AR: 'ONCE IN A LIFE TIME' Pt 9:Pg 43...31/8

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Zoya_01
Hey deepa
Nice ff

The part was awesome

love to read furthur

and please solve armi's all problems fast

update soon and do pm me if you can

take care

Zoya

hey Zoya thanx for commenting...im glad tht u liked it....ill surely pm u....

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: KaranShilpa:)

Hallo there!!

I just happened to come acros your ff...n brava!! its lovely!!

I can totally understand what he feels..n it is really exciting to read what must be in store for us...so please without wasting much time, jaldi se update another beautiful part for us!! n yea, do PM me once yu do that!!

thanx so much!

hey dear thanx for commenting....im glad tht u liked it....ill continue it soon......n ill surely pm u.....

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: teenorchid
awww...nice concept
that beauty would b ridhima

pm me when u cont

hey dear thanx for commenting...

ill surely pm u the next time....

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey nice part yaar Armaan is upset ooh and that beautiful girl is Riddhima i guess but the part was great dear.

hey dear thanx for liking it........

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kashishk
Hey deepa,
I just read the part and it's awesome.
I just loved it.
Poor ammi was so heartbroken till he saw the girl.
I thing the girl ammi saw is ridhima.
Continue soon and thnx for the PM.

Kashish

hey dear thanx for liking it.....

yeah ammy was vry much heartbroken......

ill continue it soon........

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: guju_girl1
hey
great part can't wait to read more😊

hey dear thanx for liking it.....

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
hey hun amezing update...loved it..cant wait to read more...thankc 4 the pm..i m dying to know armaan's past...
❤️MONA

hey dear im glad tht u liked it......

ill continue it soon......

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Tangled

@iTangled_25

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Atta girl...it was not at all boring ...i loved the way u brought out the emoions...muah...

Thank for the PM....

n PM me for the next part.....

n once again ...a very well written forst part....eventually u will improve sweety...

Love Steffi

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

woah🤗 that's really an awesome one⭐️ superb😍 mind blowing dear☺️😍 sorry for late reply😳 jut read ur update😳😳 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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