To agnis hands?.. ?Agni saw the soldiers calling him?.. ?He ran to them?.. ?And the girl ran away?.. ?He followed her with his eye?.. ?Until she disappeared in the day light?.. ?Agni turned back and walked with the guards?.. ?He took a good look at the scarf and thought?.. ??…?hum phir zaroor milinge?.. ?and he thought about the mysterious? ?messiah all the way back to the castle?..?
Chandni went to a green land? (?the rajya is Ajmer?).. ?The people there were quite happy?.. ?Children ran through out the kingdom and played between the green grass?.. ?The colorful musk flowers?.. ?Men were doing their jobs and women were chatting and taking care of babies?.. ?It was a normal kingdom with normal rules and people?.. ?Chandni rode her horse pass all this?.. ?And went to the emerald castle it was a very beautiful place?.. ?With a large garden with the best of roses and a fountain right in the middle it was obvious that the long live deer king someshwar of the kingdom was a fair and lovable person she rode across the garden to the gate?.. ?Handed her horse to one of the soldiers?. .. ?And walked through the gateway as if she owned it?. ?She bumped into somebody?.. .. ?The guy got furies and yelled?..?
?…?kaun hai? ?yeh?.. ?(guy?) ?his voice echoed back at him?..?
Chandni murmured?.. ??…?kitna batameez? ?hai?.. ?he widened his eyes?.. ?And made them at a really angry angle?.. .?seeing this She turned her face? ..?One of the soldiers said?.. ?
?…?rajkumar Sharman yeh hai Chandni ? (?soldier?) {?hes 15? ?yrs old he has large green eyes six-pack abs n looks really evil?}.. ?Chandni gasped?.. ?She placed one of her hands on her chest bent her head a little? ?
?…?maaf kar yeh ga rajkumar? (?chandni?)?
Sharman was about to protest but chadni ran to the royal coliseum? .. ?Sharman raised his hand but she was out of there?.. ?Arre bichari kya karre rajkumar Sharman ka gussa toh shera se bhi battar hai agar vahan rahjaati toh hazar baatin sunne padte?.. ?Aur vaise usse ajj badi derr ho gayye?..?
Sharman went to the coliseum too?.. ?He wanted to see what his father always praised?.. ?Though he was still angry that she didnt let him finish?..?
When he entered the coliseum? (?from a special entrance for royals a large stage where in the middle his father was sitting on the grand arm chair and Sharman sat next to him on another armchair?.. ) ?he saw chandni kneeled down on one leg and her head bent low
Then somebody started drumming?.. ?
Chandni got on her legs?.. ?Still her head was bent?.. ?Then a man with a sword ran towards her? (?from behind?).. ?She opened up her thin crust rod? (?samurai stick? )?And in one blow that guy was laying on the floor?.. ?She smiled and rose her head?.. ?There were a few stunt things? (?like a fire ring and there were like lions all around the coliseum? ) ?chandni escaped all and went through the fire rings?.. (?she was doing a lot of aerobics? ) ?she just jumped from the lion and throught the fire ring?. ?With her rod still in her hand? ?doing all this hard work she was yet she still smiling?.. ?She couldnt believe? ?that she got paid just for doing her hobbies?.. ?She just loved challenges?.... ?Quizzes and mysteries now those were her type of games? .. ?She continued her act?.. ?Then she jumped through a fire ring?.. ?And landed back where she was kneeling earlier one difference this time she was kneeling on both legs?.. ?The king was mightily impressed?.. ?He got up from the grand armchair and clapped?.. ?Which was very rare as the dear king of such a large kingdom?.. ?The holder of authority the ruler? .. ?The hakim?.. ?The emperor?.. ?A royal clapping to a low cast how rare is that? his clapping noise filled the dead silent coliseum?.. ?No matter how much the king was impressed?.. ?The prince was still sitting unimpressed leaned on him armchair?.. ?It was quite obvious that it wasnt very easy to impress him?.. ?He just had his hand under his chin as a sign of boredom?.. ?
?…?vah?.. ?Ajj ka khel toh tumne buhut acha kara tha?..?? (?someshwer?) ?he then stopped clapping and went to do his work
After the king left?.. ?She stood up and moved to the door leading out from the coliseum?.. ?Sharman got up?.. ?He followed her with his eye for a moment?. ?And then went out himself
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Very wonderful part.Keep it up dear.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
lovely part dear....
wanna see some veer shera moments.... 😍
waiting for the next part... 😳
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Part 10?:?
