Tose Naina Laage(RN)..Part 6 @ Page 17 24/02/10 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wonderful ud Anu.

Devraaj k baare me mujhe sun k thoda ajeeb laga. Vaise to Rajwade famous hain ki apni biwi se un ka kabhi man nahi bharta par yahan to maamla hi alag hai Devraaj ki biwi Raj ko bachpan se pyaar karti thi but i am sure ki Raj k dil me us k liye koi bhi feeling kabhi nahi rahi hogi. Kyounki Raj k saath aisa hota to vo Naina k saath itna bada kadam kabhi na uthata. 6 saal saath rehne k baad bhi us ne aaj tak apni biwi ko touch nahi kiya. Ye bhi ajeeb hai , vaise bura to us ko lagta hi hoga na kab neend me bhi vo Raj k baare me bolti hogi.
Naina pe najar padi Devraaj ki ye to theek hai par apni patni ki kami vo Nazar Jaan se poori nahi kar paaya aur is baat ki hi mujhe lagta hai sab se jyada frustration hai us ko tabhi vo do pal k liye apni biwi k paas gaya tha jo 6 saalon me kabhi nahi gaya. Sahi kaha Suniti ne us ko, pehle us ko patni ka hak nahi diya aur jab Nazar Jaan nahi mil saki to us k paas aa gaya. Par mujhe ek cheej bahut acchi lagi ki Devraaj dubara Naina k paas nahi gaya ye keh kar ki vo jhoothan nahi pasand karta. Ab jashn hoga tab vo Raj ko vahan jaroor bulayega i think.
Par kyoun Suniti Devraaj aur Nazar Jaan ki shaadi karane k peeche padi hai? Accha kiya Devraaj ne mana kar diya. Yahan Naina ka haal bhi ajeeb hai ki us ko saamne apne Raj mila aur us se baat karne ki koshish karta raha par us ne koi jawaab nahi diya aur vahan se chali gayi. Devraaj Raj se mila aur sochne laga ki us me kya khaas hai? Raj sab se alag hai yahi khaas hai us me. Ab gusse me na jaane Devraaj kya karega Raj ka? Abhi to us ko ye bhi nahi pata hai ki Naina ki nath us ne todi thi , jab pata chalega to na jaane kya hoga?
ud soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
Hi Anu...I m a new reader of ur fic...!!!😃
I must say this is the most different fic on RN that I hv ever read...!!!😃
😃N its fabulous...!!! 👏
The background that u hv chosen is very beautiful n i m totally in love wid this story...!!!!👏👏
Pls put up the next part soon....!!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
Hey vow Anu tum ne is fic ko ud kar hi diya i am so happy.😊 Raj ka rishta nikla Devraaj ki biwi se aur vo bhi aisa ki vo pyaar karti thi us ko aur us ko kabhi bhula bhi nahi paayi. 😲 This is strange, pata nahi ab Devraaj kya karega Raj k saath 😕 kyounki ab to us ko pata bhi chal gaya hai na ki Raj vahi hai. Raj ne Naina se baat karne ki koshish bhi ki par ye Naina kyoun boli nahi kuch?😕 Aisa bhi karte hain? Mujhe accha nahi laga ki bina kuch kahe vo chali gayi.😡

yaar ab jyada mat tadpaana, jaldi ud karna.
😉
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Oh is ka second part to bahut ups n downs se bhara raha. Raj ne Naina ki jaan to bachai par aage jo hua vo shayad samay ki demand thi to Naina ko bacahne k liye par justified nahi keh sakte hain. Aisa nahi hona chahiye tha. Vaise Raj k vaade par bharosa hai mujhe ki vo Naina ko dhoondh k shaadi to karega us se phir bhi................ Is ka ek fayda to hua ki Naina Devraaj se bach gayi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
Today i read the third part of the fic.
That was indeed beautiful. But jo rishta nikal k saamne aa raha hai Raj aur Devraaj ki biwi k beech me mujhe doubt hai vo future me bahut saari troubles create kar sakta hai.
Devraaj apni biwi ki vajah se Raj se nafrat karta hai, aur jis din us ko Naina aur Raj k sach k baare me pata chala us din to kehar aa jaayega.
Jaldi se aage badhaoo na.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Note : The author of this fic has injured her right hand and so she is not able to type the update....!!! She has told us to expect an update by the last week of August...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Note : The author of this fic has injured her right hand and so she is not able to type the update....!!! She has told us to expect an update by the last week of August...!!!

