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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Nice part. U hav portrayed everything very beautifully. U r a terrific writer dear. I luv the way u present it.

I hope Raj will find out Naina sumhow. W8ing 2 knw wat happens next.

PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sania_58

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

totally hatke di

just fatafati

plz taratari update koro.can't wait

by the way, kemon acho??

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

wow Anu, fantastic part!!! beautifully writtenand you dealt with the issues so sensitively...can't wait for the next update

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

di waiting fr u to ud..soon

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Nisha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Nice update...i did not realise that you had updated the second part.

Kahani mein itna bada twist...raj aur naina mile bhi to aise...i hope that raj finds naina soon...

You have a habit of turning the story in a way that none could think of...and this is what keeps us all asking you for more...

So please continue soon

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj refused to go to Gauhar Jaan's mehfil with his fellow officers!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats what I expected!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhi tak Raj Naina se huye apni pehli mulaqat ko bhool nahi paaya!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usne jabse Naina ko dekha hai woh bechain hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Akhir Naina ke naino mein koi jadoo toh zaroor hai naa!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Un sab ko lagta hai ke Raj waha kabhi na kabhi zaroor aayega!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Mujhe samajh mein nahi aata usse waha lejaane ke peeche kyun pade hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Unki problem kya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Ho bhi sakta hai ke apni Naina ko dhundhte huye woh waha bhi aa jaye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But his reasons will be different!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kitni gandi aur ghatiya baatein sochte aur kehte hai yeh log Naina ke baare mein!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ne Naina ko suicide karte huye dekha toh he saved her without knowing who she was!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Koi bhi gairatmand ladki aisi zindagi se accha mar jaana pasand karegi!!!!

Naina was also trying to do that but destiny had other plans for her!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj's dilemma was very well described!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏The dilemma of his own moral values and saving someone's life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur woh usse kaise marne de sakta tha jisse pehli baar dekh kar hi Raj itna bechain ho gaya hai??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne usse baccha toh liya magar hosh mein laane ke liye usne jo kiya perhaps that cannot be said to be right or wrong!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Atleast Raj ne baar baar socha tha and he had even decided to marry her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Phir whisky ke nashe mein woh woh sab kar gaya jo usne kabhi socha bhi tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Jisse woh janta tak nahi uske saath aisa karna is tragic!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina saw who was with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Raj ne isse pehle hi apni safai de di aur apni poori baat bata di usse!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj promised to marry her and he probably would have!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj even confessed ke woh usse chhodna nahi chahta aur jis din se usse dekha hai ussi din se sirf wahi hai uske zahen mein!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina na chahte huye bhi shayad usko accept kar liya because she felt Raj ek shareef insaan hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had left before Raj woke up in the morning!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Usse aise hi chale nahi jaana chahiye tha!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ab bahut pachta raha hai and is worried about Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭He decided ke woh kaise bhi karke usse dhundh nikalega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina finally realised ke Raj ek bhala insaan tha and is glad that she has given her virginity to a good man!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But it was fate and Raj and Naina had to be with each other in such a way!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It came as a blessing in disguise for Naina as she was saved from Devraj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha huya usne pehle hi dekh liya ke Naina pehle hi kisi aur ki ho chuki hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Gusse mein uth kar chala gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Mujhe lagta hai aage woh koi na koi gadbad zaroor karega!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I hope Raj finds Naina soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

@ prerna1,kads_8302,nihatri,rituka7,watch rajeev,sea-nyx,sumaiya wahid, sania_58

Thanks a lot for your comments and enormous support.I was injured so I could not update..now I am free..I will update soon..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

@ springsign29

Thanks for your nice comment,yes,,it is difficult to distinguish among various aspects of human dillema..and Devraj ..he is also suffering due to his lust and rage.Raj and Naina.. both are trapped due to unfavouring situations..let's see..what is next.

@ desaiprachi 07

Yes..to some extent Raj was driven by his instinct..his lust.But it was in his destiny.Destiny led and he followed..

@vvdn

Thanks for reading..I am not well now a days.So..please co-operate.

@ Mahek Sinha

Raj and Naina will face lots of turmoil in life..they will suffer in this life..because one life is not enough for their love..Raj followed his heart and later he followed his lust.Naina accepted or rejected..that is in the near future's consideration..currently a big storm is coming towards them.

