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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow👏.Wonderful update.Keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oYEEE Hala..
ladki..maar khaegi..
Pm kyun nahi kiya...
nyways the prt was rilli gud..buh whos shera's love interest..
Veer..I tink she's broken as he's an aryawarth or sumfin..dunno..
I don't wanna guess..
isiliye jaldi se update karo madamji...
jaldi jaldi..n do PM me deary....
Love ya loads sweety...tcccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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vry interesting!! hmmm...whoz d guy who betrayed shera????dyng to know....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4?:?
Veer was on his silky mattress but opened eyes?.. ?He Didnt feel like sleeping?.. ?
?…?ananya?.. ?Voh itni raat ko kal kya kar rahi thi???.. ?Istare itni raat ko akele bahar?.. ?Uske parivaar ne usse roka nahi? veer murmured?..?
Nivriti came in? ?
?…?arre veer?.. ?Abhi tak se nahi soye?? (?niv?)?
?…?bas akhe band ho ne ka naam bhi nahi lere hai? (?veer?)?
?…?oh kahain yeh ananya ko to asar nahi?? (?Nivriti?)?
?…?kya?? (?veer?) ?he started blushing?..?
Dharam stood near the door?.. ?He knew veer would never accepet him in his room?.. ?So he just watched
Nivi giggled at veers blushing?..?
?…?hume toh pataa bhi nahi tha ke tum kisi ko itne jaldi apne dill main ane doge? (?niv?)?
?…?maa?.. ?Voh?.. ?Main toh?.. ?Bas asahi yeh sharam aari hai ? (?veer?)?
Niv was still giggling?.. ?She knew he was miles away from sleeping tonight she told him to go out? ?
Veer went out of the room?.. ?His smile totally faded?.. ?He just stared at dharam?.. ?And then went out?..?
Dharam followed him with his eye he turned back to nivi he tried hard to smile?.. ?But his eyes were showin that he was too depressed?.. ?
?…?jao veer ka peecha karo?.. ?Kya pata shayed voh ananya se milne gayaa hai? (?niv?)?
Dharam smiled?.. ?And went in the same tracks that of veer walked on

