Tose Naina Laage(RN)..Part 6 @ Page 17 24/02/10

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kads_8302

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

hi anu
how r u....
the ud was just mindblowing....
it was totally hatke ud....
ud soon...

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springsign29

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

ur stories bring out different shades that can be present of a human being with pure and sheer talent of ur writing,ananya di , i hav told u this bfore and will again tell u that u r one of the best writers i have come across....👏
and the second very update of TNL gave me shock, nt one but many......😲feeling bad fr poor girl nazar , she wanted to end her lyfe.... as the circumstances sumtime force a person to take such an extreme step... but im happy that raj rescued her.....😊,and of watever happened between raj and naina ,hmm, could understand raj's dilemma , dilemma of his own moral values andsaving someone's life......but there is somethng called fate too and u can't fight it anyway.....raj and nazar had be each others in such a way and it happened... but it came as a blessin in disguise fr naina as she was saved frm raja sahib's nephew........and i wish raj finds nazar soon and there and some love gets sprinkled ovr their story......
thnks fr ud... ud soon

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desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Love u Anu for it. 😃

Kahani ko jo turn shayad aap deti ho na vo koi aur de hi nahi sakta. 😊 Abhi tak Raj Naina se hue apni pehli mulakaat ko bhool nahi paaya.😉 aur yahan Naina ki zindagi bachane laga tha aur shayad bachate bachate us ne jo kiya abhi k liye vo sahi nahi hai. Kyounki jis ko vo acche se abhi tak ek baar jaanta bhi nahi hai us k saath aisa karna ............that is tragic.😭

Par mujhe pata hai ki aage tum ek accha sa mod dogi is story ko. 😛

update soon yaar ye ud one n half months k baad aaya hai.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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watch rajeev

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

thanx for updating.....i m reallly sorrry...i wont be able to comment coz of my stupiiiiiiiid xams...bt i defntly read all ur updates...and i loved dis one tooooo....

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vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Hey...Fabulous update!!!!! finally u updated it.yaar it's really nice update...waiting for more...

but when u gonna update "shaadi....aur fir" plzzzzz update sooon

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Jhakaas part.👏 👏 👏

Raj apne fellow officers k saath Nazar Jaan ki mehfil me nahi gaya tat's wat i expected.😊 😊 😊 Un sab ko lagta hai ki kabhi na kabhi vo jaroor aayega un k saath.😲 😲 😲 Haan ho bhi sakta hai ki apni Naina ko dhoondhte hue vo yahan bhi aa jaaye par vajah vo nahi hogi jo aur logon k paas hai. Kitne gandi aur ghatiya baatein sochta aur kehte hain ye log Naina k baare me.😡 😡 😡

Raj ne jab se Naina ko dekha hai vo bechain hai aur bechain kyoun hai ye to hum sab samajhte hain 😉 😉 😉 aakhir Naina k naino me koi jadoo to jaroor hai na.😳 😳 😳 Raj ne Naina ko suicide karte hue dekha to us ne bina jaane kaun hai vo apna farz nibhaya. Koi bhi gairatmand ladki aise zindagi se accha mar jaana pasand karegi bus vahi Naina kar rahi thi par shayad kismat ko kuch aur hi manjoor hai.😕 😕 😕

Raj ne us ko bacha to liya par hosh me laane k liye us ne jo kiya us ko sahi aur galat k tarajoo me taula nahi jaa sakta hai.😔 😔 😔 Shayad us ki jagah koi aur hota to ek baar hesitate bhi nahi karta aisa karne se pehle jab ki Raj baar baar soch raha tha ki vo galat karne jaa raha hai 😒 😒 😒 aur ek pal aisa aaya ki whisky k nashe me vo vo sab kuch kar gaya shayad jo us ne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha.😔 😔 😔

Naina ne dekha ki kaun hai vo jo us k saath.............par Raj ne is se pehle hi apni safai de aur poori baat bhi bata di us ko 😛 😛 😛. Naina na chahte hue bhi shayad us ko accept kar gayi kyounki us ko laga ki Raj ek shareef insaan hai. Raj ne vada to kar diya us se shaadi ka aur vo karega bhi i know but kya us k gharwaale is baat ko maange ye jaan ne k baad ki vo kahan se hai.😕 😕 😕

Raj ko abhi kuch pata nahi hai aur us ne ye sab kar daala aur ab aur jyada pachta raha hai.😭 😭 😭 Yahan Naina ko apne liye Raja Sahab k niece ka intezaar tha aur accha hi hua us ne dekh liya ki Naina pehle hi kisi aur ki ho chuki hai.😉 😉 😉 Gusse me uth k chala to gaya par mujhe lagta hai ki aage vo koi na koi gadbad jaroor karega . Karne do Raj hai na Naina k saath.😊 😊 😊

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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nihatri

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

pls yaar jaldi update karo. we all r waiting eagerly

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digimon_pokemon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

welcome back anu.i hope ur health is fine now..

coming to the update.superb........

surprsingly shocking😲

such a turn of events.wowwwwww👏👏👏

it has become all the more interesting .😊

eagerly looking forward to the next one

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Riya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Hi!! Anu!!!!
A very nice part...in fact very interesting....
very well written..👏 👏 👏
ab jaldi se update karna....
I hope Raj aur Naina phir se kahin mile.....

love
Riya

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varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Superd part Anu jee.

Just loved it n found so many shocks at once.

Najar zaan ka suicide attempt ek shock, Raj ka us ko bachana aur fir bahut kuch karna ek doosra shock, Devraj ka aana aur Naina ko chod dena sweetest shock tha. Sab se accha vo part tha jis me aap ne Raj ki soch aur us ki uljhan ko show kiya tha.

Gauhar Jaan ki majboori samajh me aati hai ki kab tak vo Naina ko duniya se bacha k rakhein? Khaas kar us jagah jahan Naina rehti hai. Naina ne marne ki koshish ki vo bhi obviuos hai.

Sab se jyada shocking nahi kahoongi phir bhi ajeeb lagne vaala tha Raj ka vo kaam jo us ne na chahte hue bhi kiya. Kuch had tak theek tha ki us ko Naina ki jaan bacahani thi aur accha hua Devraj isi bahane chala gaya Naina ko chod k.

ab jaldi se Raj aur Naina ko fir se milao.

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