thanks for informing Dhara.
Get well soon Anu😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is feeling very guilty about what he had done and worried about Naina!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

He cannot forgive himself and wants to help Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the way Raj ne Captain Rathore ko jawab diya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Its good to see woh kisi ki baato se behak nahi jaata!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

It was strange to hear about Devraj!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕It's really an unexpected twist in the tale!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajwade toh famous hai for going off after another woman inspite of having a wife!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡But in his case its different!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Devraj ki biwi bachpan se Raj se pyaar karti hai!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲But I am sure Raj did not have any such feelings for her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Otherwise he would not have taken such a big step with Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Its strange that even after living with his wife for 6 years Devraj ne aaj tak usse touch nahi kiya!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Devraj ko bura toh lagta hoga jab neend mein bhi Suniti Raj ke baare mein bolti hai!!!!

Roop had assumed that Rajveer will also be like his brother!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒Suniti is angry at Roop!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Suniti ko toh ish baat se bhi koi fark nahi padhta ke sab usse baanj kehte hai!!!!

Devraj is sad for Suniti!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Suniti is now insisting ke Devraj dusri shaadi karle!!!!

Pata nahi kyun woh Devraj aur Nazar Jaan ki shaadi karane ke peeche padhi hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Accha huya Devraj ne mana kar diya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊Suniti toh mandir mein bhi Naina se wahi baat karne lagi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Finally Raj Naina ko dhundh leta hai aur usse baat karne ki koshish karta hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh accha huya ke Raj ko Naina ka naam pata chal gaya!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar Naina ne toh koi jawab hi nahi diya aur waha se chali gayi!!!! Atleast koshish toh karti usse kuch batane ki!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj met Raj aur sochne laga usmein kya khas hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj sab se alag hai yehi khas hai usmein!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Devraj ne mehfil Gauhar jaan ko sajane ko bola hai aur ish jashan mein shayad Raj bhi aaye aur Raj aur Naina ki mulaqat ho jaye!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh accha huya ke Devraj dubara Naina ke paas nahi gaya yeh keh kar ke usse jhootan pasand nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Devraj apni patni ki kami Nazar Jaan se poori nahi kar paaya toh bahut frustrated ho gaya!!!!!

Tabhi toh woh do pal ke liye apni biwi ke paas gaya tha jo 6 saal mein kabhi nahi gaya!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Suniti ne sahi kaha usko ke pehle usko patni ka haq nahi diya aur ab Nazar Jaan nahi mil saki toh uske paas aa gaya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Devraj apni biwi ki wajah se Raj se nafrat karta hai!!!!! Jis din usse Naina aur Raj ka sach pata chalega ush din pata nahi kya hoga??😕 😕 😕 😕


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
Welcome back Anu😃
hope u r doing good.. it was great to see ur post😊
i am alil confuse on Jayanti Devi (didnt recognize her)😕😕Shaleen as devraj a lil weird.sunithi is well okk
i like randheer and roop😊
waiting eagerly for the next part
Edited by digimon_pokemon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gud that u posted the pictures of characters other than Raj n naina. So Devraj is Shaleen n Suniti is Daljeet. Well, Daljeet is really sweet but Shaleen in such a character that too against Raj...umm....well, its ok but hope he becums gud at the end.

Anyways, now am w8ing for the next part. Pls continue soon.

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