AR: 'ONCE IN A LIFE TIME' Pt 9:Pg 43...31/8

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hey guys hi im Deepa u might have seen me posting comments as crazy_4_karan in DMG forum................i have read some amazing ff's hear.......n have been thinkin of writting one myself on this idea wich have been huanting me since past few day.....n now i have finaly got the courage to do so.......it will b based on my fav AR😊......its called...

"ONCE IN A LIFE TIME"


Some experiance in life gives u the meaning of life, thy teach u the importance of the one n only life u have got......thy teach u the importance of ppl in ur life............thy help u to know how important u r to others.......thy help u to discover ur self n b wat u r truely meant to be.....thy help u to know the difference btw right n worng......they help u to blive in faith in god......this is the story of ARMAAN n how bcoz of him others life also changes......

xxxxxx........xxxxxx


ok guys this was a small into(i dont know if it's a intro or not...lolz😆😆)..........this is the first time im writting an ff's so plzzzzzz forgive me for my mistakes............this ff will basicaly b on AR but other couples will also have importance in it.............guys do tell me should i continue it or not......guys plzzz b honest with ur comments.....

::::INDEX::::

Part 1 :: Page 1
Part 2 :: Page 9
Part 3 :: Page 12
Part 4 :: Page 15
Part 5 :: Page 21
Part 6 :: Page 27
Part 7 :: Page 33
Part 8 :: Page 37
Part 9 :: Page 43
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys thanx a lot for all ur wonderful comments....i seriously did not accepted to get such a nice responce........u guys seriously made my day😊😊......here is the first part i hope u like it........im sorry for any mistakes......
Part 1

People say life is perfect for him as he has got every thing, he is super rich??.has the capacity n power to rule others life??.just one word for him n ppl will blindly follow him???he has those killing looks??..tht most desirable body??n tht gorgeous smile??he is the desire of every girl ??.all n all u can tell him to be the most eligible bachelor??..but wen u look in his eyes u'll come to know tht this all means nothing to him, absolutely nothing??.u'll be able to see the pain n sadness of loneliness in thm??.he doesn't wants all this fame n success all his craves for is to love some one n to be loved by some one??.

Today hes been award by the "young achievers" award but does tht really matters to him??.no it does not no doubt he has achieved the fame n success which a normal person just keeps on dreaming for ther whole life, n he has got all of it at the age of 24??.

Party was going on in full swing, people wer drinking dancing and enjoying them self's??.but the center of the party the person for whoz success this party has been given was standing at a concer with drink in his hand, wich he was just holding since past 2 hours??..he was none other thn THE ARMAAN MALLIK the owner of the MALLIK ENTERPRICE???looking ever so hot n sexy in a black suit with a red shirt??he was so not interested in the party but had given this party just because the two most important people in his life have wanted it??.his best buddy Rahul n his sweet little sister like friend Sapna???he can never say no to them??..n tht's the only reason for which he has given this party??..

Since past 2 hours he was just standing ther and looking at those ppl who wer supposingly here to congrats him for his success but he very well knew tht they wer just pretending to be happy for him n in reality thy hated him for his success??he was feeling suffocated in here, so he dicided to go out for some time???..so he called Rahul??.

Rahul : yeh Armaan want happened why are u standing her like this, come lets move to the dance floor, every one is so waiting for u ther?..

Armaan : yeh yeh I know how much thy are waiting for me?I can so see tht??(he pointed to the ppl dancing on the dance floor)

Rahul : dude u know thy are here to celebrate ur success?.and u know why v have given this party so tht u can forget all those bitter memories n enjoy for some time?

Armaan : I know tht Rahul?.but I just cant take it out of my mind?..every time I try to forget tht I can here ther helpless cry for some help??and guilt of not being able help thm takes over me?..I just cant forget it?..it was all my fault if I had not been sooo involved in my self tht could have never happened??..

Rahul : I have told u so many time it was not ur fault, it was n accident??.it was ther faith??.

Armaan : yeah faith god??the one who took away every happiness of mine what wrong did I do to be left alone like this???he took away my whole family??wat wrong did thy do??.thy wer the most innocent ppl thy never ever hurt a soul??u know wat god does not exist and tht was all my mistake only mine??

Rahul : Armaan y do u keep on cursing ur self for tht??plzzzz Armaan don't do tht, like this u are not only hurting urself but also the people who geniunly love n care abt u.

Armaan : I m sorry Rahul I did not want to hurt ur n di's feeling u two are my only family n I can never ever hurt u two n u know tht, I have given this party only for the two of u??but yaar now im feeling vry suffocated here?..i just cant stand this useless people anymore??.i want to be alone for some time??.i promise u ill be back soon?..u plzzzzz take care of di

Rahul : ok, but be back soon??

Armaan : thanx Rahul?

And with tht he came out of tht deadly place??.he was feeling very low today??he was missing his family very much today??n it is only for thm tht he has achieved all this fame n success??.its ther dream for him??..wich he wanted to fulfill

Walking along the empty road u could clearly see his eyes full of tears??.he went to his favorite beach?.n thn went to this corner wich was his partner his companion in all his joys n sorrows??he set ther silently crying for wat seems like ages??..but thy way he could cry n remove all his pain here was not possible any wer else as Rahul n Sapan wer almost always with him??n he did not wanted to cry in front to thm?.as thy wer trying so hard to bring him back to his normal happy-go-luck self??n he did not want to hurt ther feelings??

