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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
good one dear but yaar dharam and veer ke saath main scenes lihko to aur mazaa aayega.
they love each other na

bye
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Part 2?:?
Veer lost balance?.. ?He lost to much blood?.. ?Everything was getting dizzy he fell on the ground?.. ?With a big tree shading him?..?
In the palace?:?
?…?kahaan rahgeya veer kab araa hai? (?nivi?)?
Nivriti was really worried she was circulating her room?..?
Dharam came in
?…?dharam?\.. ?Veer kahaan hai?..???? (?nivi?)?
?…?voh bua?.. ?Veer ki raj mantri se bahes ho gaye hai?.. ?Veer talwaar baazi karne gaya tha? (?dharam?)?
Nivriti ran out of the room?.. ?She was in the place where veer was practicing?.. ?She saw veers blood on the floor?.. ?She ran there?.. ?She had tears escaping her eyes?..?
?…?dharam?!! ?Veer kahan hai? (?nivi?)?
?…?bua voh?.. ?Voh? ?yahin tha?.. ?Hum such keh rahain hain voh yahin tha? (?dharam?)?
The king came in?..?
?…?bhaiya veer?.. ?veer kahan hain? (?nivi?)?
Even aryawardhan had no idea?.. ?
?…?joa pata lagao ke rajkumar veer kahan hain? (?arya?)?
He odered the soldiers?..?
?…?Nivriti daro mat veer kahan jasakta hain?? (?arya?)?
?…?veer harjaga ja sakta hai bhaiya? (?nivi?)?

Veers condition was getting worsehe found it hard to breath?.. ?His breaths were cutting short?.. ?It was a very cold night and with veers wounds it was impossible to survive? .. ?Veer closed his eyes?.. ?He just knew when hell open them hell see angels

Nivriti was getting worried? .. ?Just then a soldier came
?…?mahraj maine rajkumar ko bahar ja te hue dekha tha? (?soldier?)?
?…?teekh forun sipahiyon ko bahar bhejo ? (?arya?)?
?…?darro matt Nivriti?. ?? (?arya?)?
?…?pita ji humbe jaate hai? (?dharam?)?
?…?teakh hai dharam?.. ?Kayaal rakhna? (?arya?)?
Dharam noded his head and went with soldiers coming after him?..?
Veer opened his eyes?.. ?His expectation was right? .. ?He was surrounded by angels?.. ?an angel?.. ?It was ananya?.. ?She was preparing some? ?bandges were there?.. ?She wasnt wearing the orange cloth that female shramiks wear?.. ?He found it on his left armHe wondered how did she heated the water that fast the water was really cold in the well how come the first put it on the fire it heatedwas she the 3rd member of the super force?.. ?Did she control heat and fire?.. ?He? ?let that escape she was sweeter the sugar how could she be heat and fire?.. ?she brought he bandages Usually this would hurt?.. ?But it didnt?.. ?but It did feel quite warm
?…?main yahan kaise aaya? (?veer?)?
?…?ud ke?.. ?Main aap ko yahan le aye hoon? (?ananya?)?
She was done after she tied the bandages she got up and went on her way? ?
?…?Arre sunu tum itni raat ko yahan????ananya?..!? ?Ananya??! ??…?? (?veer?)?
veer wondered what she was doing so late at nightin a few mins?.. ?Dharam reached the spot?..?
?…?veer tum teakh toh ho?..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?haan he? ?said with a sigh? (?veer?)?
?…?sunu jaldi yahaper ao veer ko utane main humare madat karo?..?? (?dharam?)?
A soldier came and helped veer stand up?..?
In the palace
Nivriti was getting really worried?.. ?
Dharam came in with the injured veer
?…?VEER!? (?nivi?)?
She said with a cry?.. ?Even the king was surprised at veers state?..?
?…?veer? (?she ran to him?) ?tum?.. ?Tum teakh toh ho?.. ?Kisne ke hai tumhaare yeh halat?..?? (?nivi?)?
?…?voh kisi ne nahi? (?veer?)?
?…?chup raho?.. ?Dharam veer ko kamre main lai jao?..?? (?nivi?)?
Dharam helped veer walk till his bed?..?