After watching shera our veer was really confused?.. ?What type of a girl was she??.. ?She lets just say? ??…?acted to be the mean?.. ?dark?.. ?Rough?.. ?And demon girl?.. ?Though when she was alone she was a smiling happy loving loveable type girl?.. ?She was obviously a strong hearted girl?.. ?So how couldve she changed?.. ?due to some misfortune?.. ?he was laying on his bed?.. ?Yearning for his mothers? ?pari mas? ?and his most adored nanis word of advise?.. ?He thought they was the only one who truly understood him and he understands them too?.. ?Theyre? ?simple women?.. ?Not like shera or sia?.. ?Or all the other girls he met?.. ?They were all so confusing?.. ?thats why he always laughed at the thought of him falling love with some girlEven though he was a heartthrobevery princess?.. ?Fell for him?.. ?Even sia had a little crush on her little dever to be.though he was drooling over his nani? (?whos now in her palace nivis in her sasural? )?she was the only one who understood him perfectly? (?even more then niv? )?And he found her beautiful and charming even at this age she didnt wear much jewelry or beautiful dresses?.. ?But he still found her very pretty he even called himself her boyfriend?.. ?Hes always like? ??…?agar nanaji guzar gayye toh kya hua main hoon na app mujhse shaadi kar lijye!?.. ?he even sang mujhse shaadi karoge at her birthday?!.. ?Beside saying? ??…?nameste or any other hindu greeting and joining his hands when he met her he said? ??…?mujhe shaadi karoge? and he opened his hands as he if he was trying to beg?. ?He was drooling over his nani and I mean badly?.. ?He always thought that his nana was a lucky man?.. ?But his nana stole away veers dream girl away?.. ?He seriously was in love with her?.. ?And this shera was confusing him too much?.. ?Veers head was spinning?.. ?To end his misery a soldier entered his tent?.. ?
?…?rajkimar?.. ?Rajkumari nikelne ki shruvat karrahe hai(soldier?) ?he bowed his head once and went out
Veer sat up?.. ?And fetched his sword?.. ?He went out?.. ?After some of the soldiers wrapped up the tents?.. ?They were ready they were just waiting to shera to start moving shera there was caressing the hair of her male stallion?.. ?She fed him an apple and some sugar cubes?.. ?She gently moved her hand to his back?.. ?He had long hair?.. ?She didnt know but she enjoyed horses who had long hai?.. ?Which blew in the wind?.. ?Even shehzada enjoyed that too shera bored of caressing his hair?.. ?She gave him a sweet sugary kiss on? ?the forehead?.. ?Now our stallion here had a bit an attitude? (?arre attitude nahi hoga toh shera ka manpasand ghoda kaise hoga? ).. ?So he started blushing?..(?I am not sure if thats possible but anyway I am crazy?) ?shera giggled?.. ?Then chand said everythings ready and they started the journey again?.. ?

Agni was walking with the two soldiers?.. ?and still wondering about the unknown messiah?.. ?That was till he spotted geet with her cart of fruits the firs thought to his mind was she was the messiah?.. ?Same blue dress same shoulder length hair?.. ?Be reached out for her stole which he creased and putted in his pocket?.. ?He told the soldiers to stop until he returned it?.. ?But he didnt want to cut the convo between her and an elderly lady?..?
?…?arre voh kele kitne ke hai? (?lady?) ?she pointed to a branch of yellow and fine bananas? ?
?…?char ane ke do ? (?geet?) ?
Agni got upset he found this an extraordinary price?.. ?He placed the stole back in his pocket as he was sure now that she wasnt the messiah after all a messiah will charge an acceptable price?..?
The woman was about to pay but agni stepped in between and said?:?
?…?yeh bhi koi keemat hai? (?agni?)?
?…?arre beta(lady?) ?she tried explaining to him something but agni again rudely interrupted? ?
?…?maji app ko nahi pata yeh bahar ke log kitna? [?cheat?] ?karte hai? (?agni?)?
Geet got angry at that?.. ?She couldnt bare someone calling her a cheater?.. ?She got very furious and went stood facing agni? ..?
?…?dekho mujhe agar tumne? [?cheater?] ?bulaya toh main tumhara itna bora haal karonge ke tumhare apne bhi tumhe pehchan nahi paynge? (?geet?) ?her breath became heavier?..?
?…?acha ek toh inn logon ko bekoof banate ho aur upar se mujhse moo ladate ho? (?agni?)?
?…?kyun tu koi rajkumar hai kya?.. ?Shakal se to ameer lakta hai par bartav rajkumaro ka nahi? (?geet?) ?she eyed his body?.. ?He was looking perfectly like a charming prince? .. ?But this damn attitude?.. ?
?…?tum toh koi rajkumari nahi dikhthi(agni?) ?the thought of someone not thinking he was a prince just embarrassing?. ?Everyone who were doing there daily work stopped in their tracks and saw the couple fight?.. ?Everyone was shocked to see agni there some women even whispered to each other saying? ??…?arre geet ko roko agar sarkar jaivardhan ko pata chala toh voh usse sooli pe chadha denge?..?
?…?agar main koi rajkumari hoti toh yahan main phal bechrahi hoti? (?geet?)?
