Tose Naina Laage(RN)..Part 6 @ Page 17 24/02/10

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Superb Anu, pehle part kamaal ka tha.👏 👏 👏 Raj ne apne shauk aur khwahish ko poora karne k liye Army join ki good yaar 😊 😊 😊. Vaise bhi vo kuch traditional karne se jyada kuch alag karna chahta raha hoga na.😉 😉 😉 Mujhe bahut khushi hue ki Raj k anadr Rajwaadon k kuch special sanskaar nahi hain 😆 😆 😆 . Hona bhi nahi chahiye vo kuch acche sanskaar to hain nahi .Raj k seniors ne us ko Najar Jaan k baare me bataya but still he is not interested that much,😆 😆 😆 good yaar. To Naina jee hain humari najar jaan jin ko Raj ne bus ek hi baar dekha aur us k naino me kuch alag aur kuch khaas sa dekha us ko. 😳 😳 😳

update soon dear.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

that was mindblowing

plz continue soon

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Riya

@Riya_16

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Hello Anu,
Welcome back dear.....
It is great to have you back with yet another rocking fic...
the topic seems to be very interesting.....
All the very best dear.....
Please continue soon...

love
Riya.

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

WOW i am so excited that i will get to read a new FF of yours.....i

Your theme fir the FF is unique as always.....goign back to the time of the WW2. Raj belongs to a royal family but is still humble.

He is touched by the lines that he has read...

waiting ofr oyur next update.

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Nice part. This is very different from usual. Seems interesting. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Wow Naina Jaan Ada?!!!…lol. But fantastic concept yaar, while I knew this was going to involve the concept of rebirth, somehow I assumed that you know it'll follow the basic plot (you know with raj being killed protecting the triggers and all) and then would jump to the future or sometime like Love Story 2050 or something. But this is just amazing…

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watch rajeev

@watch rajeev

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

wow another fic frm u anu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u r really amazing.....i dont know tumhein itne saare ideas aate kahan se aate hain.....u know mujhe ye reincarnation waali kahaniyaaan bhut pasand hain....i just love to read and watch them....soooo i m really looking forward to dis fic....world war 2 ka time....baapre....hehhehehehehee....but dis is also different in dis fic...i think no one has ever used this concept before....aur naina ka naaam nazar jaan mujhe bhut pasand aaya....aur shayari bhi...raj aur naina ki first meeting bhut hi different aur interesting thi....i know an raj apne baaaki saathiyon ke saath jaayega aur usssse wahan naina milegi....u know i just loved this whole thing....naina ne bhi koi baaat nhn ki....par fir bhi jo kuch bhi tumne uske baaare mein likha ussse uski massomiyat jhalak rahi thi....i just cant wait to read more....soo plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooon

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digimon_pokemon

@digimon_pokemon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

hello anu😊

very interesting first part👏👏👏
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the setting... the era... is superb.

raj naina scene though a small one but was impact full.

so beautiful and understandable poetry .😊👏
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eagerly looking forward to the next part