Veer saw that ananya forgot her orange cloth?.. ?He looked at it?.. ?Till the vaid had took it out? .. ?And applied? ?the medicine?..?
Nivriti was getting veer a glass of milk? (?two moms means two glasses of milk?), ?as Nivriti was passing the royal court
?…?rajkumar veer ke bartav bura hai chuki unhe andar se koi baat parshaan karte jaa rahi hai? (?a well experienced old man?)?
?…?yeh sab bhane hai veer?.. ?Sirf shramikon ke vajehs se asa bartav dekatha hai? (?jai?)?
?…?nahi mahraj jaiwardhan?.. ?Rajkumar Veer ko koi baat andari andar kaie ja rahi hain? (?old man?)?
? ??…?voh baat kya hain?? ( ?dharam?)?
?…?agar humain voh baat pata hota yuvraaj to hum aptak unma ilaag be karde te hote?.. ?Par yeh chott jo unhe lagi yeh unhinahi lagai?.. ?Aasi chotain sirf koi apne aap ko laga sakta hai? (?old man?)?
The king and dharam were really worried?.. ?They loved veer to the core but veer he hated everything they did?.. ?He claimed he hated them?.. ?But never meant it something they didnt know about veer that he was a far more better king then the could imagine?.. ?A king who only belonged to his people only belonged to his people???
Nivriti just got a mile more depressed?.. ?Even tears escaped from her eyes?.. ?Was that doctor implying that veer was crazy??!?!?!?
Nivriti wiped her tears as she entered veers room on the other hand veer was least worried?.. ?He had a cute smile on his face and his eyes were shining?.. ?With an orange cloth in his hands he was sitting with his back relaxing on the wall?..?
?…?Ananya? (?veer?)?
He brought the cloth to his chest? ..?closed his eyes?.. ?Seeing her in a princess dress seeing her beautiful features in the day time?.. ?He was cut short by his mother?.. ?
?…?yeh ananya kaun hai?? (?nivi?)?
Veer instantly opend his eyes and sprang the cloth away from him
?…?koi nahi? (?veer?)?
Nivriti gave the glass to him and made him forcefully drink it she wished him goodnight and went out of his room?..?
When she closed the door?.. ?Veer opend his eyes grabbed the cloth and slept with it in his hands?..?
Next day?::?
Veer was getting ready in rapid actionswith a dashing smile on his facehe was in his bathing robe? (?no need to drool) he went to the dressing room and wore his orange and green suite now he was in front of the mirror adjusting his collar?..?
Dharam came in?.. ?veer saw him and his mood completely changed?.. ?his smile faded in to a sigh he glanced at dharam and then turned to the mirror again?.. ?Dharam was depressed again?.. ?He really hated it when veer didnt pay any heed to him
It gave him a really bad frown?.. ?It really hurt him?.. ?It was just an every morning routine? .. ?Veers bad attitude?.. ?Dharam really loved him but didnt understand him?.. ?He just accepted that veers behavior is because of the shramiks he just accepted everything that royal counsel said everything??..?
?…?veer? (?dharam?) ?
?…?kya?? (?veer?)?
?…?sunu jo humne kal tumse kahaa tha?.. ?? (?dharam?)?
He moved near him
?…?uske liye hume maaf kardo? (?dharam?)?
?…?teakh hai? (?veer?)?
Dharram smiled and putted his hand on veers shoulder?.. ?Veer glanced at him with a take your hand off? ?expression dharam nodded and? ?took it off veer moved towards the door? ?he was looking at dharam with dont dare to that again expression
He moved his head toward the door ignoring dharam
Dharam moved from veers room?.. ?
?…?humain humare dood main cheene chahiye?.. ?Aur humain isse zyada naram bister chahiye ahhh yeh kaisa dood hain itna garam jao tanda kar ke lao?.. ?Humara neela lehnga kahaan hai?..?? (?sia?)?
Dharam sighed at her loud and demanding voice? ?
?…?rajkumari ji?..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?KYA??!?? (?sia?)?
Dharam startled from her loud voice?..?