Veer walked and walked for hours?.. ?Still he didnt have any urge to sleep?.. ?Just walking
Dharam was following him from behind?.. ?He looked up the sky was fully dark?.. ?But the stares were shining like no other?.. ?The full moon was in its full light?.. ?There were a few clouds?.. ?He yawned?.. ?He was getting too sleepy?.. ?His eyes were feeling very heavy?.. ?His legs were walking slower and slower? .. ?He stopped for a few moments?.. ?He started flying?.. ?Well the air was carrying him? (?no hes not that light LOL he controls wind?!!).. ?Though while flying?.. ?His eyes got really heavy and he slept?.. ?Hanging in mid air? (?LOL?)?
Though veer was in full energy?. ?Walking faster and faster?.. ?In a few moments he started running?.. ?As trying to get to a destination?. ?It started raining but only drops?.. ?They fell on veers charming face?.. ?He stopped for a minuet he looked up to the sky?.. ?Closing his eyes?.. ?Letting the cold wind blow his thick hair?. ?he stared dancing around and around?.. ?Well dharam was carried back to the palace?.. ?by wind?.?
He was fast a sleep?..?
Nivi came and saw dharams state?.. ?She nodded her head negatively?.. ?She told some soldiers to bring him down and take him to bed
While miles away?.. ?Shera? (?wearing a white turban and completely covered her face with a white colored cloth except for her eyes?) (?looking like ashewerya in jodha akber when she was fighting with hritik)with? ?a crossbow in her hand? .. ?Trying to forget what happened to her?.. ?Trying to forget him?.. ?Trying to forget them?.. ?Trying to forget what he and they did trying to forget his betrayal?.. ?Trying to forget her dead family members?.. ?Trying to forget her fathers state?. ?Tears were steaming down her face?.. ?Like a heavy rain?.. ?All she wanted to forget was love?.. ?That what has caused her tears if she never loved her father she wouldnt be sad?.. ?If she didntt love her family she wouldnt be sad?.. ?But the most thing she regretted was that she loved him?.. ?While she was there crying?.. ?Veer on the other hand was smiling?.. ?Running around in the rain?..?
Momentarily a rain storm started?.. ?Which carried a lot of dust?.. ?Which made it impossible to see?.. ?veer would have stopped this but he couldnt? .. ?god wanted this to happen?.. ?
The crossbow slipped from sheras hand?.. ?And so did veers sword but they had more worries then theyre weapons
Veer tried to block the dust with her arms?.. ?So did shera? ?they couldnt see the path they were going to?.. ?Shera looked back to see where she was as she was doing so?.. ?Her foot slipped on a rock from behind she was about to fall on her back?.. ?But she landed right in veers arms?......................................<?3?<?3?<?3?<?3?<?3?<?3
Veer ran with her in his arms?.. ?Both were in shock but that didnt mean to not save your life after running miles?.. ?Veer came to a halt?.. ?He putted shera down on her feether face cloth was stuck to his necklace?.. ?She grabbed it so hard that it ripped veer saw her face and was completely in a fainting mood? ?
?…?ananya pa pa?.. ?pa rrr? .. ?Voh kuan?? .. ?yeh? (?veer?) ?murmured? , ?he was too confused well I dont blame him?.. ?Two ananayas???
?…?huh? (?veer?) ?as he fainted?..?
?…?ab kya karoon????? (?shera?) ?as she started to think of a new plan she bit her nail? ??.?
After moments veer woke up?.. ?Seeing her?.. ?Closed his eyes and started Shaking his head? ?but she was still there he started rubbing his eyes with his hands?.. ?Afterwards he opened? ?them?.. ?Still she was sitting there? ?in a what the hell are you doing mood veer started banging his head? ?on a tree he was sitting next toshera giggled?.. ?And her eyes started watering the movements veer was doing was reminding her of him?. ?Veer turned to see a tear escaped her eye? ?before the other when escaped her eye?.. ?Veer wiped it on his finger?.. ?He started scanning it? .. ?She watched his as he stunningly tasted it?.. ?Afterwards he made a disgusted face? ?
?…?yeh asoon veer ke hone ke kushi se toh nahi hain?.. ?Kya main jaan sakta hoon app apne keemte asoon kiss pe bhaari hai?? (?veer?) ?
?…?uss pe jo humara sab kuch tha?..?? (?shera?)?
?…?oh?.. ?Aap ke asoon voh layik hai? (?veer?)?
?…?kya?? ?Kyun?? (?shera?)?
?…?arre koi apne mehbooba ko aise dhoka de ke chala ja sakta hai?.. ?? (?veer?) ?
?…?aur voh bhi itne khoobsurat mehbooba ? (?veer?) ?he murmured that?.. ?But he was so close to her that she heard It?.. ?And both of mentally blushed?..?
?…?voh?.. ?Voh ? (?shera?) ?she just couldnt think of what to say?..?
?…?aapko kaise pata ke?.. ?Ke unne hume?..?? (?shera?) ?she said with great effort but was cut by veer
?…?aapki inn masoom akho main likha hai? (?veer?) ?he just stared in her black star like eyes? ?