Sitting here he was once again flooded with all the happy memories???if u had seen him 3 years back u could never believe tht he is the same guy??..he was life of his family??..the biggest prankster no one was saved frm evil pranks??.he was the jaan of his group always happy n cheerfull??..nobody could remain low in his compay??..but today he was the one who had ??.he yet clearly remember the expression of them wen he had topped in MBA n was given the best students award how happy thy wer??..he smiled through his tears remembering all those memories??.

He was so much into his thoughts tht he did not know tht ther was somebody else also ther??he suddenly heard some noises of someone's laughing??.normally this was the place wer very few people used to come so he got frm his place n moved to see the source of sound??..n the site he saw was just breathtakingly beautifull??..ther was a girl dressed in a simple jeans n white top playing with a small kid and at the same time she was talking to the couple sitting besides her???.she was just to heavenly beautiful tht Armaan just could not take his eyes off her??.he just kept on staring at her the way she was smiling at the kid the way she was talking to the other ppl besides her??..the way she was moving her hands while talking??..he was noticing every thing abt her???n to his surprise he was smiling to himself while staring at this beautiful stranger??.suddenly his cell started ringing???he cursed the person disturbing him??.n thn took out his cell n saw tht it was frm Rahul??.n thn it stuck him tht he was sitting here since a long time??..so he pick up the call to here Rahul shouting at him??.

Rahul : Armaan wer the hell are u??..do u even know wat the time is??..u told me u wont be late???n y wer u not picking up my call before????.do u think we are crazy to be so worried abt ur whereabouts???don't u have any idea of how worried v r for u??..now y are u not saying any thing??.

Armaan : Rahul I can speak only wen u let me say something since the time I picked up the call???.u r constantly shouting at me??..

Rahul : u can hear me shouting but u cant judge how worried sick im here for u??..now tell me wer r u?.

He turned to look at the beautifull stranger n frowned to not find her there???

Armaan : Rahul she left??

Rahul : who left Armaan whoz ther with u???by the way wer r u???

Armaan : she Rahul tht beautiful girl??.

Suddenly he realized wat he said n now ther was no way he could be saved from Rahul's numerous Q's abt her, he cursed him self for saying anything without thinking??..

Rahul : wat a beautiful girl??Armaan u talking abt a girl??omg Armaan wats happening ther wer are u???.just tell me rit now im coming ther??

Rahul was surprised hear tht frm Armaan, ever since tht accident Armaan have never ever looked at any girl let alone tell her beautiful??.Rahul was now vry much worried abt him??.he wanted to know every thing, he wanted each n every detail abt tht girl frm Armaan ???

Armaan : Rahul im fine n im just coming home u don't worry ill be ther shortly??.

Saying this he cut the call???.n started moving towards home?..he too was surprised at himself???in this past 2 yrs he never ever looked at any girl forget staring tht too intently at thm??..whole way he just could not take his mind of her???he also mentally prepared himself for the rapid fire Q's tht he has to face frm Rahul????..

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ok guys this was the first part.......i know it is not tht good but i needed to show the emotions of armaan.....sorry if i bored u......do leave ur honest comments guys good or bad watever it is......if it is worth it.........all ur criticisms n suggestions are most welcomed........
Edited by crazy_4_karan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Deppa,
U should really continue it.
It sounds cool.
And pls do PM me, if possible.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey deepa.... 🤗.. woo hoo... well done hunny for starting this ff... you'll be great!!!! 👏👏👏.. loved the intro.. now get writing and do a full blown part one... you'll awesum.. trust me...😳😳.. cont sson and loads of love and hugs... me...xxxx😳😳

Edited by lilsunshine_rav - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwwwww sounds veryyy nice deepu can't wait to read, it would be veryy good
and Do Pm me whenever you update
do continue as soon as you can
love the story line
so it would be about AR so can't wait any longer
do continue chooon
swancy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Deppa,
U should really continue it.
It sounds cool.
And pls do PM me, if possible.

Kashish

hey kashish thanx for commenting, im gald u liked it.....
ill b posting the first part by 2moro........
n ill surely om u.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

hey deepa.... 🤗.. woo hoo... well done hunny for starting this ff... you'll be great!!!! 👏👏👏.. loved the intro.. now get writing and do a full blown part one... you'll awesum.. trust me...😳😳.. cont sson and loads of love and hugs... me...xxxx😳😳

hey rav thanx for commenting, im glad tht u liked it......
ill b posting the 1 part by 2moro......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swansea

awwwwwwwwww sounds veryyy nice deepu can't wait to read, it would be veryy good

and Do Pm me whenever you update
do continue as soon as you can
love the story line
so it would be about AR so can't wait any longer
do continue chooon
swancy

hey swancy thanx for commenting.........
im glad tht u like it........
will b posting the 1 part by 2moro......
n ill surely pm u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey it sounds really good
do updte
nizma x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy Deepa!
the concept sounds interesting!!
plz do cont soon!
and plz PM me when u cont!
<33
Mahima

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