?…?arre yuvraaj?.. ?Maaf karyega par? ?yeh daasiya jaldi kaam nahi karte?.. ?Aap shramik daasia rekte he kyun hai?? (?sia?)?
?…?yeh daasia aryavrat hai? (?dharam?)?
?…?ohh?.. ?Par tap bhi itne dheere kaam karna?....?Humph humare avdhi main aisa kabhi nahi hota tha? (?sia?)?
?…?agar avdhi itnahe acha hai?.. ?Toh vahi par wapas chali jao?..?? ?with? ?an attitudy and sighing voice? (?veer?)?
?…?VEER?? ?Istra rajkumarion se baat kara nahi jata hain?!!?? (?dharam?)?
Veer who was standing by the door?.. ?Rolled his eyes? ?
?…?rajkumarion se nahi par batameez se isitre se baat kiya jaata hai? ( ?veer?)?
?…?kya tum chahte ho ke hum tumse isitreka bartav se baat kare? ( ?sia? )?
?…?haan sia mujhe kisi ke humdarde ke koi zaroorat nahi hai? (?veer?)?
He said with a rage? .. ?And? ?went from there?..?
Veer went to his room?.. ?He saw a maid giving Ananyas cloth? .. ?The maid had washed it so veers blood was washed away?.. ?The maid went out of his room?.. ?Veer smiled?.. ?Forgetting his rage?.. ?He sat on his bed?.. ?Closing his eyes recalling when he first saw her when she fed him?.. ?When she tied the bandages?.. ?Dharam came in? ?the room? .. ?And saw veers state quite surprasied he hid behind the door
?…?Ananya?.. ?? (?veer?)?
Dharam saw veers eyes shining?.. ?He enjoyed veers state he never saw him like that? ?
Nivriti came behind dharam?.. ?She putted her hand on his shoulder?.. ?Dharam turned?.. ?She asked him by her eyebrows what are you doing?.. ?He pointed his finger to veer Nivriti started watching as her son slowly started hugging the piece of cloth?. .?genteelly? ?he kissed it? ?opening his eyes?.. ?He came back to reality there was no way he could love her?.. ?a prince aryawart and a commoner shramik?.. ?Destiny?.. ?Dignity? .. ?Rules will never allow it a single tear escaped his eye?.. ?As it made to cheeks?.. ?He took it in his finger
He wanted to die at the moment he loved her so?.. ?So? .. ?That he would fight anyone for her?.. ?So?.. ?So? . . ?Hell break all the rules and come to her?..?
He wandered out of the palace?.. ?But dharam followed?.. ?
Veer stopped?.. ?And started burning with rage when he saw a soldier was hitting ananya with the? (?I dunnu the name but the one jaiwardhan uses? )? ananya was perfectly hurt?.. ?That mustve hurt her?.. ?He was hitting her non stoppingly?..?
Veer went there?.. ?At that point of time he wished he controlled fire?.. ?He grabbed the soldiers hand preventing him from continuing looking at him with killer burning eyes?.. ?He gave him a punch in stomach making fall?..?
?…?agar agli baar ananya se batameezi se baat bhi ki toh main? ?tumhe ghee? ?main jalake tumhe soole? ?pe chada ke tumhare tukde tukde kar ke janvaru ko khiladoonga ? (?veer?) ?he said with a burning but calm voice?.. ?a deep but a peaceful voice just like an ocean
The soldier shivered he was shaking even on the coldest night in December he didnt shake like that hell remumber what veer said for the rest of his life?. ?He ran away from there?.. ?
Veeer fellowed him by his eyes?..?
Even ananya was scared from what he said she was starting to shiver too?.. ?Veer turned?.. ?Je saw ananya shivering he smiled?.. ?He reached his hand?.. ?She somehow held? ?his hand but she was still fearful she didnt have her orange cloth on so veer took the cloth? .. ?And tied it around her head ananya went to do her work? ?while veer was standing there smiling waiting for the next Sunday?. ?On the other hand dharam was shocked?.. ?He never seen that girl anywhere near the shramiks?.. ?He? ?never saw her in any type of the basties?.. ?! ?Dharam saw all the shramiks but he never saw her?. ?????
Veer went to the ocean and sat there dharam went back to the palace to get more data on ananya ? ?