?…?aapko akhein bhi bharne atte hai? (?shera?) ?she too was starring In his brown blade like? ?eyes?.?
?…?sirf unke jo humare dill ke buhut kareeb ho? (?veer?) ?as he closed his eyes?.. ?
Her cheeks started to become red as she started? ?his perfect charming face?.. ?The wind there got a little heavier blowing her hair? .. ?On his face?. ?His eyes were still closed enjoying? ?the smoothness he opened them seeing her cheeks getting red?.. ?Her heart jumped at first when he opened his eye?.. ?Her cheeks got devil red.seeing that he leaned closer to her but something stopped him it was her hand which caressingly was on his lips as a warning to not to get any closer?.. ?He removed it and went near her ear
?…?ajj nahi par kuch din baad aap kudhi mujhe apne paas bolainge? (?veer?) ?in a low and alluring accent afterwards he blew on her ear?.. ?And the blowing slowly faded away
Her heart got alerted she left out a sigh?.. ?Her eyes opened widely?..?
He? ?backed up?.. ?And went to the opposite side where he was sitting previously?.. ?Next to the tree he started banging he head on? ?previously? ?
Shera was still blushing especially after the last line he said?.. ?There was a long silence between them?.. ?Both were thinking
Shera?: ?what are you doing?.. ?Youre betrayed once your not that stupid to try it again?.. ?Love is evil?. ?Love is the biggest bump on the rode called life how can you love another after him?.. ?After what he had done to you?. ?Why do you keep trying?.. ?Why didnt you stop veer?.. ?Especially when you could have could have??.. ?I never let anyone close to me after what he did it couldnt be me?.. ?I just couldnt?.. ?I wouldnt or somehow I mustnt stop him?.. ?It was forbidden?.. ?My heart forbidden it but why???.. ?How can I teach it???.. ?Why cant it learn?..?
Her brain and heart were fighting both were making shera dizzy how could have she loved again???? shera stopped right there it was just a moment surely hell forget it?.. ?Its nothing?. ?But remumbering what her father told her a hole sea is made from a drop a lifetime is from a moment?.. ?From the moment you have been born?.. ?To the moment you die?.. ?But a lovelife is from a moment you have seen each other to no end?.?
Veer?: .. ?Ive never been so close to a girl before she looks like an angel?.. ?A heavenly angle shined down on me?. ?Her ruby lips?. ?Its so strange how ananya and? .. ?By the way whats her name? I should ask her?.. ?Nah shell just give me a slap if I even open my idiot what the hell was I doing?.. ?I just couldnt resist I just wanted to touch her?.. ?For no reason to begin with it was just an urge an urge??.. ?But why I barely know her?. ?But something makes me feel I know her from generations?.. ?And for generations to come forever?. ?But who do I love??.. ?Ananya or her??.. ?I cant make it out?. ?Theyre much different from each other?.. ?One has no bounds for tears and miles away from a smile and another an ever smiling beauty?.. ?But something is the same between them well beside there faces?.. ?There something the same just I feel it one I get close to both girls?.. ?I feel it?.. ?What is it???? theyre completely different?.. ?I have to know?.?
After a 10? ?minuet silence?:?
? ??…?appne jab hume dekha tab behosh kyun hoge thee?.. ?Aur jab buhashe se uthe tho apana sar uss ped par kyun marr re the?? (?shera?) ?
?…?app ke iss khoobsurat chehre ko dekh kar koi bhi behosh ho jaye ga? (?veer?) ?he was using the same flirty tone
Shera blushed?.. ?Her cheeks got red and she still didnt notice?..?
?…?aur main appna sar iss liye marra tga chuki? ?mujhe app he ke tere ek ladki? ?mili thi?..?? (?veer?) ?In his normal tone?..?
Shera got alerted she opened her eyes widely?.. ?And hurriedly thought of changing the topic
?…?vaise app ka naam kya hai?? (?shera?)?
Veer got up with a prideful face?..?
?…?voh naam jisse dushman ke akad nikal jaye?..?? (?veer?) ?he announced like when anchors announce the? ?judges? ?
Shera raised her eye borrows? ..?
?…?voh naam jisse ladkiyan sun kar appna dill uspe lik dete hai? (?veer?) ?still in the tone? ?
Shera rolled her eyes?.. ?It was too much exaggeration for a name? ?
?…?voh naam jiss ke bina dharam adhoora hai? (?veer?)?
Shera lost her patience?..?
?…?arre app ke naam main itna kya rakha hai veer?? (?shera?) ?with a very displeasured voice
Veer looked at her?.. ?She had an angry expression? .. ?Until she found out what she had said?..?
?…?appko mera naam kaise pataa chala?? (?veer?) ?returning to his normal tone
?…?voh?..?? (?shera?) ?but cut off by veer
?…?arre yeh kya poochra hoon main hume kuan nahi janata aur vaise bhi aap jaise itni khoobsurat ladki mujhe dekar pehchane gaye honge?.. ?Par aap itni sharmare thi ke humara naam puchaan taki? ?apne Inn nasheele hoto pe lakar humain apne paas bolate? ?hum pe assa nasha chadhate jaise abhi apne kahaa?.. ?Ek bar aur bolye?? (?veer?) ?in an extremely alluring and flirty tone