?…?toh agar tum koi rajkumari nahi ho toh tumhe logo ko? [?cheat?] ?karne ke ijazat milgaye (agni?)?
Before she could answer the two soldiers came and took agni with them?.. ?The villagers sighed with relief?.. ?And geet got back to her customer?.. ?With a bad attitude about the strange boy who called her a cheater?.. ?
?…?beti tumhe pata hai ke voh kuan hai?.. ?Voh?..?? (?lady?) ?she gratefully took the fruit and placed some coins on the table? .. ?But before she can continue she was cut off by geet?..?
?…?mujhe nahi pata aur nahi jana hai?.. ?batameez ? (?geet?) ?In her full cute childish voice?..?
The woman nodded her head negatively and went to do her daily chores? ..?

Back in the palace?:?
The day usually started with sias voice filling the palace?.. ?But today everything was calm?.. ?Enjoyable and very suspicious dharam out of suspicion went to sias room?.. ?And saw her getting ready?.. ?She was in front of her mirror putting on jewelry?.. ?Thats until she saw dharam leaned on the door?. ?She smiled and slightly blushed?.. ?She told the maids to go out in a?.. ?peaceful? ?voice? (?wow can love really change a person so much??) ?
?…?arre darwaze pe kyun kade ho andar ao na? (?sia?) ?
Dharam moved from the door to sia?.. ?He closed the thin translucent fabric? (?or the so called door?) ?and moved to her?.. ?
?…?hum kaise lag rahe hai?? (?sia?)?
?…?hmmmm?.. ?? (?dharam? ) ?he thought for a moment and from behind his back he brought a beautiful necklace? .. ?And putted it one sias neck?..?
?…?buhut sundar(dharam? ) ?he tied his arms around her waist?.. ?
Nivriti was walking pass sias room?. ?Out of suspicion she checks if sia is alright?.. ?She saw them from the? ??…?door? .?she opened her mouth?.. ?And widened her eyes?.. ?She was about to go in but agni stopped herhe negatively nodded his head?.. ?Agni had a puzzled face on him which assured nivriti that he needed her word of advice? ..?She left dharam and sia to their privacy and followed agni?.. ?She followed him to his room?.. ?
?…?kya hua?? ?Tum itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho?? (?niv?)?
?…?arre ajj mujhe ek ladki mili?.. ?Nahi? [?actually?] ?mujhe do ladkiya mili? (?agni?) ?
?…?haan toh?? (?niv?)?
?…?ek toh buhut badi messiah aur ek batameez nasamjh? (?agni?)?
?…?arre pate ki karo? (?niv?) ?she really got irritated? ?
?…?voh doosre ladki buhut badi? [?cheater?] ?thi?.. ?Usne ek maji ko buhut mahenge kele beche? (?agni?)?
Nivriti who still didnt find any weird or strange news in his words
?…?acha?.. ?Kitne ke thee? ??? (?nivriti?)?
?…?4? ?ane ke 2(agni?) ?he said in a huff and folded his arms
?…?KYA!(nivriti?) ?this was very surprising news
?…?haan kitne me?..?? (?agni?)?
?…?itne saste kele(nivriti?) ?
?…?huh?? (?agni?) ?he was totally confused
?…?arre kele ka muasam itne pehle katam ho gaya ab toh ek kele ke liye tume 6? ?ane ki kimat dene padte hai?.. ?Agni yeh bhi kya mehnga hai?? (?nivriti?)?
?…?voh mujhe laga ke?.. ?(agni?)?
?…?tum se humne kitni baar kaha hai ke jo cheez tumhe samjh nahi aye tum uss pe ungli mat uthaya karo?..?? (?nivriti?)?
?…?aur maine uss ke saath ladai shuru kardia? (?agni?)?
?…?KYA?! ?AGNI?!??(nivriti?)?
?…?voh buhut naraaz ho gayye(agni?)?
?…?agar jai jijaji ko pata chalega tohvoh uss bekasoor ko suli pe chadha denge(nivriti?)?
?…?haan par pitaji ko pata kaise chalega(agni?)?