In the palace?:?
Dharam was in a room filled with papers?.. ?
?…?nahi?.. ?nahi he murmured as he opened each paper?.. ?As he was doing so a paper flew from the top of table next to him It landed right in front of dharam?..?
?…?buhut ho gaya? ?yeh ananya bhi?.. ?Iske bare main koi kuch nahi janta hai?.. ?Aur nahi uske baare main inn qaqzon main kuch hai? (?dharam?)?
He said with a sigh?.. ?He checked everywhere but no one had a clue not even the papers help?.. ?Just then he saw the paper laying in front of him
?…?shayed iss main kuch miljaye ? (?dharam?)?
Dharam opened it slowly?.. ?It was about some princess?.. ?Princess shera??!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
sorrryyyyyy about the question marks it's not my computer
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
Wow👏.Wonderful update.Lagta hain iye annaya aur koi nehi rajkumari hain.Post next part soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
wow
amazing part
plz do cont dear
its superb
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
i think ananya is a princess
wow veer ananya prince and princess😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
wow !!!! post next update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Part 3
He read that she was a sworn enemy of the aryawrats? .. ?And that she would do anything to vanish them from this world?.. ?He also read that she was an attitudy and bad temper princess who cared a damn who never got to emotional?.. ?He also read that her father was injured and couldnt talk he was just laying on the bed?. ?And the rest of the family died?..?
?…?shayed pitaji ke paas inki tasveer hai
He went his dads room who was still worried about veer?. ?He thought was veer really crazy??.. ?Is veer this mean?.. ?is veer changing hopeless? is this OUR veer??????
Because when veer was small?.. ?He always had fun?.. ?dharam and veer were best of friends?.. ?Their giggles were the palaces main source of light their sadness was the palaces main source of darkness? .. ?Everyone remembers how veer used to make everything wrong?.. ?How he played pranks on everyone?.. ?Especially at Holi
?…?VEER TUM YAHAN ATTE HO KE NAHI?? (?dharam?) ?with a burning rage
?…?nahi? (?veer?)?
?…?VEER DEKHO AGAR TUM YAHAN NAHI AYE TO?,..?? (?dharam?)?
?…?tu mujhe laddoo nahi kilayga? (?veer?)?
?…?LADDO NAHI MARR KILONGA? (?dharam?)?
?…?par yaar mujhe marr nahi khani hai? (?veer?)?
?…?veer humara naya lahnge kahan hai? (?nivi?) ?she came running into the garden
?…?nahi batoanga nahi batoanga? (?veer?)?
?…?veer humare talwaar kahaa hai? (?arya?) ?still in his calm attitude
?…?app ko kyun batao?? (?veer?)?
?…?veer dekho humare kitaab hume vapass dedo haa!? (?dharam?)?
7? ?year old veer claimed a stump
?…?SUNU SUNU SUNU! maine aap sabke cheeze chupadi hai?.. ?Aur app sab ko voh dhoondna hai? (?veer?)?
Veer jumped off the stump running and giggling around the whole garden

Aryawardhan was smiling remembering the good old days?.. ?But now there just bitter sweet memories?.. ?As veer grew so did his attitude?.?
?…?pitaji?? (?dharam?)?
?…?huh?? ?Dharam kya hua?? (?arya?) ?his sons voice brought him back to the bitter reality
?…?ji voh hum in kakazon main kuch dhoond re thee aur humain yeh mila? (?dharam?)?
Aryawardhan took the paper from his hand?..?
?…?rajkumari shera?? (?arya?)?
?…?ji hum sochre thee ke aap ke paas inki koi tasveer thi(dharam?)?
?…?thi toh par beta?.. ?Jab hum yudh se aye thee toh voh tasveer gayab ho gaye thi?.. ?Aur phir humare saath sunaina ne naate tod deye thee? (?arya?)?