Shera had an I am never saying your name again expression? .. ?But? ?
?…?veer? (?shera?) ?she answered his please with no stopping
Veer went closer to her?. ?He sat just an inch far then her started caressing her hair?.. ?She tried to move his hand?.. ?But couldnt?.. ?he moved his hand toward her cheeks started feeling the smoothnes?.. ?Then he blew on her lips
When he was doing so? ?her cheeks got redder then ever?. ?A heap of wind blew? ?their hair?. ?Both closed their eyes?.. ?They werent ready to open them?..?he leaned over to kiss her cheeks but just then? ?a voice called?. ??…?rajkumari ji?!!?
Both opened their eyes?.. ?And veer spranged from her both looked at the direction in frustration?.. ?Veer wasnt quite far from her?. ?And his hand was on hers? .. ?It was chand who barely breathing ran towards them with a bunch of soldiers? ?seeing the his princess in such a state he was shocked?.. ?
?…?ji?.. ?Voh todi der main subah hone wali?.. ?Aur maharaj ko aapki buhut fikar thi? (?chand?) ?he tried explaining himself
Veer shera stood up?..?
?…?humne tumse kuch poocha?? (?shera?) ?
?…?ji?.. ?? (?chand?)?
Just then a white horse with a black mane? .. ?Ran toward shera?..?
It was shehzaada ?. ?Sheras stallion shera started caressing his hair
While he made a space between her and veer?.. ?And looked at veer angrily
Shera sat on his back?..?
?…?sunu tumhare saath chalo?.. ?? (?shera?) ?to veer
Veer looked at the stallion?.. ?Who was still giving him that expression?..?
?…?mujhe lagta hain ke main yahin par teek rahonga? (?veer?)?
?…?acha?? (?shera?)?
?…?arre mere zindigi lene hai kya? (?veer?) ?to the horse who now was looking at him with killer eyes veer was shaking?.. ?So he climbed up a tree?.. ?
Shera giggled
?…?arre daro matt shehzaada humesha aise vaivaar dikhaa tha hai?.. ?Aur khaas kar Uss pe jo humare kareeb anne ke koshish kare? (?shera?) ?she added the last part to see what he says?..?
?…?oh?.. ?Toh main ananya ke saath tiktha hoon? (?veer?)?
He said as he jumped down?.. ?But still kept a distance from shehzada?. ?
In the palace Nivriti was worried?..?
?…?had kardee usne?..?ek baar ajaye to main usse itna peetungi ke nani yaad ajayenge ajj toh gaya kaam se?..?? (?niv?)?
Dharam who had just woke up from his slumber enters
?…?ji bua?.. ?Hum yahan kaise ayee?? (?dharam?) ?still he was? ?sleepy
?…?ud ke?!!?? (?niv?) ?she said with a rage
Dharam gulped?..?
?…?aap veer ka gussa hum par nahi nikal ye? (?dharam?) ?he was wide awake now?..?
?…?arre mera bacha?.. ?Yahan ao? (?niv?) ?back in her carring voice
Dharam went and hugged her?..?
?…?ab bataye uss veer ne mere pyare bua ke saath kya kiya?? (?dharam?)?
?…?had karde?.. ?Itni raat tak voh nahi luta? (?niv?)?
?…?par?.. ?Thodi der main to buhur ho rahi hai.? (?dharam?)?
?…?hume pataa hai?..?? (?niv?)?
In sunaina
Shera was tiered?.. ?Especially after her adventure?.. ?veer was tiered like nothing else? ?
?…?arre uss bandar ko hum toh batana bhool gaye ke apne mahal ek sandesh bhijwade ? (?shera?)?
?…?ji hum keh dete hai?..?? (?chand?)?
?…?rahne do hum kehdenge?..?? (?shera?)?
Shera went to his room murmuring in the way?..?
?…?ek toh itni purani ghisi pisi batain bolta hai uppar se uske parivaar ko uske chinta hore hogi aur voh?.. ?Humph?.. ?bandar? (?shera?)?
Guards watched her as she passed?.. ?She never murmured to herself especially showed emotions?.. ?She just had a straight face all the time?.. ?It only changed when she was with her father? ?
She reached her destanation?.. ?Where she nodded her head negatively?.. ?Seeing him sleeping there facing her with his back and with no blanket on?.. ?It was on the ground on the other side?.. ?She want there and picked it up?.. ?When she turned her head up?.. ?She saw his charming face?.. ?It enchanted her?.. ?His brown eyes closed?. .. ?To break the moment chand knocked on the open door shera got up immediately?.. ?With a I can explain face?,..?
?…?voh?.. ?Inke chadar giri thi iss liye humne?.. ?? (?shera?) ?with hustling voice
?…?humne appse kab safai mange?(chand?) ?trying hard not to giggle?..?
?…?haan?.. ?Pa tum yahan kuch kehne aye thee? (?shera?) ?fading back to her normal tone
?…?buhur bas thodi der main hojayge app abhi ja ke sulijye ? (?chand?)?
?…?teakh hai?.. ?Aur haan sunu Aryanagar sandesh bhijwadena?.. ?Ke veer surakshit hai?.. ?Aur sunaina ya humara zikar nahi karna? (?shera?)?
When chand left?.. ?She covered the sleeping charmer?.. ?With the blanket?.. ?And went out?.. ?She turned to him once smiled?.?
?…?bandar?..?? (?shera?) ?she said in a sayongita tone
When she left veer got up? ?
?…?hasee toh pasee!? (?veer?) ?he giggled and went back to bed?..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_madhu