?…?haan uppar vale ke shukur guzar ho aur ha kal ja kar usse maafi maang lena? (?nivriti?) ?saying that she went out of the room nodding her head negatively?.. ?After she left agni took off his black jacket? (?the one he always wears?) ?and moved to the window?.. ?He stretched his arms?.. ?And then looked down upon the royal gardens recalling his convo with her?.. ?After being calmed down and well proved wrong?.. ?He found her pretty cute? .. ?Her naughty black eyes?.. ?Her small lil nose?.. ?her slim ruby lips?.. ?All pink due to the angriness he brought upon her?.. ?How she fought with him with energy and effort?.. ?He just thought how much curter she will look while smiling?.. ?Even with an angry rage she looked so damn cute?. .. ?How cute can this girl be??.. ?He wondered that her effects on the people surrounding must be strong and infinite?.. ?Her smile must be a joy he mentally kicked himself for making her angry?.. ?He always searched for advices from elders?.. ?But rarely fulfils them?. ?He tries his best? ?nivriti had told him a thousand times to talk to girls with a respective and noble voice?.. ?But this new generation of boys are too dumb to understand girls but still somehow he really wanted to see her smiling?.. ?So he decided to ask forgiveness tomorrow after nivriti went out from his room she thought about how boys can be so cutely confused?.. ?Three of the boys always talked to niv if anything was troubling them?.. .. ?Even though her real son was only veer?.. ?She had 3? ?sons?.. ?But she still yearned for a daughter?.. ?Boys usually run to their moms when they need word of advice or to build self-steam and self-confidence?.. ?But a daughter is someone who stays with her 24X7?.. ?Girls are more loved then boys?.. ?She always wanted to have a little daughter?.. ?Shell surely be the laadli of the kingdom?.. ?But she knows one day her sons will choose the best of brides?.. ?That reminds her dharam and sia??.. ?Akkir kya baat hai chup chup ke pyaar karenge?? ?Ha?..? ?She made her way to sias room?.. ?But they werent there?.. ?She peeked Into the room there was no one inside?.. ?She moved to the window?.. ?And saw them down in the royal gardens the two lovebirds were walking together holding hands to the beautiful fountain?.. ?Well this guy might have chosen not a really good bride?.. ?Oh well she still has two more sons? ?
In agnis room JV? (?he knows about geet from the soldiers?.. ?Shhh it a surprise for agni?) .. ?And hes vey concerned about him?.. ?You see hes a very loving father? (?no slaps for agni in this FF?) ?hes a pretty nice guy? (?not a villain dont worry theres another throne obsessed villain?) ?his heart his soul his body?.. ?His everything is agni?.. ?He loved him dearly especially after the death of his mother he always tried to be the best of fathers he always tried to make agni feel no loss but he never did his mom was niv?.. ?But still as a father he was very concerned about him?.. ?Even having probably the riches of the world he only prized his son?.. ?And he was worth it?.. ?Agni was one of the champions and one of the heroes?.. ?Though like veer he didnt found Aryanagar rules fair?.. ?But he could never leave his father?.. ?His father didnt have anything against the rules what to do??.. ?His father was just a little rough on the week shramiks?.. ?Even though agni didnt had a very deep relation with them? .. ?He still knew that they were his people? ?actually aryawardhans people but what it makes no difference no matter who had the throne?.. ?His first concern must be his people?.. ?Everyone thought agni was the best heir to the throne?.. ?But agni had a weakness?.. ?He couldnt take very hard or tough decision?.. ?He was very kind-hearted? ?
?…?agni beta?.. ?Tum teakh toh ho?.. ??…?? (?JV?) ?he talked continually he would do anything for his sons safety
?…?pitaji(agni?) ?he wanted to assure him that he was fine
?…?tumhe koi chot nahi aye na?(JV?) ?jai didnt hear him he couldnt stop talking
?…?pitaji(agni?) ?again the irritated prince spoke this time with a higher volume
?…?arre tumhe pata hai ke main kitna darr gaya tha(JV?) ?but never the less jai will be jai
?…?PITAJI?!!?(agni?) ?he just lost it from irritation? ?
?…?kya hua beta?(JV?) ?
?…?app?.. ?Arre main toh sirf thodi derr ke liye bahar gaya tha?.. ?Aur app itna pareshaan hore hain jaise main koi jang main gaya tha? (?agni?)?
?…?arre tum mere ek akele bete ho?.. ?Agar tumhe kuch hojata toh main toh jiteji marjaata(JV?)?
?…?pitaji?!! ?Appne agar aise baat phir ki toh main buhut maronoga? .. ?App hazar saal jiyenge (agni?)?
?…?arre mujhe bodha banane ka itna shok hai tumhe(JV?)?
?…?pitaji he said in a complaining voice?.. ?And he hugged his dear father?.. ?After sometime they broke free?.?
?…?aur haan beta ajj joh ladki mili thi tujhe main ussey abhi maafi mangwata hoon? (?JV)he started moving to the door but agni stopped him saying?:?
?…?arre pitaji galti mere thi uski nahi ? (?agni?) ?his father stopped?.. ?
?…?par beta(JV?)?
?…?pitaji maine uss pe anjane main ungle uthai aur kal shaam ko main usse maafi bhi mangoonga? (?agni?)?
?…?par beta tum rajkumar aur voh?..?(JV?)?