@ digimon_pokemon

Hmm..I am so weakd Sarah..love to give shock to my readers..read and be ready to have shocks..

@ riyaa_1985

Raj and Naina will meet again..but things will not be so easy..be ready for that.And keep reading and keep loving my fiction.

@ varshita

Yes honey so many shockes..all in destiny.Raj's act..Raj's wrong act in destiny..and for that Naina became saved from Devraj..that is also destiny..destiny leads..people follow..that's all..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj refused to go to Gauhar Jaan's mehfil with his fellow officers!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats what I expected!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhi tak Raj Naina se huye apni pehli mulaqat ko bhool nahi paaya!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usne jabse Naina ko dekha hai woh bechain hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Akhir Naina ke naino mein koi jadoo toh zaroor hai naa!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Un sab ko lagta hai ke Raj waha kabhi na kabhi zaroor aayega!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Mujhe samajh mein nahi aata usse waha lejaane ke peeche kyun pade hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Unki problem kya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Ho bhi sakta hai ke apni Naina ko dhundhte huye woh waha bhi aa jaye!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But his reasons will be different!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kitni gandi aur ghatiya baatein sochte aur kehte hai yeh log Naina ke baare mein!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ne Naina ko suicide karte huye dekha toh he saved her without knowing who she was!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Koi bhi gairatmand ladki aisi zindagi se accha mar jaana pasand karegi!!!!

Naina was also trying to do that but destiny had other plans for her!!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj's dilemma was very well described!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏The dilemma of his own moral values and saving someone's life!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur woh usse kaise marne de sakta tha jisse pehli baar dekh kar hi Raj itna bechain ho gaya hai??😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne usse baccha toh liya magar hosh mein laane ke liye usne jo kiya perhaps that cannot be said to be right or wrong!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Atleast Raj ne baar baar socha tha and he had even decided to marry her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Phir whisky ke nashe mein woh woh sab kar gaya jo usne kabhi socha bhi tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Jisse woh janta tak nahi uske saath aisa karna is tragic!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina saw who was with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Magar Raj ne isse pehle hi apni safai de di aur apni poori baat bata di usse!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj promised to marry her and he probably would have!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj even confessed ke woh usse chhodna nahi chahta aur jis din se usse dekha hai ussi din se sirf wahi hai uske zahen mein!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina na chahte huye bhi shayad usko accept kar liya because she felt Raj ek shareef insaan hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had left before Raj woke up in the morning!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Usse aise hi chale nahi jaana chahiye tha!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ab bahut pachta raha hai and is worried about Naina!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭He decided ke woh kaise bhi karke usse dhundh nikalega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina finally realised ke Raj ek bhala insaan tha and is glad that she has given her virginity to a good man!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But it was fate and Raj and Naina had to be with each other in such a way!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It came as a blessing in disguise for Naina as she was saved from Devraj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha huya usne pehle hi dekh liya ke Naina pehle hi kisi aur ki ho chuki hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Gusse mein uth kar chala gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Mujhe lagta hai aage woh koi na koi gadbad zaroor karega!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I hope Raj finds Naina soon!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

You can expect every good things from Raj ..that is for sure.But at some point people become weak.Raj had his own dillema ..at last he surrendered to his lust.But ..other thing he was ready to accept Naina..and give her place in his life with full dignity and respect. We can't decide whether Raj was right and wrong.Let life to decide that.

Naina had her own thinking..she was glad to lose her virginity to a gentleman..but she couldn't even think to marry him.But she was saved from Devraj..Gaohar became helpless..

The point is..Raj and Naina will have lots of twist and turns in their life,lots of turmoil is going to come in their life.A big storm is coimng towards themAs the World War 2 is in plot.Fire is in the horizon.

Devraj.. is an imporatnt part of our story..he is still to be portrayed..wait for that.

One life will not be enough for Raj and Naina.This is life..totally unexpected.Expecting is a crime here.Raj and Naina ..their conflict and their dillema..yet to be sketched.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#60

@ dazzling_glory

I know I have a very bad habit which my readers like very much..they love the twists in my fiction..I also love that.😆

and to all my silent readers..

Thanks ..for reading..and loving my fiction.

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