oYEEE Hala..

ladki..maar khaegi..

Pm kyun nahi kiya...

nyways the prt was rilli gud..buh whos shera's love interest..

Veer..I tink she's broken as he's an aryawarth or sumfin..dunno..

I don't wanna guess..

isiliye jaldi se update karo madamji...

jaldi jaldi..n do PM me deary....


Love ya loads sweety...tcccccc




-Ur's Ever Madhu😳


madhu!!! i am so sorry my queen bas yeh hain ke mujhe lagaa tha ke tumhare paas agar net nahi hoga to pm kaise dekho ge.. so i thought ke main andar brass rakhe jaldi se bahar chali jaonge but it seems like the sharrif's eyes are never closed just kidding i am soooooooooooooooo happy ke tum maire FFs pe comment karrahi ho .. YAY ME!! ⭐️ and yes YAY YOU!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: manatated

vry interesting!! hmmm...whoz d guy who betrayed shera????dyng to know....😊

well it's one of the suspisions i just hope you don't die before i can write it but it is probobly in part 12 or 13 cuz that's where thing get SCARY and i mean litraly.. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ektay11

wonderful part dear

loved it

plz cont

its awesome



thanx alot di and i am happy u loved it ,, there's nothing anyone except god can do to stop me from continueing and yes i know it;s awsome but not as much as you.. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow👏.Wonderful update.Keep it up.




wow and thanx for ur wonderful comment ..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv_sweetz

lovely FF..keep contuing,.,




thanx alot for your lovely comment and like thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanxxxxxxxxxxxx for updating madhu's FFs like thanx soo soo much 😳 😳 and i'll continue happily except if you stop continuing madhu's FFs then i'll continue sadly
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hiriforRajat

it' s amazing loved it keep goin


thanxx alot my amazing hiri and thanx for keeping up for so long..

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