?…?agar main rajkumar hoon toh kya mujhse galti nahi hoti?.. ?Aur agar hoti bhi hain toh main uss begunah ko sazadoon ya jaake usse maafi mangoo?? (?agni?) ?agni raised that question with unexpectedly brought a smile on JVs face
?…?maine zaroor buhut ache karam kiye honge jo mujhe tumhare jaisa beta mila?..?? (?JV?) ?he putted his hand on his head?.. ?A soldier interrupted the two? :?
?…?sarkar? [?the blacksmith?] ?aye hai apne saath naye hathyaar lekar? (?soldier?)?
?…?pitaji kya main ek naya khanjar khareed sakta hoon? (?agni?)?
?…?arre tum ek naya talwaar khareed lo(JV?)?
?…?kabhi nahi pitaji appne mujhe joh talwaar de thi usse main kabhi nahi badal sakta hoon(agni?)?
?…?tum bhi na jao aur naya khanjar khareed lo? (?JV?)?
?…?par main app ke bina nahi jaunga Chaliye?!!!? and he grabbed his arms and made him walk by force
Over here our nivi bua is getting bored she just spent sometime watching Lela and majnoh? ?live?.. ?Leaning from the window?.. ?She now was standing firm nothing new happening with Lela and her lover so she thought to spend some quality time with her eldest son?. ?But when she entered his room it was empty?.. ?She asked a soldier he said that he went too buy a new khanjar?.. ?She then just went to his room she saw his jacket misplaced on the bed?.. ?She nodded her head negatively?.. ?And picked it up she felt like something was in the pocket?.. ?She reached out and found the stole?.. ?Just then agni and JV stepped in?.. ?agni was highly shocked to see nivriti with the stole?.. ?
?…?agni?.. ?Yeh tumhare paas kaise ayaa she held up the stole?.. ?Jai started to over react
?…?agniiii?.. ?Yeh tumhare paas kaise ayaa?.. ?Aur abhi tak se kyun hai tumhare paas?. ?Kiss ladki ka hai yeh aur kya voh koi rajkumari hai?????? (?JV?) ?being a concerned father?.. ?He had to know about his sons relationship? .. ?And love life?.. ?Agni clearly fleshed by his fathers questions backed up from his father to his aunt?..?
?…?pitaji?. ?Voh inn sawalon ka uttar hum bua ko denge? ?? (?agni?) ?he his behind her as his dad completely lost it with the stole business? ..?
?…?par?..? JV was a really concerned father?.. ?So nivriti had to take him out of the room? ?
?…?jijaji hume agni jab sab kuch bataega toh hum foran aa ke app ko bata denge? ?
?…?par nivriti yeh dubatta
?…?hum unn sab cheez ke baare main sawal karenge teakh hai
?…?haan? ..?haan? ?he was really really concerned?,, ?because everyone knows at the age of 15? ?kids get an obsession?.. ?Which concerned him very much because men were too menish to understand kids problems?.. ?And he being alone parent?.. ?Especially a father he didnt know what he was thinking or doing?.. ?But he knew nivriti filled his lost of mother?.. ?So he kind of calmed down? ?
?…?bua pitaji?..?? (?agni?)?
?…?voh sab maine samhaliya ha(nivriti?)?
?…?ab buhut achi hain(agni?)?
?…?tum mere tarif chodo aur iski shuru karo? (?nivriti?) ?she held up the stole?.. ?
So agni started talking about his weird and unusual day?.. ?He came to the end of it
?…?kitni ajeeb bat hai? (?agni?)?
?…?nahi toh ? (?nivriti?)?
?…?bua voh dono kitne milte thee ek dusre se par kitne alag thee?..?(agni?)?
?…?tujhe kya pata voh alag thee?.. ?Shayed voh dost ho sakte hai?.. ?Judwa ho sakte hai?.. ?Aur shayed voh dono ek ho sakte hai ? (?nivriti?)?
?…?bua(agni?)?
?…?arre kya bua bua laga rakha hai?.. ?Par ha kahin tum undono main se kissi ko pyaar karna shuru kakr dia hai?? (?nivriti?)?
?…?nahin?.. ?Par haan mujhe ?. ?Nanima se shaadi karni hai? (?agni?)?
?…?AGNI?!! ?(nivriti?) ?she raised her hand to hit him but her ran away?.. ?She moved to the window?.. ?Still dharam and sia were outside?.. ?She sighed
?…?arre dharam sirf tum ho jo mere ma ko mere bahu nahi banana chahte? (?nivriti?)
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beautiful part dear
loved it
loving this fic
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Wonderful update👏.It's superb.Pls post next part soon dear.

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Part 11?:?
