Truely Madly Deeply in love❤️(mayur ff)PART 11pg26

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Posted: 16 years ago
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so guyss i am new to this forum and i am a hard core fan of mayur and i have read almost all of their ff's up here😊i really wanted to make one myself too so i will try to give my best shot and i hope you like it and it would be really sweet if you all respond to this so that i know if its going all right or not!!:]
i am very sorry if i make any mistakes and i hope you guys like it!
INDEX
PART 1-PG 1
PART 2-PG 3
PART 3-PG 3
PART 4-PG 5
PART 5-PG 6
PART 6-PG 12
PART 7-PG 14
PART 8-PG 17
PART 9-PG 20
PART 10-PG 22
PART 11-PG 26

Intro'

Mayank sharma-he is a rich dude living in Miami,florida. He has already graduated from collage and now is a business tycoon. He is the leading business man of a huge company.(one of the leading companies..i cant think of a name..lol ..sryyy).his mom and dad live in california.he had left them a long time ago as he they always kept him away from him and he never experienced any sort of love from them.but still.. he is really friendly too and doesn't have any attitude inspite of being really rich.

Nupur bhushan-she is a very successful fashion designer in Miami,florida. Her parents live in California too and she is very close to her father and mother.she can share every thing with her mom and even with her dad.she has a best friend who lives in Miami too.

Samaira-she is nupur's bestest friend.they both love each other to death(u knw wat kind of love'.lol).

maybe there might be more characters which i will introduce later.......😊

Part 1

(Mayank)

After an exceptionally long night the sun finally rose into the sky with its light spreading eventually into every corner of darkness. 'Every day is a new day'-was the quote in mayank's mind as he woke up at his usual time. He always thought that whoever wrote these lines must not be thinking right. Well, the main reason which made him think like that was his daily schedule. He knew that there were no surprises hidden in any of his days. This was because nothing 'new' or 'happening' was going on in his life. Not to mention all the happening parties that he HAD to attend. But they weren't good enough for him. As that is not what he had ever asked for. But he was unaware of the surprises which were soon to be presented to him with delight and which would change his life'.

With this thought he finally got out of his bed(shirtless'lol) and walked across his huge room into the bathroom and put on his track pants and a black vest as it seemed to be a rather hot day to put on his track suit. Doing this he finally stepped out of his apartment and started walking out towards the lift which would direct him to the spot where he jogged everyday with nothing going on in his head except for the emptiness that he felt inside him every single day.

(Nupur)

The sun shined brightly in the sky and some of its rays started to enter into her room through her bright curtains and got into her eyes. She was really tired as she had just moved in this apartment yesterday and the whole day she was busy unpacking and arranging things. Keeping every single thing in order as she never liked her house to be messy since she was a young girl. Though she was tired she pushed herself to wake up. She always pushed herself in doing things. Sometimes she pushed herself a lot which her best friend tried to cut her down on. Samaira always told her to chill a bit but nupur didn't change herself on that as she loved the way she was.

She opened her eyes to see a different ceiling than the usual one as she had moved now. A little sad about it but a little happy as she was blessed to have this apartment which was rather luxurious and expensive. she had a faint smile on her face. She finally got out of her bed and walked into her closet(a huge one at that) and took a hot blue top with noodle straps and which made her stomach visible and also showed her pierced belly-button. She wore a white pair of hot shorts and tied her hair up in a pony tail with strands of short hair hanging out and touching her face. She had a very hot body indeed with the perfect tan. She was a perfect example for the quote-'beauty with brains'.

And she finally stepped out of her apartment towards the lift to head for jogging.

First meeting!

She walked through the luxurious corridor towards the lift to find a young,handsome dude already waiting for the lift to come. She thought ''the people here are not that bad looking unlike samaira said they were. As a matter of fact he is pretty hot..!' on that thought she stood right beside him when MAYANK took a glance at her. He had never checked a girl out because this was just not his thing. But still he passed a smile and got one from her too in return. But somewhere in his mind he had this thought about her that she was really pretty. Finally the door of the lift opened up after making a 'ting' sound. They both entered the lift. Mayank gave way for her to enter first which to some limit impressed nupur. They both lived on the twentieth floor so it was going to be a rather long lift ride. Mayank couldn't stop himself in talking to her as he had never seen her around before so in a very friendly manner he started to speak with her'

Mayank-so'ur definitely new around here'.just haven't seen you around here before..?

Nupur- well'u r definitely right about that'I just moved here like yesterday from cali'

(as she told him that she had moved from cali it reminded him of his parents as they too were still living in California'he always tried not to think much about them so instantly he changed the topic but didn't do it in a rude way)

mayank- wow'so umm'wat r u doing around here??

Nupur ' I am a fashion designer'

But this time the lift ride had surprisingly been a short one than usual to mayank and they got out with friendly good byes and see you laters.

Mayank was going mad at the 'surprise' which he got on the lift and was really confused why it was so'..he continued jogging and then seeing the path ahead of him perfectly empty he shut his eyes but to his surprise or the second one at that he couldn't feel the emptiness in him anymore. He felt as if even the few words which he spoke to the girl in the lift were with love and somehow made him feel different than before but he couldn't find out the answers to his whys and hows.

