Truely Madly Deeply in love❤️(mayur ff)PART 11pg26 - Page 13

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute mayur

OMG!!!!!!!!I AM SOOOO SO SO SO PISSED RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!

i just finished writing the next part and i was editing it and wen i pressed the escape key it went to the previous page and the whole part is erased now!!!!!!i am sooo pissed right now!!!!ughhhhhh!!!dammit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh well.. i am in no mood to write it down again😕
and i did learn one thing.....to write the part in ms-word first!!!!!!!!!
oh gosh!!!
i am so sorry ppl!!
ughhhhhhhhhhh



are you serious??? damn. that sucks! but don't worry, take your time while writing the FF again...i know you'll do a good job 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
firstly big sorry for the delay in replying actually my net was down anyways just luvd the part....u write so well...i cud visualize it ..wow its fantastic.luvd the part....continue soon,will b eagerly waiting....!!!
Luv Raee<3
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Raee_rockz

firstly big sorry for the delay in replying actually my net was down anyways just luvd the part....u write so well...i cud visualize it ..wow its fantastic.luvd the part....continue soon,will b eagerly waiting....!!!

Luv Raee<3

awwww!thats ok!!
haha...but thanks😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
so sorry for the late update.and btw..i am skipping some parts cuz i really wanna move the story forward. i 've got gr8 ideas...and i dnt wanna drag the earlier things...so here it is:]
-- i had changed the characters to arti from mayur but i am gunna change them back now cuz i guess some of u got confused...so now its gunna be mayur....srry--
Part 8
he had kissed all her pain away....he had made a place in her heart from where there was no escaping...he had given himself to her.....he was all hers ... and thats where he belonged. he was never soo sure about anything else in his life until he met her...she was the one...she was the one who had transformed him into a person he always only wished to be.she was the one who gave him all the happiness that he only dreamt of.but now it was reality. this was actually happening-he thought. after all the hard times that he had to go through..thoughts about his parents made him go crazy but she made him forget them and now he had a fresh start. she didnt know much about his parents as he always became really sad and down on their conversation so she decided to let go of that topic and always cheered him up.
he almost had tears in his eyes wen he had all those thoughts in his mind and he thanked GOD and now knew that GOD actually didnt only 'hear' his prayers but also fulfilled them. his faith in GOD had now increased.she was the one who had brought him back to GOD too.they were both facing the sunset. he was behind her and with his hands around her waist he kissed her neck which had officially become the sign for - i love you raised to the power infinity.she smiled and put her hand around his face.
their trip to brazil had been full of love. they spent so much time with each other that even a minute away from each other felt like forever.they were the happiest couple in the unverse. they had now become 'one'. and promised to remain one forever.and they were the cutest couple too as this is what samaira told them...obviously amit and her found out about them. they were a week with them and that too together. they were the first persons to know about their relationship. and mayank wanted them to be the last ones to know too cuz if the ppl found out they wont leave nupur and him alone...he was pretty famous after all...
brazil ended with a smile and they continued their journey of love forward. it was like a fairy tale. one that nupur's mother had never told her before . as this one was special. it was meant to be for her. a gift from GOD.an year had flown by.
they had spent soo much time with each other.it was like a beautiful dream from which they never wanted to wake up.
all the moments spent at their work place got very irritating. so they decided to take a vacation.they were off for a week. in the evening they both were at nupur's apartment in the balcony. going to and fro on the the swing.he laid his head on her shoulders and held her hand.wen nupur suddenly spoke
n - mayank, i want u to meet my parents.
mayank was a little hesitated at these words. and took his head off her shoulders and just responded with a -hmmm..
nupur knew that he had the thought of his own parents. she understood him.
n- its ok if u dnt wanna meet them......(she said a bit disappointed)
mayank replied quickly
m - oh no....i wud love to meet them..
n - omg!!r u sure.....actually i wanted to go this week....off from work so maybe we both can go
m- yess!!!! thats a great idea!! nupur was sooo happy that mayank was ok with that. smiling she placed her head on his shoulders and hugged him. he kept his hand around her waist. but he was a little worried about the thought of meeting her parents...he didnt know how they will be towards him....he was very tensed but didnt let her know..
Edited by cute mayur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow...just caught up on the last three parts....your such a creative writer....i loved all the mayur scenes!..keep writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
as always!!! you never leave us disappointed!! 😃 great job zoe!! do continue...cant wait
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh gosh jan it was awesome, zoe i had been waiting for a really long time, but zoe the intial characters were mayank and nupur na, how come its arjun and rati now.anyways your update was just awesome, its soooooooooo good when we have no mayur in the show atleast we can have mayur here. Your story is going great. i am so excited to see what happens when mayank goes to meet nupur's parents, or rati's parents, confusion confusion just like mayank's condition. zoe i don't have to say because you already know that you are a fabulous writer. i really liked the way you summed up, it was all a swift development, nothing seemed rush but moving at a good speed instead of being turtle tail. it was awesome. zoe hugsssssssssssss. thanks for the pm. you rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

oh gosh jan it was awesome, zoe i had been waiting for a really long time, but zoe the intial characters were mayank and nupur na, how come its arjun and rati now.anyways your update was just awesome, its soooooooooo good when we have no mayur in the show atleast we can have mayur here. Your story is going great. i am so excited to see what happens when mayank goes to meet nupur's parents, or rati's parents, confusion confusion just like mayank's condition. zoe i don't have to say because you already know that you are a fabulous writer. i really liked the way you summed up, it was all a swift development, nothing seemed rush but moving at a good speed instead of being turtle tail. it was awesome. zoe hugsssssssssssss. thanks for the pm. you rockkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.

yea...i know....but i like arjun and rati better...lolzz...forgot to mention be4 writing...but u guys'll understand...i am sure:]
and thank you so much for ur reply!!i am really happy😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi
i m komal.i was a silent reader of ur ff.
ur ff is great.pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: komal793

hi

i m komal.i was a silent reader of ur ff.
ur ff is great.pls continue soon.
pls pm me if possible.

hey komal!! i am zoe
thnk you so much for reading😊
and yess i will pm u wen i update:)

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