? ??…?hmmm? (?dharam?)..?he was clearly thinking the relationship between the picture disappearing and sunainas decision for all bonds to be broken
?…?arre hum toh ananya ke baare main dhoond ne aye aur yeh rajkumari? (?dharam?) .. ?Dharam talked to himself?.. ?One of the main reasons was veer?.. ?When they were best friend dharam used to talk to him but after veer had broken all bonds with him?.. ?Broken his promises?.. ?Leaving with nothing but tears?.. ?Dharam started talking to himself?.. ?He had no one but veer then? .. ?And now he had no one? .. ?No one he chose aryangar rules over veer raj mantri said?: ?he made the right choice or did he????? ?
?…?kya?? (?arya?)?
?…?ji hum aapse baat nahi karahe thee? (?dharam?)?
?…?ab tak apki adat nahi gaye? (?arya?)?
? ??…?jab tak veer nahi ayega tab tak yeh adaat bhi nahi jayge? (?dharam?)?
?…?haan?.. ?Yaad hai veer kistere keer kata tha? (?arya?)?
?…?haan?.. ?Ek baar toh usne poore patili khali thi?!!?? (?dharam?)?
Aryawardhan giggled?..?
?…?VEER??! ?Kaheen tumne saare keer nahi khai? (?nivi?)?
?…?nahi maa? (?veer?)?
Nivriti twisted 8? ?year old veers ear?..?
?…?sach bol!? (?nivi?)?
?…?maa maine kuch nahi kara? (?veer?)?
?…?jhoote?!!?? (?dharam?)?
?…?dharam?!! ?Mera veer sach kehraha hain? (?nivi?)?
She let go of his ear
?…?ao hum tumhara baal banade ? (?nivi?)?
?…?ji? (?veer?)?
Veer looked at the mirror and yelped?.. ?His mouth was covered in keer?.. ?
Nivriti held his ear
?…?badmaash? (?nivi?)?
Back?:?
Arya and dharam were giggling veer was a happy-go-lucky naughty lil sweetheart?.. ?His smile made their happiness?. ?He saddness made their pain and anguish?.. ?

Veer was sitting by the clear blue sea with the sky and the clouds between them? .. ?The? ?sun highly shining brightly?.. ?The feel of mother nature s?.. ?cut green grass?. ?Her blooming red roses?.. ?Her tall fresh trees?.. ?
In just a day he started to think about her?.. ?Nothing ever took her place?.. ?She started to be everything to him?.. ?Everything?
Everything on his mind?.. ?Everything in his heart?.. ?He started to think was ANANYA everything to him??? ?Was ANANYA only his? ???? he went by the sea?.. ?Suddenly a beautiful blue dolphins head came out?.. ?Veer smiled after a long journey?.. ?His friend?.. ?Sheela was back
?…?SHEELA?!!?? (?veer?)?
As he controlled water?.. ?He was friends with all of the water animals?.. ?After they all lived in? ?his water?.. ?But hes doesnt go well with human?.. ?Because of his attitude or better saying his humanity he didnt go well with the aryavrats?.. ?Cause they didnt have? ?one little thing which meant a life? .. ?A life full of happiness?.. ?No danger on hearts a life when a persons smile was the best gift you wanted?.. ?Where everyone lived a life?.. ?A life full of dreams?.. ?A life full of love?.. ?That thing was easy to say?.. ?Hard to do?.. ?The thing was equality

Nighttime?:?
As everyone was getting ready to end a day of work and go to bed?.. ?In a far far away land?.. ?Someone just getting up?.. ?From her bed? ?from a nap?.. ?She pushed her black curly hair backwards? ?
A boy enters the room?..?
?…?aap uth gayee?? (?boy?) ?she was facing him with her back?.. ?Which made her not to be seen?..?
?…?tumhe kya dikaye dera hai chand(shera?)?
?…?ji?.. ?App ko kuch chahiyeh?? (?chand?)?
?…?mujhe akele rehna hai(shera?)?
?…?haan? (?chand?) ?he said while leaving?.. ?Closing the door behind him
?…?mujhe akele rehna hai she murmured
She moved to the window?....?Her black eyes looked up to the arising full moon?.. ?Letting a tear escape her eye slowly closing her eyes?.. ?Remumbering someone?.. ?Who meant everything to her?.. ?Someone who she loved?.. ?But instead of love she got hate for her trust she got Betrayal ?.. ?Every night it was the same routine?.. ?Her tears fell?.. ?Like pearls?.. ?Her heart was in pieces like shattered glass?.. ?Her eyes had dark circles under them from both from not sleeping well and crying?.. ?Suddenly a knock on the door?.. ?Made her open her eyes?.. ?