Nupur on the other hand had the ear plugs of her I-pod stuck to her ears and with her eyes shut she continued jogging with a faint smile on her face as her favorite song 'mohobbat aap se' from the movie aa dekhe zara was playing'.she continued jogging and suddenly bumped into the same guy she met at the lift and was about to fall when he too opened his eyes with the shock of getting bumped but when he saw the same girl he caught hold of her with his hands around her naked waist which brought a tingling felling to both of them. Mayank's face was so close to hers that they could feel each other breathing and they shared an eye lock as if the time had just stopped from taking another step forward . as if the whole universe had stopped all its activities and as if it was just them who were alive in this universe. everything was going perfectly the way it was planned to be'as if it was meant to be for nupur to move all the way from cali to Miami to land into his arms. Mayank too couldn't stop this weird feeling which created butterflies in his stomach . he wanted to hold on to her forever.

But then that moment had to be broken by a bunch of teenage skaters passing that way and making all sorts of oooos and ahhaahhhhs. Nupur realized the situation first and got a little uncomfortable and started to look left and right hesitantly. Mayank too felt the uncomfortable-ness that she was going through so like a really well behaved boy he lifted her up delicately so that she could stand. And then slowly but lovingly removed his hands from her waist(the way he puts his hands during the dance..but this time only backwards) which again created a tingly feeling in nupur's stomach. She hesitated a bit but then finally said----

Nupur- thanks.

Mayank- he was blank for a second but then came back to his senses and replied:my pleasure!

Nupur smiled which gave a really weird feeling to him. A feeling which he had never experienced before. There was an awkward silence between them. He again started the conversation to break down the awkwardness.

Mayank- I haven't introduced myself properly'.i am mayank'mayank Sharma.(saying this he stretched his hand out in order to give her a friendly handshake)

Nupur-(her smile suddenly changed into an excited expression)so ur Indian??

Mayank- as a matter of fact I am.

Nupur excitedly replied ' wow that is so amazing!!I am Indian too!!my name is nupur'nupur bhushan.

Mayank too replied quite happily- that is amazing'.where from India again??

Nupur- well.. I lived in new delhi with my parents till I was 18 and then moved to cali for collage'

Mayank- wow I lived in new delhi too till I was 18'.haha that's cool..we never met each other in INDIA but we are meeting here in Miami'J

Nupur ' I know! This is great!(then suddenly her eyes went to the watch which was tied to mayank's wrist and she opened her eyes really wide.then to reassure herself she held his hand and brought it close to her and she was right!!she was soo late for work)

Mayank got a really weird tingly feeling when she held his hand and he had never experienced that feeling before with any other girl. There was surely something different about her which he had to figure out.

Nupur-SHITTT!!(and then realizing how loud she said that )I am soo sorry mayank!!

But I am really late'I have to go'and she rushed towards the apartment leaving a very confused yet still smiling mayank.

After standing there for a while totally blank ..he too realized that he was late for work. He rushed towards the apartment. He got ready looking like a serious business man but the cutest one ever!!

Nupur took her time in getting ready'she wore a pair of black half pants and a really hot pink top. And a pair of really dashing heels.

Her first day at work went pretty awesome. She really liked her job a lot.

In the evening she finally was able to meet up with her best friend at the coffee shop.they both had three cups of coffees while chatting which made them even more hyper!

Suddenly samaira remembered something.

Samaira-nupur!!main toh bhul hi gayi! Aaj raat ko ek party hai jahan tujhe mere saath jaana padhega. Aur koi bahana nahi chalega'..

Nupur- acha acha thik hai!! Itni excited kyun ho rahi hai??main aa jaungi!!khush??

Samaira nodded.

s- chal ab mai chati hoon.. tu bhi jaa ready ho jaa..

with this both of them left the coffee shop after paying the bill ofcource'.

This is it for now'..i really hope you guys like it'.please tell me what you think'😃😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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First of all welcome to the forum😛 and gr8 idea of using Mayur i absolutely adore them😍
Hey Gr8 start...Loved the Mayur meeting it looked so realistic....
Awesome part do continue soon with other parts too....They may
definetly met in the party soon....Will be waiting for ur update
Love Tina😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its gr8.........awesum
plz continue soon.........will be waitng
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OH MY GOD!!! that was soooooo AMAZING!!!! oh and btw welcome to india forums!!! my name is Arpita and I absolutely ADORE mayur!!!!!*sigh* and i'm a newbie to......anyways your ff is amazing please continue soon!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i am replying to u again...........its OMG ...............u are awesum writer..i had tingling sensation when i read it...plzzzzzzz plzzzzzzz conitnue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thankyou soo so very much!! ur veryy sweettt😊
a great inspiration ..i must say!!i will surely cont. soon 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wats ur name............i am ruchi..one of the CRAZY MAYURIANS
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i am zoe<3
i love mayur to deathh!!lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
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welcome to the forum cute mayur! What's your name yaar? awesome start to a great ff can't wait to read on!! great work!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pallu........finally padh liya....isnt it gr8?
thanx zoe.......all mayuians are pagal here
Edited by ruchimayur - 16 years ago

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