After walking a few miles?.. ?Shera came in contact with the mountain?.. ?And a what a large and tall mountain it was?.. ?After moments of staring at it she got off her stallion?.. ?And examined it well?.. ?Then she brought a hook tied to a strong long rope?.. ?Only she and chand were to climb both of them aim and threw their hooks at a high point?.. ?Until it was completely stuck between the rocky tip of the mountain?.. ?And started climbing veer did the same but through a direction shera couldnt see him?.. ?After climbing for some good hours shera stopped and just held on to the rope and rested her feet on a mountain rock?.. ?This was no easy job?.. ?Especially with the gravity power pulling you down? .. ?Even her small pretty little hands started to turn a lil burnt?.. ?It was really aching she never did such a daring deed her life was flowers and cotton carpets?.. ?Her hands only touched the cushiony petals or the smooth fabrics?.. ?Her feet only contacted the cotton and silk carpets and shoes made by fur and animal skin? .. ?She never got even a slight cut?.. ?But today she had to climb a mountain with thick robe?. ?It was probably a princesss worse nightmare?.. ?But she had to do it for her people for her father?.. ?For her misdeeds?. ?And well for her love?.. ?Every?.. ?Every single stone in her way was only because she loved the man a man who betrayed her in return curse him?.. ?Curse the day upon she met him? .. ?Her hands got really hot the heat was unbearable for her soft hands she slowly started to let go of the rope?.. ?And momentarily she was falling down veer saw this and besides climbing he leaned and jumped with the rope in his hands to catch her(just like Tarzan?).. ?He leaped toward her and caught her with her arms?.. ?She was now dangling in mid air? .. ?She looked up at him and besides being grateful she was actually very angry?..?
?…?tum yahan kya karra hain ho?? (?shera?) ?she was fleshed with anger that she didnt give him a simple thank you
?…?abhi toh tumhare jaan bacharaho hoon?..? he after saving her was in quite a jumpy mood
?…?dekho yeh mazaa?.. ?Aah ? (?shera?) ?I dont think she took that joke to well?.. ?Though in the end she yelped from fright?.. ?She was dangling in mid air on a high mountain?.. ?
Veer tried his best to pull her up?.. ?And after trying many times he succeeded?.. ?He pulled her up and let her go in front of him?.. ?And they started tha climb again after reaching the top?.. ?With full effort resulting a tiered veer an angry shera and a confused chand?. . ?
?…?veer tum yahan kya karra hai ho??.. ?? (?shera?) ?
?…?tum kya logo ko iss tare shukriya kah thi ho?? (?veer?)?
?…?bat ko badlo mat(shera?) ?
?…?dekho mujhe bhas kane main koi dilchasbe hai? (?veer?) ?
?…?toh phir tumne iss bhas ki shuruvat kyun ke?? ?(shera?) ?And the started bikering blaming other not to mention cutting each other?.. ?Chand had to do something? .. ?He stepped between and joined his hands?.. ?
?…?dekhiye app dono ladna bandh karye varna mere kaan toh?. ?App ghar lout thee he ladna shuru kar dena? (?Chand?) ?
?…?kyun tum ghar main nahi hoge? (?shera?) ?
?…?nahi par main jaate he? [?earplugs? ] ?laga loonga? (?Chand?) ?shera widened her eyes for a moment but then dropped it this was chand?..?
She went to a big whole lead to a cave?.. ?Though veer turned around and was going back to the ground?.?
?…?rajkumar vahan se app sirf nichi ja sakte hai? (?Chand?) ?
Veer stopped in? ?his tracks looking quite surprised?..?
?…?mujhe pata hai?! ?? (?veer?) ?he turned back?.. ??…?par mujhe us jagah main nahi hona jahan pe voh rahe
?…?toh kya tum zameen pe kirjaana chahte ho??.. ?Ab chalo ? (?Chand?) ?
Veer started quietly following him?.. ?There was no use fighting chand his main rival is shera?.. ?

In the royal stables of Ajmer?:?
Chandni after performing her show?.. ?She went back to her horse?.. ?A soldier came to her and told her?:?
?…?sunu ajj raat ko maha pooja hai buhut saare rajao aur rajkumaro aare hai maharaj chahte hai ke tum unn sab ke saamne apni kala dikhao?.. ?Haan maharaj isske liye buhut paisa denge tumhe ? (?soldier?)?
?…?teakh hai?..?? (?chandni?)?
The soldier? ..?There was a bag tied around her stallion she opened it was filled with apples she was about to eat one she needed all the energy for tonights show but an arrow went right through the apple chandni wasnt the apple holding with a strong grip so the arrow leaped with the fruit still going forwards but chandni didnt let it escaped as quick as a blink she was holding the arrow from behind? .. ?She brought the arrow closer?.. ?She reached for the apple and threw it away but she kept the arrow and looked at the direction it came from?.. ?Sharman was standing there with a long bow?.. ?She bowed her head like she did when she first met him? (?thats chandnis way of bowing to royals?) .. ?He started circulating her and she thought?: ??…?were you a vulture in a past life? ??
?…?vaise tumhara? [?performance?] ?itna bura nahi tha? (?Sharman?)?