?…?andar aa jao?..?? (?shera?)?
chand opened the door?.. ?He and a maid entered the maid putted the food on the table and went?.. ?While he stood there watching her? ?
?…?rajkumari shera aap ka khana? (?chand?)?
She immediately smelled it?.. ?From the distance?..?
?…?hume shaahi khaana nahi cahiye humne tumse pehle bhi kahaa tha? (?shera?)?
?…?aap kab tak istare rahenge? ??? (?chand?)?
?…?humesha tak? (?shera?)?
chand was about to say something but the princess raised her hand?.. ?And made a leave move?.. ?
chand lowered his head?.. ?And nodded affirmatively?.. ?And left?..?
She turned and looked at the food?.. ?Kept staring?.. ?She moved to her bed?.. ?On the nigh table she picked up a golden box?.. ?She opened it slowly?.. ?She reached for what was inside?.. ?She took it out?. ?It was a payal?.. ?Gorgesly designed with diamonds and pearls ? . ?again closing her eyes laying on the bed she kept it in her palm? ... ?Gently she opened her eyes?.. ?Letting her tears fall?.. ?she stared at the payal?. ?For some moments
?…?kyun mere saath aisa karaa.maine aisa kya kara tha jisse tumne mujhe dokhaa diya kyun?? ?main tumse buhut pyaar karte hoon?.. ?Vapas aa jao mere paas aa jao?.. ?Tumhe jo bhi chahiye main? ?doonge?.. ?Chahe woh mera singhasan bhi ho?.. ?Mujhe? ?tumhara chehra chahiye?.. ?tumhare voh mazaa chahiye?.. ?Tumhare voh ruhtne aur manane ke andaz chahiye?.. ?Mujhe toh sirf tumhara pyaar chahiye?.. ?? (?shera?)?
As she cried through the nights?.. ?Craving for him for his love ?. ?His jokes?.. ?And then his many ways of saying sorry?.. ?His laughter all she wanted was his love?.. ?Only his love?.. ?But what he did was unforgivable?.. ?Betraying her in a way?.. ?That no one can believe the happy blooming princess was now a bitter lifeless soul?.. ?Only in wait for his sorry?.. ?This left many question in others minds?.. ?What did he do?? ?Or more importantly who was he??.. ?As questions in her mind too?: ?why did he do it?? ?
She sat up straight went to the changing room?.. ?Came out with a white Mughal salwaar kameez? .. ?
? ?And went down to the practicing area?.. ?
She was practicing sword fighting?.. ?Blindfolded Archery?.. ?Anyone would be amazed by this girl?.. ?Better then any boy on earth?.. ?But still he was on her mind?.. ?
As she was practicing with her sword?.. ?Her other hand was getting nearer to the blade?.. ?As she did one swoop it was almost cut off?.. ?If it wasnt for chand
?…?rajkumari ji dekhar?.. ?Agar aap ke haath ko kuch ho jata toh hum maharaj ko kya jawab denge? (?chand?)?
?…? jobhi ho?.. ?Hum dekhar nahi chala re thee? (?shera?)?
?…?aap kab tak usse apni yadoon main laynge?.. ?Kyun nahi bhool jati hain usse? (?chand?)?
?…?tumne kabhi pyaar kiya hai?? (?shera?)?
?…?nahi? (?chand?)?
?…?toh tum kaise samjhoge pyaar ko bhoolana itna asan nahi hai? (?shera?)?
He stopped talking?.. ?He knew it was impossible to make her listen or change her mind?.. ?

next she went up?.. ?To her father who was laying on his bed?.. ?As he saw her?.. ?His mouth curved into a smile his hands opened widely?.. ?His eyes steaming with tears of joy?.. ?As if he was his daughter for the first time?..?the princess touched his feet?.. ?Then she went hugging her beloved father?..
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wonderful part dear
loved it
plz cont
its awesome
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it' s amazing loved it keep goin

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