?…?par haan appki talwaarbazi hum nahi dekha (Sharman?)?
?…?voh toh isliye chuki yeh toh sirf ek khel tha agar hum talwaar ka istemaal karte toh voh sab marjate? (?chandni?)?
?…?acha?.. ?Toh phir tum mujhe dekhado? (?Sharman?) ?and he opened his sword and pointed at her as sign of challenge?.. ?
She accepted she had to teach this stuck-up?, ?prideful?.. ?And not respective prince a lesson both of them went to the sword practicing area? (?similar to the one in Aryanagar?).. ?And started

In the palace of? ?Aryanagar?:?
Nivriti was in JVs room? .. ?He was flustered with questions he asked one after another? .. ?He got carried away?.. ?He was totally? ?concerned?.. ?
?…?JIJAJI app ko agni par shak nahi karna chahiye? (?niv?)?
?…?main agni par shak nahi karra hoon par mera agni buhut masoom hai agar usne kuch galat chun liya toh? (?JV?)?
?…?agni do saal ka dood pita hua bacha nahin hai kya usse app humesha apni ungli pakad kar chalynge?? (?niv?)?
?…?girne ke darr se main usse apnse door nahi karoonga (JV?)?
?…?app usse ek baar girne ka muaka dijye?.. ?Shayed voh girke buhut agaye nikal jaye?.. ?Aur agar bhaag bhi jaayga app ke paas luat ke zaroor ayega ? (?niv?)?
?…?teakh hai nivriti ab tum mujhe batao ke akir voh rubatta agni ke paas aya kaise(JV?)?
Nivriti narrated the story to him? .. ?Agni stepped in but they didnt notice?.. ?He heard and ran to hide behind the door he was praying to god to make his father not angry on this and started sneaking out?.. ?He sneaked really slowly?.. ?You know the sneak walk he was about to go but he heard his father say?:?
?…?ab toh voh gao aur bhi mushkill main phas chuke hai? (?JV?) ?agni stopped hearing that the villagers had more trouble ahead he went back to the door?.. ?Listening?..?
?…?kya?? (?niv?)?
?…?haan?, ?main uss dakoo ko jaanta hoon uske paas ek beta hai jo usse bhi bada zalim hai(JV?)?
?…?acha? (?niv?)?
?…?par main buhut kush hoon agni abhi tak se mera hai(JV?)?
?…?jijaji agni humesha se app he ka tha aur humesha app hi ka rahega (niv?)?
Even his father relieved?.. ?Agni was quite worried about the village?.. ?He had to get out of the palace the next morning?.. ?He went to his room wondering will she come again??.. ?

The royal sword practicing room of Ajmer?:?
Chandni and Sharman both got ready to attack?.. ?Both were willing to win?.. ?They opened there blazing heavy bloodthirsty swords?.. ?Eager to get in a bloody battle?.. ?But they had to maintain a non-bleeding battle?.. ?For she could get in oodles of trouble for even giving him a scratch?.. ?And he being a prince found it dishonorable to even raise his voice on a girl?.. ?It was enough shame he was fighting one both of them pointed sword again and? .. ?LET THE BATTLES BEGIN?!!.. ?And what a battle was it?.. ?Each was taking over the other blocking hitting?.. ?One blocked? .. ?The other hit no one could even think who was gonna win?.. ?There were some soldiers there?.. ?They widened their eyes?.. ?Their prince used to beat anyone momentarily but this time it was taking too long they opened their mouths?.. ?And some of them even started to faint?.. ?But that didnt stop our two veer yudhas no one could figure who will win?.. ?Suddenly Sharman hit her sword too hard that it flew?.. ?Sharman smiled with satisfaction?.. ?He breathed loudly and was sweating badly even Chandni was sweatinghe brought the sword up to her chin?.. ?Seeing a chance she kicked his hand?.. ?Making him drop the sword? .. ?Before it could reach the ground?.. ?She caught it in her hand?.. ?And pointed at Sharman?.. ?He saw her sword laying?.. ?So he dropped on the floor and picked it up?.. ?He wanted to swap?.. ?But she said?:?
?…?ek asli khiladi voh hota hai jo apne haathyaar ke saath lad sakta hai aur usse hara bhi sakta? (?chandni?)?
He nodded his head P? (?positively?).. ?And they started yet again?. ?again with swords blocks and hits?.. ?They continued for some good hours but none of them noticed?.. ?They were just to excited to win?.. ?They have never seen such worthy competers?.. ?They were striving to win?.. ?They had sweat all over their bodies?.. ?But they cared less?.. ?By this time every guard was fainted from surprise prince Sharman He won a lot of lost battles?.. ?A lot of wars?.. ?Killed a lot of champion swordsmen?.. ?How can someone even think that someone with a high stand?.. ?With massive power?.. ?Ability?.. ?And skill could not beat a girl?.. ?And that too a low cast girl who was but an immoral nobody in a princes luxurious life?.. ?The most high rank for a low cast will be being a maid?.. ?But the prince had never been to a battle so long? .. ?A soldier entered and was shocked to see such an unusual scene?.. ?
?…?arre tum yahan ho?.. ?Chalo furun yahan se nikal ke maharaj ko durbar main milo? (?soldier?) (?yes I mean court not coliseum? )?
? ??…?kyun?(chandni?) ?she stopped her swinging sword?.. ?And so did he
?…?chuki raat ho chuki hai aur maharaj tumhe bula rahe hain? (?soldier?)?
?…?KYA?? ?Raat ho chuki(chandni and Sharman?) ?with a total confusion on their faces? ?
Chandni hearing this backed up? .. ?She was walking backwards Oops?!! ?she skidded? .. ?Before she fell?.. ?Sharman caught her by her waist in his arms?.. ?The soldier got even more shocked seeing looking at each other?.. ?She felt his strong grip around her waist?.. ?That she just looked straight into his eyesAfter some moments the soldier said?:?
?…?rajkumar?.. ?Maharaj ne appko khaane aur pooja ke liye bulaya hai? (?soldier?) ?he bowed his head and headed straight out?..?
His voice made them come back to reality?.. ?He slowly made her stand and removed his hands?.. ?And gave her sword back she did the same?.. ?And moved towards the exit Sharman stood there for a few good minuets and he went out too?.. ?

On the mountain top?.. ?
It was quite dark and scary?.. ?And it was very deep in the cave?.. ?Veer lit a torch which made it better?.. ?And he started to walk in the front?.. ?Now this move was clearly a challenge to shera so she walked behind them?.. ?As the queen or supreme ruler?.. ?Like they were her bodyguards?.. ?Veer now was clearly frustrated?.. ?
?…?arre hum yahan rani rani nahi khelne ayye hai ? (?veer?)?
?…?toh phir tum kyun badshaah badshaah khel rahe ho?? (?shera?)?
And yet again they started?.. ?Poor chand?.. ?But this was the last straw?.. ?
?…?APP DONO CHUP HOJAYE? (?chand?) ?if shera got a little corrupted he had no shame of raising his voice
?…?ab app dono chup ho kar humara peecha karenge?.. ?? (?chand?) ?he took the torch from veer and started walking?.. ?
They both followed but the didnt made eye contact with each other?.. ?They walked looking at different directions?.. ?
After walking a few minuets they stumbled upon?.. ?Water?.. ?Chand? ?lowered the torch down to the surface?.. ?And saw something moving?..?
?…?iss main kuch hai?!!?? (?chand?)?
?…?KYA? she quickly moved to the pond with out anything supporting her?..?
?…?AGH eeek she fell into the water?.. ?
?…?yeh toh ek? [?alligator? ] ?hai AGHHH the alligator was surly hungry he kept attacking her?.. ?And narrowly escaped?.. ?
Veer without thinking jumped into the pond?.. ?Before the alligator got to her and no he didnt kill it?.. ?He told it run along? (?hello forgot he controls water?).. ?Then he lifted shera? ,,, ?got her out?.. ?And rested her on the ground?.. ?Shera was still in a little shock?.. ?
?…?tumne yeh kaise kiya?? ?a clearly surprised n? ?confused shera asked the water wizard? (?is that a nice name??)?
?…?voh sab chodo tum teakh toh ho na?? ??…??(?veer?)?
?…?haan shukriya?.. ?Par tumne? (?shera?)?
?…?yeh par-var chodo aur ab chalo he got her up?.. ?And chand by now has found the plant
?…?rajkumari ji mujhe voh puada milgaya? ?he held it up for her to see shera was smiling?.. ?At last she will see her father walking and talking her lips curved into a beautiful smile? .. ?She took the plant for him?.. ?A tear escaped her eye?.. ?The other two boys were looking happy and pleasant?.. ?
?…?ab hum log yahan par poore din kade rahenge ya phir pitaji ke paas bhi jaynge?..(?shera?) ?
The three moved out?.. ?But it was a long way back so they had to rest?.. ?So they settled down?.. ?From the torch chand burned a fire?.. ?But out veer was getting really hungry?.. ?It was obvious to shera and chand that he was going to die out of hunger?.. ?Shera opened a bag filled with apples?.. ?And threw one at veer?.. ?Veer caught it as if it was a lump of precious gemstones? .. ?She handed another to chand and ate one herself?.. ?After a while the three were sound asleep?.. ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Wow, wonderful part👏.Day by day ur ff is unresistible.😃Post next part soon.😊

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
wowww.....just aweosme part..so finally shera got the plant...woww...n veer saved shera...she ws in middle of air but instead thank to veer for saving her she scolded him...hehehehheehe....
aweosme part dear...🤗

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